I'm totally hooked on the story. I picked up the first twist with the imaginary mother sitting in a chair in the bedroom. My brain went right to the movie Psycho. It's funny that her kids weren't in her mind, just her mom, then husband.
Very well done. I really liked how the salesman at first appeared very nervous and thus suspicious. Later it becomes more clear why. I thought the acting was superb all around, the simple single scene worked well and the suspense at the end knowing what's coming but still having to wait was excellent.
Things that made me feel "Something is wrong": 2:04: The mother is a mannequin 2:17: The glass is empty 2:31: "It's a beautiful neighborhood", but there is no neighborhood 4:30: He hands her a blank paper that she sees as an Arizona brochure 5:55: The phone rings, but it's for him 6:55: The husband is a mannequin (and the music becomes eerie) 7:55: He acknowledges the husband as if he were real 9:10: She starts rushing irrationally 9:26: The phone, again 9:40: He says her children are somewhere else 9:44: He confirms everything that is wrong Everything after that is me waiting for the explanation
As a former CRA, i have taken care of patients like Peggy.but in their 70s-up. Sometimes i can bring them back to present day and they soon discover their grown children & grandchildren.
This had me hooked from the start. The empty glass and the eerie presence of the dummy "mother" set a mysterious tone right from the start. That spine tingling reveal of the husband had me jumping from my seat. The story leaves subtle hints of the twist throughout the film which makes it great for a second (or even third) watch. Great job Nevin!
What an astonishing story - with astonishingly good acting, directing, cinematography - everything in fact. Peggy and Frank masterfully escort you on a journey that starts promising but soon unravels into despair.
spoiler alert: she escaped a military mental hospital and fled into the neighborhood she did not realize was for nuclear testing. Frank gets a chance at redemption, to save the wife of his buddy he failed to save in the war.
How would she not realise it was a nuclear testing place, what did she think the dummy was there for?. But then again if she's suffering from mental illness and is seeing the husband as the dummy ... she's clearly not thinking straight . But she still has her kids which she moved away from. So the kids must be wondering why their mother escaped.
@@meghanaabhyankar9151 He's explaining it. People usually come to the comments after watching the short, to exchange perspectives, interpretations, etc.
Her husband died in the war. This is where they lived. They moved her to Wyoming with her children, but this is where she lived with him before the war. The government acclaimed the land and did nuclear tests on it. I guess that's what I got from this. Idk.
I wasn't sure if it was their old home or not , i wondered if it was just an abandoned home she started squatting in pretending it's hers. But i guess it would make more sense if it was their old house.
From Wikipedia regarding the Trinity test site: The only structures originally in the immediate vicinity were the McDonald Ranch House and its ancillary buildings, which scientists used as a laboratory for testing bomb components. The McDonald Ranch House was built in 1913 by Franz Schmidt, a German immigrant, and acquired by the McDonald family in the 1930s. The ranch was vacated by the McDonald family under protest in 1942, when the United States Army took over the land as part of the Alamogordo Bombing and Gunnery Range to use in training bomber crews during World War II. The family hoped that the ranch would be returned after the war, but it was not, and in 1970, the Army announced that it would be kept permanently. The McDonald Ranch House was empty and deteriorating until 1982, when it was stabilized by the Army. In 1984 it was restored by the National Park Service to appear as it did on July 12, 1945. The site is now open to visitors twice a year, on the first Saturday in April and the third Saturday in October.
Really well done. The mystery and the tension are really well built up and sustained. I like that the backstory is well expressed nearly entirely through subtext. The exposition at the end was a little overstated, but by then, I was hooked anyway. Loses some points for me in the period detail. Something as easy as the lead (albeit excellent) actor having his hair MUCH SHORTER. We forget today that men had VERY short buzzcuts or slicked short hair in this period (the late 40s/early 50s) When the Beatles came on the scene in the early 60s, they were called 'mop-tops' - and their hair was shorter than the "salesman's". Some more accurate period details would have gone a long way to sell this idea a little better.
God I love these short films. Wonderful story telling and plot twists that make you pay close attention. They are very well done and I’ve been watching them over the years. Y’all probably hate the comparison but they definitely fulfill my Black Mirror fix and have even exceeded the most recent content from that series.
Great Short! Sidenote: kept trying to place the actor & realized my brain thought it was Mr. Ballen! Can’t be though, read the credits but~ rather uncanny!
So good, thoroughly enjoyed every second of the film. Really loved the acting, mystery, and suspense. The only drag is it left me with questions. Was it just madness? Would love to have seen the backstory leading up to this.
She was in denial about her husband's death, she was desperately trying to pretend everything was alright. The reason she refuses to leave is that though she may be crazy, she's lucid enough to understand she's about to be blown up. She wants to be blown up. She wants to die so she can go to where her husband has gone. Heaven, presumably. She was totally mad, yes. But she knew exactly what she was doing with her nuclear suicide even whilst being unhinged. She trapped herself in a prison of delusion but her goal was ultimately to die and join her love again.
What an impressive shortfilm confusing in the beginning an then beginning to dawn on me... Brilliant acting and artistic style with a minimum of requisite and perspective changing. Gorgeous work!
She can’t go because she has to cook for her family…. Woman are so much more then just a housewife. Why do she feels all she has is her family. No life outside of her family, friends, other family members? This is just sad Good movie I enjoyed watching
Consider the time frame. This would have been shortly after WW II. Late '40s, early '50s. At the time, most women could not wait to stop being Rosie the Riveter and become that classic '50s housewife that stayed at home with the kids. That may seem incredible to you today, but I lived through that time and it was so. Women's liberation was 20 years into the future; at this time, fresh off of a depression and a war, people wanted security and the single wage earner nuclear family that eluded them for so long. Many actually achieved it. Those that didn't, wanted it.
Im with you women are more than housewives but she wants the security of family after (presumably) losing her husband to war. She wants to be needed and thats the fantasy she chose. And housewives aren't "lacking" they can be just as whole as a working woman. Plus, working women can be unfulfilled as well. If she takes pride in cooking for her (imaginary) family - that's not less than
What was the point of convincing her to leave on her own? Weather she left on her own or not, she would have been hospitalized either case and had received psychological treatment either case. It's not like if she had left voluntarily, she would have been healed. And it's noble, that this guy tries to take her away without physical force but why does he get so upset if that fails and they decide to just take her away by force? Note that this is how they had treated a healthy person in the first place. You enter a restricted military area, you are taken away by force.
To be kind. She already escaped the institution. He wanted to get her to safely to her family without traumatizing her more He wanted to help the war hero who saved his life by helping his wife.
I thought she was going to turn out to be a old woman suffering from dementia, who was "trapped" in the past in her mind, and he was a doctor trying to get her out.
The "That's suspicious, that's weird" would be pretty fitting for this short film. 1940's U.S.A. A random guy goes to a random woman's house, Peggy's house. Peggy, winned a supposed vacation for the rich. She's married but the guy, doesn't want the husband to come. She gets a phonecall, that's for the random guy. Out of nowhere, the husband is there??? And he's a manequin??? Husband's name is Steve, random guy and him suposedly know each other from war. Peggy finds everything weird. Everyone here knows each other. Peggy is suffering from past traumas, and he's trying to help her. Peggy learns that her husband, saved Mark a.k.a random man at war. Mark and Peggy are being apprehended. Last scene: manequin husband is left alone, when a bomb explodes.
Whatsup with shorts having a guy barging in looking around house and a woman who is too chill/careless/easy going letting strangers in.... Then the man prying into her life and she welcomes answering all sorts of questions defensively but fully, sometimes offering additional info without being asked... Then downhill from there...
Interesting, but too opaque for its own good. No one on a rescue mission is going to cut things that close to the bone. Indeed, how does she get there in the first place? I liked where this story wanted to go; I just don't think it successfully got there.
I knew something was weird when she gave him a glass of water & there wasn’t any water in it & he pretended to drink it.
Good observation! I didn't notice that
@@dfb2913I didn't notice either.
I did notice the blank page, though. I thought that I saw incorrectly.
I thought it was an editing mistake, but it turned out it was logical.
I'm totally hooked on the story. I picked up the first twist with the imaginary mother sitting in a chair in the bedroom. My brain went right to the movie Psycho. It's funny that her kids weren't in her mind, just her mom, then husband.
@@LaLa-xf7kuchildren were outside. She called them.
Very well done. I really liked how the salesman at first appeared very nervous and thus suspicious. Later it becomes more clear why. I thought the acting was superb all around, the simple single scene worked well and the suspense at the end knowing what's coming but still having to wait was excellent.
Things that made me feel "Something is wrong":
2:04: The mother is a mannequin
2:17: The glass is empty
2:31: "It's a beautiful neighborhood", but there is no neighborhood
4:30: He hands her a blank paper that she sees as an Arizona brochure
5:55: The phone rings, but it's for him
6:55: The husband is a mannequin (and the music becomes eerie)
7:55: He acknowledges the husband as if he were real
9:10: She starts rushing irrationally
9:26: The phone, again
9:40: He says her children are somewhere else
9:44: He confirms everything that is wrong
Everything after that is me waiting for the explanation
As a former CRA, i have taken care of patients like Peggy.but in their 70s-up. Sometimes i can bring them back to present day and they soon discover their grown children & grandchildren.
This is what I was thinking, at first I thought the short was about dementia. But then it left me confused, I really didn't understand the ending.
what is it i still dont get it? if not dementia...then what?
Greetings from another Clinical Research Associate...fluoxetine in the 90'ies...
@@bookwormiee maybe simply SHOCK....? Having lost her husband...
SHE must get the next Academy Award, great, outstanding performance
This had me hooked from the start. The empty glass and the eerie presence of the dummy "mother" set a mysterious tone right from the start. That spine tingling reveal of the husband had me jumping from my seat.
The story leaves subtle hints of the twist throughout the film which makes it great for a second (or even third) watch.
Great job Nevin!
What an astonishing story - with astonishingly good acting, directing, cinematography - everything in fact. Peggy and Frank masterfully escort you on a journey that starts promising but soon unravels into despair.
wow, the acting is so not good
@@thinkfloyd2594 ... The dummy was about the most convincing actor.
@@martinwebb1681 I would like to see you do better
@@braydenhick8549I wouldn't. 🙄
@@braydenhick8549 ... Trust me, it wouldn't be difficult.
spoiler alert: she escaped a military mental hospital and fled into the neighborhood she did not realize was for nuclear testing. Frank gets a chance at redemption, to save the wife of his buddy he failed to save in the war.
Did you not realize that you are giving out the story, or did you do it on purpose?
Thank u for explaining this❤
Thank you, I didn't understand the explosion because I didn't know that they made nuclear testings like that
How would she not realise it was a nuclear testing place, what did she think the dummy was there for?. But then again if she's suffering from mental illness and is seeing the husband as the dummy ... she's clearly not thinking straight . But she still has her kids which she moved away from. So the kids must be wondering why their mother escaped.
@@meghanaabhyankar9151 He's explaining it. People usually come to the comments after watching the short, to exchange perspectives, interpretations, etc.
hey, he‘s friend from work! proud of you buddy, keep up the good work
Her husband died in the war. This is where they lived. They moved her to Wyoming with her children, but this is where she lived with him before the war. The government acclaimed the land and did nuclear tests on it. I guess that's what I got from this. Idk.
I wasn't sure if it was their old home or not , i wondered if it was just an abandoned home she started squatting in pretending it's hers. But i guess it would make more sense if it was their old house.
From Wikipedia regarding the Trinity test site: The only structures originally in the immediate vicinity were the McDonald Ranch House and its ancillary buildings, which scientists used as a laboratory for testing bomb components.
The McDonald Ranch House was built in 1913 by Franz Schmidt, a German immigrant, and acquired by the McDonald family in the 1930s. The ranch was vacated by the McDonald family under protest in 1942, when the United States Army took over the land as part of the Alamogordo Bombing and Gunnery Range to use in training bomber crews during World War II.
The family hoped that the ranch would be returned after the war, but it was not, and in 1970, the Army announced that it would be kept permanently. The McDonald Ranch House was empty and deteriorating until 1982, when it was stabilized by the Army. In 1984 it was restored by the National Park Service to appear as it did on July 12, 1945. The site is now open to visitors twice a year, on the first Saturday in April and the third Saturday in October.
The actress playing Peggy is absolutely outstanding here.
Wow, this version of Barbie was DARK!
Plus Oppenheimer. 😅😂
Really well done. The mystery and the tension are really well built up and sustained. I like that the backstory is well expressed nearly entirely through subtext. The exposition at the end was a little overstated, but by then, I was hooked anyway.
Loses some points for me in the period detail. Something as easy as the lead (albeit excellent) actor having his hair MUCH SHORTER. We forget today that men had VERY short buzzcuts or slicked short hair in this period (the late 40s/early 50s) When the Beatles came on the scene in the early 60s, they were called 'mop-tops' - and their hair was shorter than the "salesman's". Some more accurate period details would have gone a long way to sell this idea a little better.
Yes, the man looked very current.
Picky, picky, picky. It hardly distracts from the script which is superb.
Top tier acting, especially the widow. Bravo 👏
That was totally unexpected, I thought he was going rob her.
Absolutly amazing film, love the story and the acting. Nice work hope to see more amazing art like this🎉
Mike you did great!
The woman deserves an Oscar for her performance!
Coping with lost love and not succeeding 😔
Time has stopped (look at wall clock)
The details were just right, if you can disregard the guy's hairstyle.
Wow. Especially powerful after having seen Oppenheimer. Thank you!
God I love these short films. Wonderful story telling and plot twists that make you pay close attention. They are very well done and I’ve been watching them over the years. Y’all probably hate the comparison but they definitely fulfill my Black Mirror fix and have even exceeded the most recent content from that series.
Shutter Island like. Martin Scorsese film with Leonardo DiCaprio.
Thank God for independent filmmakers
That final full minute was genius.
That we as sooooo good to watch. I totally wasn't expecting that plot twist. Great job to the production team.
Wow! Just wow . The way everything was tied up in the end was so satisfying
Great work Nevin George!!
Great story. I was intrigued right up to the end.
Thankfully the comment section explained it well
Wonderful movie and acting.
I love Peggy accent
I didn’t 🫤
Great Short! Sidenote: kept trying to place the actor & realized my brain thought it was Mr. Ballen! Can’t be though, read the credits but~ rather uncanny!
Sad story. Missing Children & dead husband becomes a tumor, if not treated well.
The actor playing Srgt Steve Dunhill was the best performance.
They really got this one right. Best one yet. Visual style, acting, casting, built to an explosive ending.
Stellar performances and unique story! Fantastic!
Wooow! That was so good! Amazing job and acting!
Uniquely different loved it , testing site, drama. Thank you well-done
So good, thoroughly enjoyed every second of the film. Really loved the acting, mystery, and suspense. The only drag is it left me with questions. Was it just madness? Would love to have seen the backstory leading up to this.
She was in denial about her husband's death, she was desperately trying to pretend everything was alright.
The reason she refuses to leave is that though she may be crazy, she's lucid enough to understand she's about to be blown up.
She wants to be blown up. She wants to die so she can go to where her husband has gone. Heaven, presumably.
She was totally mad, yes. But she knew exactly what she was doing with her nuclear suicide even whilst being unhinged.
She trapped herself in a prison of delusion but her goal was ultimately to die and join her love again.
What an impressive shortfilm confusing in the beginning an then beginning to dawn on me... Brilliant acting and artistic style with a minimum of requisite and perspective changing. Gorgeous work!
Very good, all around. Great story, great acting.
Damn wars and Who makes them, why they behave so brutal with the lady?? Very sad😢😢
They had a time limit and they were in the blast zone.
This was an incredible film! Thank you so much.
Damn, good one!!!
I quickly got that Wanda and Vision type of feeling
Plus, Indiana jones & the crystal skull with Don’t Worry Darling vibes too. ☺️
So many intriguing and intricate time,style,acting,accent and plot twist i love ghis
I love these stories so much that I wish some were full length movies and series!
Poor man's "Shutter Island."
Very well done.
Brought a tear to my eye, props.
What a gem!
This was really good. Thanks.
Superb work.
They should have let her stay.
🕛💥🍄💀
Fantastic .👌👍super direction , great story and great acting .Congratulations dear Nevin💐
A masterpiece.....
Actually the manikin is the perfect husband as most wives tell their husbands, "SHUT UP AND LISTEN!"
iloved it at first it was weird but I got it when the woman showed her husband...
Very good!
Great short! Well written and acted very creative 👍
Interestingly, I believe it was N.T. Wright (of all people!!) who said he has spoken in tongues.
She can’t go because she has to cook for her family…. Woman are so much more then just a housewife. Why do she feels all she has is her family. No life outside of her family, friends, other family members? This is just sad
Good movie I enjoyed watching
Consider the time frame. This would have been shortly after WW II. Late '40s, early '50s. At the time, most women could not wait to stop being Rosie the Riveter and become that classic '50s housewife that stayed at home with the kids. That may seem incredible to you today, but I lived through that time and it was so. Women's liberation was 20 years into the future; at this time, fresh off of a depression and a war, people wanted security and the single wage earner nuclear family that eluded them for so long. Many actually achieved it. Those that didn't, wanted it.
Im with you women are more than housewives but she wants the security of family after (presumably) losing her husband to war. She wants to be needed and thats the fantasy she chose.
And housewives aren't "lacking" they can be just as whole as a working woman. Plus, working women can be unfulfilled as well. If she takes pride in cooking for her (imaginary) family - that's not less than
Such a well made movie! Enjoyed it thoroughly
Dark...nicely done overall.
I absolutely thought the actress was Amber Heard - had to look it up to see it was not - striking resemblance
Nice suspense movie, very well captured. Wish you success always Nevin.
Look forward to see more releases
Well done.
Nuclear Weapons during the "war between the states?" ... How eschatological!
Incredible story
Beautifully done! Bravo 👏🏾 👏🏾
quite the story! sad in the end for the woman.
Top short and very well made in all respects. Sad story though.
Well done but the lead actor really should have had a more appropriate hair style for this role.
That came in about 1970.
I wonder if the strained cadence in the dialogue for Frank is because he's working more on the accent than the lines.
Should have showed Peggy at her current age😢😢.really good short though
They did show Peggy at her current age
Didn't see that coming; thought he was the bad guy. Edit to say: I just got the pun about 3 seconds before the explosion lol
Very good one
Amazing short!
Very sad😢😢😢😢😢
When there was no water in the glass... bravo Omeleto!
This was amazing! Really good!!!
🍿 There was no writers strike for this story
What was the point of convincing her to leave on her own? Weather she left on her own or not, she would have been hospitalized either case and had received psychological treatment either case. It's not like if she had left voluntarily, she would have been healed. And it's noble, that this guy tries to take her away without physical force but why does he get so upset if that fails and they decide to just take her away by force? Note that this is how they had treated a healthy person in the first place. You enter a restricted military area, you are taken away by force.
To be kind. She already escaped the institution. He wanted to get her to safely to her family without traumatizing her more He wanted to help the war hero who saved his life by helping his wife.
I thought she was going to turn out to be a old woman suffering from dementia, who was "trapped" in the past in her mind, and he was a doctor trying to get her out.
Brilliant. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Good film 💙
Interesting idea for a short. 👍🏽
Drastic story.
This is how fallout begins
The "That's suspicious, that's weird" would be pretty fitting for this short film.
1940's U.S.A. A random guy goes to a random woman's house, Peggy's house. Peggy, winned a supposed vacation for the rich. She's married but the guy, doesn't want the husband to come. She gets a phonecall, that's for the random guy. Out of nowhere, the husband is there??? And he's a manequin??? Husband's name is Steve, random guy and him suposedly know each other from war. Peggy finds everything weird. Everyone here knows each other. Peggy is suffering from past traumas, and he's trying to help her. Peggy learns that her husband, saved Mark a.k.a random man at war. Mark and Peggy are being apprehended. Last scene: manequin husband is left alone, when a bomb explodes.
It was a nuclear staging area
@@briteeyes2133 Well they don't say it in the video, so it's up for speculation.
Ah, I've got a feeling you might want to watch this again 😂
@@lizziem Everything is so confusing, that it's hard to tell what is really happening.
@@vivianedossantoscaipira7075Not everything in life comes with an instruction manual.
This is terrific
Whatsup with shorts having a guy barging in looking around house and a woman who is too chill/careless/easy going letting strangers in.... Then the man prying into her life and she welcomes answering all sorts of questions defensively but fully, sometimes offering additional info without being asked...
Then downhill from there...
Interesting, but too opaque for its own good. No one on a rescue mission is going to cut things that close to the bone. Indeed, how does she get there in the first place? I liked where this story wanted to go; I just don't think it successfully got there.
How Fallout 4 do you want the beginning to be?
Yes.
Warning : Masterpiece
I am a simpleton. Just could not understand the movie.
Read the comments for an explanation
BRILLIANT
Crazy movie!
Tragic.
I vote this be added to the new Nuketown maps