Like the development between the MCs, how their relationship changed and how both of them changed in their understanding of one another. How love was the catalyst. Looking forward to more.
I absolutely love this story. It has everything but fierce external battles. But it has tremendous internal wars of the heart and of human nature. Excellent!
Dear writer! I like the body parts of your story, the way you execute is considerable for us( having simple brain cells). Breathe taking tho it has few repeated words but bearable. Thank you.
Thank you for accompanying me while working. My shifts goes by faster. Story is good but midway I started having the urge to count how many times the Duke says “You are mine” 😂
Fascinating story telling and beautifully narrated. As another reader said, and I concur, yes there is a dislike for toxic or manipulative relationships; or where obsession is unhealthy; however what I liked was how you navigated these two MCs through the intensity, passion and often confusion to a point where the healthy change occurs in their relationship; where control is replaced with willingness to set the other free by allowing them to have their identity and love and respect each other. That the story showed the vulnerability and fears of the Duke and never knowing anything else but control, having never experienced true and deep love, until he meets Simon, with Simon teaching him that this is the real path to being ultimately soulmates and life partners. I found the ending very profound and beautiful. Thanks Manwha Princess.
I like the way to the climax what is a seat down and chat about how imprisoning him it is not a good thing and that he need Freedom, also how they try to understand what they truly need and their relationship.
The story is great overall, however, the main issue I noticed is the redundancy in the storytelling. Certain details are repeated multiple times, which affects the flow and makes the narrative feel repetitive.
Muitos escrevem romances com finais infelizes não sabem distinguir a realidade com os contos de fada kkkk continue assim vc é uma pessoa abençoada ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🎉
I've been finding your content enjoyable. I do agree however with another person that you repeat words a lot. You also repeat a lot of phrases in all your stories. Try looking at a thesaurus and see if there are more fun words to try out. Get someone to look at your work and ask for different ways of saying "Together". I LOVE handling things together, but after the 3rd story with that same phrase that was used 4 or more times, I'd like a variety please. I hope you don't find this overly critical, it's NOT! I'd just like you to stretch more and keep giving really fun stories to listen too. Thanks for your time.
I like your voice although it is AI generated. And the intimacy is really hot but I didn't like the story. I can't celebrate toxic manipulation or the way the story end attempts to justify the use of force in this relationship.
Like the development between the MCs, how their relationship changed and how both of them changed in their understanding of one another. How love was the catalyst. Looking forward to more.
I absolutely love this story. It has everything but fierce external battles. But it has tremendous internal wars of the heart and of human nature. Excellent!
Dear writer! I like the body parts of your story, the way you execute is considerable for us( having simple brain cells). Breathe taking tho it has few repeated words but bearable. Thank you.
The way you shift your voice from narration to dialogs and explanation of minute details is outstanding ❤ keep it up little princess 😀
Thank you for accompanying me while working. My shifts goes by faster. Story is good but midway I started having the urge to count how many times the Duke says “You are mine” 😂
@@EnHub actually 😂😂😂, but must omegaverse Alpha's are actually possessive. I am glad you like it.♥️
Fascinating story telling and beautifully narrated.
As another reader said, and I concur, yes there is a dislike for toxic or manipulative relationships; or where obsession is unhealthy; however what I liked was how you navigated these two MCs through the intensity, passion and often confusion to a point where the healthy change occurs in their relationship; where control is replaced with willingness to set the other free by allowing them to have their identity and love and respect each other. That the story showed the vulnerability and fears of the Duke and never knowing anything else but control, having never experienced true and deep love, until he meets Simon, with Simon teaching him that this is the real path to being ultimately soulmates and life partners.
I found the ending very profound and beautiful. Thanks Manwha Princess.
@@ElanaSaks-it4oo Thank youu♥️. I am happy you like it too. I really do appreciate your comments ♥️
@@officialmanhwaprincess Thankyou 🙏♥️
❤❤❤❤i loved this story...please make more stories like this, showing the difference between love and possession... Thank you❤❤❤❤
😩finally I'm here please make a lot of stories please 🙏
I like story lot I listen to more thanks 😊 🙏
This was a great story but a little too long. I enjoyed it but was glad to finally teach its end. Thank you for sharing it!
I like the way to the climax what is a seat down and chat about how imprisoning him it is not a good thing and that he need Freedom, also how they try to understand what they truly need and their relationship.
Part 2 please
I really love this video ❤❤❤❤❤
Wonderful story more please 🎉😊
Thank you ❤
I truly enjoyed this story ❤
The story is great overall, however, the main issue I noticed is the redundancy in the storytelling. Certain details are repeated multiple times, which affects the flow and makes the narrative feel repetitive.
Name?
Amei a história sensacional eu amo finais felizes obrigada ❤❤❤❤
Thank you
This is a very nice story!
Name please
Does this story have a name?
Where else is this available?
NAME???
Pretty please?
Muitos escrevem romances com finais infelizes não sabem distinguir a realidade com os contos de fada kkkk continue assim vc é uma pessoa abençoada ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🎉
O diálogo é tudo num relacionamento 😊
What is the name?
@@patwestergard4252 It is mine♥️.
Continue com sua mente aberta estamos lendo romance não vida real ❤❤❤
Like the story to many repeated words. Is there a part 2
I wish there were different pictures
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Hello everyone
Please does anyone know where I can download such story from on any comic app.
@@Godisgood-md4bl hi, these are my stories, I upload full illustrations stories every friday on my channel and audiobooks too randomly.♥️
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I've been finding your content enjoyable. I do agree however with another person that you repeat words a lot. You also repeat a lot of phrases in all your stories. Try looking at a thesaurus and see if there are more fun words to try out. Get someone to look at your work and ask for different ways of saying "Together". I LOVE handling things together, but after the 3rd story with that same phrase that was used 4 or more times, I'd like a variety please. I hope you don't find this overly critical, it's NOT! I'd just like you to stretch more and keep giving really fun stories to listen too. Thanks for your time.
I like your voice although it is AI generated. And the intimacy is really hot but I didn't like the story. I can't celebrate toxic manipulation or the way the story end attempts to justify the use of force in this relationship.
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What is the name?
Name please
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