Hey ...your story ideas are great and they are too good to be ....but can I request you something.... Can you please extend story a little bit more...like more detailing and more scenes...not just one single scene .... These short stories doesn't show the emotions that much ...even tho your stories does....but still I request you to extend them a little bit more with details....which show their love for each other .... It's just I am sharing my thoughts....and rest is on you ...all I said was on positive note...I am not saying all with intentions to hurt you...
This is why people say rumours are rumours only
Oh, this was cute. Maybe his ruthlessness were just rumors.
Hey ...your story ideas are great and they are too good to be ....but can I request you something....
Can you please extend story a little bit more...like more detailing and more scenes...not just one single scene ....
These short stories doesn't show the emotions that much ...even tho your stories does....but still I request you to extend them a little bit more with details....which show their love for each other ....
It's just I am sharing my thoughts....and rest is on you ...all I said was on positive note...I am not saying all with intentions to hurt you...
Btw I subscribed you cause as I said you are actually good writer with great ideas