Earth's Secret Fleet Shocks Galactic Council | Best HFY Stories

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  • @troybradshaw8781
    @troybradshaw8781 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Note to self; Don't become allies with the galactic federation. Allies who argue about being allies are worthless.

  • @robdevereux2740
    @robdevereux2740 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

    Why is everything 'the fate of the galaxy hangs in the balance'..... "Captain Avery needed a cup of coffee and the fate of the galaxy hung in the balance!"

  • @BjornoPeter
    @BjornoPeter 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Add 70 pct. Trek, 20 pct. Star Wars and 10 pct. Halo to a bowl and stir vigorously.

  • @darrinwebber4077
    @darrinwebber4077 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    "Like a hot knife through butter...".
    I think that's in every one of these AI Sci-fi videos.... It gets old but I still like them. They kill a lot of time.

    • @thenecessaryevil2634
      @thenecessaryevil2634 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      The stories are mostly from the 'Humanity Fuck Yeah' reddit and the AI generated ones use the existing stories to determine best phrases so stuff from stories reposted a lot or from really prolific authors gets used more. There was an author who did a lot of LitRPG stories and even a couple novel length stories who loved that phrase for magic swords.

    • @alisonmacbride3403
      @alisonmacbride3403 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Another word that gets used much too often, but has to be included in any story if you want to be welcomed into the secret society of fictional writers. And the word is "clambered." I mean have you ever clambered? Know anyone who has? 😂

    • @CrashPCcz
      @CrashPCcz 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      As Teal'c would say, Indeed! Spotted that too. Also their names are so repetitive and same. Like, Zandar (ish) and Glurk (ish). 😂

  • @edtrine8692
    @edtrine8692 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    The #1 mistake of the nuclear power plant in Japan was putting the emergency power for the power plant in the basement in a Tsunami zone!

    • @c.guydubois8270
      @c.guydubois8270 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      👍

    • @bwsimonson
      @bwsimonson 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Maybe you should tell the Japanese that.

    • @c.guydubois8270
      @c.guydubois8270 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@bwsimonson hindsight?

  • @AtomicSquirrelHunter
    @AtomicSquirrelHunter 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    So let me get this straight....
    Admiral Avery is Captain Kirk?

    • @kevinafrank104
      @kevinafrank104 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Maybe not, but his engineer is definitely Scotty. “Captain, she can’t take much more of this!”

  • @Ripsaw17
    @Ripsaw17 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Us humans also have a saying f*** around and find out

  • @thelinuxlearningcurve5394
    @thelinuxlearningcurve5394 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Yeah the chapters are really our of order - such a shame for a good story

  • @cwartner
    @cwartner 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    "Earth has secured its place in the galaxy and now it would never be the same" - truly chilling and creepy ending. Poor galaxy ...

  • @osvaldocristo
    @osvaldocristo 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    So Avery is the king of humanity and probably the galaxy that takes in his own hands all power and decision. Additionally he doesn´t allow anyone take the minimum responsibility besides himself, so he is the supreme commander of the ships as well commandos in the surface. Personally.
    Oh, please, I know all is fiction but I think author needs a little bit of reality.

  • @jimwhiteford443
    @jimwhiteford443 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I’ve never had the word “bristling” so much

    • @jimwhiteford443
      @jimwhiteford443 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      This story should’ve been called fiction tropes you’re sick of and didn’t make sense the first time you heard them

    • @cpcw06
      @cpcw06 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      or butter

    • @marwerno
      @marwerno 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Same "with grim determination" or "roar of defiance" (which are also in heavy use in other stories of this type... is this all written by the same AI?

  • @jbodden6977
    @jbodden6977 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    are these alien names courtesy of CAlvin and Hobbes?

  • @user-xr5oz5dk9c
    @user-xr5oz5dk9c 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    It's amazing that in one guys life the stake of the galaxy was at stake like fifteen times

    • @cpcw06
      @cpcw06 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Don't forget all that butter too!

    • @Perurikun
      @Perurikun 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@cpcw06 sooooooo much butter! 🤣🤣🤣🔪🧈

  • @elfeintwentyfives1620
    @elfeintwentyfives1620 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    silly request could you put stories in same continuity or same "book"?

  • @keithhughes8010
    @keithhughes8010 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Great video

  • @user-ul6dc4qc4j
    @user-ul6dc4qc4j 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Better than star trek though. Also, Sol is such a cool name for our system.

  • @tazmokhan7614
    @tazmokhan7614 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lots of Fate and butter in telling this story, but its pretty damn good read.

  • @JackT1961
    @JackT1961 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Good story. The timeline needs a little work though

  • @Xdbd1
    @Xdbd1 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I work ina legal chop shop. We take in wrecked cars and sell the good parts. I spill oil on the daily. I also live in the woods, where the bugs are. They get it too.

  • @XxiceBlokxX
    @XxiceBlokxX 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    My favorite part is the 1,753,000 commercials. Can you guys add more commercials?

    • @edtrine8692
      @edtrine8692 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Just damn!

    • @Dr.Westside
      @Dr.Westside 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Yeah you can just scroll all the way through and then hit restart at the end and you won't have any commercials . You're welcome

  • @charlesregan9917
    @charlesregan9917 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Another AI gets boring

    • @edtrine8692
      @edtrine8692 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      There are several words AI can't pronounce. Bow, Lead are just a couple?

  • @frankg3243
    @frankg3243 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Admiral Marcus Avery has sacrificed too much including Commander Raxos from Valkorians. To bow down to tyranny or oppression that dared to challenge them. I would like to hear the rest of this story, Parts 2, 3, 4, 5, you know to the END!

  • @mircsmurf
    @mircsmurf 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    this needs somewhat better editing cause the story is fragmented

  • @matthewmeans8360
    @matthewmeans8360 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Bro needs a Thesaurus

  • @user-pt5dm2zd2w
    @user-pt5dm2zd2w 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Is there a star system in your sci-fi story that everyone avoids because there is something like a space spider web that pulls every spaceship that comes too close to the system out of the ftl? The star system could be a Bermuda triangle in space . where thousands of spaceships have disappeared over the years. or called the devil's triangle

  • @clintdodson44
    @clintdodson44 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Enjoy your storys

  • @Scifiland
    @Scifiland 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Better than gotg ❤🔥

  • @rev.mathewgaines3160
    @rev.mathewgaines3160 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Not if you have TH-cam premium then no commercials

    • @jakkittleson5498
      @jakkittleson5498 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      OR JUST A GOOD ADDBLOCKER

  • @mynameismud1776
    @mynameismud1776 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Is this a video game? Seems just like a narrative of a StarCraft like scenario

  • @lippoe
    @lippoe 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    One obvious problem with this narrative is the fact that a Captain is basically conducting all the diplomacy in the story. Where are Earth's leaders and diplomats?

    • @thomaslemay8817
      @thomaslemay8817 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hiding at home waiting for the combat to end so they can rush out and claim the credit after the danger is finished like all diplomats.

  • @1WhiteKnight85
    @1WhiteKnight85 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    While, I like the tone of the computerized voice used. It is just slightly annoying when you hear advanced weapons pronounced as weepons.

  • @robertwhitehead8671HMCS
    @robertwhitehead8671HMCS 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Divert all power to sheilds lmao is it Star trek?

  • @CrashPCcz
    @CrashPCcz 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    So basically (story of) European Union on roids. 😂

  • @jasonrodgers4865
    @jasonrodgers4865 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    the story does have a lot of potential yet it has a glaring pacing issue. a lot of the story feels like it does a lot of and then and then and then and then and then. no real time frame discussed just this happened in this happened in this happened and this happened and this happened and this happened. also it was humans great human suck humans great human suck humans great human suck humans great.

  • @edwardroche2480
    @edwardroche2480 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    First, there are uncountable galaxies in space . Too many things are repeated too many times to pad this story. This makes it a little monotonous and boring. I like the story.

  • @markwestfall9410
    @markwestfall9410 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Is this AI created? Its all over the place and very repetitive.

  • @Denpachii
    @Denpachii 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Meh.

  • @theguy0526
    @theguy0526 23 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Wtf is this sheeeiiit

  • @DontAskHowIGotIt
    @DontAskHowIGotIt 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    AI writer much?

  • @patlab555
    @patlab555 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    So all bad ET's names start with a Z... You might want to be a bit more creative.

  • @lkuhhdsfgasdgvdadfg
    @lkuhhdsfgasdgvdadfg 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    This story is terribly writen.

    • @duanecarr6712
      @duanecarr6712 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      Yours are way better I imagine

    • @delilighfrost9374
      @delilighfrost9374 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      ​@duanecarr6712 i dont need to write stories to know crap when i read/hear it. You want my credentials? Ive read thousands of books at a time when people barely know how to read, and starting to listen to dozens more on these sights. This one is practically bad.

    • @TheBoss-pz9rf
      @TheBoss-pz9rf 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@delilighfrost9374 big deal. I listen to Japanese voice acting and understand the Japanese while reading the English subtitles whilst still watching the anime. Get bent.

    • @delilighfrost9374
      @delilighfrost9374 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@TheBoss-pz9rf You still use subtitles?!?.... N00B

    • @TheBoss-pz9rf
      @TheBoss-pz9rf 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@delilighfrost9374 obviously you don’t read. I don’t need the subtitles but it’s fun to compare the original intent to the English translation.

  • @user-qg2xp3dz3b
    @user-qg2xp3dz3b 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I'm not sure its A I all these or most of these stories are same old nonsense

    • @cseale61
      @cseale61 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Can you do better? If so, put your stuff out there. We'll let you know what we think.