sorry but, this is not good... its way too empty, its almost exclusively just melody, but the backing instruments are SO IMPORTANT as well, and in this song theyre almost completely absent or too quiet to hear without them the song doesnt really have any structure holding it up, it just feels like a bunch of notes scattered about so please dont underestimate them and also, the melody doesn't even stay in the same key which is my #1 pet peeve of ALL TIME so PLEASE make sure it all lines up please
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the fact she has a different typing quirk...... are you a homestuck perchance??
no, but i want to get into homestuck
sorry but, this is not good...
its way too empty, its almost exclusively just melody, but the backing instruments are SO IMPORTANT as well, and in this song theyre almost completely absent or too quiet to hear
without them the song doesnt really have any structure holding it up, it just feels like a bunch of notes scattered about so please dont underestimate them
and also, the melody doesn't even stay in the same key which is my #1 pet peeve of ALL TIME so PLEASE make sure it all lines up
please
okay, i agree with you. as soon as i thought about it, it was empty, and i'm probably gonna do a v2 soon. thanks for the feedback!