I noticed recently that "Temporary Secretary" has many similarities to "Paperback Writer." - Both titles are a job. - Both lyrics are written in the form of a letter. - The chorus in both is "I [verb] a [job title]". - Both are (mostly) 2 chord songs. (Temporary Secretary has more on the bridges, but the verse and chorus are basically just 2). - Both have a central riff
Prior to that tour he solicited setlist suggestions from fans on his website. I went on there and suggested TS be added to the set, yet quite certain it wouldn't be. Was so surprised he actually went and played it!
This sequence belongs on a sick-ass '90s industrial techno track. Definitely Paul's weirdest composition, puts a smile on my face every time I think about it, let alone hear it
This song has some really interesting compositional techniques. It turns "the most annoying sound you've ever heard", as you put it, into kind of a banger.
Yes, it's one of Paul's best solo LPs. I was so poor, I had to borrow it from the local library in 1980 but I loved it. TS is an earworm of terrifying intensity, though...
My mom one day showed me temporary secretary in the car didn’t tell me what it was and went “guess who this is you never will” and she was right i had no clue, been hooked on this song and its strange neurotic sound ever since because ive still never heard anything quite like it.
Great story! My Aunt introduced me to this same song. I was about 7 before I was told he was in The Beatles. I think the weird sequence stood out and I never forgot this song.
This is why I'm a Patreon contributor. You have no reservations about going with the eclectic, odd - BALL artifacts from the musical past that some cherish but might never own up to. And you do it with your own inimitable style and with a gracious, modest nod to the history. Thank you Alex.
I'd never pay anyone for doing their hobby, it's ridiculous. If you want to do something like this: get a job, earn money and do it in your free time on your own expenses. If you beg others for money for such silly things, you are a brainless weakling! ô.o
Thank you for this! "Temporary Secretary" is, for me, the best solo Macca. That and "Coming Up," "Bogey Music," "Waterfalls" and really, the rest of the album. And my favorite moments from "Temporary Secretary" are the words "BOW!" and the bird sounds at the end. Been listening to "McCartney II" since it came out. The guy is baked throughout, and it shows. "Rubber Soul" was the cannibis Beatles album, "McCartney II" is the solo weed Macca album.
An excellent video and version. TS was a song I didn't like at all when it came out but since the EDM explosion of the nineties and noughties I've grown to love it. It's as if Macca casually decided to compose a track that wouldn't really be fit for release for another twenty years - a hint of genius in my book.
when I moved to Berlin in 2004 I was working at Gigolo Records and at the time DJ Hell had Temporary Secretary in his top 10. as a massive Macca fan, I was impressed! :)
I recently discovered this song despite having the sheet music for years. It helped renew my interest in all things Paul. Your version is amazing and what the world needs more of right now.
I actually like the song "Wonderful Christmas Time" That Synth part has somehow a cosy feel to it and overall its a cosy simple song. Maybe an episode for upcoming Xmas 🤔 Thanks for great content, as always. Cheers
Fellow lover of WCT here. Finally got to where the not-quite-in-tempo delays on those synth stabs didn't bug me anymore, lol. Would be nice to see what thoughts our Mr. Ball has on the song..
An even better use of the sequencer appears on the track 'Secret Friend' which is on the reissue CD. It's over 10 minutes long but full of interesting shifts which keep up the momentum
I think Erol Alkan & Rory Phillips brought the tune a new audience at Trash back in the day, so it kind of did get its moment in the Electroclash scene
@JayKaufman Well, a long-forgotten and quite unsuccessful German band did this cover back in 2004. For your historical pleasure. th-cam.com/video/9mDgFvO5lpk/w-d-xo.html
I had the biggest grin on my face this entire video, and learned so much more than I ever expected to find on the making of this song. Ending off with an original cover and music video was not remotely in my list of expectations but I'm so happy to have them surpassed so hard. My new favourite video on the internet, and most likely whatever other net is out there.
Really interesting vid, thanks for putting together. If ever there was a Paul album that showed the variety and depth of Paul as a musician its this one. One of these days and waterfalls are both stunning tracks from the album and of course totally different to Temporary secretary. In many ways Paul could have gone down the techno, tech route for later projects, he'd obviously mastered how to use the equipment. Instead on his next album Tug of war he went back to a much more band, orchestra sound, similar to the Beatles.
Right, then. Now you have created something of a difficult conundrum. The version of this very underrated Macca tracca that you have authored is, quite simply, magnetic. Now I am stuck trying to determine which iteration to blare when my dear mother indulges in her habitual ramblings. Truly splendid work, mate. One can only hope that Macca himself chances upon this masterpiece someday and accords it the recognition it so rightfully deserves. 👏🏼 🇬🇧 🎶
Banging! I remember this in the charts when I was a kid, it was decades later I found out it was Paul McCartney... my mind was blown! (..and is blown again) Thank you!
I love this! It’s a weird album but it’s one of my favorites. I think I once mentioned that some of your stuff sounded like it could be on McCartney II and in a good way. Great arrangement and production, as usual!
I remember you sharing it and us talking about it, yeah. I love that album too. I only noticed the other day about how Waterfall has almost the same lyrics to TLC's Waterfall too. Another weird connection.
@@AlexBallMusic I remember when the TLC song came out I was like “They ripped off Paul!” I read somewhere that he became aware of the song but decided not to do anything about it other than take it as a compliment.
Awesome work recreating one of the most unique tracks in the whole Macca collection! Nailed the mixing and harmonies too! I remember there's also one brief section where he lifts the loop by a full octave which I always thought was him leaning into the weirdness and making it even more shrill 😝
This is exactly how you can keep making great content, finding tracks and showing us how they were made and what gear was used. The more unique synth wise, obviously the better..😊also that track at 3:55 was banging !!! you could write a whole techno track around that, the kick was monster.
possibly my favorite song ever, and one i’ve covered many, many times. this goes way harder than any of my attempts. there are some people who are no longer friends with me because i played Temporary Secretary too much…no apologies
Similar story here except it was "All You Horse Riders" that I'd played just enough times to annoy the girlfriend and a couple of roommates. I think this gave me better luck when i started playing TS more -- like it was better received because it had a more-proper pop song structure or something.
Still hard to believe the guy who wrote “Blackbird” also wrote this. It’s a banger. I’ve used it in DJ mixes and it mixes perfectly. Sounds like something Mr. Oizo would’ve created.
Very well done. It was only as you were building your version of the song that I realised how much of a DEVO feel there is in it. I don't know if Paul is/was a fan?
@@IanThatMetalBassist Good shout. I wasn't familiar with that track so had to search it. Apparently they first played it on their New Traditionalists tour in '81.
Fantastic video.this was the song that got me into synths and programming.. korg poly 61 and a few drum machines and a Yamaha mt44x 4 track and I was off to the races.. I really love this vid. Thank you
Wow, you still get Jammy Dodgers? We could buy them loose from the school tuck shop for a couple of pre-decimal pennies, but I'd only go for one of those if I couldn't afford a Wagon Wheel !!
@@TheDavidPooleSadly, one doesn’t need to grin any more. The bloody things have a greatly reduced diameter. Jammy dodgers, pleasingly, by contrast, have retained their size. 😉😂
It sounded so much better live. I saw it in Sacramento when Paul opened the new arena there. He was the very first concert for the Sacramento Downtown arena whose name eludes me for the moment. It was 7 years ago? Five? Meh. I’m off to work. Gotta go. I need a temporary secretary. ❤
I like that McCartney is very "now I can do all these nice little songs that the boys poo-pooed" and McCartney II is like "oh wait, I can do a bunch of WEIRD stuff too!"
This was really cool! Could you please do the same thing with something from Neil Young's (now legendary) Trans album? "We R In Control" would be awesome!
I admit that i'm not a McCartney fan (I LOVE "Maybe I'm Amazed" but that's it) but your version of "Temporary Secretary" is soooo cool. It has the same vibe that had Soft Cell "Memorabilia" covered by Nine Inch Nails.
Best tune Soft Cell ever did. Used to love it when it was played in the "new wave" and "futurist" clubs back in the 80s. Very ahead of its time, along with Blue Monday.
I spent the entire time hovering over the close button and arguing with myself every second about why I was still watching. I could not stop getting into it, bobbing my head around, and eventually began to sing along. 😂 Seriously, it's a great video and catchy tune.
@4:20 shouldn't that be 'cistern 100'? 👀
Oh. My. God.
Controlare il Cisterna.
@Cheeses_K_Riced Only Swedish synthpop podcast in-jokes. :-D But you can say it in Swedish too: Kontrollera Cisternen.
lol - just about fell off my chair
This became very 420ish.
I noticed recently that "Temporary Secretary" has many similarities to "Paperback Writer."
- Both titles are a job.
- Both lyrics are written in the form of a letter.
- The chorus in both is "I [verb] a [job title]".
- Both are (mostly) 2 chord songs. (Temporary Secretary has more on the bridges, but the verse and chorus are basically just 2).
- Both have a central riff
- Both are 10/10 songs
Wow who knew the personality guy was also the music man
Two sides of the same page. Interesting.
I picked up on those similarities before as well ✍️😅
Sorry, Paul, there is no left handed writing emoji 😏
I realized a while back you could put the lyrics of paperback writer over temporary secretary lmao
As soon as I read “McCartney’s Weird Sequence” I immediately knew which classic Macca tune it was. 😁
Me too
I read it and heard this sequence immediately in my head
+ 😂
A classic for sure 😝
I saw Paul around five years ago and was so thrilled/shocked that he played this one.
Yep, the madlad did it live!
Prior to that tour he solicited setlist suggestions from fans on his website. I went on there and suggested TS be added to the set, yet quite certain it wouldn't be. Was so surprised he actually went and played it!
I think younger DJs discovered the song and started playing it for dance clubs which sort of gave it a second life.
Mega64 have been playing it in videos for the last ten years and leading a push for this song when Paul asked for recommendations. Love to see it.
you mean Billy Shears?
This sequence belongs on a sick-ass '90s industrial techno track. Definitely Paul's weirdest composition, puts a smile on my face every time I think about it, let alone hear it
Weirdest but none of us have heard Carnival of Light...
What the fuck are you talking about? Did you read the sentence you typed? Have you not heard "Carnival of Light?" Literally what?@@jtn191
He invented techno with this
Sounds it should've had Trent Reznor on it.
This song has some really interesting compositional techniques. It turns "the most annoying sound you've ever heard", as you put it, into kind of a banger.
🎶"Simply, adding, a wonderful sequence line" 🎶😊
Oh sheeeiiiit.
🤦😁🫵😎
We have a winner!
You win the internet today.
@@regfries8279 I have to admit, I was feeling pretty pleased with myself.
Not even two seconds in and I got a HUGE smile on my face. McCartney II is one of my all time favorite albums!!
Yes, it's one of Paul's best solo LPs. I was so poor, I had to borrow it from the local library in 1980 but I loved it. TS is an earworm of terrifying intensity, though...
My mom one day showed me temporary secretary in the car didn’t tell me what it was and went “guess who this is you never will” and she was right i had no clue, been hooked on this song and its strange neurotic sound ever since because ive still never heard anything quite like it.
Excellent momming.
hats off to your mom! 👍
Great story! My Aunt introduced me to this same song. I was about 7 before I was told he was in The Beatles. I think the weird sequence stood out and I never forgot this song.
One of the best songs of all time. My band was called 'Secretaire' after this song.
That’s amazing, lol.
This is why I'm a Patreon contributor. You have no reservations about going with the eclectic, odd - BALL artifacts from the musical past that some cherish but might never own up to. And you do it with your own inimitable style and with a gracious, modest nod to the history. Thank you Alex.
Thank YOU!
I'd never pay anyone for doing their hobby, it's ridiculous. If you want to do something like this: get a job, earn money and do it in your free time on your own expenses. If you beg others for money for such silly things, you are a brainless weakling! ô.o
OMG that was an AMAZING version!! Macca would be so proud of you. You are a genius.
Certainly one of the songs of all time.
Alex, this is an absolute banger. That "basic" bass line actually makes the track for me. Killer.
When I read the title I knew exactly which song it was referring to.
Same here. Exactly. There´s only this one song fitting the description.
Thank you for this! "Temporary Secretary" is, for me, the best solo Macca. That and "Coming Up," "Bogey Music," "Waterfalls" and really, the rest of the album. And my favorite moments from "Temporary Secretary" are the words "BOW!" and the bird sounds at the end. Been listening to "McCartney II" since it came out. The guy is baked throughout, and it shows. "Rubber Soul" was the cannibis Beatles album, "McCartney II" is the solo weed Macca album.
Absolutely brilliant! As a McCartney fan and a music maker myself I really enjoyed this one!
Thanks!
Brilliant! I’m in awe of creators like you who put the time into producing videos like these!
Cheers!
check out captain pikant he does deep dives on electronic drum patterns, good stuff like this channel
An excellent video and version. TS was a song I didn't like at all when it came out but since the EDM explosion of the nineties and noughties I've grown to love it. It's as if Macca casually decided to compose a track that wouldn't really be fit for release for another twenty years - a hint of genius in my book.
He has a lot of those both released and unreleased
This is an EXCELLENT version of this song. Thanks for putting this together - especially thoughtful and well done.
when I moved to Berlin in 2004 I was working at Gigolo Records and at the time DJ Hell had Temporary Secretary in his top 10. as a massive Macca fan, I was impressed! :)
I'd heard it had a resurgence with certain DJs in this century, hence McCartney started doing it live.
@@AlexBallMusic bangin tune! your synth version is awesome!!
Radioslave also reworked it.
I have that one on test pressing vinyl! @@jimiscott
@@Polydarian Nice - I heard Derrick May play it towards the end of a set at the 'The End' before it closed. Took me forever to find it.
One of my favourite Paul album, He played all the instruments !
This is a blast and a half. Nice work, as always!
This video is so good I’m watching it again after 2 months
I recently discovered this song despite having the sheet music for years. It helped renew my interest in all things Paul. Your version is amazing and what the world needs more of right now.
Ha! That was so much fun! Thanks for taking us on your fun little jaunt, Alex!
A fantastic new interpretation of a fantastic song.
I actually like the song
"Wonderful Christmas Time"
That Synth part has somehow a cosy feel to it and overall its a cosy simple song.
Maybe an episode for upcoming Xmas 🤔
Thanks for great content, as always.
Cheers
Fellow lover of WCT here. Finally got to where the not-quite-in-tempo delays on those synth stabs didn't bug me anymore, lol. Would be nice to see what thoughts our Mr. Ball has on the song..
He would have to get a CS80 for that :D@@keykrazy
@@saftpackerlsurely it’s only a matter of time? 🤞
As long as Alex doesn't do Frog Chorus afterwards I'd tolerate WCT.
Paul McCartney makes fun silly music and everyone shouts at him for it, let a man be a little silly :
oh this goes so ungodly hard i enjoy this so much you did an amazing job
An even better use of the sequencer appears on the track 'Secret Friend' which is on the reissue CD. It's over 10 minutes long but full of interesting shifts which keep up the momentum
It's a shame that it's not 2005, because I have a feeling your cover would have been absolutely huge on the electroclash scene!
I think Erol Alkan & Rory Phillips brought the tune a new audience at Trash back in the day, so it kind of did get its moment in the Electroclash scene
@@o1000irThere was also a Radio Slave edit.
I was just thinking something along those lines!!!
@JayKaufman Well, a long-forgotten and quite unsuccessful German band did this cover back in 2004. For your historical pleasure.
th-cam.com/video/9mDgFvO5lpk/w-d-xo.html
That was one great cover of the track you made. Someone ought to give it to its composer.
Can't believe this was released in 1980, neither that i haven't heard it untill now.
Insane original and rendition! 😍
First time I rolled my friends put this LP on. The whole thing is magical. Great re-creation
One of the most unique songs in McCartney's catalog! Well done!
Jesus, this sounds like a single off of a nonexistent greatest industrial album of all time: absolutely smashing, old chap!
this song SLAPS this whole album SLAPS it makes me so invigorated as a home recording enthusiast.
I had the biggest grin on my face this entire video, and learned so much more than I ever expected to find on the making of this song. Ending off with an original cover and music video was not remotely in my list of expectations but I'm so happy to have them surpassed so hard.
My new favourite video on the internet, and most likely whatever other net is out there.
Thank you once again. I'd never heard that one before, but could imagine it sowed seeds in many minds. Brilliant stuff.
well, that was more fun than my ears have had in quite a spell!! been listening for a while finally subscribed!
That is the coolest sequence I’ve ever heard. It’s been my favorite ever since the first time I listened.
TH-cam would be a drabber place without your multi-faceted work. I routinely bookmark this stuff and look forward to your next richly musical piece.
Thanks!
One of my favourite lines ever. Its so marmite though, that song can either absolutely go off or piss everyone off.
man your version really slaps dude! excellent video
This really bangs. Very ambitious and studious awesomeness.
Really interesting vid, thanks for putting together. If ever there was a Paul album that showed the variety and depth of Paul as a musician its this one. One of these days and waterfalls are both stunning tracks from the album and of course totally different to Temporary secretary. In many ways Paul could have gone down the techno, tech route for later projects, he'd obviously mastered how to use the equipment. Instead on his next album Tug of war he went back to a much more band, orchestra sound, similar to the Beatles.
Right, then. Now you have created something of a difficult conundrum. The version of this very underrated Macca tracca that you have authored is, quite simply, magnetic. Now I am stuck trying to determine which iteration to blare when my dear mother indulges in her habitual ramblings.
Truly splendid work, mate. One can only hope that Macca himself chances upon this masterpiece someday and accords it the recognition it so rightfully deserves. 👏🏼 🇬🇧 🎶
"I'm an unstoppable vintage plonker!" Brilliant.
The sequence, given melody, lyrics and overall vibe of this song has always sounded like something Stewart Copeland would have done as Klark Kent.
Thanks for digging out and reinterpreting this piece of music history!
THAT WAS WAY TOO GOOD, awesome work!!! Love this song even more now!
Holy smokes, this was amazing. I'd like to listen to this regularly. Something to wake you up in the morning!
Imagine that as your alarm at 6am.
Why oh why do you keep dropping these just before I need to sleep. Cant do it. Have to watch first. Always worth it man!
Temporary secretary was very much ahead of it’s time. Great segment, nice to get some history on this tune.
It was very much of 1980. Wait til you discover the synth gods of the 70’s!
@@jnnx yep definitely of its time. Takes me back to '79.
@@jnnx I think he meant it was ahead of its time in a broader context, considering mainstream rock and pop in general.
The sleaziness was very of its time though
@@toi_techno Hmmm, yes: "sitting on my knee..."
Wow! This is an absolutely amazing take on this song!
Banging! I remember this in the charts when I was a kid, it was decades later I found out it was Paul McCartney... my mind was blown! (..and is blown again) Thank you!
Excellent!
I love this! It’s a weird album but it’s one of my favorites. I think I once mentioned that some of your stuff sounded like it could be on McCartney II and in a good way. Great arrangement and production, as usual!
I remember you sharing it and us talking about it, yeah.
I love that album too. I only noticed the other day about how Waterfall has almost the same lyrics to TLC's Waterfall too. Another weird connection.
@@AlexBallMusic I remember when the TLC song came out I was like “They ripped off Paul!” I read somewhere that he became aware of the song but decided not to do anything about it other than take it as a compliment.
@@EarmonkeyMusicYeah, I read the same. It's so specific that they probably did it subconsciously.
you Never fail to entertain and impress me with your talent mr Ball.
This is one of the bestest 🤩💖 didn't know Paul was doing early techno beats!
Ad 4: 40 is the miami vice sound intro, awesome, now i know it for making it.😂👍 😎💖
Awesome work recreating one of the most unique tracks in the whole Macca collection! Nailed the mixing and harmonies too! I remember there's also one brief section where he lifts the loop by a full octave which I always thought was him leaning into the weirdness and making it even more shrill 😝
Brilliant! One of my fav McCartney singles.
guys like you make the internet worthwhile!
That is just excellent , love the analog synth equipment
No lie this version goes so hard! I loved this so much
You're an absolute legend, mate!
That's my favorite song on that album. All my friends hated that album at the time 😂
Haha. It's quite the sound, yes!
So glad you did this, one of my favorite McCartney tunes off my favorite album of his!
Amazing song and an amazing cover! ❤
That was really good fun and a bloody good cover to boot.
Well this is just f*cking delightful.
thanks so much.. one of my favorite songs of his.
persistent assistant.. noice
Interesting, informative, and FUN video! Luved your version!
This is exactly how you can keep making great content, finding tracks and showing us how they were made and what gear was used. The more unique synth wise, obviously the better..😊also that track at 3:55 was banging !!! you could write a whole techno track around that, the kick was monster.
Enjoying the Pearl SC-40, it makes some very cool noises.
Brilliant just brilliant. To have the history and the recreation. Really enjoyed this. Thank you
possibly my favorite song ever, and one i’ve covered many, many times. this goes way harder than any of my attempts.
there are some people who are no longer friends with me because i played Temporary Secretary too much…no apologies
Never apologise.
Similar story here except it was "All You Horse Riders" that I'd played just enough times to annoy the girlfriend and a couple of roommates.
I think this gave me better luck when i started playing TS more -- like it was better received because it had a more-proper pop song structure or something.
A brilliant cover. On my playlist!
Still hard to believe the guy who wrote “Blackbird” also wrote this.
It’s a banger. I’ve used it in DJ mixes and it mixes perfectly. Sounds like something Mr. Oizo would’ve created.
Yep! He was happy to experiment and I'm all for it.
I knew precisely what you were talking about before even pressing play. lolz Love me some McCartney II!
Very well done. It was only as you were building your version of the song that I realised how much of a DEVO feel there is in it. I don't know if Paul is/was a fan?
Yeah, it's got some Devo about it. Who knows.
@404TVfr Cool. I didn't know that.
It reminds me of the synth part during the intro to Smart Patrol
@@IanThatMetalBassist Good shout. I wasn't familiar with that track so had to search it. Apparently they first played it on their New Traditionalists tour in '81.
Fantastic video.this was the song that got me into synths and programming.. korg poly 61 and a few drum machines and a Yamaha mt44x 4 track and I was off to the races.. I really love this vid. Thank you
Sounds exactly like Me messing with Reasons Matrix pattern sequencer, that sound I'd good for Techco, lay some chords over it.
simply cool! Thank you for all your great videos! Love them
Persistent Assistant, Nice!!!! Awesome job recreating this track. Really enjoyed this
I genuinely choked on the Jammy Dodger I was eating when you said "I'm an unstoppable vintage plonker". Bravo!
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Wow, you still get Jammy Dodgers? We could buy them loose from the school tuck shop for a couple of pre-decimal pennies, but I'd only go for one of those if I couldn't afford a Wagon Wheel !!
@@rhodaborrocks1654 wagon wheels - "So big, you gotta grin to get it in". Can't see that line getting into an ad these days 😁
@@TheDavidPoole 🤣🤣🤣
@@TheDavidPooleSadly, one doesn’t need to grin any more. The bloody things have a greatly reduced diameter. Jammy dodgers, pleasingly, by contrast, have retained their size. 😉😂
This is bloody great.
It sounded so much better live. I saw it in Sacramento when Paul opened the new arena there. He was the very first concert for the Sacramento Downtown arena whose name eludes me for the moment. It was 7 years ago? Five? Meh. I’m off to work. Gotta go. I need a temporary secretary. ❤
My favorite PM song! Great video and wonderful take on this classic!
I like that McCartney is very "now I can do all these nice little songs that the boys poo-pooed" and McCartney II is like "oh wait, I can do a bunch of WEIRD stuff too!"
Macca's expression fits perfectly!
This was really cool! Could you please do the same thing with something from Neil Young's (now legendary) Trans album? "We R In Control" would be awesome!
Everything you touch turns to gold
Im glad for once someone is talking about how great this track is and not how they hate it or something
This video is like the end of a rainbow, I can’t believe it exists, this video helped me make my own version! Thank you Alex!
'Please Mr Adecco' doesn't have quite the same ring to it.
You're giving me flashbacks to sitting in there as a skint, wannabe musician signing up for jobs in call centres. (Shivers)
I absolutely love this take on my favorite Paul McCartney song!
I admit that i'm not a McCartney fan (I LOVE "Maybe I'm Amazed" but that's it) but your version of "Temporary Secretary" is soooo cool. It has the same vibe that had Soft Cell "Memorabilia" covered by Nine Inch Nails.
Thank you!
Best tune Soft Cell ever did. Used to love it when it was played in the "new wave" and "futurist" clubs back in the 80s. Very ahead of its time, along with Blue Monday.
@@TheDavidPooleIn a nice bit of convergence, both New Order and Soft Cell were into the Danceteria and other NYC dance clubs at the same time (1980)
I spent the entire time hovering over the close button and arguing with myself every second about why I was still watching. I could not stop getting into it, bobbing my head around, and eventually began to sing along. 😂 Seriously, it's a great video and catchy tune.
It gets you eventually. 😉
Your version is better than Paul's, more fully realized. Credit where its due!