This Story had some pretty interresting and unexpected ideas.... I really like It... Pretty Sure its one of the Best immortal Izuku stories out there. So great Job!
Dude he make him absolutely OP for gods shakes he literally make AFO scared and the world#1 villian in the world is his daughter i'm very interested in the history but vary confuse at the same time
If possible this should be a series or even a part 2 for sure because of the ending, (not trying to be rude btw) also this is an amazing one-shot of immortality Deku and is by far the best I have seen!!!
So many twists wow just wow thts is a 100% best immortal deku story ihv read so far.this is my first time readin on of ur stories after this u hv gained my sub keep up the gud work fellow
How in CA hell did you come up with this it was amazing The plot twists😯 The drama🍵🍵 The heart taking moments❤❤ It was just... Splendid😲😲 like who would think THE Crimson demon was deku's daughter😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲❤❤❤❤❤
idea suggestion of alternative immortal Deku au if you wanna know :) it's not any other anime idea mushed into the MHA universe, it's an immortality quirk idea where Izuku was born around 2170 years before the MHA story takes place when quirks were just developing. I have started on the story but i have writers block and idk what to dooooooo
First- IMMORTAL Second- SENSEI Third-PAPA!?!?!!?! and fourth- Who's the mother? 😏 oh my gosh all the plot twist and probably with this emojo"😏" is something like you can put in a mina texting story expression 😹😹😹❤❤
I’ve watched this about 4-5 times the first time I found it by accident and subbed after finishing this story and now every time I see it I just rewatch it
Finally you comment something usefull i always see you in other texting channels always begging for new ship or add someone even if the ship is decided
Midnight : I wonder what a hot man like him would want with her... Aizawa : Midnight no. Midnight : Midnight *yes* . *SPOILER AHEAD* *When it turns out to be his daughter. . .*
I have exams on 5th January and I need to learn something around 350 pages so I can't really wait to last day I am university student not high school sadly
This Story had some pretty interresting and unexpected ideas.... I really like It... Pretty Sure its one of the Best immortal Izuku stories out there. So great Job!
I agree
It was so good
I loved it
agreed
Didn’t expect her to be his daughter I was expecting her to be the ship but great plot twist
Same
@@3NDL3SSV01D eyyy beaned
Dude he make him absolutely OP for gods shakes he literally make AFO scared and the world#1 villian in the world is his daughter i'm very interested in the history but vary confuse at the same time
Lol same
@@voideater5934 why did you type vary its very not vary
If possible this should be a series or even a part 2 for sure because of the ending, (not trying to be rude btw) also this is an amazing one-shot of immortality Deku and is by far the best I have seen!!!
I fully agree
@@GremGoblin same
True
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THE TWIST WERE IZUKU IS AFO SENSEI AND AKEME DAD IS AMAZING 🤩
This was an interesting one shot
I didn't expect crimson demon to be his daughter but either way it was a good one I love you video's
So great job
your stories are really interesting and fun to read.
well I did not expect that ending, but it was funny and I liked it. Good job
I'm imagining izuku saying his story with a Russian accent
So many twists wow just wow thts is a 100% best immortal deku story ihv read so far.this is my first time readin on of ur stories after this u hv gained my sub keep up the gud work fellow
Then wait for tommorow on part 2 where are more plot twist 😉 and thanks for sub
I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!! thx for writing it!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍Merry Christmas 🎉🎉🎉😘😘
It would be great to see a part 2 or to turn this into a series
Agreed
I dont know man but this is a powerful story... 🤯
How in CA hell did you come up with this it was amazing
The plot twists😯
The drama🍵🍵
The heart taking moments❤❤
It was just... Splendid😲😲 like who would think THE Crimson demon was deku's daughter😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲❤❤❤❤❤
Fr, I thought she was his lover or something
Gotta say im impressed with this really impressed
idea suggestion of alternative immortal Deku au if you wanna know :) it's not any other anime idea mushed into the MHA universe, it's an immortality quirk idea where Izuku was born around 2170 years before the MHA story takes place when quirks were just developing. I have started on the story but i have writers block and idk what to dooooooo
That's cute a father wants to reunite with his daughter... For Idk, approximately 200 or 500 years just to be with her...
Amazing story I kinda want this to be turned into episodes
bro this was so good
Part 2 would be funny with akame being cute
Woah thats was awesome and hilarious at the same time lmao
Glad you liked it
I was ready for Crimson Demon to have some sort of familial relation or be a relationship but that was adorable
First- IMMORTAL
Second- SENSEI
Third-PAPA!?!?!!?!
and fourth- Who's the mother? 😏 oh my gosh all the plot twist and probably with this emojo"😏" is something like you can put in a mina texting story expression 😹😹😹❤❤
First time watching you and I think your pretty good
Bro when gilgamesh deku part 3 upload i can wait cuz gilgamesh and rimuru is one of the caracter i love
Thats good keep going brooo
I’ve watched this about 4-5 times the first time I found it by accident and subbed after finishing this story and now every time I see it I just rewatch it
Hmm... but who is the Mother of akame.. because of her hunger and like sweets i can question if it's not a erza and izuku daughter
bro that plot twist got me 🤣
That's one hella of a plot twist!😂
That was a-plot at the end.....I love plottsssss😌😌
Damn boy nice story 👍👍👍 the plot twist at the last is the best
man you could have gotten more hours of people watching this as in multiple episodes of 1 hour in length. how i know that because i would watch more.
Amazing story and plot twist.
Bro just has good connections with everybody 🤣🤣🤣
I like this one particular story
Can you please make a part 2 it was just getting interesting
This midoriya and aizawa radiate the same energy
Hahah I knew it was between lover or his child reeeeee
You know this would make for a good season 2 for
I like this plz more like this
If you are fast reader or something go at 1.75x or 2x it helps a lot for me
Please do a part to !!! I love this and I Ned to know how it ends !!
Very good job ! 👌🏼
Maybe an other ep ? 🥺
Yeah I am currently working on it but I am still preparing for my exams as well
@@sariktextingstories7564 No problem, take your time 👍🏻
I re-watch this like every year lol one of the txt stories that's acc good
I feel stupid right now I thought the witch would be the crimson demon but it's his daughter hahaha
Dang this is so good
Oke but can we look at the Backstory that is the most creative an coolest Backstory ever
lmao that plot twist at the end
Hey make more deku in one piece
Finally you comment something usefull i always see you in other texting channels always begging for new ship or add someone even if the ship is decided
HSHAHHAHAHAHAHA i was shocked when she said papa
While watching this I knew while in the middle of the video I thought what if crimson demon was his daughter and I was right :)
Good job, nice Story,would like to see a Part 2 ship for part 2 :Izuku x Rumi and his daughter x Bakugo yeah thats all keep going
I already start working on part 2 so just wait a little longer and you will know what will happen in part 2
Awesome
All I could think of watching this was everyone's jaw either on or through the floor
I legit taught it was alabama since she said papa my taughts were *harder daddy*😁😅
Mate thats just wrong🤣🤣🤣
You should make a part 2🗿
Even tho is a one shot🗿
you mean to tell me that Izuku had a daughter that became the number 1 villain
Great story but please make a second part
When she said papa my ear started twitching
Bet the next plot twist is that the witch took over akames mother to get closer to mizuki to kill him
Sorry mate but I already made a story part of next episode
Ik it is a one ahot but can u continue this cuz i wanna know how 1a and the others will react
Sorry abt the spelling errors my dumb phone is like that
Can you continue Tokyo Revenger Deku
That’s Natsu Ezra Gray and Lucy from the anime Fairy Tale
Yeah they are
Nice
hello can you make part this agian 😊😊
When will you upload the next part of deku in one piece ?
Don't know but I will try to upload it as soon as possible
@@sariktextingstories7564 ok
OHHHH YESSSSSSS SANJI
Edit:What a plot twist
Please make extra parts please
if your immortal and the world ends you are going to be the only one left just floating through space untill you crash into a planet
Hmm interesting theory
You did not just end it like this I neeeeed part 2 I beg of you
part 2 will be out soon dont worry😉
I'm going to stop breathing untill you make a part 2
Damm this was good make another one please 🙏 I beg of you
I beg too 🙏🙏
ngl I thing this is the only story with that many plot twist
Haha i knew form the start that crimson demon was his daughter
I didn't realise one-shot meant part 1
Strange ending and i was wondering why there was no ship...now i understand
I would enjoy another part of this🤔🤭
I decided to do 2nd part which will be conclusion or part 2 I am not really sure myself
Midnight : I wonder what a hot man like him would want with her...
Aizawa : Midnight no.
Midnight : Midnight *yes* .
*SPOILER AHEAD*
*When it turns out to be his daughter. . .*
9:06 now and I am watching this with 9.6k views
This one shot just make it sound or look like it needs a part 2
WHY- MAKE ANOTHER ONE OF THIS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Hey can we get a count on how many times he lit a cigarette
Nice 😇
Bring part 2 man tomorrow
You should add some music yo mask the messaging sounds
Planning to do it
Um how you have exams if it is Christmas break I would like to know
I have exams on 5th January and I need to learn something around 350 pages so I can't really wait to last day I am university student not high school sadly
@@sariktextingstories7564 oh ok thank I didn’t know you were a universality students
Damn i need part 2 ( I think not only me xD)
Can this please have a part 2
Fucking loved this vidio
Please make extra part please
Is the picture for Izuku from that one vampire anime
I am not sure mate but I think so 🤔
Wow talk about being all powerful
It's good and all until she finds the biggest candy se seen
Will you continue monkey king deku and glow up deku?
Propably no
@@sariktextingstories7564 oh 😔
i think there is going to be two shot bc of yk the ending
why aint i suprised that akame was/is? his daugther
Wait who is the mother tho?
He prob r@pe another woman..........................
-ITS A JOKE OK
Plot twist at the end wtf
Its almost the same ending as the other immortal deku i watched. But other than that its pretty good.
Oh don't worry real ending will come in next episode because the ending here suck so I will make one more
Hmm interesting, interesting indeed