City Planners Composition

!! Reupload !!
This track was created back in 2016 for a Music Tech Coursework assignment.
We were given three composition briefs, one to compose music for a given video, second to create a compostion based on a poem called City Planners by Margaret Attwood, final option was create a compostion representative of Space Exploration.
City Planners - Margaret Attwood: www.poemhunter...
I decided to go with the second task, to make my own personal interpretation of the City Planners Poem and create a song. I used my own vocals and composed the backing track using MIDI input, I also tried to improve it a little in terms of mixing.
I hope you enjoy !🤗
Music Software: Logic Pro X
I will list my own lyrics of this song below :)
Any feedback is welcomed.
Josephine x

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My Lyrics (my own interpretation of Margaret Attwood's Poem, City Planners):
Verse 1:
I make my way through these Sunday streets,
(In the dry August sunlight)
See everything's the same, everything's so plain
That's my view
From left to right
Pre-Chorus:
This city's so simple, no shouting here
No shatter of glass, no shed of a tear
I'm wondering what kind of place this could be (place this could be)
If there's no variety, what do they see?
Chorus:
This is where the City Planners interfere with our nature
Always trying to take over territories,
Political Conspirators, what does this tell you?
Nobody knows, what's going on, what's going on
This is where the City Planners interfere with our nature
Always trying to take over territories,
Political Conspirators, what does this tell you?
No one's aware, of what's going on, what's going on
Instrumental
(Of what's going on, what's going on)
(Of what's going on, what's going on)
(Of what's going on, what's going on)
(In the dry August sunlight)
(Political Conspirators)
Bridge:
So, give the land a short time,
When the houses will slide
Slowly gradually, it has nowhere to hide
The sanitary trees, no originality
The dent in a car, you can see from afar
To them, it's not normal
Pre-Chorus:
It all seems so simple, the matching designs
The roofs try to avoid the hot summer skies
Tell me if the windows don't stare back at you
See right through,
Out with the old and in with the new
Chorus:
This is where the City Planners interfere with our nature
Always trying to take over territories,
Political Conspirators, what does this tell you?
Nobody knows (nobody knows)
What's going on, what's going on
Final Chorus:
This is where the City Planners (This is where the City Planners)
Interfere with our nature (interfere with our nature)
Political Conspirators (Conspirators)
Nobody knows of what's going on, what's going on
This is where the City Planners (This is where the City Planners)
Interfere with our nature (Interfere with our nature)