1 Simple Trick for Complex, Conflicted Characters

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  • @PaulRWorthington
    @PaulRWorthington 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I really like this way of looking at a character's internal struggle. Showing conflicting strong values goes deeper than the standard "internal need vs external want."
    Thanks very much!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You’re so welcome; glad you liked it!

  • @patch8376
    @patch8376 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Expelled vs dead also comes up in a skit where Rowan Atkinson plays a school principal and talks to an unruly child's parents about disciplinary "fatal beatings". I can't remember the show name.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Rowan Atkinson always makes me laugh.

  • @MYlearning-f7l
    @MYlearning-f7l 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    You are so helpful. I always learn something new whenever I watch your videos.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      That is so great to hear, thank you!

  • @Sisanf
    @Sisanf ปีที่แล้ว

    This is such a clear explanation of character change and character arc!! Thank you for explain this so well!

  • @felicebritton8881
    @felicebritton8881 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    You are a brilliant teacher ❤️

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much!

  • @mohammaddehbashi4624
    @mohammaddehbashi4624 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Awesome Tips!!thank You

  • @judyshinohara
    @judyshinohara 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Such a great video. Thank you for using a wide range of examples, too. I'm so tired of seeing examples from Pride and Prejudice and the Hunger Games from other TH-camrs lol
    I'm terrible at coming up with complex characters, so I want to try this method. It seems like fun!

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad you enjoyed it, Judith!

  • @susanbennett8423
    @susanbennett8423 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Oh my god this changes EVERYTHING! This was super helpful! Do you have a workbook for sale, or a Patreon page?

  • @annavernick1490
    @annavernick1490 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you for a new perspective on creating a comples character that will mean something to readers. I am often blocked by inner versus outer or deep wound. This helps the writing get started, other stuff can up when it's ready to be revealed by subconscious.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You’re so welcome!

  • @heatherkline6766
    @heatherkline6766 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I have a pinpoint character introduction in a standalone mystery of mine. (It is how-dunnit or a why-dunnit as opposed to a who-dunnit; our protagonist/sleuth has an idea of who, and a hunch why but explaining the whole thing is tricky.) In the opening he risks his own safety to preserve justice; however, when the criminal begins to use deadly force, my protagonist freaks out. He is saved by someone else. By the climax, his values swap; and he nearly dies as a result of trying to protect a victim he doesn't even know.

  • @nancymangan5010
    @nancymangan5010 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Brilliant. You 're always so spot on. I'm impressed with how.clearly you explain things. Now it's so obvious! Thank you.

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You are so welcome! I’m really glad it was helpful for you!

  • @ldfm-z5r
    @ldfm-z5r 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I love this Jane! You did it again!💜☺️

    • @janekalmes
      @janekalmes  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you so much, Laura!

  • @KimtheElder
    @KimtheElder 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Loooove these explanations. Thank you 😊

  • @dcle944
    @dcle944 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Kids are below marriage?:-)