Another good one. I enjoyed how it was a slow transition for the main character from past to present. Obviously, he would continue to time shift throughout. But, the implied implication was a much smoother transition than doing a constant time shift from present to past throughout. Despite being a short story, you can see both character's growth and development. Edwin became more confident and assured he was doing the right thing saving Rey. Rey realizing he could still experience passion in life without sacrificing himself in the process and learning to have more faith in himself and Edwin.
Thank you. I wish I had more time to develop these more. I've been thinking about maybe in the future doing much longer videos or long videos cut up into multiple parts.
@gAyIstrange That would be cool. Whatever keeps you motivated. I've been pleased with your current content. But, understand the importance of growth and change. 😁
Thanks I think, Thanks from a 78 year old Gay Man. I grabbed all I could, I didn't grab enough, I grabbed some things I shouldn't have. Ah god if I could go back, if I had an "Ed" to listen to, to care enough to show me possibilities I could have had. I'm still trying to shake the anger of that soulless reagan and all the hate he fueled. My17 year old boy still clings to my debilitated 78 year old soul. The 17 year old boy promises me a life of great things. He was right, we had some fun, some glory and we have left the world with many great men still growing. Now I'm scared for the wild young soul's just starting to grow but facing a demon even worse than reagan. Don't let trump get you boys, find hope, find love and fight against the darkness trumpians want to spread. Find a boy to hold your heart and love him deeply. What a powerful production. Thank you.
Thank you for the kind words. I was feeling kind of down as this video has one of my lowest view counts but took more of my heart and experience to create. But after reading your comment I'm reminded I started this journey many years ago as a writer because I loved how much words can impact people's lives. Even if it's not a lot of people, one is enough to make one content. Thank you.
I started listening with no expectations and found my soul being drawn in by the love young males often have for one another. So many people are blindly dismissive of that powerful, tender connection only boys can share. Your work touched old thoughts and feelings; cleaned me with old tears long ago shed. It felt good. Thanks again.
Another good one. I enjoyed how it was a slow transition for the main character from past to present. Obviously, he would continue to time shift throughout. But, the implied implication was a much smoother transition than doing a constant time shift from present to past throughout. Despite being a short story, you can see both character's growth and development. Edwin became more confident and assured he was doing the right thing saving Rey. Rey realizing he could still experience passion in life without sacrificing himself in the process and learning to have more faith in himself and Edwin.
Thank you. I wish I had more time to develop these more. I've been thinking about maybe in the future doing much longer videos or long videos cut up into multiple parts.
@gAyIstrange That would be cool. Whatever keeps you motivated. I've been pleased with your current content. But, understand the importance of growth and change. 😁
This was painful. It took four tries to make it through the story. Too close to life, to close to the truth.
Thanks I think, Thanks from a 78 year old Gay Man. I grabbed all I could, I didn't grab enough, I grabbed some things I shouldn't have. Ah god if I could go back, if I had an "Ed" to listen to, to care enough to show me possibilities I could have had. I'm still trying to shake the anger of that soulless reagan and all the hate he fueled. My17 year old boy still clings to my debilitated 78 year old soul. The 17 year old boy promises me a life of great things. He was right, we had some fun, some glory and we have left the world with many great men still growing. Now I'm scared for the wild young soul's just starting to grow but facing a demon even worse than reagan. Don't let trump get you boys, find hope, find love and fight against the darkness trumpians want to spread. Find a boy to hold your heart and love him deeply. What a powerful production. Thank you.
Thank you for the kind words. I was feeling kind of down as this video has one of my lowest view counts but took more of my heart and experience to create. But after reading your comment I'm reminded I started this journey many years ago as a writer because I loved how much words can impact people's lives. Even if it's not a lot of people, one is enough to make one content. Thank you.
I started listening with no expectations and found my soul being drawn in by the love young males often have for one another. So many people are blindly dismissive of that powerful, tender connection only boys can share. Your work touched old thoughts and feelings; cleaned me with old tears long ago shed. It felt good. Thanks again.