I like your style and I don't mean to insult you, I just want to give you my impression as feedback. The sound gets too blurry, and I think the tracks are a bit too long. My sweet spot is at 2-3 minutes, everything over I start to skip even If I like the song. Til 0:30 it's very clear then comes the build up with the blurry instruments which is pretty cool. I don't know how you really call it at 1:22 the bridge maybe? The noise would be fine for the segment, but it keeps going after 1:34. Paired with the blurry instruments and sound effects it gets a bit too much for me, but when the melody kicks back in at 2:13 it sounds fantastic. I'd prefer to put the melody in the foreground and make the “screaming” not as overpowering. At 2:38 the track slows down, but we already had a long build up 00:00-0:30 intro, 00:30-00:56 part 1 00:56-01:20 slows down for the “bridge” than it's go time at 01:35 to go a step higher with the melody at 02:13, but than we slow down again at 02:38 to go even slower at 03:06 for the remaining 32 seconds. I listened with a proper headset and sound card on my pc on a high volume, just so you know I didn't listen through phone speakers. I hope you keep making music :)
I actually always appreciate feedback, helps me improve my music 🙏🏻💜 i won’t lie though, this track (and a few others on this EP weren’t even gonna be released but i wanted to put out the first 2 tracks and thought I’d just throw on some others because ‘why not’ 💀 and then the first track started getting some ears on it and i was like oh shitttt noooo 😹 because I kinda hate these more ‘throwaway’ tracks and didn’t think anyone would listen to them lolll but again thanks for the feedback, I’m glad people are starting to listen to my tunes 💜💜💜
I like your style and I don't mean to insult you, I just want to give you my impression as feedback.
The sound gets too blurry, and I think the tracks are a bit too long. My sweet spot is at 2-3 minutes, everything over I start to skip even If I like the song.
Til 0:30 it's very clear then comes the build up with the blurry instruments which is pretty cool.
I don't know how you really call it at 1:22 the bridge maybe? The noise would be fine for the segment, but it keeps going after 1:34.
Paired with the blurry instruments and sound effects it gets a bit too much for me, but when the melody kicks back in at 2:13 it sounds fantastic.
I'd prefer to put the melody in the foreground and make the “screaming” not as overpowering.
At 2:38 the track slows down, but we already had a long build up 00:00-0:30 intro, 00:30-00:56 part 1 00:56-01:20 slows down for the “bridge” than it's go time at 01:35 to go a step higher with the melody at 02:13, but than we slow down again at 02:38 to go even slower at 03:06 for the remaining 32 seconds.
I listened with a proper headset and sound card on my pc on a high volume, just so you know I didn't listen through phone speakers.
I hope you keep making music :)
I actually always appreciate feedback, helps me improve my music 🙏🏻💜 i won’t lie though, this track (and a few others on this EP weren’t even gonna be released but i wanted to put out the first 2 tracks and thought I’d just throw on some others because ‘why not’ 💀 and then the first track started getting some ears on it and i was like oh shitttt noooo 😹 because I kinda hate these more ‘throwaway’ tracks and didn’t think anyone would listen to them lolll but again thanks for the feedback, I’m glad people are starting to listen to my tunes 💜💜💜
@@geminilew You keep cooking those beats man :D