Surrendering in the vastness, Kneeling into divinity, Yet random thoughts come and go, Mesmerized by this ethereal sanctuary, In the soft white duvet, he finds respite, Reaching in the depths of the unknown.
Beautifully written! This evokes such a serene and introspective scene. The imagery of surrendering into something so vast and divine, while thoughts drift through, feels profoundly peaceful. The contrast between the grounding softness of the white duvet and the journey into the unknown gives it a sense of gentle wonder. Truly an ethereal sanctuary indeed! 😊
@@EtherealPathways Thank you so much for the kind and thoughtful comment!! It was a pleasure to write this piece for your composition. Keep up the good work!! 😊🕊🫶👍
@@ascendinguniversalbutterfly You're so welcome! It was truly a joy to read, and I'm honored to have it as part of my composition. Thank you for bringing such beauty and depth with your words-they add something incredibly special. 😊🕊🫶👍 Keep creating; your talent shines!
Thank you so much my dear friend! I’m really glad it brings that feeling of wonder and freedom to you. Knowing it helps the soul find peace is truly rewarding. I’ll keep working to create more of that magic! 😊🌌
Surrendering in the vastness,
Kneeling into divinity,
Yet random thoughts come and go,
Mesmerized by this ethereal sanctuary,
In the soft white duvet, he finds respite,
Reaching in the depths of the unknown.
Beautifully written! This evokes such a serene and introspective scene. The imagery of surrendering into something so vast and divine, while thoughts drift through, feels profoundly peaceful. The contrast between the grounding softness of the white duvet and the journey into the unknown gives it a sense of gentle wonder. Truly an ethereal sanctuary indeed! 😊
@@EtherealPathways Thank you so much for the kind and thoughtful comment!! It was a pleasure to write this piece for your composition. Keep up the good work!! 😊🕊🫶👍
@@ascendinguniversalbutterfly You're so welcome! It was truly a joy to read, and I'm honored to have it as part of my composition. Thank you for bringing such beauty and depth with your words-they add something incredibly special. 😊🕊🫶👍 Keep creating; your talent shines!
It brings a feeling of Wonder and freedom to this helps the soul to find peace it is wonderful😊
Thank you so much my dear friend! I’m really glad it brings that feeling of wonder and freedom to you. Knowing it helps the soul find peace is truly rewarding. I’ll keep working to create more of that magic! 😊🌌
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