Live a little, livin' lies Something got you tripping Now you're tripping in your mind You said we could save this Told me that you're changing But I don't wanna try, try, try Left me broken, now I'm feeling low Remember how we built our world straight from bricks and stones Remember when we had some pride, save some money, put aside, better future thought would lye, lies. I just wanna, wanna be the guy you look to Remember we would talk about some kids, Lookin' forward to You're not willing, said fuck giving Fuck the bitch and then I said fuck living Past the tests, It's not a verbal tune I'ma walk around and I'ma chase the fucking verbal fumes I'ma fucking take a hit, I'ma fucking take a trip guess that's all we really were guess I guess that were both shit yeahh Live a little, livin' lies Something got you tripping Now you're tripping in your mind You said we could save this Told me that you're changing But I don't wanna try, try, try Left me broken, now I'm feeling low Remember how we built our world straight from bricks and stones Remember when we had some pride, save some money, put aside, better future thought would lye, lies. Pain free tolerance, gifts that I gave you Forget all of it, what has life come to? Feel the pain when I reminisce Think about how life could just be so bliss Memories and memories, Pictures and some flybys, dark skies. Tell me that you Live a little, and you're livin' lies Something got you tripping Now you're tripping on your mind I still see you creeping up You creep up in my mind I had to get somebody to give me your insights, your indecisive. I'm indecisive Walk up on the building, tell me if you like it, fuck that I'ma just fight it, I know I did right man....... Outro (Mumbles)
is my music good ? be honest and please comment on both of my songs for advice so i can get better i recorded it on iphone btw:) any help from anyone would mean a lot
@@chesoz Sorry for being rude, but it's true due to these factors IMO : You need better pronunciation so one can hear what's being said, better mix (partly so one can hear what's being said too) and find your own sound so you stand out, learn how to write songs etc. If you want to become known establish your own sound for example : Yeat, Playboi Carti and Juice Wrld are aldready known for their unique sound so copying Juice Wrld or whoever it is won't get you anywhere, but inspiration is something else. Why listen to a cheap version of Juice when I can listen to juice? Just the truth.
@@SqueezyIV i appreciate the help it’s ok i would rather someone tell me the truth and get help so i can use that to get better ill defitnely use your advice and try my best
On my mind non sparisci dalla testa Ultimamente sono solo in giro per le feste Il mio back ha avuto una Life diversa Quindi non potrai capire per cosa lo faccio Ho firmato un contratto si con la penna del diavolo
col respiro automatico e gli attacchi di panico è un gioco sadico e non so mai giocare no non sono lunatico ho lansia di sabato ah e non si puo cambiare so che sono ossessivo fumo e poi svuoto il frigo sobrio non tocco il cibo sembra che mi fa schifo cho lo sbocco al mattino ma alla fine sorrido se sorrido io, puoi farlo ho lottato brancolando scritto testi lacrimando metto il cuore in cio che faccio mio fratello è preoccupato perche sto sfidando il fato pero sa che posso farlo e sa che sono preparato e sa che non mi sono arreso pure quando ho avuto il peggio quindi perche dovrei farlo adesso che anche lui ci crede certa merda e troppo vera e non la scrivo dentro un testo ma non perche mi vergogno ma non lammetto a me stesso col respiro automatico e gli attacchi di panico è un gioco sadico e non so mai giocare no non sono lunatico ho lansia di sabato ah e non si puo cambiare so che sono ossessivo fumo e poi svuoto il frigo sobrio non tocco il cibo sembra che mi fa schifo cho lo sbocco al mattino ma alla fine sorrido frate il tuo sabato e un mio lunedi e non e mai stato un motivo di vanto ma dal momento che fumi e fai il figo tocca ridi le cose come stanno non voglio dare un messaggio sbagliato a volte mi chiedo se mai sono in grado se io trasmetto solo odio che covo oppure la forza che ho a riprovarci in questo mondo che e fatto di agganci io vedo larte pure in calcinacci sai quante rime mo so carta straccia e chissa se un giorno faremo i cantanti io vedo solo talenti sprecati dentro a dei parchi gia prefabbricati delle emozioni mai piu surrogati
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Nice work bro ❤
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Я не могу тебя забыть2х
Я даже не стараюсь
Забывать как было хорошо
Пройдут мгновение и все будет
Так как было это десять лет назад
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What you guys think of my music? I think I’ve been getting decent at it
It's great I listened to it
Yoo ur musics straight i produce some beats myself, u would fit perfectly on that bro check some out, i guarantee you’ll like some
Live a little, livin' lies
Something got you tripping
Now you're tripping in your mind
You said we could save this
Told me that you're changing
But I don't wanna try, try, try
Left me broken, now I'm feeling low
Remember how we built our world straight from bricks and stones
Remember when we had some pride, save some money, put aside, better future thought would lye, lies.
I just wanna, wanna be the guy you look to
Remember we would talk about some kids, Lookin' forward to
You're not willing, said fuck giving
Fuck the bitch and then I said fuck living
Past the tests, It's not a verbal tune
I'ma walk around and I'ma chase the fucking verbal fumes
I'ma fucking take a hit, I'ma fucking take a trip
guess that's all we really were guess I guess that were both shit yeahh
Live a little, livin' lies
Something got you tripping
Now you're tripping in your mind
You said we could save this
Told me that you're changing
But I don't wanna try, try, try
Left me broken, now I'm feeling low
Remember how we built our world straight from bricks and stones
Remember when we had some pride, save some money, put aside, better future thought would lye, lies.
Pain free tolerance, gifts that I gave you
Forget all of it, what has life come to?
Feel the pain when I reminisce
Think about how life could just be so bliss
Memories and memories, Pictures and some flybys, dark skies.
Tell me that you
Live a little, and you're livin' lies
Something got you tripping
Now you're tripping on your mind
I still see you creeping up
You creep up in my mind
I had to get somebody to give me your insights, your indecisive. I'm indecisive
Walk up on the building, tell me if you like it, fuck that I'ma just fight it, I know I did right man.......
Outro
(Mumbles)
Her love is a lie off I get high in
the ride my heart won't cry the
money beside blues on da tee
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Anybody have tips on freestyling?
just speak by heart and just ryhme
Aveo - Topic
Flame on my tongue fire in my belly
223 in my hand but no melly
@@lil_rascalxi’m smoking green told my momma i’m healthy
is my music good ? be honest and please comment on both of my songs for advice so i can get better i recorded it on iphone btw:) any help from anyone would mean a lot
ASS
@@SqueezyIV that’s ok, is there anyway i can improve so i can try to get better
@@chesoz Sorry for being rude, but it's true due to these factors IMO : You need better pronunciation so one can hear what's being said, better mix (partly so one can hear what's being said too) and find your own sound so you stand out, learn how to write songs etc. If you want to become known establish your own sound for example : Yeat, Playboi Carti and Juice Wrld are aldready known for their unique sound so copying Juice Wrld or whoever it is won't get you anywhere, but inspiration is something else. Why listen to a cheap version of Juice when I can listen to juice? Just the truth.
@@SqueezyIV i appreciate the help it’s ok i would rather someone tell me the truth and get help so i can use that to get better ill defitnely use your advice and try my best
@@SqueezyIV lmao
Damn this beat hit hard when I recorded on it damn bro y u have to go so soon rip manz💯🪦
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I don’t really need you 🦅
Is my music hard ???
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I used it
is my songs any good
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Alr im first n 😂😂 😂😂
I’m butt hurt fr. Wrote a hella good song to this & uploaded for non profit use & got it copy righted & taken down.
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This shii mine also lmk on my song
is my songs good chat ?? 😂
It’s a vibe🔥💯
@@theofficialstr3yz157 ay thanks bro
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On my mind non sparisci dalla testa
Ultimamente sono solo in giro per le feste
Il mio back ha avuto una Life diversa
Quindi non potrai capire per cosa lo faccio
Ho firmato un contratto si con la penna del diavolo
Yoo thats straight 🔥🔥🔥 i produce some beats myself, u would fit perfectly on that bro check some out, i guarantee you’ll like some! 💯
Just dropped a song show love or lmk y’all’s opinion🙏🏽
Yoo ur musics straight 🔥🔥🔥 i produce some beats myself, u would fit perfectly on that bro check some out, i guarantee you’ll like some! 💯
@ bet I’ll definitely hop on some
@@FailuretoLove cant wait to hear it! 🔥
is my music good?
Lmk what you think about my music bro ❤️ I’ll check yours out
Yoo thats straight 🔥🔥🔥 i produce some beats myself, u would fit perfectly on that bro check some out, i guarantee you’ll like some! 💯
is my new song good??
yeah
No
Yuhh
Yes
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col respiro automatico e gli attacchi di panico
è un gioco sadico e non so mai giocare
no non sono lunatico ho lansia di sabato
ah e non si puo cambiare
so che sono ossessivo fumo e poi svuoto il frigo
sobrio non tocco il cibo sembra che mi fa schifo
cho lo sbocco al mattino ma alla fine sorrido
se sorrido io, puoi farlo ho lottato brancolando
scritto testi lacrimando metto il cuore in cio che faccio
mio fratello è preoccupato perche sto sfidando il fato
pero sa che posso farlo e sa che sono preparato
e sa che non mi sono arreso pure quando ho avuto il peggio
quindi perche dovrei farlo adesso che anche lui ci crede
certa merda e troppo vera e non la scrivo dentro un testo
ma non perche mi vergogno ma non lammetto a me stesso
col respiro automatico e gli attacchi di panico
è un gioco sadico e non so mai giocare
no non sono lunatico ho lansia di sabato
ah e non si puo cambiare
so che sono ossessivo fumo e poi svuoto il frigo
sobrio non tocco il cibo sembra che mi fa schifo
cho lo sbocco al mattino ma alla fine sorrido
frate il tuo sabato e un mio lunedi
e non e mai stato un motivo di vanto
ma dal momento che fumi e fai il figo
tocca ridi le cose come stanno
non voglio dare un messaggio sbagliato
a volte mi chiedo se mai sono in grado
se io trasmetto solo odio che covo
oppure la forza che ho a riprovarci
in questo mondo che e fatto di agganci
io vedo larte pure in calcinacci
sai quante rime mo so carta straccia
e chissa se un giorno faremo i cantanti
io vedo solo talenti sprecati dentro a dei parchi gia prefabbricati
delle emozioni mai piu surrogati
is my song good chat
Yoo thats straight 🔥🔥🔥 i produce some beats myself, u would fit perfectly on that bro check some out, i guarantee you’ll like some! 💯
Y’all mess with my music?
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Can yall listen to my song damaged
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Yooooo I cant believe my ears!!! love the intro check my work out too. lemme know what you think!
Check out any song or video of mine and lmk if its good.
Yoo thats straight 🔥🔥🔥 i produce some beats myself, u would fit perfectly on that bro check some out, i guarantee you’ll like some! 💯
Boutta make a banger to this🔥🔥🔥🔥 check it out pls
Yoo thats straight 🔥🔥🔥 i produce some beats myself, u would fit perfectly on that bro check some out, i guarantee you’ll like some! 💯
Is my song good chat???
Honestly no but u put in the work the next one will be
no bro 🙏
Throw some autotune on and maybe
@@NickPeaks listen to my song damaged it was a freestyle ion care if u don’t like it or not just want ur opinion
No cuz ur singings bad