Hey brother, You randomly popped in my recommended so I thought I'd give it a watch. Some unsolicited advice just from a viewers perspective if you care for it: 1. The song choice is so egregiously outdated. Genuinely it's off-putting when that song is used at all, and using it on a continuous segmented loop for almost 12 minutes made me mute the video entirely. This video would've been great with no music at all and just the good junk gameplay. You talk a good amount to cut through the silence without being a complete yapper so you've got it down on that aspect. 2. Your cam is too large and it's placed weirdly for this game. The place you have it set up means that there's a good 15% of your screen that we can't see and there were a few times where action happens in that spot that causes some things to be missed, which could lead to confusion. I'd recommend one of the top corners since not much goes on up there other than some verticality moments. I'd also reduce the size ever so slightly so that it becomes an element of the video and not more of a distraction. Especially since you don't really address your audience directly (purposeful commentary in which you look and direct your comments directly at the viewer) in this video so it doesn't really add much other than to see your expressions. Overall the video was decent. The cuts were a little too sporadic so it got confusing at times (albeit it wasn't that bad compared to most small creators that I see), but everything flowed well enough that I was able to eventually fall back in line with what you were trying to achieve. Keep it up as I'm sure you'll continue to improve! Hope to see you in my recommended again and maybe even drop a subscription. Good luck out here!
Hey there, I really appreciate the feedback, this does help me make better videos, more recently I have been trying out different types and styles of videos. But this does give me an idea of what is good and what is not, so I’ll take these things into consideration. I appreciate you!
Zazo, what are your settings for playing Junk? What is your mouse's sensitivity and DPI? I really like your channel :D
Hey! I really appreciate the support! My sensitivity is at 16.50% not sure what my dpi is at but are you a fellow junrkat? Lol
Hey brother,
You randomly popped in my recommended so I thought I'd give it a watch.
Some unsolicited advice just from a viewers perspective if you care for it:
1. The song choice is so egregiously outdated. Genuinely it's off-putting when that song is used at all, and using it on a continuous segmented loop for almost 12 minutes made me mute the video entirely. This video would've been great with no music at all and just the good junk gameplay. You talk a good amount to cut through the silence without being a complete yapper so you've got it down on that aspect.
2. Your cam is too large and it's placed weirdly for this game. The place you have it set up means that there's a good 15% of your screen that we can't see and there were a few times where action happens in that spot that causes some things to be missed, which could lead to confusion. I'd recommend one of the top corners since not much goes on up there other than some verticality moments. I'd also reduce the size ever so slightly so that it becomes an element of the video and not more of a distraction. Especially since you don't really address your audience directly (purposeful commentary in which you look and direct your comments directly at the viewer) in this video so it doesn't really add much other than to see your expressions.
Overall the video was decent. The cuts were a little too sporadic so it got confusing at times (albeit it wasn't that bad compared to most small creators that I see), but everything flowed well enough that I was able to eventually fall back in line with what you were trying to achieve.
Keep it up as I'm sure you'll continue to improve! Hope to see you in my recommended again and maybe even drop a subscription. Good luck out here!
Hey there, I really appreciate the feedback, this does help me make better videos, more recently I have been trying out different types and styles of videos. But this does give me an idea of what is good and what is not, so I’ll take these things into consideration. I appreciate you!