Hi Again, for the second question, I think that the "reveal your structure" stentence is not clear and lack of development. it is more general and does not describe the "plan" ( what are the Pos/cons/ and why I believe Pos are more than Cons). some punctuation errors must be corrected, such as Nowadays that need a comma after.... What do you think?
Thanks for your comment. 'Reveal your structure', just means say what your essay will do. There's not much to develop. Regarding the comma, most teacher's would tell you to put one in. A lot of native speakers will not put one in though. It won't stop you scoring a band 9. Good luck with your test!
Different teachers categorise essays in different ways. There's no right or wrong way to categorise question types. To my mind, explaining advantages and disadvantages is discussion.
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Hi Again, for the second question, I think that the "reveal your structure" stentence is not clear and lack of development. it is more general and does not describe the "plan" ( what are the Pos/cons/ and why I believe Pos are more than Cons).
some punctuation errors must be corrected, such as Nowadays that need a comma after....
What do you think?
Thanks for your comment. 'Reveal your structure', just means say what your essay will do. There's not much to develop. Regarding the comma, most teacher's would tell you to put one in. A lot of native speakers will not put one in though. It won't stop you scoring a band 9. Good luck with your test!
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How first one discussion essay? Isn't it advantage and disadvantage essay??
Different teachers categorise essays in different ways. There's no right or wrong way to categorise question types. To my mind, explaining advantages and disadvantages is discussion.