This was so helpful, i plan to use this info with all my physical touch romance scenes. Most billionair romances seemed mechanical. Now I understand why.
Love that example! Yes, Roberta Flack is not talking about the first time she ever saw his sinewy biceps. 😆 The typo is great too. Sounds like the version Al Yankovic would do of the song 🤣
Well, you have to have content of the overall story narrative, to some "I love you 3000" is a dumb line. To some that understabd the story's narrative, the line bring tears to their eyes.
This was so helpful, i plan to use this info with all my physical touch romance scenes. Most billionair romances seemed mechanical.
Now I understand why.
Glad the video helped. I love your pic btw! 😅
Very good lesson. Literary sex scene, reminds me of the song: "The First Time Ever I Saw Your Race." - timelessly sung by Roberta Flack.
Love that example! Yes, Roberta Flack is not talking about the first time she ever saw his sinewy biceps. 😆 The typo is great too. Sounds like the version Al Yankovic would do of the song 🤣
Okay, the first one was terrible, but the literary one bored me to death, which is why I'm not a fan of literary writing.
Fair enough!
Well, you have to have content of the overall story narrative, to some "I love you 3000" is a dumb line. To some that understabd the story's narrative, the line bring tears to their eyes.