This video helped me so much lol. Mine is “A serene femora whom is pleasant and obliging toward her peers & elders - Vc: Indistinct & Euphonic Is that ok? 😅
This helped a lot my bio and name are " ~EXP~ +~+Cherokee+~+ H/H A severe sire whom is pleasurable and obliging towards his peers & elders - Vc: Indistinct & Rasping
@@Saharasdenofficial That is a brilliant Bio the only thing I would change is the word 'Pleasurable' and 'Servere' as the word servere doesn't really fit were you looking for a word meaning strict? If so you can use something like Bitter or Grevious. For 'Pleasurable' I would change it because it can come off as strange. Maybe something like Gratifying?
For your bio try and think of unique words that would also fit those words so strong you could put words like Herculean or barbaric (if your more primal) also look at your bio and think what doesn't need to be there. So for instance "Hyper" you can portray that in your roleplay so you don't necessarily need that in your bio. hope this helps 😊
So for instance what I would of wrote and taken out is 'A Herculean swift-footed sire, whom is respected reliable and intrepid" Alot of the words you have used mean basically the same thing in RP for instance 'honourable', 'trustworthy' and 'reliable' all mean the same thing just different words. You can portray 'hyper' and 'perfect fighter' in your rp's ( most exp Rpers don't put 'perfect fighter' as this can be seen as unexp due to most people who put this are op)
For the word sweet you can use a word like Saccharine (meaning sweet or sentimental) and affectionate (instead of loving) and removing the 'she'll never be rude' for Refined would do quite well.
@@havvazadeh7525 Dame is Female. going off of you saying 'guy' im presuming Leo is male and therefore i would use the word 'Sire' or 'Brute' and for bios rather than putting them into a list of everything they can/could be i would limit it. so for me personally i would make a bio like 'A Muscular Athletically built sire whom is known for his Fierce nature'
it is a good bio, but the main thing about being experienced isn't 'who can find the biggest words out there for a limb or personality type' its who can describe their roleplay in a descriptive manner in ways people will understand. Most people get Exp Confused with competitive. A lot of people are getting competitive and searching a big word for leg or limbs just so they can outshine others. Having a lot of large words in your bio means your experienced but only if you can actually explain every single one of those words you have used and know how to use them in your rp. it is fine having big fancy words but just remember it doesn't all have to be fancy or else people will not understand what your saying. Its descriptive analysis of the environment and your wolf. Not 'Whats another word for smart' just remember that. ^^
Also for a little hint, i know you like your fancy words and putting loads in near others makes you look more exp but i would suggest taking a few out. its a list you have created. your bio should be a structured sentence describing what your wolf is like the rest should be portrayed through the rp. that's what it means to be exp. so i would remove 'Remotely' 'Kind' 'Exasperated' 'Keenly' (Keen) . Which would leave you with Expeditious, Elegant, intellective & Vigorous. So your bio could go something along the lines of. An Elegant. Expeditious wolf whom is known for their vigorous Stature and intellect. In that sentence is shows that you understand what they mean and how to put them in a sentence. Your current bio is too much to read, a list and needs a little more understanding of the words you have used. to break it down for others you have said; ' fast, graceful, eager, smart, strong, kind, irritated sometimes.' which in a sentence doesn't make sense, and if you do keep the words i would change keenly intellective to Keen intellect. Because keenly and intellective doesn't go well together but Keen intellect does. All in all don't put too much strain on finding the best words to use cause sometimes it wont work out the way u want. Remember Structural sentences not a shopping list. But great effort! keep up the good work! Hope my constructive criticism helps you! ^_^
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If you want other words for for eyes and ears rather than using the same old you can use visionaries, oculi, orbs, hues. For eyes. For ears you can use the extended version of audits being Auditories, radars, octics, Auricles. Tail things like Banner, tassel, appendage, caudal. Paws; pads, forepaws. Or legs you can name the certain part of a leg or say limbs anything like that will work but remember to be experienced you don't have to use fancy words you can also just use ears tail paws as long as you describe your RP. It just helps to use those words.
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Could you do please do a female version and a female exp wolf character. I’m not very good at designing it myself!
Yes I can try to make a female oc and a exp female bio. I mainly RP as male so I deffo will say female oc's are my weak spot but I'll try 😊
@@CyanideProductions762 Tysm! I’m sure you’ll be better than me 🤣
This video helped me so much lol.
Mine is “A serene femora whom is pleasant and obliging toward her peers & elders - Vc: Indistinct & Euphonic
Is that ok? 😅
That Is a great bio well-done 😊
@@CyanideProductions762 Tysm!
My bio is.. ‘ A tiny in size but highly acknowledged dame with high accuracy and pace, whom is quite good at fighting. ‘
yeah that sounds like a brilliant bio ^^
@@CyanideProductions762 ty :)
This helped a lot my bio and name are " ~EXP~ +~+Cherokee+~+ H/H A severe sire whom is pleasurable and obliging towards his peers & elders - Vc: Indistinct & Rasping
@@Saharasdenofficial That is a brilliant Bio the only thing I would change is the word 'Pleasurable' and 'Servere' as the word servere doesn't really fit were you looking for a word meaning strict? If so you can use something like Bitter or Grevious. For 'Pleasurable' I would change it because it can come off as strange. Maybe something like Gratifying?
My bio says An hyper,fast,perfect fighting,honor, strong, trustworthy, reliable,helpful, fearless is that good?
For your bio try and think of unique words that would also fit those words so strong you could put words like Herculean or barbaric (if your more primal) also look at your bio and think what doesn't need to be there. So for instance "Hyper" you can portray that in your roleplay so you don't necessarily need that in your bio. hope this helps 😊
So for instance what I would of wrote and taken out is 'A Herculean swift-footed sire, whom is respected reliable and intrepid"
Alot of the words you have used mean basically the same thing in RP for instance 'honourable', 'trustworthy' and 'reliable' all mean the same thing just different words. You can portray 'hyper' and 'perfect fighter' in your rp's ( most exp Rpers don't put 'perfect fighter' as this can be seen as unexp due to most people who put this are op)
@@CyanideProductions762 ok 👍
@@CyanideProductions762omg omiros its me sora we were roleplaying yesterday!!
@@CyanideProductions762Good morning and btw i subbed! ^^
BRO TYSMNNM
Mine is ‘ a sincere kind femora with shadowing optics and great mind set’
That is a great bio! The only thing I would add is maybe change kind to compassionate or you can keep kind it's up to you 😊
@@CyanideProductions762 ty. I’ll take ur advice
TY
Your welcome!😊
My bio is
“Nova is a sweet dame she is loving, loves to help people and sometimes is stupid she’ll never be rude”
Any tips?
For the word sweet you can use a word like Saccharine (meaning sweet or sentimental) and affectionate (instead of loving) and removing the 'she'll never be rude' for Refined would do quite well.
So what you could put is 'Nova is a saccharine Dame whom is known for being well refined and affectionate.'
@@CyanideProductions762 tyyy!
Question what about this bio I have for a guy named Leo
“ Leo is a dame whom is known for being muscular,fierce,athletic” Any tips?
@@havvazadeh7525 Dame is Female. going off of you saying 'guy' im presuming Leo is male and therefore i would use the word 'Sire' or 'Brute' and for bios rather than putting them into a list of everything they can/could be i would limit it. so for me personally i would make a bio like
'A Muscular Athletically built sire whom is known for his Fierce nature'
I wanna make a rp but can't cause I don't have vip
Same
Is it ok if u can the small bio? Bcs idk how :(
@@Naro-San14 the small bio is only a laptop/pc thing. But I can make a tutorial on how to do it!
@@CyanideProductions762ok tysm!
@@Naro-San14 Np. I have two videos already on my channel that has a tutorial on how to do it now 😊
Mine is:
a litalian accent dame that is trustwory and blithesome saccharine yet loyal ---------- l+?
My name is lady in animal life
@@catalins3746 that's a great bio, no need to do a thing to that as long as you continue to rp in that descriptive narration.
Ok ty!
I have changed my bio could u tell me if it’s good?
An broad-minded femora whom is blithsome and approachable, she is quite gregarious vc:Euphonic
Yes that bio seems quite experienced and very intriguing 😊
@@CyanideProductions762 thank you!
What does sire and femora mean in a bio?
Also my bio is ( female wolf like running around & sleeping/hate meeting new people/energetic around friends
Sire means male and femora means female. Sire also means a male who has had pups.
@@olivia_inroblox4505 needs a little more work. Look for stronger words to use on Google.
@@CyanideProductions762 Where did you find where femora meant female because all I can find is it meaning related to the femur ;-;
@@goslinglamb femoral can be Femur but in rp a Femora is like a female wolf a fem wolf
Is mine okay?? . ' yet nimble and quick in movement, clever and deceitful in nature,recgonized as outcast ,,
Yep that's a great bio!!😊
my usual bio is" Expeditious-Elegent-keenly intellective-remotely vigorous-kind-exasperated sometimes" i think thats a bit too much exp lol
it is a good bio, but the main thing about being experienced isn't 'who can find the biggest words out there for a limb or personality type' its who can describe their roleplay in a descriptive manner in ways people will understand. Most people get Exp Confused with competitive. A lot of people are getting competitive and searching a big word for leg or limbs just so they can outshine others. Having a lot of large words in your bio means your experienced but only if you can actually explain every single one of those words you have used and know how to use them in your rp. it is fine having big fancy words but just remember it doesn't all have to be fancy or else people will not understand what your saying. Its descriptive analysis of the environment and your wolf. Not 'Whats another word for smart' just remember that. ^^
Also for a little hint, i know you like your fancy words and putting loads in near others makes you look more exp but i would suggest taking a few out. its a list you have created. your bio should be a structured sentence describing what your wolf is like the rest should be portrayed through the rp. that's what it means to be exp. so i would remove 'Remotely' 'Kind' 'Exasperated' 'Keenly' (Keen) . Which would leave you with Expeditious, Elegant, intellective & Vigorous.
So your bio could go something along the lines of. An Elegant. Expeditious wolf whom is known for their vigorous Stature and intellect.
In that sentence is shows that you understand what they mean and how to put them in a sentence. Your current bio is too much to read, a list and needs a little more understanding of the words you have used. to break it down for others you have said; ' fast, graceful, eager, smart, strong, kind, irritated sometimes.' which in a sentence doesn't make sense, and if you do keep the words i would change keenly intellective to Keen intellect. Because keenly and intellective doesn't go well together but Keen intellect does.
All in all don't put too much strain on finding the best words to use cause sometimes it wont work out the way u want. Remember Structural sentences not a shopping list.
But great effort! keep up the good work! Hope my constructive criticism helps you! ^_^
@@CyanideProductions762 k thanks bro
my bio:
a affectionate lenient femora whom holds a beige pelt and a korean ac,she is motherly behaved
That's a perfect example of an Exp bio keep up the great work!
*If you have over 150 robux can you please gift ne vip ive always wanted vip*
(In Forest rp)
Unfortunately, if I start gifting vip passes to everyone who asks on my videos then I would have no robux and no real life money left. But if you do manage to find me in a server feel free to ask I might just gift you one. 😊
What does H/H stand for / mean?
it means he/him
H/H Stands for He/Him they are pronouns like S/H is she/Her T/T They them. ect ^_^
@@CyanideProductions762 oh thanks I’ve been wondering! Ty for the help
I use words like dis in rps:audits,tassel,luminaries,mitts and other words ,but i wanna know more do you know any?
If you want other words for for eyes and ears rather than using the same old you can use visionaries, oculi, orbs, hues. For eyes. For ears you can use the extended version of audits being Auditories, radars, octics, Auricles. Tail things like Banner, tassel, appendage, caudal. Paws; pads, forepaws. Or legs you can name the certain part of a leg or say limbs anything like that will work but remember to be experienced you don't have to use fancy words you can also just use ears tail paws as long as you describe your RP. It just helps to use those words.
@@CyanideProductions762thank you!,It really helps