This Story had some pretty interresting and unexpected ideas.... I really like It... Pretty Sure its one of the Best immortal Izuku stories out there. So great Job!
Dude he make him absolutely OP for gods shakes he literally make AFO scared and the world#1 villian in the world is his daughter i'm very interested in the history but vary confuse at the same time
If possible this should be a series or even a part 2 for sure because of the ending, (not trying to be rude btw) also this is an amazing one-shot of immortality Deku and is by far the best I have seen!!!
How in CA hell did you come up with this it was amazing The plot twists😯 The drama🍵🍵 The heart taking moments❤❤ It was just... Splendid😲😲 like who would think THE Crimson demon was deku's daughter😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲❤❤❤❤❤
So many twists wow just wow thts is a 100% best immortal deku story ihv read so far.this is my first time readin on of ur stories after this u hv gained my sub keep up the gud work fellow
I’ve watched this about 4-5 times the first time I found it by accident and subbed after finishing this story and now every time I see it I just rewatch it
idea suggestion of alternative immortal Deku au if you wanna know :) it's not any other anime idea mushed into the MHA universe, it's an immortality quirk idea where Izuku was born around 2170 years before the MHA story takes place when quirks were just developing. I have started on the story but i have writers block and idk what to dooooooo
First- IMMORTAL Second- SENSEI Third-PAPA!?!?!!?! and fourth- Who's the mother? 😏 oh my gosh all the plot twist and probably with this emojo"😏" is something like you can put in a mina texting story expression 😹😹😹❤❤
Finally you comment something usefull i always see you in other texting channels always begging for new ship or add someone even if the ship is decided
Midnight : I wonder what a hot man like him would want with her... Aizawa : Midnight no. Midnight : Midnight *yes* . *SPOILER AHEAD* *When it turns out to be his daughter. . .*
I have exams on 5th January and I need to learn something around 350 pages so I can't really wait to last day I am university student not high school sadly
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This Story had some pretty interresting and unexpected ideas.... I really like It... Pretty Sure its one of the Best immortal Izuku stories out there. So great Job!
I agree
It was so good
I loved it
agreed
Didn’t expect her to be his daughter I was expecting her to be the ship but great plot twist
Same
@@3NDL3SSV01D eyyy beaned
Dude he make him absolutely OP for gods shakes he literally make AFO scared and the world#1 villian in the world is his daughter i'm very interested in the history but vary confuse at the same time
Lol same
@@voideater5934 why did you type vary its very not vary
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THE TWIST WERE IZUKU IS AFO SENSEI AND AKEME DAD IS AMAZING 🤩
If possible this should be a series or even a part 2 for sure because of the ending, (not trying to be rude btw) also this is an amazing one-shot of immortality Deku and is by far the best I have seen!!!
I fully agree
@@GremGoblin same
True
your stories are really interesting and fun to read.
This was an interesting one shot
I didn't expect crimson demon to be his daughter but either way it was a good one I love you video's
So great job
I dont know man but this is a powerful story... 🤯
It would be great to see a part 2 or to turn this into a series
Agreed
I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!! thx for writing it!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍Merry Christmas 🎉🎉🎉😘😘
well I did not expect that ending, but it was funny and I liked it. Good job
I'm imagining izuku saying his story with a Russian accent
Part 2 would be funny with akame being cute
Amazing story I kinda want this to be turned into episodes
How in CA hell did you come up with this it was amazing
The plot twists😯
The drama🍵🍵
The heart taking moments❤❤
It was just... Splendid😲😲 like who would think THE Crimson demon was deku's daughter😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲❤❤❤❤❤
Fr, I thought she was his lover or something
Amazing story and plot twist.
That's cute a father wants to reunite with his daughter... For Idk, approximately 200 or 500 years just to be with her...
Gotta say im impressed with this really impressed
So many twists wow just wow thts is a 100% best immortal deku story ihv read so far.this is my first time readin on of ur stories after this u hv gained my sub keep up the gud work fellow
Then wait for tommorow on part 2 where are more plot twist 😉 and thanks for sub
I’ve watched this about 4-5 times the first time I found it by accident and subbed after finishing this story and now every time I see it I just rewatch it
Damn boy nice story 👍👍👍 the plot twist at the last is the best
That was a-plot at the end.....I love plottsssss😌😌
I like this one particular story
bro this was so good
idea suggestion of alternative immortal Deku au if you wanna know :) it's not any other anime idea mushed into the MHA universe, it's an immortality quirk idea where Izuku was born around 2170 years before the MHA story takes place when quirks were just developing. I have started on the story but i have writers block and idk what to dooooooo
I was ready for Crimson Demon to have some sort of familial relation or be a relationship but that was adorable
I like this plz more like this
First- IMMORTAL
Second- SENSEI
Third-PAPA!?!?!!?!
and fourth- Who's the mother? 😏 oh my gosh all the plot twist and probably with this emojo"😏" is something like you can put in a mina texting story expression 😹😹😹❤❤
Bro when gilgamesh deku part 3 upload i can wait cuz gilgamesh and rimuru is one of the caracter i love
First time watching you and I think your pretty good
I re-watch this like every year lol one of the txt stories that's acc good
Bro just has good connections with everybody 🤣🤣🤣
This midoriya and aizawa radiate the same energy
bro that plot twist got me 🤣
That's one hella of a plot twist!😂
Woah thats was awesome and hilarious at the same time lmao
Glad you liked it
man you could have gotten more hours of people watching this as in multiple episodes of 1 hour in length. how i know that because i would watch more.
Can you please make a part 2 it was just getting interesting
You know this would make for a good season 2 for
Please do a part to !!! I love this and I Ned to know how it ends !!
Awesome
Dang this is so good
Great story but please make a second part
lmao that plot twist at the end
Hmm... but who is the Mother of akame.. because of her hunger and like sweets i can question if it's not a erza and izuku daughter
Hahah I knew it was between lover or his child reeeeee
Oke but can we look at the Backstory that is the most creative an coolest Backstory ever
Very good job ! 👌🏼
Maybe an other ep ? 🥺
Yeah I am currently working on it but I am still preparing for my exams as well
@@sariktextingstories7564 No problem, take your time 👍🏻
If you are fast reader or something go at 1.75x or 2x it helps a lot for me
Thats good keep going brooo
While watching this I knew while in the middle of the video I thought what if crimson demon was his daughter and I was right :)
I feel stupid right now I thought the witch would be the crimson demon but it's his daughter hahaha
Nice
When she said papa my ear started twitching
Good job, nice Story,would like to see a Part 2 ship for part 2 :Izuku x Rumi and his daughter x Bakugo yeah thats all keep going
I already start working on part 2 so just wait a little longer and you will know what will happen in part 2
OHHHH YESSSSSSS SANJI
Edit:What a plot twist
HSHAHHAHAHAHAHA i was shocked when she said papa
you mean to tell me that Izuku had a daughter that became the number 1 villain
All I could think of watching this was everyone's jaw either on or through the floor
Hey make more deku in one piece
Finally you comment something usefull i always see you in other texting channels always begging for new ship or add someone even if the ship is decided
Damm this was good make another one please 🙏 I beg of you
I beg too 🙏🙏
You should make a part 2🗿
Even tho is a one shot🗿
Please make extra parts please
I'm going to stop breathing untill you make a part 2
hello can you make part this agian 😊😊
I would enjoy another part of this🤔🤭
I decided to do 2nd part which will be conclusion or part 2 I am not really sure myself
Can you continue Tokyo Revenger Deku
I didn't realise one-shot meant part 1
Haha i knew form the start that crimson demon was his daughter
Strange ending and i was wondering why there was no ship...now i understand
Wow talk about being all powerful
You did not just end it like this I neeeeed part 2 I beg of you
part 2 will be out soon dont worry😉
I legit taught it was alabama since she said papa my taughts were *harder daddy*😁😅
Mate thats just wrong🤣🤣🤣
Ik it is a one ahot but can u continue this cuz i wanna know how 1a and the others will react
Sorry abt the spelling errors my dumb phone is like that
Please make extra part please
Bet the next plot twist is that the witch took over akames mother to get closer to mizuki to kill him
Sorry mate but I already made a story part of next episode
Best plot twist
Fucking loved this vidio
Did not expect the end
That’s Natsu Ezra Gray and Lucy from the anime Fairy Tale
Yeah they are
When will you upload the next part of deku in one piece ?
Don't know but I will try to upload it as soon as possible
@@sariktextingstories7564 ok
RIP Akames future crush
It's good and all until she finds the biggest candy se seen
I need sleep
Hmm interesting, interesting indeed
ngl I thing this is the only story with that many plot twist
Nice 😇
Damn i need part 2 ( I think not only me xD)
Bring part 2 man tomorrow
Plot twist at the end wtf
WHY- MAKE ANOTHER ONE OF THIS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Can this please have a part 2
if your immortal and the world ends you are going to be the only one left just floating through space untill you crash into a planet
Hmm interesting theory
This one shot just make it sound or look like it needs a part 2
Midnight : I wonder what a hot man like him would want with her...
Aizawa : Midnight no.
Midnight : Midnight *yes* .
*SPOILER AHEAD*
*When it turns out to be his daughter. . .*
Hey can we get a count on how many times he lit a cigarette
I need ep 2
Its almost the same ending as the other immortal deku i watched. But other than that its pretty good.
Oh don't worry real ending will come in next episode because the ending here suck so I will make one more
Um how you have exams if it is Christmas break I would like to know
I have exams on 5th January and I need to learn something around 350 pages so I can't really wait to last day I am university student not high school sadly
@@sariktextingstories7564 oh ok thank I didn’t know you were a universality students
why aint i suprised that akame was/is? his daugther
Lol it is 3:56 AM