Wow. I’ve listen to your works throughout the months, and while most of your your composition give off the “early Haydn”/a contemporary trying to hard to sound like Mozart(the composer I think you are trying to sound like), this is a rare gem where you’ve gotten remarkably close to sounding like Mozart. I think in my subjective opinion, you’ve focused a lot more on the melody than perhaps your other works(like your C Major sonatina. Mozart is a master of leaning into phrases, creating contrast, creating different voices, and call and response. All of which I found throughout this work so bravo. Loved this work!
I've listened to this piece or rather this movement so often that I've already got a real earworm! 😅 Very cool themes and development! (or very Mozartian - you seem to love Mozart at least as much as I do 😄) I particularly like the passage from 1:05 - it somehow reminds me of Mozart's 20th piano concerto :) All in all, a very nice sonatina! I've now also started uploading my compositions, including a sonata and a sonatina. I would be very happy if you would listen to them :)
Hi Veronica! Thanks for your feedback. I was wondering if you could play one of my pieces on your TH-cam channel? I’ve listened to a lot of your videos and your playing is wonderful so I would love to see one of my pieces played by a pianist and not a midi robot like it is in this video. Thanks!
some of your melodic ideas and sequences are quite catchy. i like your use of dynamics and i can see that you take some inspiration from k.545 and mozart in general. the left hand could be doing a lot more interesting things then just straight alberti bass throughout though. but overall very cool mozartian sonatina
@@classictastic in k545 the minor section repeats the exact same major motif in the minor scale and that is what immediately stuck out to me while listening. however I do think your beginning motif is quite similar to k.284
I really liked this one. So joyfilled and happy. It definitely has that Mozart way to it. Excellent work!
Thanks!
Wow. I’ve listen to your works throughout the months, and while most of your your composition give off the “early Haydn”/a contemporary trying to hard to sound like Mozart(the composer I think you are trying to sound like), this is a rare gem where you’ve gotten remarkably close to sounding like Mozart.
I think in my subjective opinion, you’ve focused a lot more on the melody than perhaps your other works(like your C Major sonatina. Mozart is a master of leaning into phrases, creating contrast, creating different voices, and call and response. All of which I found throughout this work so bravo. Loved this work!
If Mozart were live would said "I don´t remember composing that, but definitely is mine".
You've improved a lot in composing! Lovely sonatina 💞
Thanks a lot !
This is clearly your best piece
Thanks!
I've listened to this piece or rather this movement so often that I've already got a real earworm! 😅
Very cool themes and development! (or very Mozartian - you seem to love Mozart at least as much as I do 😄)
I particularly like the passage from 1:05 - it somehow reminds me of Mozart's 20th piano concerto :)
All in all, a very nice sonatina!
I've now also started uploading my compositions, including a sonata and a sonatina. I would be very happy if you would listen to them :)
I hear a lot of K. 545 and K. 485 in this haha. Nice work - great try in composing in the Mozartian style!
It’s a coincidence that it sounds like 545 and 485
Love it❤
Hi Veronica! Thanks for your feedback. I was wondering if you could play one of my pieces on your TH-cam channel? I’ve listened to a lot of your videos and your playing is wonderful so I would love to see one of my pieces played by a pianist and not a midi robot like it is in this video. Thanks!
@@classictastic Oh sure😃
@@VeronikaPianist thanks a lot 😁
Loving it...❤❤❤
some of your melodic ideas and sequences are quite catchy. i like your use of dynamics and i can see that you take some inspiration from k.545 and mozart in general.
the left hand could be doing a lot more interesting things then just straight alberti bass throughout though.
but overall very cool mozartian sonatina
Thanks 👍 Could you tell me which bit you think I have gotten inspiration from. Thanks again for ur support 😀
@@classictastic in k545 the minor section repeats the exact same major motif in the minor scale and that is what immediately stuck out to me while listening.
however I do think your beginning motif is quite similar to k.284
Ah it’s a coincidence then
Nice! Can you make a video of the full sonatina?
Sure
Sehr schön. Leider sind meine Finger nicht mehr schnell genug um dies nachzuspielen.
Vielen Dank für Ihren freundlichen Kommentar und es tut mir leid, das zu hören
starting from measure 26 is a really nice sequence, but you could try using chords other than tonic and dominant.
I’m writing a sonatina of my own, I’d love it if you gave it some feedback when I publish it
Of course! Good luck, I’m eager to hear it👌👌
@@classictastic thanks! I’ll probably finish it today, I wrote the first two movements yesterday.
Great
@@classictastic th-cam.com/video/caRT01zM2H8/w-d-xo.html I finished ittttt
Quite charming. Link me the sheet music. I'd love to give it a quick play!
Will do, I’m busy atm but I’ll give it to u in a few hours
here it is: musescore.com/user/66201604/scores/16136695
So coquette❤️👄❤️✨️✨️ i luv it