I can honestly say this is your best stop motion you’ve made and one of the best long ones ive seen. My favorite part is definitely the voice acting for sure!
First off: great work! Had a blast watching this and I will gladly keep voicing for this! Here are my thoughts/critiques: Firstly, I think that the dialogue in the drop pod scene could've used some work, it's almost the same dialogue as in Badlaxe's animation (not saying to write a different scene, just saying that changing a few words can go a long way to make this more unique) Secondly, I feel like you need to impliment a bit more "Show, not tell", I've struggled with that in the past but its pretty important since having the characters say unnecesarry stuff makes them feel robotic and can sometimes break the mood, silence can be great! Last thing I'm gonna mention is the fall of Reach, Reach fell in 2552 and (unless I missed some text) this plays is 2548, right? Either way though, great animation, keep working man!
@@LTMotion5 “show and not tell” is such nuanced technique , telling a story with mostly actions goes a long way. I learn that from watching the spaghetti Westerns by Sergio Leone.
Dude this was amazing! The story was great, the animation was great, everything was excellent! I am honored to be a part of this stop motion, and i hope it succeeds. Also for next time maybe try adding a filter to our voices like in your previous stop motion and highering them a little. Another thing is that you should @ the vas in the description. All in all i really enjoyed this and i’m excited for a part 2. Keep it up dude!
Sorry about some of the audio,its not very good 😅
The holo table was a nice touch!
Came back to watch this epic animation, man it was such a pleasure voice acting! Cant wait for part two!
@JJTheSpartan_117 same! It's in the works rn! Add me on discord for when I'll need the lines! HJSTUDIOS117_22095 is my user!
This is pretty good. Keep it up 💯
I can honestly say this is your best stop motion you’ve made and one of the best long ones ive seen. My favorite part is definitely the voice acting for sure!
Perfection!
Love it! Sad you didn't use my awesome death noise
@@LucoProductions4036 im sorry i had a terrible time just getting in that one file it wouldn't let me for som reason
@@HJ_STUDIOS117 it's okay, tell me if you need any more voice lines
First off: great work! Had a blast watching this and I will gladly keep voicing for this!
Here are my thoughts/critiques:
Firstly, I think that the dialogue in the drop pod scene could've used some work, it's almost the same dialogue as in Badlaxe's animation (not saying to write a different scene, just saying that changing a few words can go a long way to make this more unique)
Secondly, I feel like you need to impliment a bit more "Show, not tell", I've struggled with that in the past but its pretty important since having the characters say unnecesarry stuff makes them feel robotic and can sometimes break the mood, silence can be great!
Last thing I'm gonna mention is the fall of Reach, Reach fell in 2552 and (unless I missed some text) this plays is 2548, right?
Either way though, great animation, keep working man!
Oh dang you're right i forget thats when reach fell i really neee to do more research lol
Thanks for pointing that out
@@LTMotion5 “show and not tell” is such nuanced technique , telling a story with mostly actions goes a long way. I learn that from watching the spaghetti Westerns by Sergio Leone.
Fire!!!! 🔥/10 bro your so good wt this keep up the amazing work! I can’t wait to so what’s next bro!!
This is fire
Amazing stop motion, keep up the good work!
Heck yeah dawg amazing work!
Dude this was amazing! The story was great, the animation was great, everything was excellent! I am honored to be a part of this stop motion, and i hope it succeeds. Also for next time maybe try adding a filter to our voices like in your previous stop motion and highering them a little. Another thing is that you should @ the vas in the description. All in all i really enjoyed this and i’m excited for a part 2. Keep it up dude!
🔥 🔥 🔥
This was awesome, love the story
Very nice
I love this Hj daddy
@@KadoCAGE bro 😭
Yooo