- Corrections!! - - Jack's walking/running animation is him hopping. - Twisted Jack moves by stretching his body. (His box doesn't move) - Jack has ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ on the stamina stat. - When Twisted Jack is looking for a machine, you can still take damage to him if you are in his way. - If there are no uncompleted machines around, Twisted Jack will target the player with the lowest stealth stat, but if he spots another player, he goes after them instead like normal twisteds. - If Twisted Jack loses interest in a player or hits one, he goes back to his box. - I know BlushCrunch is not accepting fan submissions anymore. I just thought this was a cool idea to share! (By the way, thanks for all the toon interactions in the comments! I loved reading them! :D)
@Credits_fan after i saw the video I made Jack's trinket the golden key next day I saw the trinket I realised I didn't notice the trinket the whole time
✨this is how I think Goob and jacks interaction would go ( also scraps!) 1. Goob- Hi Jack need a hug? Jack- uh no thank you Goob I’m to scared to! ______________________________________ 2. Jack- hey Goob…how are u doin? Goob- I’m good but I’d be better if you came out of your box! Jack- not happening! ______________________________________ Scraps now! 1. Scraps- Hi my brother has told me you’re pretty shy! Jack- Uh yeah I guess… _______________________ 2. Jack- Hey scraps aren’t you an origami cat? Scraps- what’s origami? Jack- never mind… ______________________ Hai note btw these are js my preferences on how Jack would act but of course they aren’t up to me so bye! ( at ten likes or like from creator I’ll do Shelly and vee! ) guys my comment was hearted it’s timeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Shelly and Vee’s interactions with Jack! 1. Shelly- Did you know that Jack-In-The-Boxes originated in the US? (True fact) Jack- Uh no why? Shelly- Cause your a Jack-In-The-Box! Jack- Oh right yeah… ________________________ 2. Jack- Shelly are you reading anything at the moment? Shelly- Yes! ✨dinosaur books EKKKKKK✨ Jack- Okayyyyy great… _______________________ Vee! 1. Vee- Hello do you know how to complete a machine? Jack- uh yeah vee I do! Vee- doesn’t seem so you don’t have arms… Jack- I do! ________________________ 2. Jack- Hey vee what are you so scared of?… Vee- Dandy… Jack- Why? He’s so kind! Vee- he’s not who you think he is Jack… Jack-okay whatever you say!… ______________________________ At 2 Likes I’ll do Teagan and Tisha! Thanks for the likes time for Teagan and Tisha! 1. Teagan- Jack would you like to go to your first tea party? Jack- Uhm sorry I don’t like tea Teagan- … that’s okay! ____________________ 1. Tisha- do you need a bath? Jack- That’s rude I don’t! Tisha- sorry I just care about my friends hygiene Jack- okay… __________________ 2. Jack- hey Tisha what’s Hygiene Tisha- Uh…basically taking care of your body having good hygiene means a healthy body! Jack- Oh well i don’t really have a body so I’m fine! Tisha…oh ______________________ Thought this was funny but y’all I slept wrong last night so my neck and shoulder hurt is it okay if I take next day off of this if I still feel horrible? ( also Toodles and Rodger next at 30 likes! ) Hai Ik it’s 1 am rn btw 1 Rodger- Jack are the twisteds getting to you? Jack- not really kinda?… Rodger- well I know quite a bit about them so come to me if so… Jack- alright That’s all for Rodger since it’s late and I’m lazy ________________________ 1 toodles- isn’t today bright? Jack- it’s night… Toodles- well it was… Jack- we don’t go outside…? _________________________ 2. Jack- have you been out…? Toddles - once… Jack- . Toodles- I was 3 I stumbled outside and the sun was bright and I felt amazing of course I was pulled back inside by Rodger though… Jack- …okay ____________________ Kk ima probs go to bed at 100 likes ig I’ll do pebbles and poppy Sorry! Now time for pebbles…! 1. Pebbles-arf..arf! Jack-hi pebbles! Pebble-woof
the only problem with having boxten mastered for jack is that boxten is a starter toon so you dont have to do anything to get boxten and most starter players get mastery on boxten anyway, but its a great concept!
Well its actually really hard to get his mastery 1:most people that want his mastery are a little....meh, at the game And 2:u need 7 people in a single run to survive a whole floor, may seem easy but its not, getting mastery on tisha or toodles is much easier
@@fredericodesousaferreira5020boxten mastery easy, idk what yall r talking about, anyway, you still do need 5.5k ichor to get him so that makes up for it
I like the concept, but I'm not too sure on the way the Twisted works. I think instead of draining an uncompleted machine and going after a player if every machine is completed, T. Jack should always go after the closest player in a large radius, and if there are no players in that radius, he will then drain an uncompleted machine that is the closest to completion all the way down. This makes him a threat outside of elevator panic mode and an annoyance if not kept in check. I also think that instead of playing a music box sound, he should play a loud ticking sound, so people don't confuse him with T. Dandy
@@IPA-v4yyeah but the issue with that would be that there’d be some overlap. Scraps has 5 star stamina and all the mains have 5 stars in one stat so unless you want 2 toons with 5 stars in the same stat then you’re gonna have to get more creative with the stat spread
You are SO correct, especially in that music box part. I imagine it'd be so annoying if music box music was playing along with Dandy's music. The ticking sound would be more fitting and possibly even more scary
Jack: Heya Boxten! Boxten: Uhm, Hey Jack! Jack: Great job last floor! Boxten: Yeah, thanks. Y'know, I wish I could hide in my own music box like you. It seems helpful. Jack: Well, I wish I had legs like you! Boxten: Yeah-
J: What happens if I wind this up... B: WAIT NO- *Boxten's head starts playing a random music box song, which is randomly picked from a list (very small chance for a music box rickroll)* J: ... B: Never. Again. J: Okay Boxten...
Jack: huh I just spined your thing what is happening? Boxten: oh no we have no more power! Jack: what do you mean? Boxten: it’s dark bruh you can’t see me. Jack: OH MY JACK IN A BOX WHATS THAT SOUND!!! Boxten: what sound- Twisted pebble: Woof woof and good bye… Jack and boxten: AAAAAAA- Jack: oh yeah I can hide- Twisted pebble: to bad I got you Boxten: wait dogs talk now? Twisted pebble: only me Boxten ohhhhhhhhhhh- *1 minute later* Twisted pebble: that was delicious- Toataly a real uno reverse card toon I’m being serious: but it’s opisite day. Twisted pebble: what- You can imagine how it ends because I have no idea for the ending…
_Jack and Pebble_ *Jack* - "Huh? What are you doing here?" *Pebble* - "Arf!" *Jack* - "GAH!!-" _Jack and Scraps (By @Cathesisandfriends)_ *Jack* - "Uhm... Who are you..?" *Scraps* - "Me? Well, I'm Scraps!" *Jack* - "Uhm... Nice to meet you?" _Goob and Jack (By @norossanasani9928)_ *Goob* - "Hey, Jack! Do you want a hug?" *Jack* - "Uhm... No, I'm quite scared of hugs..." *Goob* - Oh, well that's fine!" *Jack* - "I hope so..."
I have a Rodger interaction idea Rodger: Oh, hello Jack. Jack: uh hi Rodger, s-sorry if I’m bothering you! I’m bad at everything, especially interaction. Rodger: Not everything, you’re good at hiding. Jack: Really? Rodger: Very! When you’re in your box all Twisteds don’t bat an eye towards you. Jack: Wow, I g-guess so.
It fells like when I see Rodger interactions he always says something the toon can like do like goob can hug people in the elevator and other toon stuff
Imma share my own toon too,Starfruit! (I didnt know there was a character named this in flavor frenzy cuz ive never played flavor frenzy) She is a star Stats: 3 hearts 2 skillcheck 4 movement speed 1 stamina 3 stealth 4 Extraction speed Her ability is revealing all machines in the match to the player and the teamates with them for 10 seconds with a 35 second cooldown Twisted:Has a glow like brightney but its smaller,Shes uncommon aswell,she will always hear ur skillchecks and if a skillcheck is failed she will get a massive speedboost which makes her faster than twisted pebble so hide as quick as u can when u fail a skill check Her trinket is the star which will make it so that when u succeed on a skillcheck u will get a 10% boost for a machine which stacks but resets every machine so do 2 skillchecks=20%% more extraction speed and finishing the machine sets it to 0% And golden skillcheck gives 20% Description: An uncommon twisted,she emits a small glow around her making it easier to see her but that dosent mean she isnt deadly,failing a skillcheck makes her have a massive speedboost to the machine and she hears all machines,Starfruit is not to be messed with after someone fails a skillcheck. Her requirements are: 1.2k ichor 50% research on twisted astro Dandys reaction to buying her: "Starfruit! Shes Very courageous and confident!" Her ability lines are: -lets see where they are! - Abracadabra! -Revealiosa! Machine lines: -Quickly and perfectly! -1 spin and 2 spins and More spins! -These twisteds dont know what they're up against! Descending elevator lines: -going deeper! -Doing so well! -Next Floor Yay! Conversations: Poppy:I like ur bow starfruit! Starfruit:Thanks Popsy! Poppy:i think your bow would be better if it was pink,and my name is Poppy. Starfruit:Ok Pimpy Thanks for your advice! Starfruit:hey scraps have u seen my star strings? I can't find them anywhere.. Scraps:Woahh...Cool stri-Uh what? Starfruit:I knew u had them,If u keep Failing to return them I'm gonna give you less. Pebble:Woof! Starfruit:Hey purple! Pebble:... Starfruit:Sorry,Pabele? Pinba? Pelo? Pebble:Grrrrrr... Boxten:Starfruit how are you so brave? Starfruit:Well I wouldn't call myself brave.. Boxten:But..you are. Starfruit:I think I'm just happy,I wouldn't call myself brave,Though thanks burxton! Boxten:it's boxten,And ur welcome.. Starfruit:Down and-prawn dude why are u looking at me like that? Shrimpo:MY NAME IS SHRIMPO!! I HATE STARS TOO!! Starfruit:Prawno be quiet,I'm trying to focus here. Vee:Hey starfruit,are u gonna be able to come to my next gameshow? Starfruit:Of course vee! I could never ever miss one! Vee:Great,I'll arrange one soon. Starfruit:Good! Starfruit:Hey brightney! How's my favourite lamp doing? Brightney:Great! How's my favourite star doing? Starfruit:I'm good! are u going to vees next gameshow? Brightney:Oh there's another one happening soon? Well will you go? Starfruit:Yup! Brightney:then I'll come too! Teagan:Hey starfruit,Want some tea later? Starfruit:Yup! I might be a bit late to the party though,I'm gonna get my telescope and look at the sky with shelly, Teagan:That's ok. Starfruit:Ok teejen! Teagan:Its teagan. Starfruit:Hey shelly! Got the telescope for star seeking? Shelly:of course! How could I not? Starfruit:Great! I'll see you soon! Rodger:Starfruit,how do u manage to reveal all those machines? Starfruit:I think I like...Uhhh...I don't really know how to explain it Rindger.. Rodger:Hmm,Guess it will stay a mystery..And my name is Rodger. Starfruit:Yea,a mystery indeed rango.. Wall bio: Starfruit the star Starfruit is a bright and happy friend! Always cheering up her friends and always giving a happy mood to the room! She isnt great at naming people she isnt very close with..But she remembers her friends names just fine! She is basically the party goer of the gardenview crew! So thats all about starfruit! Get 10 likes on this and i will make another one about another fanmade toon,Finla da fish! Yipee the 10 like goal is completed!! Time to share about Finla da fish! Stats: 3 hearts 1 skillcheck 3 movement speed 4 stamina 3 stealth 4 extraction speed Ability:She can boost all of her stats (excluding stealth) by 2 stars so uh 6 star extraction speed for 30 seconds with a 90 second cooldown Requirements: 1325 ichor Complete 3 mastery quests on shrimpo Oh yeah she's shrimpos love interest who hates everyone in the crew as much as shrimpo but shrimpo and her like eachother Rarity:rare Twisted:She has a really really long attention span and Toodles speed and has normal eyesight and when panic mode activates she's hyperactive which makes her go faster than failed skillcheck twisted starfruit and runs to the elevator so uhhhh you better run when panic mode comes before she beats you to the elevator.. now ready Part 2 of finla coming -soon- I'm -tired- Let's go -tbh- Her trinket is the bucket of shrimps 💀 Whenever twisted shrimpo or toon shrimpo is on a floor with finla she gets 2 star more on every stat (not including health) (stacks with her ability so 8 star extraction speed holy jesus) Her twisted bio: A more rare type of twisted,this twisted is merciless with her high speed and extremely high attention span,she can kill without struggle,thankfully her eyesight is average,making her less of a threat,but the lethal thing about her is she speeds up extremely and can kill anything in her path when the elevator opens,and she heads straight for the elevator,making her extremely dangerous if u dont make it to the elevator in time! Her wall bio: Finla the fish Finla is not very nice at all! She always hates on other toons and never let's them relax! She's a big bully that no one looks up to! Dandys reaction to buying her: Finla!? Wear a gas mask if your going near that much toxicity. Ability lines: -IM DOING THIS AND NO ONE CAN STOP ME!! -IM BETTER HAHA! -TAKE THIS TWISTEDS! Machine lines: -im getting bored! -boooooooring! -Lacking on the entertainment! Descending elevator lines: -When is this gonna get good!? -i have so much better things to do! -Is there a quit option!? Conversations Finla:Toodles,your such a scaredy ball! Toodles:What? Finla:your always so scared! You never have any bravery! Toodles:That's not nice! Finla:Boohoo! Does it look like I care? Tisha:Finla you need to stop being mean to everyone! Finla:and you need to stop being unintelligent! Tisha:Hey! Stop that finla! I've had enough! Finla:make me! oh wait! You can't! Finla:Ugh Poppy what is that bow!? It's hideous! Poppy:Well I don't find it hideous! Finla:well ur taste is atrocious! Poppy:Well I dont think so! Flutter:..! Finla:oh what's that? You will have to speak a bit louder! oh wait! You can't! Flutter:... Finla:You belong in loserville you know that? Finla:Astro your a bad sleepy head! Astro:I don't care finla.. Finla:of course you don't! Because you lack the braincells to care about anything! Astro:What..? Be quiet,your disturbing my rest.. Finla:well I don't care badstro! Shrimpo:Hey finla..I was wondering uh if we could meet up later? Finla:oh ok where? Shrimpo:uh maybe at your room? Finla:Sure thing but you seem nervous.. Shrimpo:No no..I'm ok. Finla:Ugh brightney ur lampshade,glow and everything about you even is so bad! Brightney:Quiet up finla! How about u go back to shrimpo and ki- Finla:WHAT!? WHY WOULD YOU THINK THAT!? brightney:Wow you look so nervous..im definitely right about you and shrimpo. Finla:NO! YOUR NOT...DEFINITELY NOT!! Goob:Oh no.. Finla:Goob what are you even supposed to be!? You look like a monkey but don't at the same time! Goob:it's none of your buisness finla.. Finla:Does it look like I care? Goob:Uh... Finla:exactly! Finla:Razzle. Razzle dazzle:F-finla? Finla:Stop looking at me like that you unintelligent mask! Razzle dazzle:You were looking at me first though.. (you heard her,look the other way.) Finla:Well ur depressed Version seems to understand! Finla:Shrimpo you look nervous,you alright? Shrimpo:uh yea..but there something i need to confess.. Finla:Yea bud? Shrimpo:I REALLY LIKE YOU AND THINK YOUR REALLY COOL AND I WANT TO BE TOGETHER WITH YOU AS A COUPLE AND I HOPE U DONT REJECT ME BECAUSE I REALLY LOOK UP TO YOU!! finla:...I don't know what to say... Shrimpo:Eek..! That's all about finla! Get 20 likes and I'll make yet another one about a main character! His name being cardster. I think you can guess what he's gonna be based off of *looks at cardvote* Cardster coming tommorow
@frxggymm2 well poppy's a bubble and her name isn't bubble,brightneys a lamp and her name isn't lamp or smth So I can name da star starfruit if I want to
(Lemme try all Toons [im bad at this and i feel embarrased lol]) Boxten! *Boxten"* "oh.. h-hey! hello jack." *Jack:* "well hello!..- boxten." *Boxten:* " just.. don't kind of.. uh, understand on how- you go in your box.-" *Jack:* " Yeah.. uh, might explain to you later." - - - - - - - - - - - - Poppy! *Poppy:* " JACKK!" *Jack:* " thats loud!" *Poppy:* " Oops!" *Jack:* " Well... POPPYYYYYY!!!!!-" - - - - - - - - - - - - Tisha! *Tisha:* " keepin clean..." *Jack:* " hey.. uh-" *Tisha:* " Jack i thought you were just talking to boxten..-" *Jack:* " well uh, i.. actually w-wasn't." - - - - - - - - - - - - Finn! *Finn:* " I 'cod'nt believe that!" *Jack:* " huh..?" *Finn:* " i oh'fish'ally am amazed how u get i ur box" *Jack:* " Thanks.. uh, finn.. though those fish puns made me cackle a bit.." - - - - - - - - - - - - Shrimpo 😊 *Shrimpo:* " I HATE YOUR BOX!" *Jack:* " what did i do...?" *Shrimpo:* " I HATE EVERYONE!" *Jack:* " ..." - - - - - - - - - - - - Connie! (new toon) *Connie:* " Boo! scared y-" *Jack:* " Ahh!" [2 for connie cuz no reason.] *Jack:* " i think u scared me to much.." *Connie:* " i mean.. i am a ghost afterall :)" - - - - - - - - - - - Glistennnn yuh! *Glisten:* " hey jack do my makeup look good." *Jack:* " y-yeah.. why?" *Glisten:* " just sayin!" (MY HANDS HURT HELPPP-)
I really like the Jack in the box idea, so I decided to make a new twisted concept for Jack, since I think your idea could use some tweaks. First of all, I came up with an effect that twisted Jack would put on you. The effect is called “Laughter” and it constantly changes your skill check size when on a machine. Like Shelly’s confusion, this stays on you for basically the whole floor. A thing I wanted to add is that the music gets slower and slower when you don’t wind up Jack’s box. This will make it easier to tell when you need to wind him up. I also wanted to make it so when Jack comes out of his box, he doesn’t go back. He’s just a free roaming twisted for the rest of the floor. Also, I kind of wanted to change what the trinket does, cuz I think it’s too similar to Jack’s passive. This is all just my opinion, the original thing you came up with was really good. :) Edit: Since Jack is a free roaming twisted for the rest of the floor when you don’t wind him up in this concept, I wanted to change the way he moves. Instead of just stretching his body, I wanted to make him crawl around with his box dragging behind him.
I have an idea too! Well, two of them. Mostly because I'm not sure if they should be a Main or not. Starbie is a Star Toon with pale purple clothing, pretty close to Astro but best buddies with Poppy. Walk/run loop is a casual skip. Starbie: normal Toon version. Cost: 900 Ichor, 2 characters mastered. Stats: 3 Hearts, 4 Skillcheck, 2 Stamina, 3 Movement Speed, 2 Stealth, 4 Extraction Speed. Ability: Star Spinner. Active. Confuses all of one type of Twisteds (Poppy, Toodles, ect), making it so they can't start chasing any toons but doesn't stop any chases currently going on. This doesn't work on Mains or Stationary Twisteds like Razzle and Dazzle. Twisted Starbie: normal Toon version. Stats: Average everything. But, can only enter a chase if a Toon is running, activated Rodger, or failed a Skillcheck. Then it's speed equals Toodles as they rush to where the noise was made. Trinket: Purple Tassle. Increases Movement Speed and Extraction Speed by 5%. Starbie: Main Toon version. Cost: 4900 Ichor, 100% research on Twisted Starbie, 7 Toons mastered. Stats: 2 Hearts, 5 Skillcheck, 1 Stamina, 3 Movement Speed, 1 Stealth, 5 Extraction Speed. Ability 1: Star Spinner. Active. Confuses all of one type of Twisteds (Poppy, Toodles, ect), making it so they can't start chasing any toons but doesn't stop any chases currently going on. This doesn't work on Mains or Stationary Twisteds like Razzle and Dazzle. Ability 2: Extra Precautions. Gives one uncommon item the first time noticed by a Main Twisted if there's room in their inventory. Twisted Starbie: Main Toon version. Stats: Average everything. But, can only enter a chase if a Toon is running, activated Rodger, or failed a Skillcheck. Then it's speed equals Toodles as they rush to where the noise was made. Abilities: Every 30 seconds, traps one item (indicated by the small stars floating around it). If a Toon picks up this item specifically, then Starbie's Speed AND attention span equals Pebbles as they rush towards the noise to chase you down. SFX: Loud Footsteps, mechanical yet wet sounding noises (when nearby), explosion sound effect (when you pick up a trapped item). Trinket: Purple Tassle. Gives you a random Common item the first time you get spotted by a Twisted per run. Dialogue (not interactions, for both main and normal counterparts) When finishing machine: That wasn't too bad! One step closer to the next floor! Gotta keep this ball rolling! When bought in Dandy's shop: That's Starbie! He's the most optimistic, if the only, star I've ever met! When Active Ability is used: Twirl, twirl~ Go my little stars! Distract them! Wheee! Descending to next floor: Stay positive! We will do this! Keep your wits, we'll need them. That was rough, good thing most of us survived! That's all, I'll enter some conversations in the reply section. And I know this character seems OP, it's why I doubt they would ever make it in if the devs were still taking suggestions.
Seems pretty cool! No complaints for the PLAYABLE Jack, but I'm a little worried about Twisted Jack for SOLO runs, especially since his "pathfinding to the player with the lowest stealth" would invalidate all AFK spots. Also a little concerned that Shrimpo (or even Razzle & Dazzle) wouldn't be able to get to a machine, finish it, and run back to wind up Twisted Jack before his timer runs out due to their slow movement speeds, but otherwise, I love the concept! 😁
Here’s my main character concept Lilian the Blue Axolotl (Main Character) Stats: 2 Health 2 Star Skillcheck 4 Star Movement Speed 5 Star Stamina 2 Star Stealth 3 Star Extraction Speed Requirements: 4250 Ichor 100% Research on Twisted Lilian 100% Mastery on Kathryne (I’ll showcase her soon) Ability 1 (Active) Ocean’s Blessing: This Toon increases her stamina regeneration by 25% for 15 seconds. Has a cooldown of 50 seconds. Ability 2 (Passive) Regrowth: This Toon gains a new heart every 10 floors Dandy’s message upon buying Lilian: -Lilian! She’s a kind hearted yet intimidating friend. Finish Machine: -Another task off my list -Wonder why Strawberry’s doing… -Let’s get out of here Using Ability: -Let’s rest for now -Can’t wait to get back up! -(Sigh) Descending to Next floor: -I need to get back soon -On to the next! Twisted Sound: Splashing water Twisted Mechanic: Decreases the nearest toon’s stealth whether being chased or not by 25%. This goes on for the entire floor. The debuff lasts for 5 seconds and re appears every 15 seconds. Twisted Trinket: Empty Cake Platter Increases the usage of an item by 5% Ok that’s it lol.
The only problem i think in this is the fact that jack has basic stats for his twisteds, instead of that i reccomend when he is gonna attack he is gonna stretch far away from the player and go back with higher speeds after stretching, acting like a catipult i recommend the only way to counter this is going through a wall during the attack phase (like goob but if there is a wall while jack is selecting the player he will find a path to go through but will take more time)
i have a concept too!! splatters is a paint brush and is a normal character his stats are 3 health 3 skill check 2 stamina 2 movement speed 5 stealth and 3 extraction speed his ability is artistic flow: this toon can put paint on a players or twisteds footsteps being able to see if they just walked by to all players -active- has a cool-down of 45 seconds and lasts for 25 seconds twisted splatter- twisted splatters whole entire head/the bristles is completely covered in ichor making him blind but his hearing is really good (basically he is always running and his running can even get triggered by you walking past basically saying he has a really good sight of range further then twisted goobs reach) if you get 100 research on him he gives you the paint palette it gives you a 30 percent speed boost during elevator panic time and 30 percent stealth
I mean the lack of stealth makes his ability needed but the passive is quite op for higher floors and his lack of stars (mains have 16 stars intotal while he has 15)
Jack and Astro intereaction! Astro: Jack? Jack:EEK! Astro:Hey! It’s just me! Calm down! Jack:Oh… I’m sorry… I’m just like that sometimes… Astro:It’s alright… I already used to it at this point!
my main charcter concept: Alexic: Stats: 5 Hearts 5 Skillcheck 3 Movement Speed 4 Stealth 6 Stamina 5 Extracation Abilites and passives: Abilites:Zappy (Alexic shoots out a laser making the twisted lose interst on everybody) Passive:If Alexic gets hit he gets a big speed boost like Poppy. Twisted counterpart: Looks exactly like him only thing is hes statronity just like jack however he can get awaken by 3 steps: 1.Walking near him 2.Running 3.Skillcheck failure He is very slow however he is also a sniper which means he can shoot something to hit you. (Custom item too) Beacon light: It can blind every twisted and makes every twisted go to random directions 5 times. However it can make Twisted Alexic very mad Plus making him split into 4 jaws on his head And speed buffs too. Requirments for Alexic: 100% Twisted Alexic Research 10k Ichor Encounter Twisted Alexic atleast 5 times Trinkets: Disturbing Liquid. You will slowly heal back a heart. (NEEDS 300 TAPES) Side effects:Make Your Skillcheck size smaller Voicelines: Using Ability(1) "YOUR CRITZING ME!" Finishing a machine: After all it looks simple. Nothing to worry about missing. Conversation: Poppy:(No conversation) Boxten:(No conversation aswell) Shrimpo: Shrimpo:I HATE YOU Alexic:If theres anything you want to say. Shrimpo:... Alexic:... Shrimpo:I HATE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU Thats all. He only has 1 conversation which means he only talks to Shrimpo. Trivia: Alexic has anger issues. Alexic has a son. Alexic's Twisted counterpart's Rarity is Main+ Alexic is kinda calm. Effects twisted counterpart gives: 1.Confusion IV (slows extraction speed for 65) 2.Bleeding III (you slowly lose hearts after 30 secs have passed and to break it you must get see by a twisted) (not by getting hit or die you just gotta let any twisted look at you and chase you) 3.Speedness I (you walk a bit faster to make Bleeding III a bit easier) Enraged Mode: 1.Confusion X (Makes extraction size alot smaller) 2.Bleeding IV (you slowly lose hearts after 20 secs had passed and yes you have to do the same thing to break it) 3.Slowness I (You walk a bit slower) Twisted Alexic Speed: Very fast Enraged form More faster Enraged form gives a badge so uhh here it is Bad idea. "You should'nt had done that.." (Encounter Enraged Twisted Alexic to get it) He also makes rodger's research multipler go bye bye so its now 1x (Appearence:Tall Black thing with red eyes) (hes not made out of ichor hes made out of something different of ichor that doesnt really make him go crazy) (Feeling: Serious,Sad,Calm smth) Twisted counterpart apperance: Calm Form: However he is the same as his toon one but hes just sleeping with bleeding eyes (Feeling:Happy) Awaken Form: His eyes are star shaped and have teeth(Feeling:Happy) Enraged Form: Splited into 4 jaws and claws. (Feeling:Furious) Dandy when you buy him: Ooh! Alexic. Good choice he is very good at extracting if you know how to extract well! (He is a great reporter btw) (Edit:He is part of the T.A Family members (Twisted Alex family members) (Walk sound here you go:Loud footsteps) (Enraged form sounds:Growling and Louder footsteps)
I think the way the twisted should work is after it wakes up, it grows a big AOE (like raz and daz) constantly moving around until someone steps in it, instantly taking a heart before gling back to sleep mode.
New 💡 Toon name: boxy (rare toon) Description: it's a toy pig and it's the toy big of goob and best friend of pebble ------------------------------------------------ Stats: Movement speed 5 (I explain later) Stamina: 5 (I explain later) Stealth: 1 (or 5) Extraction speed: 2 (or 5) Skill check: 3 (or 5) ------------------------------------------------ Ability 1 I'm a box (passive) the other toon can put they're items (bend.,medkit,pop......) in boxy and he have 50 slots and all the toons can take other toons items and when the toon want the item from boxy can take it BUT the items have a weight for boxy •put common items 1 weight •put uncommon items 3 weight •put rare items 5 weight •put super rare items 10weight In total boxy can take a max of 250 of weight but every 50 weight reached he be slow bc it's too weighted so every 50 of weight he lost 1 star at stamina and 1 star at movement speed but he increments his other stats •50 weight reached| Movement speed: 4 📉 (then 5) Stamina: 4 📉 (then 5) Stealth: 1 (the same) ⚖️ (fun fact the only stat that no have change the first time) Extraction speed: 2 📈 (then 1) ------------------------------------------------ •100 weight reached Movement speed: 3 📉 (then 4) Stamina: 3 📉 (then 4) Stealth 2 📈 (then 1) Extraction speed 3 📈 (then 2) Skill check: 3 📈 (then 2) ------------------------------------------------ •150 weight reached Stamina: 2 📉 (then 3) Movement speed: 2 📉 (then 3) Extraction speed: 4 📈 (then 3) Skill check: 4 📈 (then 3) Stealth: 3 📈 (then 2) ------------------------------------------------ •200 weight reached Stamina: 1 📉 (then 2) Movement speed: 1 📉 (then 2) Stealth: 4 📈 (then 3) Extraction speed: 5 📈 (then 4) Skill check: 5 📈 (then 4) • 250 weight reached (max) Stealth: 5 📈 ------------------------------------------------ if boxy die he will be broken so the team will lost 50% of the loot in boxy the other 50% it's near the dead body of boxy ------------------------------------------------ Required for unlock him 1350 ichor 50% reseach on twisted pebble 50% research on twisted goob ------------------------------------------------ In boxy reach 250 weight but have less than 50 slots he can't take other items ------------------------------------------------ Voice lines When u buy it from dandy •"Oh now you can store ah" ------------------------------------------------ When u do a machine •I stored this machine •I need more ichor !! •Pebble will be proud of me ------------------------------------------------ When u escaped 1 floor •now I get broken AHHH •oh good job pebble ! •Guys you are bot I want store items !!! ------------------------------------------------ Masteries quest: •get stored 50 items (0/50) •get to 250 weight (0/1) •complete 75 machines •survive with pebble and goob 30 floors in a server •survive 65 floors Get chased 50 times when you have 250 weight ------------------------------------------------ (Fan made concept) When boxy comes into game it will have 2 skins vintage skin and rainbow boxy :) ------------------------------------------------ Twisted version rarity: rare It's a broken and burning piggy it's extremely fast when he hit you, he takes 1 of your items if u don't have it he takes 25 ichor ------------------------------------------------ Rank boxy like a tierlist my personal rank of boxy it's A
I have a concept.. It's unfinish ngl but i'll finish it at maybe 1-3 weeks, Spotlight is a sun and a main character, His stats is : 2 health 4 skill check 3 stamina 5 extraction speed 3 stealth His active ability is Funny business : When this toon used the ability it's makes other toons and themself faster, faster speed extraction within the radius of average AND makes the user's cooldowns degress by 4-7 less, It have 60 seconds cooldown, Then his passive ability is Chaotic actions : It's makes this toon really really fast when it's finish a mechine OR get hit by a twisted and for more lore, He is Astro's big brother
i should share some there are two but one im working on! Clammpable (main toon) cost 3765 ichor Requirements: 100% mastery on twisted clammpable and twisted Vee Stats: Health ❤❤ Skill check ⭐⭐⭐ Movement speed ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stamina ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stealth ⭐⭐⭐ Extraction speed ⭐⭐ abilities: ability 1 (active) Stunning noises. Stun the twisteds in their place foe about 20 seconds then clammpable can run 25% faster about 5 seconds (has 55 seconds cooldown) ability 2 (Vibration speed) each time this toon gets hit he will run 5% faster ( doesnt work again if healed ) message's Dandy: Clammpable is a great one but i dont like the noise! Finished Extraction: Noise Up! Noise Up! Well done my self! I should clap my hands but i dont have any.. Activating Ability: you like these sounds? Stay in one place! Vibrate there Forever! Hear my Great clappy dappys! Decending to the next floor: Ouuh made it! Great job last round! I wish i had hands.. Twisted version: This twisted cant stun you like the toon but can give you slowness III, this twisted speed is very fast like pebble but his range of chasing you is very long! so find a big hiding spot, this twisted ability 2 can block your ability (for example) scraps Grappling, this twisted blocks her ability when she is near him this twisted is very speedy if u fail one mahchine better hide in a spot!in order to distract this twisted is by noise there will be six instrument in places, they are different each elevator btw the chance are ecountering this twisted floor 0-5 aint no way boooy floor 6-11 1.2% floor 12 - 17 4.7% floor 18 - 25 7.4% floor 25-30. 16.9% this twisted is a very rare main for maxing his mastery to 100% you get Noisy instrument, which allow you to run 10% faster when your near a twisted this toon role is a distractor this took me long enough but hope you guys like it!
It's certainly a good idea but getting Twisted Jack's info seems like a really argous task compared to the other twisteds. Especially since they're only gonna chase you during the escape.
Rating mains and if they deserve to be a main! (First time ^^) The normal version is good overall 8/10 - I don’t think the twisted version is really good -but overall u tried ur best! -it’s a really creative object This sadly doesn’t deserve to be a main but a rare twisted!
I think jack should be added to dandy's world btw heres some voiceline ideas:jack:GET AWAY FROM ME Poppy:w-why? Jack:BECAUSE IM SCARD Poppy: you know we're safe in the elevator? Jack:oh right!
my toon is Brooklyn/Booklyn the book! her head is a brown book and she is a child she has a dress with a rainbow petaled flower(she is dandy's sis) and she has a dandy sticker on the top corner of her head Ability: Flip and read! this ability makes her to open her head(her head is a book) and the pages allows her to detect if any twisteds r around(the same with vee's ability)for 10 seconds she can appear in dandy's shop bc she is dandy's sis she is unplayable but you can play her by getting some research on twisted booklyn Twisted booklyn is accurate to Twisted dandy,she has t-shelly's face and the pages look like teeth shes the same thing (big back) and has the same animal legs on the bottom her dress is ripped off bc she is too big and she has tapes on her back too bc she is dandys sis she can be sleeping anywhere around the map and if u touch her or do an ability near her she might wake up but if ur doing machine she wont wake up unless you missed the skillcheck she can do 1 shot=2 hearts lost if she has an upset face she is tired and could be sleeping,she is slow and if u annoy her and keep staying near her she will attack you(1 live lost) and she could have her own map/floor its litteraly just a maze with elevators and rainbow petaled flowers in the wallpaper and a bunch of brooklyn cardboard cutouts and if u see one of them she might be near size: 1.5
Jack should be added ngl but it might sometimes need to aquired a in-house carnival floor, it would be pretty nice. Another concept i made also, character 2D version design is in my post page on my channel. Introducing Caution, well it kinda sucks that it was heavily based on my last avatar, it still turned out nice when i added the riding moon. Toon Caution: -hearts: 3 -skill check: depends -Movement speed: 2 (highly recommend with something to move faster) -stamina: average -stealth: 3 -extraction speed: 4 Rarity: main? Abillity 1: Chemical dash -Like Tisha's abillity, she use chemicals to dash around floors, but it only be used for herself since lore is she goes alone by herself. Ability 2: Rider minder -summons a cresent moon and rides on it, the moon is fast as pebble's running speed Cost: -3900 or 4200 -100% research on its twisted self -complete all mastery on Tuna or Sunrisha Voicelines (finishing machines): -Not a single leak... -*sigh*... -this kinda piss me off now... -GET AWAY WHEN IM BUSY!!! When been brought: Dandy: Caution? Be careful then, shes a litteral friendly hazard... Friends: Tuna, Sunrisha (i will make it when im not busy) Talking to other toons: (She barely talks to them, even her friends) Twisted Caution: -Alerted: 110 cm -Movement: 3 Abillity 1: (Disguised) -As a shapeshifter herself, she can shift to a toon or a twisted by choice. Abillity 2 (special): (Take over) -When activaded, her half normal self took over the twisted and try to find the nearest machine to extract before twisted took over all again, kinda useless to pretty much alot of ppl i think. -Possitive: Stealing items and dropping them -Negative: ??? Seeing the picture concept, she had closed eyes: meaning the twisted cannot see at all, she uses her hand to sense the walls and sensing toons or use the footsteps and sounds from other twisteds. Also the opened eyes are fake eyes.
Man, an jack in the box one asides from boxten would be amazing! (Edit: i do have an oc too, its called gus, he's an energetic wendigo that loves to yap around animals, because of that, is friends with pebble, also, yes, he is an main)
I thought of one lil interaction between Boxten and Jack :3 Boxten : oh, hey jack! Jack : h-hello dear friend Boxten : you uh.. listening to any new music right now? Jack : i-i suppose so.. Boxten : well thats.. good.. I used the fact that they are both boxes that play music for their small interaction, i love the content btw :]
instead of confusion 3 heres my custom effect idea: wind - forces players screen to spin around, the higher the level the faster it goes. this effect could be devastating for distracters as it can really mess them up, and instead, the longer hes outside of his box the higher the level the effect gets, it starts at 1 and increases by one level every 10 seconds (btw if you see this can you tell me your opinion)
Ima make the lines he says in the elevator, Jack: That floor was difficult Teagan: not for me Jack: well, probably easy for you since you can pay to get a heart back. Teagan: well true.. Jack: SO SHUSH! Next line: Pebble: Arf! Jack: Whoa, you just came unexpectedly... Pebble: Woof! Jack: yeah, your quick... Next line: Jack: Hey astro Astro: Oh, hey.. Jack: Are you tired Astro: Mostly, these floors never end... Jack: I see... Next line: Brightney: Hey jack! Jack: WOAH, that scared me Brightney: Hah, your suck a scaredy cat! Jack: You mean scaredy box?.. Brighgney: Hah! Next line: Jack: Boxten! your here! Boxten: yeah... Jack: are you doing well? Boxten: Random question but im great. Jack: Nice... Next line: Jack: Rodger could i be a part of your next case? Rodger: Should i rip a parrt of you to test it?.. Jack: Im great... Never asked *chuckles* Byeee Rodger: Yeah... Next line: Jack: Shelly? Shelly: Yeah? Jack: are you a fossil or a shell? Shelly: You could say both Jack: Do you love being like a fossil Shelly: It feels normal but also special Jack: I wish i was special... Next line: Jack: Flutter Flutter: ... Jack: :) Next line: Vee: Hey jack, how does it feel being in a box Jack: Well it feels- Vee: dont care Jack: ... Vee: *chuckles* Jack: HOW DOES IT FEEL BEING A UGLY FEMALE BUT THOUGHT WAS A MALE TV! Vee: Chill, j was joking. Jack: Oh... Im so sorry! Next line: Scraps: Jack. Jack: Yeah? Scraps: ... Jack: Whatever Final line: Jack: Gokb, do you need a hug? Goob: Badly... Jack: If you could, you can hug me! BTW i just thought of jack not being allowed to be grabbed by goob and scarps cant grab him.
I have my own concept! Muggtor I got him by cuphead because cuphead is a tv show and is a game he has 3 hearts 4 skillcheck 2 movement speed 3 stamina 1 stealth 4 extraction speed and he requires 1,250 Ichor but sadly he doesn’t have an ability Dandy’s response to buying muggtor- Oh I wouldn’t pick him if you wanted stealth. Because he has 1 stealth, and when he finishes a machine. He can say -Easy, Pretty cool machine, or teagan would be jealous. And he’s a rare btw but you repliers can make toon interactions now on to the twisted, he’s like twisted shrimpo but faster, his trinket is his straw but you guys can just decide what his straw does and he doesn’t say anything when he’s descending to the next floor, so yeah that’s it
Jack rework: Health:2,skill check 4 stars, Movement speed,3 and a half stars. Stamina:4. Stealth:2, Extraction speed:4. Requirements:50% twisted sprout research. mastery on goob,and 5700 ichor. Abilities reworks: ability 1 name: "sproing!" will shoot out a spring from under box and leap across the map to get away from twisteds,but he cant move for 2 seconds,has a cooldown of 120. Ability 2 Name:"tilting side to side!" On floor 10,or if dandy spawns, he'll be able to complete machines 30% faster,and walk only the slightest faster then pebbles. His twisted version:he is HUGE.almost being big enough up to the roof of the map, but he moves slower then twisted shrimpo,he has ichor covered legs poking out his corroded box,his arms are longer then goobs,as his hitbox is a little big,as he can swing his hand forward to claw at a player, they'll receive damage,and a bleed effect,that slowly takes a heart away,the bleeding effect can be stopped by a medkit or sprouts ability,his head is now halfly covered with ichor,and when in panic mode,he goes faster then pebbles,but, he has a really,REALLY low interest and vision,so just walk around a corner and he'll go away,and when hes close,he makes a gear winding sound,his trinket makes you have a fourth heart,but its inactive untill you use a bandaid,asit makes you 2% slower,you can fix this with speedy shoes or dog plush. His twisted abilitys:he is able to hear footsteps,so dont run or walk around him. Second ability for his twisted:hes able to throw gears that do 1 and a half hearts,but he cant spam it,he can only do this 7 times before running out. Hope this helps.
My oc: Chris the crystal he is a amethyst with dark purple overalls His stats: health:3 skill check:3 movement speed:4 stamina:3 stealth:5 extension speed:2 Abilities: “jabs” he can stun twisted with cristal shards for 10 seconds main character twisted are stunned for 5 seconds Twisted: he’s arms are released with ichor spikes with some stains here and there and red eyes he’s is uncomen like Finn he’s ability is to infect any object if he walks near them you can tell if it’s infected if you see purple spots on them if you pick up an item that’s infected you get stunds from 13 seconds if he’s attention span is like srhimpos he is a bit faster than goob Trinket: the Cristal necklace it is a necklace with amethyst in the middle that is sapé of a heart with some purple decorative bids it can increase stealth by 12% I hope you like him he is very cute Also I forgot to include he’s cost 700 ichor and his requirements are surviving twisted goob and toodles 6 times
WOW, this is the best concept for toons ever! But I need to say something: His stealth is like, TOO LOW; as he HIDE into his box, Jack have more stealth, like 3 or 4 stars. The twisted abilities are very very very op, i think he should stay standing still somewhere yes, if the toons passed close to him in his range, he would scare them by applying the scared effect (Scared affects your movement, leaving you petrified for 1.5 seconds in place of the spot, in Jack's case, this effect affects one toon at a time) causing Jack to come out of his box and stretching his spring neck to the scared toon
That would be way too easy for a main character toon, you don’t understand that most people can just run from him too, even if he is fast, you can just use an item, his hiding ability makes up for his low stealth, it’s a main character twisted, so it should be hard to survive on the first try, he also just targets a machine, purely hurting macrushers
my main toon name: mack mack has teleportions and can pull player by teleporting mastery 100% research on twisted mack what twisted would he become his head is star i also forgot mack has 4 arms just like astro twisted mack has star eyes if he was not twisted also twisted mack can only move if someone is looking at him he massive just like twisted sprout and he can move if the panic timer starts also he wearung top hat and wearing a shirt and short shoe is black shirt has a tie on it colour is black his head is the other side is black has a star on it
Ima actually going to recommend this to the official group bcus we need this toon (but I think the twisted version should just target the lowest stealth toon cause astro is already filling the role of de-extract twisted)
My Dandy's World Oc Is (Joe The Cop) Joe The Cop Arrest People When They Are Bad And This Her Ability Her Ability That Someone Is Near By The Wall And Then Pull Her Gun Up And Shot The Wall 2 Times And This Is This Her Health And Speed (Health 3 And Speed 175) And This Is Her As A Twisted So Yea That's My Oc If You Want To Make More Dandy's World Oc Like And Subscribe
My oc is literally the fox in my pfp Name:isaiah Ability:liftor's guide (he will fly by himself if no one targeted he throws a toon in the air and jumps then flys holding the toon) Ability 2:speed in need:everytoon in the round will gain a 15%boost Twisted:(flys around and if he sees u he will fly at u and slow ur speed for 7 seconds) Trinket:isaiah's panic button:when seen by a twisted u will gain a boost of 25% for walk and run for 10 seconds
Interactions: Poppy:hey isaiah Isaiah: oh..hey poppy Poppy: how do u feel now like how were with twisteds Isaiah:i dont really worry much of twisteds Boxten:h-hey isaiah Isaiah:hey boxten how are things Boxten:good Isaiah:thats good Shrimpo:ISAIAH!!!! isaiah:god for crying out so loud WHAT!! shrimpo:i hate ur tails Isaiah:and? atleast i dont have low stats Vee:hey isaiah Isaiah:what do u want? Vee:would u like to join my game show Isaiah:if i got time i might Vee:this is like the hundreth time now😐 Astro:hey isaiah Isaiah:heya astro how r u Astro: good so fa Isaiah:if u need help or being chased by a twisted im always here Pebble:ARF!! isaiah:oh....sorry pebble im out of treats maybe when were out of here i cam get more treats Pebble:arf Shelly:hey isaiah are u free today Isaiah:yeah why? Shelly:well i wanted to ask u hmm how do u have 2 tails Isaiah:thats a tricky question,ill answer that after ok? Teagan:hey isaiah want to come to a tea party with poppy toodles and i Isaiah:hmm ok Teagan: ur favorite tea is green tea right Isaiah:mhm Tisha:hey isaiah how r u Isaiah:good i cleaned my room today and my goodness it took 1 hour Tisha:well atleast u keep up ur hygean Flutter:..! Isaiah:hey flutter u good Flutter:(nods) Isaiah:good to here😊 Toodles: hey isaiah Isaiah:hey toodles Toodles:can u fly with ur tails Isaiah:well.....ofc Bonus: Toodle:hey isaiah Isaiah:(not the rabies kid) h-hey toodle Toodle:u can fly? Isaiah:no shit sherlock Shrimpo:ISAIAH!!!! Isaiah:WHAT THE FUCK DO U WANT!! Shrimpo:i hate ur tails Isaiah:STFU ATLEAST IM NOT A ROACH
Astro- hey jack how you doing? jack- good just working on my next act astro- nice when it happening? jack- maybe I might play as a prop in the show now
Imma do My Fanmade one and Ur one:3 Jack-“Bello?Uhh I don’t wanna Be here I want Astro..” Bello-Is ok! Boxten is Here! Jack-Good. (Btw u Need Boxten so Then that Chat can Start and No Astro)
My suggestions: --------------- Goob & Jack: Jack: hey goob, have you ever noticed you’re really silly? Goob: no, I’m more of a hugger, scraps usually calls me “Hug” since I prefer that! -------------- Shrimpo and Jack: Shrimpo: YOU LOOK LIKE A CLOWN GO TO THE PARADE. Jack: Shrimpo you do realise I could just eat you since your shrimp… right?… Shrimpo: NO YOU CAN’T! IM RIGHT AND YOUR WRONG THERES NOTHING YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT! ------------- Jack & Camelia (my main) Camelia: hi!.. I don’t think I’ve met you before? Jack: no we haven’t! I’m Jack, nice to meet you! Camelia: nice to meet you too! -------------- Scraps: Hey Jack! Jack: yes scraps? Scraps: wanna see something cool? Jack: maybe after this floor! ---------------- More suggestions if this comment gets a heart >:)
ideas for twisted jack! The face is fine but what if you make the box covered in ichor and his bells dripping ichor and when he chases you, he can pour out ichor from his box making the player get the slow III!
My oc is Luna so here's an interaction I think our characters would have : Luna : HI JACK! Jack : Agh! Oh... hi Luna.. Luna : Sorry i scared you! Your box is super cool! Jack : Th-Thanks... Luna : Maybe we could go draw after this! Jack : Sure Luna...
the twisted concept is really weird. So, if a machine is being worked on/halfway, he will just go to it? (if the key on his box doesnt get handled) or something else? like, for example: you can just be safe if you add some little completion to a machine. Judging that he doesnt attack when he is in his lurking state and theres still machines that has completion (but not completed) like, atleast make him chase a player when he spots one?
I like the concept I actually made a character but i didnt really make it easy to escape its name was choc they are a cookie toon their abilities are pyromaniac and two faced The ability pyromaniac makes choc make fire, the fire will stun all the twisteds but they have 5 times more attention span and 9 times more speed for 3 seconds they are stunned for 5 seconds and everyone can tell choc used pyromaniac because it makes a loud fire alarm sound and once the fire alarm sound is done everyone has to hide and after they are done with speed and attention span everything goes back to normal it's an active ability and its cool down for every floor is 100 second Two faced is a passive ability For every odd numbered floor they +50 stamina and every even numbered floor they gain -1 star in stealth Their friends are: Razzle and Dazzle Brighteny and pebble What Dandy says when you buy Choc he says: WHY WOULD YOU CHOOSE CHOC!? Chocs stats: Health: ❤❤ Skill check: ⭐⭐⭐ Movement speed: ⭐⭐⭐ Stamina: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stealth: ⭐⭐⭐ Extraction speed: ⭐⭐⭐ Cost: 1250 ICHOR 75% RESEARCH IN RAZZLE AND DAZZLE Twisted choco is a nightmare he has 2 abilities Ability 1: CHOMP. 1/30 Chance of 2 damage Ability 2: MIX UP. It is the ability to make up is down left is right right is left and down is up (counts on EVERY DEVICE in the roun) it also give confusion 3 , Slowness 1 and Noise 3 (noise is my fanmade effect it makes them lose 2 stealth) and it lasts 5 seconds. Once you get 100 research on Choco you get the mask trinket it gives you a 75% chance of all twisted not noticing you. They are a main character After extracting machine: I hope this next floor isnt as miserable as me.. Well i guess that was fun hehe IM SO HAPPY I wish i never had to do this again.. Uhh i guess this was.. risky...? Eh i like being risky. Also choco has a smile with sad eyes and they have a shirt with a half a happy face and half a sad face and paint splattered pants with fire colored shoes. Thats all and i hope you like it :)
One problem: Boxten is super easy to get 100% resherch and a lot of people can get to 5500 Ichor fast. So if they don’t have a different main they will be jack. Please add something like 50% resherch on Astro!
I have a idea for him: to activate Twisted Jack, you must run through his box, just like Twisted R&D, so you will wake him up. Since ppl wont turn his key cause they know its not a item.
My main oc is claymore Claymore looks like a unfinished clay humanoid and he acts like a soldier even though he uses NERF Guns Ability one: blaster: an ability that lets you shoot a twisted to stun it but he only has 10 shots during the entire run (p.s. he has a 2% chance that when he shoots a weak twisted (not twisted dandy, vee, or shelly) he can permanently disable that twisted for the level Ability 2: none Stats: health: 3 Skill check:1 Movement: 3 Stamina:4 Stealth: 1 Extraction: 1 He can be obtained if you get 100% research on twisted dandy Twisted claymore: he is stationary but acts like a sniper that can shoot you if you see him but his attack is a slow charging blast that can be indicated by a red line pointimg at you, you can reset his shot charge by going out of his sights Thats it for my new attacker toon idea!
teagan: oh jack my poor friend... you've been looking down lately... jack: its just been so- eh... teagan: i know... jack: thanks for understanding.. teagan: im always here for you when you need it! omg is that a capsule without a tape around it 💖 ik he isn't close friends with teagan but like... I LIKE TEAGAN CONVERSATIONS
Amazing character concept! I really liked it and is pretty good the price but what is the chance of him appearing on a floor? and if his restricted to a certain floor and above?
@@MochaPawZ44 hmm yeah, but sprout is probably going to have 5 stars on stamina. but if that isn't the case, I would change him to have maxed on stamina.
I have an idea of an interaction for my oc (lola the lollipop) Lola:"wow jack,your great at hiding..” Jack:”and your good at crafting!” Lola:"thank you..” Jack:"no problem!”
- Corrections!! -
- Jack's walking/running animation is him hopping.
- Twisted Jack moves by stretching his body. (His box doesn't move)
- Jack has ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ on the stamina stat.
- When Twisted Jack is looking for a machine, you can still take damage to him if you are in his way.
- If there are no uncompleted machines around, Twisted Jack will target the player with the lowest stealth stat, but if he spots another player, he goes after them instead like normal twisteds.
- If Twisted Jack loses interest in a player or hits one, he goes back to his box.
- I know BlushCrunch is not accepting fan submissions anymore. I just thought this was a cool idea to share!
(By the way, thanks for all the toon interactions in the comments! I loved reading them! :D)
But is Twisted jack restricted to a certain floor above? and what Twisted jacks chances of spawning?
@@Luck-r4h Twisted Jack has the same spawn rate as other mains
@Credits_fan after i saw the video I made Jack's trinket the golden key next day I saw the trinket I realised I didn't notice the trinket the whole time
@@Feesh_Productions uh hey look at scraps she has 5 statima as well but shes not a main
@@Feesh_Productions oh
✨this is how I think Goob and jacks interaction would go ( also scraps!)
1. Goob- Hi Jack need a hug?
Jack- uh no thank you Goob I’m to scared to!
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2. Jack- hey Goob…how are u doin?
Goob- I’m good but I’d be better if you came out of your box!
Jack- not happening!
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Scraps now! 1.
Scraps- Hi my brother has told me you’re pretty shy!
Jack- Uh yeah I guess…
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2. Jack- Hey scraps aren’t you an origami cat?
Scraps- what’s origami?
Jack- never mind…
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Hai note btw these are js my preferences on how Jack would act but of course they aren’t up to me so bye! ( at ten likes or like from creator I’ll do Shelly and vee! ) guys my comment was hearted it’s timeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Shelly and Vee’s interactions with Jack!
1. Shelly- Did you know that Jack-In-The-Boxes originated in the US? (True fact)
Jack- Uh no why?
Shelly- Cause your a Jack-In-The-Box!
Jack- Oh right yeah…
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2. Jack- Shelly are you reading anything at the moment?
Shelly- Yes! ✨dinosaur books EKKKKKK✨
Jack- Okayyyyy great…
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Vee! 1. Vee- Hello do you know how to complete a machine?
Jack- uh yeah vee I do!
Vee- doesn’t seem so you don’t have arms…
Jack- I do!
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2. Jack- Hey vee what are you so scared of?…
Vee- Dandy…
Jack- Why? He’s so kind!
Vee- he’s not who you think he is Jack…
Jack-okay whatever you say!…
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At 2 Likes I’ll do Teagan and Tisha!
Thanks for the likes time for Teagan and Tisha!
1. Teagan- Jack would you like to go to your first tea party?
Jack- Uhm sorry I don’t like tea
Teagan- … that’s okay!
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1. Tisha- do you need a bath?
Jack- That’s rude I don’t!
Tisha- sorry I just care about my friends hygiene
Jack- okay…
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2. Jack- hey Tisha what’s Hygiene
Tisha- Uh…basically taking care of your body having good hygiene means a healthy body!
Jack- Oh well i don’t really have a body so I’m fine!
Tisha…oh
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Thought this was funny but y’all I slept wrong last night so my neck and shoulder hurt is it okay if I take next day off of this if I still feel horrible? ( also Toodles and Rodger next at 30 likes! )
Hai Ik it’s 1 am rn btw
1 Rodger- Jack are the twisteds getting to you?
Jack- not really kinda?…
Rodger- well I know quite a bit about them so come to me if so…
Jack- alright
That’s all for Rodger since it’s late and I’m lazy
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1 toodles- isn’t today bright?
Jack- it’s night…
Toodles- well it was…
Jack- we don’t go outside…?
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2. Jack- have you been out…?
Toddles - once…
Jack- .
Toodles- I was 3 I stumbled outside and the sun was bright and I felt amazing of course I was pulled back inside by Rodger though…
Jack- …okay
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Kk ima probs go to bed at 100 likes ig I’ll do pebbles and poppy
Sorry! Now time for pebbles…!
1. Pebbles-arf..arf!
Jack-hi pebbles!
Pebble-woof
You arl reached 10 likes becoming 11!
:^
you got more likes time to do toodles and rodger:D
these are ass
Yay i want more! 1 like for u :)
the only problem with having boxten mastered for jack is that boxten is a starter toon so you dont have to do anything to get boxten and most starter players get mastery on boxten anyway, but its a great concept!
The guy who choosed poppy: ☠️ (me)
We can buy boxten for cheap!@@pouazul4255
@@pouazul4255you can buy boxten
Well its actually really hard to get his mastery
1:most people that want his mastery are a little....meh, at the game
And 2:u need 7 people in a single run to survive a whole floor, may seem easy but its not, getting mastery on tisha or toodles is much easier
@@fredericodesousaferreira5020boxten mastery easy, idk what yall r talking about, anyway, you still do need 5.5k ichor to get him so that makes up for it
I like the concept, but I'm not too sure on the way the Twisted works. I think instead of draining an uncompleted machine and going after a player if every machine is completed, T. Jack should always go after the closest player in a large radius, and if there are no players in that radius, he will then drain an uncompleted machine that is the closest to completion all the way down. This makes him a threat outside of elevator panic mode and an annoyance if not kept in check. I also think that instead of playing a music box sound, he should play a loud ticking sound, so people don't confuse him with T. Dandy
For me this concept art is missing one more stat bcs all mains has 5 point on one stat
@@IPA-v4yyeah but the issue with that would be that there’d be some overlap. Scraps has 5 star stamina and all the mains have 5 stars in one stat so unless you want 2 toons with 5 stars in the same stat then you’re gonna have to get more creative with the stat spread
@@NotGamerZad this is kinda broken but maybe
Both 5 star on movement and stamina
Or 5 health
You are SO correct, especially in that music box part. I imagine it'd be so annoying if music box music was playing along with Dandy's music. The ticking sound would be more fitting and possibly even more scary
Jack: Heya Boxten!
Boxten: Uhm, Hey Jack!
Jack: Great job last floor!
Boxten: Yeah, thanks. Y'know, I wish I could hide in my own music box like you. It seems helpful.
Jack: Well, I wish I had legs like you!
Boxten: Yeah-
J: What happens if I wind this up...
B: WAIT NO-
*Boxten's head starts playing a random music box song, which is randomly picked from a list (very small chance for a music box rickroll)*
J: ...
B: Never. Again.
J: Okay Boxten...
Jack: huh I just spined your thing what is happening?
Boxten: oh no we have no more power!
Jack: what do you mean?
Boxten: it’s dark bruh you can’t see me.
Jack: OH MY JACK IN A BOX WHATS THAT SOUND!!!
Boxten: what sound-
Twisted pebble: Woof woof and good bye…
Jack and boxten: AAAAAAA-
Jack: oh yeah I can hide-
Twisted pebble: to bad I got you
Boxten: wait dogs talk now?
Twisted pebble: only me
Boxten ohhhhhhhhhhh-
*1 minute later*
Twisted pebble: that was delicious-
Toataly a real uno reverse card toon I’m being serious: but it’s opisite day.
Twisted pebble: what-
You can imagine how it ends because I have no idea for the ending…
Shrimpo: I HATE JACK IN THE BOXEs jack: ur mo-
NOT JACK ROASTING SHRIMPO💀
Shrimpo would absolutely cry if one of my ocs got his attention
I love shrimpo
@@Andrebrahh your entire personality revolves around a shrimp
@@OneSpicyLoaf what is your ocs?
_Jack and Pebble_
*Jack* - "Huh? What are you doing here?"
*Pebble* - "Arf!"
*Jack* - "GAH!!-"
_Jack and Scraps (By @Cathesisandfriends)_
*Jack* - "Uhm... Who are you..?"
*Scraps* - "Me? Well, I'm Scraps!"
*Jack* - "Uhm... Nice to meet you?"
_Goob and Jack (By @norossanasani9928)_
*Goob* - "Hey, Jack! Do you want a hug?"
*Jack* - "Uhm... No, I'm quite scared of hugs..."
*Goob* - Oh, well that's fine!"
*Jack* - "I hope so..."
Lol
Jack:who are you?
Scraps:I’m scraps!
Jack:uhhhhhhhhhhh
Goob: hey jack want a hug jack: n-no im scared of hugs goob: oh ok well its ok jack: yeah i guess..
I have a Rodger interaction idea
Rodger: Oh, hello Jack.
Jack: uh hi Rodger, s-sorry if I’m bothering you! I’m bad at everything, especially interaction.
Rodger: Not everything, you’re good at hiding.
Jack: Really?
Rodger: Very! When you’re in your box all Twisteds don’t bat an eye towards you.
Jack: Wow, I g-guess so.
It fells like when I see Rodger interactions he always says something the toon can like do like goob can hug people in the elevator and other toon stuff
Astro interaction!
(Jack): (crying)
(Astro):hey jack... You're feeling good.?
(Jack):(sniff) no....
(Astro): you want some dreams to calm down...?
(Jack): alright... Thanks astro...
Imma share my own toon too,Starfruit!
(I didnt know there was a character named this in flavor frenzy cuz ive never played flavor frenzy)
She is a star
Stats:
3 hearts
2 skillcheck
4 movement speed
1 stamina
3 stealth
4 Extraction speed
Her ability is revealing all machines in the match to the player and the teamates with them for 10 seconds with a 35 second cooldown
Twisted:Has a glow like brightney but its smaller,Shes uncommon aswell,she will always hear ur skillchecks and if a skillcheck is failed she will get a massive speedboost which makes her faster than twisted pebble so hide as quick as u can when u fail a skill check
Her trinket is the star which will make it so that when u succeed on a skillcheck u will get a 10% boost for a machine which stacks but resets every machine so do 2 skillchecks=20%% more extraction speed and finishing the machine sets it to 0%
And golden skillcheck gives 20%
Description:
An uncommon twisted,she emits a small glow around her making it easier to see her but that dosent mean she isnt deadly,failing a skillcheck makes her have a massive speedboost to the machine and she hears all machines,Starfruit is not to be messed with after someone fails a skillcheck.
Her requirements are:
1.2k ichor
50% research on twisted astro
Dandys reaction to buying her:
"Starfruit! Shes Very courageous and confident!"
Her ability lines are:
-lets see where they are!
- Abracadabra!
-Revealiosa!
Machine lines:
-Quickly and perfectly!
-1 spin and 2 spins and More spins!
-These twisteds dont know what they're up against!
Descending elevator lines:
-going deeper!
-Doing so well!
-Next Floor Yay!
Conversations:
Poppy:I like ur bow starfruit!
Starfruit:Thanks Popsy!
Poppy:i think your bow would be better if it was pink,and my name is Poppy.
Starfruit:Ok Pimpy Thanks for your advice!
Starfruit:hey scraps have u seen my star strings? I can't find them anywhere..
Scraps:Woahh...Cool stri-Uh what?
Starfruit:I knew u had them,If u keep Failing to return them I'm gonna give you less.
Pebble:Woof!
Starfruit:Hey purple!
Pebble:...
Starfruit:Sorry,Pabele? Pinba? Pelo?
Pebble:Grrrrrr...
Boxten:Starfruit how are you so brave?
Starfruit:Well I wouldn't call myself brave..
Boxten:But..you are.
Starfruit:I think I'm just happy,I wouldn't call myself brave,Though thanks burxton!
Boxten:it's boxten,And ur welcome..
Starfruit:Down and-prawn dude why are u looking at me like that?
Shrimpo:MY NAME IS SHRIMPO!! I HATE STARS TOO!!
Starfruit:Prawno be quiet,I'm trying to focus here.
Vee:Hey starfruit,are u gonna be able to come to my next gameshow?
Starfruit:Of course vee! I could never ever miss one!
Vee:Great,I'll arrange one soon.
Starfruit:Good!
Starfruit:Hey brightney! How's my favourite lamp doing?
Brightney:Great! How's my favourite star doing?
Starfruit:I'm good! are u going to vees next gameshow?
Brightney:Oh there's another one happening soon? Well will you go?
Starfruit:Yup!
Brightney:then I'll come too!
Teagan:Hey starfruit,Want some tea later?
Starfruit:Yup! I might be a bit late to the party though,I'm gonna get my telescope and look at the sky with shelly,
Teagan:That's ok.
Starfruit:Ok teejen!
Teagan:Its teagan.
Starfruit:Hey shelly! Got the telescope for star seeking?
Shelly:of course! How could I not?
Starfruit:Great! I'll see you soon!
Rodger:Starfruit,how do u manage to reveal all those machines?
Starfruit:I think I like...Uhhh...I don't really know how to explain it Rindger..
Rodger:Hmm,Guess it will stay a mystery..And my name is Rodger.
Starfruit:Yea,a mystery indeed rango..
Wall bio:
Starfruit the star
Starfruit is a bright and happy friend! Always cheering up her friends and always giving a happy mood to the room! She isnt great at naming people she isnt very close with..But she remembers her friends names just fine! She is basically the party goer of the gardenview crew!
So thats all about starfruit! Get 10 likes on this and i will make another one about another fanmade toon,Finla da fish!
Yipee the 10 like goal is completed!!
Time to share about Finla da fish!
Stats:
3 hearts
1 skillcheck
3 movement speed
4 stamina
3 stealth
4 extraction speed
Ability:She can boost all of her stats (excluding stealth) by 2 stars so uh 6 star extraction speed for 30 seconds with a 90 second cooldown
Requirements:
1325 ichor
Complete 3 mastery quests on shrimpo
Oh yeah she's shrimpos love interest who hates everyone in the crew as much as shrimpo but shrimpo and her like eachother
Rarity:rare
Twisted:She has a really really long attention span and Toodles speed and has normal eyesight and when panic mode activates she's hyperactive which makes her go faster than failed skillcheck twisted starfruit and runs to the elevator so uhhhh you better run when panic mode comes before she beats you to the elevator..
now ready
Part 2 of finla coming -soon- I'm -tired-
Let's go
-tbh-
Her trinket is the bucket of shrimps 💀
Whenever twisted shrimpo or toon shrimpo is on a floor with finla she gets 2 star more on every stat (not including health) (stacks with her ability so 8 star extraction speed holy jesus)
Her twisted bio:
A more rare type of twisted,this twisted is merciless with her high speed and extremely high attention span,she can kill without struggle,thankfully her eyesight is average,making her less of a threat,but the lethal thing about her is she speeds up extremely and can kill anything in her path when the elevator opens,and she heads straight for the elevator,making her extremely dangerous if u dont make it to the elevator in time!
Her wall bio:
Finla the fish
Finla is not very nice at all! She always hates on other toons and never let's them relax!
She's a big bully that no one looks up to!
Dandys reaction to buying her:
Finla!? Wear a gas mask if your going near that much toxicity.
Ability lines:
-IM DOING THIS AND NO ONE CAN STOP ME!!
-IM BETTER HAHA!
-TAKE THIS TWISTEDS!
Machine lines:
-im getting bored!
-boooooooring!
-Lacking on the entertainment!
Descending elevator lines:
-When is this gonna get good!?
-i have so much better things to do!
-Is there a quit option!?
Conversations
Finla:Toodles,your such a scaredy ball!
Toodles:What?
Finla:your always so scared! You never have any bravery!
Toodles:That's not nice!
Finla:Boohoo! Does it look like I care?
Tisha:Finla you need to stop being mean to everyone!
Finla:and you need to stop being unintelligent!
Tisha:Hey! Stop that finla! I've had enough!
Finla:make me! oh wait! You can't!
Finla:Ugh Poppy what is that bow!? It's hideous!
Poppy:Well I don't find it hideous!
Finla:well ur taste is atrocious!
Poppy:Well I dont think so!
Flutter:..!
Finla:oh what's that? You will have to speak a bit louder! oh wait! You can't!
Flutter:...
Finla:You belong in loserville you know that?
Finla:Astro your a bad sleepy head!
Astro:I don't care finla..
Finla:of course you don't! Because you lack the braincells to care about anything!
Astro:What..? Be quiet,your disturbing my rest..
Finla:well I don't care badstro!
Shrimpo:Hey finla..I was wondering uh if we could meet up later?
Finla:oh ok where?
Shrimpo:uh maybe at your room?
Finla:Sure thing but you seem nervous..
Shrimpo:No no..I'm ok.
Finla:Ugh brightney ur lampshade,glow and everything about you even is so bad!
Brightney:Quiet up finla! How about u go back to shrimpo and ki-
Finla:WHAT!? WHY WOULD YOU THINK THAT!?
brightney:Wow you look so nervous..im definitely right about you and shrimpo.
Finla:NO! YOUR NOT...DEFINITELY NOT!!
Goob:Oh no..
Finla:Goob what are you even supposed to be!? You look like a monkey but don't at the same time!
Goob:it's none of your buisness finla..
Finla:Does it look like I care?
Goob:Uh...
Finla:exactly!
Finla:Razzle.
Razzle dazzle:F-finla?
Finla:Stop looking at me like that you unintelligent mask!
Razzle dazzle:You were looking at me first though.. (you heard her,look the other way.)
Finla:Well ur depressed Version seems to understand!
Finla:Shrimpo you look nervous,you alright?
Shrimpo:uh yea..but there something i need to confess..
Finla:Yea bud?
Shrimpo:I REALLY LIKE YOU AND THINK YOUR REALLY COOL AND I WANT TO BE TOGETHER WITH YOU AS A COUPLE AND I HOPE U DONT REJECT ME BECAUSE I REALLY LOOK UP TO YOU!!
finla:...I don't know what to say...
Shrimpo:Eek..!
That's all about finla! Get 20 likes and I'll make yet another one about a main character! His name being cardster.
I think you can guess what he's gonna be based off of *looks at cardvote*
Cardster coming tommorow
starfruit flavor frenzy!!
i have a custom aswell (I'll maybe share it)
finla is a nice concept
if she’s a star then her name shouldn’t be starfruit 🤦🏽♀️
@frxggymm2 well poppy's a bubble and her name isn't bubble,brightneys a lamp and her name isn't lamp or smth
So I can name da star starfruit if I want to
(Lemme try all Toons [im bad at this and i feel embarrased lol])
Boxten!
*Boxten"* "oh.. h-hey! hello jack."
*Jack:* "well hello!..- boxten."
*Boxten:* " just.. don't kind of.. uh, understand on how- you go in your box.-"
*Jack:* " Yeah.. uh, might explain to you later."
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Poppy!
*Poppy:* " JACKK!"
*Jack:* " thats loud!"
*Poppy:* " Oops!"
*Jack:* " Well... POPPYYYYYY!!!!!-"
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Tisha!
*Tisha:* " keepin clean..."
*Jack:* " hey.. uh-"
*Tisha:* " Jack i thought you were just talking to boxten..-"
*Jack:* " well uh, i.. actually w-wasn't."
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Finn!
*Finn:* " I 'cod'nt believe that!"
*Jack:* " huh..?"
*Finn:* " i oh'fish'ally am amazed how u get i ur box"
*Jack:* " Thanks.. uh, finn.. though those fish puns made me cackle a bit.."
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Shrimpo 😊
*Shrimpo:* " I HATE YOUR BOX!"
*Jack:* " what did i do...?"
*Shrimpo:* " I HATE EVERYONE!"
*Jack:* " ..."
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Connie! (new toon)
*Connie:* " Boo! scared y-"
*Jack:* " Ahh!"
[2 for connie cuz no reason.]
*Jack:* " i think u scared me to much.."
*Connie:* " i mean.. i am a ghost afterall :)"
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Glistennnn yuh!
*Glisten:* " hey jack do my makeup look good."
*Jack:* " y-yeah.. why?"
*Glisten:* " just sayin!"
(MY HANDS HURT HELPPP-)
I really like the Jack in the box idea, so I decided to make a new twisted concept for Jack, since I think your idea could use some tweaks. First of all, I came up with an effect that twisted Jack would put on you. The effect is called “Laughter” and it constantly changes your skill check size when on a machine. Like Shelly’s confusion, this stays on you for basically the whole floor. A thing I wanted to add is that the music gets slower and slower when you don’t wind up Jack’s box. This will make it easier to tell when you need to wind him up. I also wanted to make it so when Jack comes out of his box, he doesn’t go back. He’s just a free roaming twisted for the rest of the floor. Also, I kind of wanted to change what the trinket does, cuz I think it’s too similar to Jack’s passive. This is all just my opinion, the original thing you came up with was really good. :)
Edit: Since Jack is a free roaming twisted for the rest of the floor when you don’t wind him up in this concept, I wanted to change the way he moves. Instead of just stretching his body, I wanted to make him crawl around with his box dragging behind him.
HELP when i saw your character i thought "they look like slingshot from phighting." 😭😭😭 OVERAAALLL, i love this character, great job!!!! >:3
I have an idea too! Well, two of them. Mostly because I'm not sure if they should be a Main or not.
Starbie is a Star Toon with pale purple clothing, pretty close to Astro but best buddies with Poppy. Walk/run loop is a casual skip.
Starbie: normal Toon version.
Cost: 900 Ichor, 2 characters mastered.
Stats: 3 Hearts, 4 Skillcheck, 2 Stamina, 3 Movement Speed, 2 Stealth, 4 Extraction Speed.
Ability: Star Spinner. Active. Confuses all of one type of Twisteds (Poppy, Toodles, ect), making it so they can't start chasing any toons but doesn't stop any chases currently going on. This doesn't work on Mains or Stationary Twisteds like Razzle and Dazzle.
Twisted Starbie: normal Toon version.
Stats: Average everything. But, can only enter a chase if a Toon is running, activated Rodger, or failed a Skillcheck. Then it's speed equals Toodles as they rush to where the noise was made.
Trinket: Purple Tassle. Increases Movement Speed and Extraction Speed by 5%.
Starbie: Main Toon version.
Cost: 4900 Ichor, 100% research on Twisted Starbie, 7 Toons mastered.
Stats: 2 Hearts, 5 Skillcheck, 1 Stamina, 3 Movement Speed, 1 Stealth, 5 Extraction Speed.
Ability 1: Star Spinner. Active. Confuses all of one type of Twisteds (Poppy, Toodles, ect), making it so they can't start chasing any toons but doesn't stop any chases currently going on. This doesn't work on Mains or Stationary Twisteds like Razzle and Dazzle.
Ability 2: Extra Precautions. Gives one uncommon item the first time noticed by a Main Twisted if there's room in their inventory.
Twisted Starbie: Main Toon version.
Stats: Average everything. But, can only enter a chase if a Toon is running, activated Rodger, or failed a Skillcheck. Then it's speed equals Toodles as they rush to where the noise was made.
Abilities: Every 30 seconds, traps one item (indicated by the small stars floating around it). If a Toon picks up this item specifically, then Starbie's Speed AND attention span equals Pebbles as they rush towards the noise to chase you down.
SFX: Loud Footsteps, mechanical yet wet sounding noises (when nearby), explosion sound effect (when you pick up a trapped item).
Trinket: Purple Tassle. Gives you a random Common item the first time you get spotted by a Twisted per run.
Dialogue (not interactions, for both main and normal counterparts)
When finishing machine:
That wasn't too bad!
One step closer to the next floor!
Gotta keep this ball rolling!
When bought in Dandy's shop:
That's Starbie! He's the most optimistic, if the only, star I've ever met!
When Active Ability is used:
Twirl, twirl~
Go my little stars! Distract them!
Wheee!
Descending to next floor:
Stay positive! We will do this!
Keep your wits, we'll need them.
That was rough, good thing most of us survived!
That's all, I'll enter some conversations in the reply section. And I know this character seems OP, it's why I doubt they would ever make it in if the devs were still taking suggestions.
Maybe boxten and poppy? Also how do u make the 3d models? Also HES SO CUTE😭
Seems pretty cool! No complaints for the PLAYABLE Jack, but I'm a little worried about Twisted Jack for SOLO runs, especially since his "pathfinding to the player with the lowest stealth" would invalidate all AFK spots. Also a little concerned that Shrimpo (or even Razzle & Dazzle) wouldn't be able to get to a machine, finish it, and run back to wind up Twisted Jack before his timer runs out due to their slow movement speeds, but otherwise, I love the concept! 😁
Here’s my main character concept
Lilian the Blue Axolotl (Main Character)
Stats:
2 Health
2 Star Skillcheck
4 Star Movement Speed
5 Star Stamina
2 Star Stealth
3 Star Extraction Speed
Requirements:
4250 Ichor
100% Research on Twisted Lilian
100% Mastery on Kathryne (I’ll showcase her soon)
Ability 1 (Active) Ocean’s Blessing:
This Toon increases her stamina regeneration by 25% for 15 seconds. Has a cooldown of 50 seconds.
Ability 2 (Passive) Regrowth:
This Toon gains a new heart every 10 floors
Dandy’s message upon buying Lilian:
-Lilian! She’s a kind hearted yet intimidating friend.
Finish Machine:
-Another task off my list
-Wonder why Strawberry’s doing…
-Let’s get out of here
Using Ability:
-Let’s rest for now
-Can’t wait to get back up!
-(Sigh)
Descending to Next floor:
-I need to get back soon
-On to the next!
Twisted Sound:
Splashing water
Twisted Mechanic:
Decreases the nearest toon’s stealth whether being chased or not by 25%. This goes on for the entire floor. The debuff lasts for 5 seconds and re appears every 15 seconds.
Twisted Trinket:
Empty Cake Platter
Increases the usage of an item by 5%
Ok that’s it lol.
The only problem i think in this is the fact that jack has basic stats for his twisteds, instead of that i reccomend when he is gonna attack he is gonna stretch far away from the player and go back with higher speeds after stretching, acting like a catipult i recommend the only way to counter this is going through a wall during the attack phase (like goob but if there is a wall while jack is selecting the player he will find a path to go through but will take more time)
i have a concept too!!
splatters is a paint brush and is a normal character his stats are 3 health 3 skill check 2 stamina 2 movement speed 5 stealth and 3 extraction speed his ability is artistic flow: this toon can put paint on a players or twisteds footsteps being able to see if they just walked by to all players -active- has a cool-down of 45 seconds and lasts for 25 seconds twisted splatter- twisted splatters whole entire head/the bristles is completely covered in ichor making him blind but his hearing is really good (basically he is always running and his running can even get triggered by you walking past basically saying he has a really good sight of range further then twisted goobs reach) if you get 100 research on him he gives you the paint palette it gives you a 30 percent speed boost during elevator panic time and 30 percent stealth
Omg I love that idea so much!! Honestly he's kinda op tho lol-
I mean the lack of stealth makes his ability needed but the passive is quite op for higher floors and his lack of stars (mains have 16 stars intotal while he has 15)
Jack and Astro intereaction!
Astro: Jack?
Jack:EEK!
Astro:Hey! It’s just me! Calm down!
Jack:Oh… I’m sorry… I’m just like that sometimes…
Astro:It’s alright… I already used to it at this point!
Jack in the box: THIS PRISON TO HOLD ME? *Ultrakill reference.*
Vee:I forgot we still have this cry baby. Jack: HEY! Vee:boo Jack:AAAA!!
my main charcter concept:
Alexic:
Stats:
5 Hearts
5 Skillcheck
3 Movement Speed
4 Stealth
6 Stamina
5 Extracation
Abilites and passives:
Abilites:Zappy (Alexic shoots out a laser making the twisted lose interst on everybody)
Passive:If Alexic gets hit he gets a big speed boost like Poppy.
Twisted counterpart:
Looks exactly like him only thing is hes statronity just like jack however he can get awaken by 3 steps:
1.Walking near him
2.Running
3.Skillcheck failure
He is very slow however he is also a sniper which means he can shoot something to hit you.
(Custom item too)
Beacon light: It can blind every twisted and makes every twisted go to random directions 5 times.
However it can make Twisted Alexic very mad
Plus making him split into 4 jaws on his head
And speed buffs too.
Requirments for Alexic:
100% Twisted Alexic Research
10k Ichor
Encounter Twisted Alexic atleast 5 times
Trinkets:
Disturbing Liquid.
You will slowly heal back a heart. (NEEDS 300 TAPES)
Side effects:Make Your Skillcheck size smaller
Voicelines:
Using Ability(1)
"YOUR CRITZING ME!"
Finishing a machine:
After all it looks simple.
Nothing to worry about missing.
Conversation:
Poppy:(No conversation)
Boxten:(No conversation aswell)
Shrimpo:
Shrimpo:I HATE YOU
Alexic:If theres anything you want to say.
Shrimpo:...
Alexic:...
Shrimpo:I HATE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Thats all. He only has 1 conversation which means he only talks to Shrimpo.
Trivia:
Alexic has anger issues.
Alexic has a son.
Alexic's Twisted counterpart's Rarity is Main+
Alexic is kinda calm.
Effects twisted counterpart gives:
1.Confusion IV (slows extraction speed for 65)
2.Bleeding III (you slowly lose hearts after 30 secs have passed and to break it you must get see by a twisted) (not by getting hit or die you just gotta let any twisted look at you and chase you)
3.Speedness I (you walk a bit faster to make Bleeding III a bit easier)
Enraged Mode:
1.Confusion X (Makes extraction size alot smaller)
2.Bleeding IV (you slowly lose hearts after 20 secs had passed and yes you have to do the same thing to break it)
3.Slowness I (You walk a bit slower)
Twisted Alexic Speed:
Very fast
Enraged form
More faster
Enraged form gives a badge so uhh here it is
Bad idea.
"You should'nt had done that.."
(Encounter Enraged Twisted Alexic to get it)
He also makes rodger's research multipler go bye bye so its now 1x
(Appearence:Tall Black thing with red eyes) (hes not made out of ichor hes made out of something different of ichor that doesnt really make him go crazy) (Feeling: Serious,Sad,Calm smth)
Twisted counterpart apperance:
Calm Form:
However he is the same as his toon one but hes just sleeping with bleeding eyes (Feeling:Happy)
Awaken Form:
His eyes are star shaped and have teeth(Feeling:Happy)
Enraged Form:
Splited into 4 jaws and claws. (Feeling:Furious)
Dandy when you buy him:
Ooh! Alexic. Good choice he is very good at extracting if you know how to extract well!
(He is a great reporter btw)
(Edit:He is part of the T.A Family members (Twisted Alex family members)
(Walk sound here you go:Loud footsteps)
(Enraged form sounds:Growling and Louder footsteps)
I'm ngl keep this content up. I love it you are making good not op concepts.
Well that doesn’t stop there, there were 3 unreleased characters yet. Which was sprout (who is a main character) glisten and cosmo.
I think the way the twisted should work is after it wakes up, it grows a big AOE (like raz and daz) constantly moving around until someone steps in it, instantly taking a heart before gling back to sleep mode.
Shrimpo and jack: “AHHHH DONT BULLY ME!” “I HATE BOXES” “:(“
New 💡
Toon name: boxy (rare toon)
Description: it's a toy pig and it's the toy big of goob and best friend of pebble
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Stats:
Movement speed 5 (I explain later)
Stamina: 5 (I explain later)
Stealth: 1 (or 5)
Extraction speed: 2 (or 5)
Skill check: 3 (or 5)
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Ability 1 I'm a box (passive) the other toon can put they're items (bend.,medkit,pop......) in boxy and he have 50 slots and all the toons can take other toons items and when the toon want the item from boxy can take it BUT the items have a weight for boxy
•put common items 1 weight
•put uncommon items 3 weight
•put rare items 5 weight
•put super rare items 10weight
In total boxy can take a max of 250 of weight but every 50 weight reached he be slow bc it's too weighted so every 50 of weight he lost 1 star at stamina and 1 star at movement speed but he increments his other stats
•50 weight reached|
Movement speed: 4 📉 (then 5)
Stamina: 4 📉 (then 5)
Stealth: 1 (the same) ⚖️ (fun fact the only stat that no have change the first time)
Extraction speed: 2 📈 (then 1)
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•100 weight reached
Movement speed: 3 📉 (then 4)
Stamina: 3 📉 (then 4)
Stealth 2 📈 (then 1)
Extraction speed 3 📈 (then 2)
Skill check: 3 📈 (then 2)
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•150 weight reached
Stamina: 2 📉 (then 3)
Movement speed: 2 📉 (then 3)
Extraction speed: 4 📈 (then 3)
Skill check: 4 📈 (then 3)
Stealth: 3 📈 (then 2)
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•200 weight reached
Stamina: 1 📉 (then 2)
Movement speed: 1 📉 (then 2)
Stealth: 4 📈 (then 3)
Extraction speed: 5 📈 (then 4)
Skill check: 5 📈 (then 4)
• 250 weight reached (max)
Stealth: 5 📈
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if boxy die he will be broken so the team will lost 50% of the loot in boxy the other 50% it's near the dead body of boxy
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Required for unlock him
1350 ichor
50% reseach on twisted pebble
50% research on twisted goob
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In boxy reach 250 weight but have less than 50 slots he can't take other items
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Voice lines
When u buy it from dandy
•"Oh now you can store ah"
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When u do a machine
•I stored this machine
•I need more ichor !!
•Pebble will be proud of me
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When u escaped 1 floor
•now I get broken AHHH
•oh good job pebble !
•Guys you are bot I want store items !!!
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Masteries quest:
•get stored 50 items (0/50)
•get to 250 weight (0/1)
•complete 75 machines
•survive with pebble and goob 30 floors in a server
•survive 65 floors
Get chased 50 times when you have 250 weight
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(Fan made concept) When boxy comes into game it will have 2 skins vintage skin and rainbow boxy :)
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Twisted version rarity: rare
It's a broken and burning piggy it's extremely fast when he hit you, he takes 1 of your items if u don't have it he takes 25 ichor
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Rank boxy like a tierlist my personal rank of boxy it's A
It's a very complicated toon if I reach 5 likes I do another 1 toon idea :)
Doesn’t twisted dandy play a music box too? It’s gonna be confusing if your encountering dandy or jack
I have a concept.. It's unfinish ngl but i'll finish it at maybe 1-3 weeks, Spotlight is a sun and a main character, His stats is :
2 health
4 skill check
3 stamina
5 extraction speed
3 stealth
His active ability is Funny business : When this toon used the ability it's makes other toons and themself faster, faster speed extraction within the radius of average AND makes the user's cooldowns degress by 4-7 less, It have 60 seconds cooldown, Then his passive ability is Chaotic actions : It's makes this toon really really fast when it's finish a mechine OR get hit by a twisted and for more lore, He is Astro's big brother
I don't have enought ideas for my oc's twisted version so yeah, IT IS STILL UNFINISH ans also his interaction is unfinish too
Brightney:wanna read books jack? Jack:I don’t feel like that
i should share some there are two but one im working on!
Clammpable
(main toon) cost 3765
ichor
Requirements: 100% mastery on twisted clammpable and twisted Vee
Stats:
Health
❤❤
Skill check
⭐⭐⭐
Movement speed
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Stamina
⭐⭐⭐⭐
Stealth
⭐⭐⭐
Extraction speed
⭐⭐
abilities:
ability 1
(active)
Stunning noises.
Stun the twisteds in their place foe about 20 seconds then clammpable
can run 25% faster about 5 seconds
(has 55 seconds cooldown)
ability 2
(Vibration speed)
each time this toon gets hit he will run 5% faster ( doesnt work again if healed )
message's
Dandy: Clammpable is a great one but i dont like the noise!
Finished Extraction: Noise Up! Noise Up!
Well done my self!
I should clap my hands but i dont have any..
Activating Ability: you like these sounds?
Stay in one place!
Vibrate there Forever! Hear my Great clappy dappys!
Decending to the next floor:
Ouuh made it!
Great job last round!
I wish i had hands..
Twisted version:
This twisted cant stun you like the toon
but can give you slowness III, this twisted speed is very fast like pebble but his range of chasing you is very long! so find a big hiding spot, this twisted ability 2 can block your ability
(for example) scraps Grappling, this twisted blocks her ability when she is near him this twisted is very speedy if u fail one mahchine better hide in a spot!in order to distract this twisted is by noise there will be six instrument in places, they are different each elevator
btw the chance are ecountering this twisted
floor 0-5 aint no way boooy
floor 6-11 1.2%
floor 12 - 17 4.7%
floor 18 - 25 7.4%
floor 25-30. 16.9%
this twisted is a very rare main
for maxing his mastery to 100% you get
Noisy instrument, which allow you to run 10% faster when your near a twisted
this toon role is a distractor
this took me long enough but hope you guys like it!
It's certainly a good idea but getting Twisted Jack's info seems like a really argous task compared to the other twisteds.
Especially since they're only gonna chase you during the escape.
Well honestly I feel like it should be hard since it's necessary for jack and he's so usefull
@@FrostedStar2005 you can also get "encounters" of him by winding his key while he is inside. I explained it in the video.
Goob: Hey Jack! Do you need a hug?
Jack: Ummmm, no but could you hug Astro and boxten for me.
Goob: of course I can Jack.
Jack: Thank you.
Rating mains and if they deserve to be a main! (First time ^^)
The normal version is good overall 8/10
- I don’t think the twisted version is really good
-but overall u tried ur best!
-it’s a really creative object
This sadly doesn’t deserve to be a main but a rare twisted!
I think jack should be added to dandy's world btw heres some voiceline ideas:jack:GET AWAY FROM ME Poppy:w-why? Jack:BECAUSE IM SCARD Poppy: you know we're safe in the elevator? Jack:oh right!
That interaction is silly and weird...
my toon is Brooklyn/Booklyn the book!
her head is a brown book and she is a child
she has a dress with a rainbow petaled flower(she is dandy's sis)
and she has a dandy sticker on the top corner of her head
Ability: Flip and read!
this ability makes her to open her head(her head is a book) and the pages allows her to detect if any twisteds r around(the same with vee's ability)for 10 seconds
she can appear in dandy's shop bc she is dandy's sis
she is unplayable but you can play her by getting some research on twisted booklyn
Twisted booklyn is accurate to Twisted dandy,she has t-shelly's face and the pages look like teeth
shes the same thing (big back) and has the same animal legs on the bottom
her dress is ripped off bc she is too big
and she has tapes on her back too bc she is dandys sis
she can be sleeping anywhere around the map and if u touch her or do an ability near her she might wake up but if ur doing machine she wont wake up unless you missed the skillcheck
she can do 1 shot=2 hearts lost
if she has an upset face she is tired and could be sleeping,she is slow and if u annoy her and keep staying near her she will attack you(1 live lost)
and she could have her own map/floor its litteraly just a maze with elevators and rainbow petaled flowers in the wallpaper and a bunch of brooklyn cardboard cutouts and if u see one of them she might be near
size: 1.5
BRO THANKS FOR GIVING ME THE IDEA TO PLAY THE GAME IT IS FUN THANK YOU
jack: so anything in your head? boxten: no not really jack: wait am i your head? boxten: jack WHAT
nice but a main needs 1 stat with 5 stars so.. its really creative and good besides that!
Jack should be added ngl but it might sometimes need to aquired a in-house carnival floor, it would be pretty nice.
Another concept i made also, character 2D version design is in my post page on my channel.
Introducing Caution, well it kinda sucks that it was heavily based on my last avatar, it still turned out nice when i added the riding moon.
Toon Caution:
-hearts: 3
-skill check: depends
-Movement speed: 2 (highly recommend with something to move faster)
-stamina: average
-stealth: 3
-extraction speed: 4
Rarity: main?
Abillity 1: Chemical dash
-Like Tisha's abillity, she use chemicals to dash around floors, but it only be used for herself since lore is she goes alone by herself.
Ability 2: Rider minder
-summons a cresent moon and rides on it, the moon is fast as pebble's running speed
Cost:
-3900 or 4200
-100% research on its twisted self
-complete all mastery on Tuna or Sunrisha
Voicelines (finishing machines):
-Not a single leak...
-*sigh*...
-this kinda piss me off now...
-GET AWAY WHEN IM BUSY!!!
When been brought:
Dandy: Caution? Be careful then, shes a litteral friendly hazard...
Friends: Tuna, Sunrisha (i will make it when im not busy)
Talking to other toons:
(She barely talks to them, even her friends)
Twisted Caution:
-Alerted: 110 cm
-Movement: 3
Abillity 1: (Disguised)
-As a shapeshifter herself, she can shift to a toon or a twisted by choice.
Abillity 2 (special): (Take over)
-When activaded, her half normal self took over the twisted and try to find the nearest machine to extract before twisted took over all again, kinda useless to pretty much alot of ppl i think.
-Possitive: Stealing items and dropping them
-Negative: ???
Seeing the picture concept, she had closed eyes: meaning the twisted cannot see at all, she uses her hand to sense the walls and sensing toons or use the footsteps and sounds from other twisteds. Also the opened eyes are fake eyes.
Man, an jack in the box one asides from boxten would be amazing! (Edit: i do have an oc too, its called gus, he's an energetic wendigo that loves to yap around animals, because of that, is friends with pebble, also, yes, he is an main)
I thought of one lil interaction between Boxten and Jack :3
Boxten : oh, hey jack!
Jack : h-hello dear friend
Boxten : you uh.. listening to any new music right now?
Jack : i-i suppose so..
Boxten : well thats.. good..
I used the fact that they are both boxes that play music for their small interaction, i love the content btw :]
instead of confusion 3 heres my custom effect idea: wind - forces players screen to spin around, the higher the level the faster it goes. this effect could be devastating for distracters as it can really mess them up, and instead, the longer hes outside of his box the higher the level the effect gets, it starts at 1 and increases by one level every 10 seconds (btw if you see this can you tell me your opinion)
Hey could i draw ur oc in my AU? he wont be in the AU's offical series but i just think he would be a good concept to make in my style.
@@Dave_Miller9 sure!
I finished drawing it it should be on my community post now
Ima make the lines he says in the elevator,
Jack: That floor was difficult
Teagan: not for me
Jack: well, probably easy for you since you can pay to get a heart back.
Teagan: well true..
Jack: SO SHUSH!
Next line:
Pebble: Arf!
Jack: Whoa, you just came unexpectedly...
Pebble: Woof!
Jack: yeah, your quick...
Next line:
Jack: Hey astro
Astro: Oh, hey..
Jack: Are you tired
Astro: Mostly, these floors never end...
Jack: I see...
Next line:
Brightney: Hey jack!
Jack: WOAH, that scared me
Brightney: Hah, your suck a scaredy cat!
Jack: You mean scaredy box?..
Brighgney: Hah!
Next line:
Jack: Boxten! your here!
Boxten: yeah...
Jack: are you doing well?
Boxten: Random question but im great.
Jack: Nice...
Next line:
Jack: Rodger could i be a part of your next case?
Rodger: Should i rip a parrt of you to test it?..
Jack: Im great... Never asked *chuckles* Byeee
Rodger: Yeah...
Next line:
Jack: Shelly?
Shelly: Yeah?
Jack: are you a fossil or a shell?
Shelly: You could say both
Jack: Do you love being like a fossil
Shelly: It feels normal but also special
Jack: I wish i was special...
Next line:
Jack: Flutter
Flutter: ...
Jack: :)
Next line:
Vee: Hey jack, how does it feel being in a box
Jack: Well it feels-
Vee: dont care
Jack: ...
Vee: *chuckles*
Jack: HOW DOES IT FEEL BEING A UGLY FEMALE BUT THOUGHT WAS A MALE TV!
Vee: Chill, j was joking.
Jack: Oh... Im so sorry!
Next line:
Scraps: Jack.
Jack: Yeah?
Scraps: ...
Jack: Whatever
Final line:
Jack: Gokb, do you need a hug?
Goob: Badly...
Jack: If you could, you can hug me!
BTW i just thought of jack not being allowed to be grabbed by goob and scarps cant grab him.
Wow I really love this idea! ❤
Jack: When will it end…
Poppy: HI JACK!
Jack: Hi poppy
Poppy: are you ok jack?
Jack: yes I am fine
I have my own concept! Muggtor I got him by cuphead because cuphead is a tv show and is a game he has 3 hearts 4 skillcheck 2 movement speed 3 stamina 1 stealth 4 extraction speed and he requires 1,250 Ichor but sadly he doesn’t have an ability Dandy’s response to buying muggtor- Oh I wouldn’t pick him if you wanted stealth. Because he has 1 stealth, and when he finishes a machine. He can say -Easy, Pretty cool machine, or teagan would be jealous. And he’s a rare btw but you repliers can make toon interactions now on to the twisted, he’s like twisted shrimpo but faster, his trinket is his straw but you guys can just decide what his straw does and he doesn’t say anything when he’s descending to the next floor, so yeah that’s it
Jack : "i feel less anxious when you're near me..."
Brightney : "Oh really?"
Finally a well thought and good dany world oc
Im eating good today
I love the fact that you use obby creator for the model aaa
(I’ve tried doing it with my oc but it’s too hard 4 me lol)
Jack rework:
Health:2,skill check 4 stars,
Movement speed,3 and a half stars.
Stamina:4.
Stealth:2,
Extraction speed:4.
Requirements:50% twisted sprout research. mastery on goob,and 5700 ichor.
Abilities reworks: ability 1 name: "sproing!" will shoot out a spring from under box and leap across the map to get away from twisteds,but he cant move for 2 seconds,has a cooldown of 120.
Ability 2 Name:"tilting side to side!" On floor 10,or if dandy spawns, he'll be able to complete machines 30% faster,and walk only the slightest faster then pebbles.
His twisted version:he is HUGE.almost being big enough up to the roof of the map, but he moves slower then twisted shrimpo,he has ichor covered legs poking out his corroded box,his arms are longer then goobs,as his hitbox is a little big,as he can swing his hand forward to claw at a player, they'll receive damage,and a bleed effect,that slowly takes a heart away,the bleeding effect can be stopped by a medkit or sprouts ability,his head is now halfly covered with ichor,and when in panic mode,he goes faster then pebbles,but, he has a really,REALLY low interest and vision,so just walk around a corner and he'll go away,and when hes close,he makes a gear winding sound,his trinket makes you have a fourth heart,but its inactive untill you use a bandaid,asit makes you 2% slower,you can fix this with speedy shoes or dog plush.
His twisted abilitys:he is able to hear footsteps,so dont run or walk around him.
Second ability for his twisted:hes able to throw gears that do 1 and a half hearts,but he cant spam it,he can only do this 7 times before running out.
Hope this helps.
Jack:hey brightney! Brightney: *turns around* huh where are you Jack:*hiding in box and pops out and scares her* HAHA
This is special because I’ve seen some jack in the boxes in the game
My oc: Chris the crystal he is a amethyst with dark purple overalls
His stats: health:3 skill check:3 movement speed:4 stamina:3 stealth:5 extension speed:2
Abilities: “jabs” he can stun twisted with cristal shards for 10 seconds main character twisted are stunned for 5 seconds
Twisted: he’s arms are released with ichor spikes with some stains here and there and red eyes he’s is uncomen like Finn he’s ability is to infect any object if he walks near them you can tell if it’s infected if you see purple spots on them if you pick up an item that’s infected you get stunds from 13 seconds if he’s attention span is like srhimpos he is a bit faster than goob
Trinket: the Cristal necklace it is a necklace with amethyst in the middle that is sapé of a heart with some purple decorative bids it can increase stealth by 12%
I hope you like him he is very cute
Also I forgot to include he’s cost 700 ichor and his requirements are surviving twisted goob and toodles 6 times
WOW, this is the best concept for toons ever! But I need to say something: His stealth is like, TOO LOW; as he HIDE into his box, Jack have more stealth, like 3 or 4 stars. The twisted abilities are very very very op, i think he should stay standing still somewhere yes, if the toons passed close to him in his range, he would scare them by applying the scared effect (Scared affects your movement, leaving you petrified for 1.5 seconds in place of the spot, in Jack's case, this effect affects one toon at a time) causing Jack to come out of his box and stretching his spring neck to the scared toon
That would be way too easy for a main character toon, you don’t understand that most people can just run from him too, even if he is fast, you can just use an item, his hiding ability makes up for his low stealth, it’s a main character twisted, so it should be hard to survive on the first try, he also just targets a machine, purely hurting macrushers
my main toon name: mack mack has teleportions and can pull player by teleporting mastery 100% research on twisted mack what twisted would he become his head is star i also forgot mack has 4 arms just like astro twisted mack has star eyes if he was not twisted also twisted mack can only move if someone is looking at him he massive just like twisted sprout and he can move if the panic timer starts also he wearung top hat and wearing a shirt and short shoe is black shirt has a tie on it colour is black his head is the other side is black has a star on it
Ima actually going to recommend this to the official group bcus we need this toon (but I think the twisted version should just target the lowest stealth toon cause astro is already filling the role of de-extract twisted)
some interaction bc why not!
Shrimpo: I HATE YOUR HAT
Jack: .. do i have to be offended?
Shrimpo: YOUR BOX IS UGLY
Jack: i dont really care..
Well technically, we already have a jack in the box (boxten's head) but this would be a cool concept!
I think jack should attract the twisted when popping out his box cause jack in the boxes have a jumpscare when popping out.
THIS OC CONCEPT IS RLY GOOD!!
why does ur avatar remind me of KinitoPET?
My Dandy's World Oc Is (Joe The Cop) Joe The Cop Arrest People When They Are Bad And This Her Ability Her Ability That Someone Is Near By The Wall And Then Pull Her Gun Up And Shot The Wall 2 Times And This Is This Her Health And Speed (Health 3 And Speed 175) And This Is Her As A Twisted So Yea That's My Oc If You Want To Make More Dandy's World Oc Like And Subscribe
great concept! hope its in dandys world, twisted jack however does seem a little bit strong or not balanced. Otherwise great idea!
My oc is literally the fox in my pfp
Name:isaiah
Ability:liftor's guide (he will fly by himself if no one targeted he throws a toon in the air and jumps then flys holding the toon)
Ability 2:speed in need:everytoon in the round will gain a 15%boost
Twisted:(flys around and if he sees u he will fly at u and slow ur speed for 7 seconds)
Trinket:isaiah's panic button:when seen by a twisted u will gain a boost of 25% for walk and run for 10 seconds
Interactions:
Poppy:hey isaiah
Isaiah: oh..hey poppy
Poppy: how do u feel now like how were with twisteds
Isaiah:i dont really worry much of twisteds
Boxten:h-hey isaiah
Isaiah:hey boxten how are things
Boxten:good
Isaiah:thats good
Shrimpo:ISAIAH!!!!
isaiah:god for crying out so loud WHAT!!
shrimpo:i hate ur tails
Isaiah:and? atleast i dont have low stats
Vee:hey isaiah
Isaiah:what do u want?
Vee:would u like to join my game show
Isaiah:if i got time i might
Vee:this is like the hundreth time now😐
Astro:hey isaiah
Isaiah:heya astro how r u
Astro: good so fa
Isaiah:if u need help or being chased by a twisted im always here
Pebble:ARF!!
isaiah:oh....sorry pebble im out of treats maybe when were out of here i cam get more treats
Pebble:arf
Shelly:hey isaiah are u free today
Isaiah:yeah why?
Shelly:well i wanted to ask u hmm how do u have 2 tails
Isaiah:thats a tricky question,ill answer that after ok?
Teagan:hey isaiah want to come to a tea party with poppy toodles and i
Isaiah:hmm ok
Teagan: ur favorite tea is green tea right
Isaiah:mhm
Tisha:hey isaiah how r u
Isaiah:good i cleaned my room today and my goodness it took 1 hour
Tisha:well atleast u keep up ur hygean
Flutter:..!
Isaiah:hey flutter u good
Flutter:(nods)
Isaiah:good to here😊
Toodles: hey isaiah
Isaiah:hey toodles
Toodles:can u fly with ur tails
Isaiah:well.....ofc
Bonus:
Toodle:hey isaiah
Isaiah:(not the rabies kid) h-hey toodle
Toodle:u can fly?
Isaiah:no shit sherlock
Shrimpo:ISAIAH!!!!
Isaiah:WHAT THE FUCK DO U WANT!!
Shrimpo:i hate ur tails
Isaiah:STFU ATLEAST IM NOT A ROACH
me as a D-side goob trying to distract the twisted boxton and wind twisted jack:
Jack kinda looks like hes from tower heroes (kinda like jester)
The twisted looks more like it
Astro- hey jack how you doing?
jack- good just working on my next act
astro- nice when it happening?
jack- maybe I might play as a prop in the show now
I love it! Its really creative
Imma do My Fanmade one and Ur one:3
Jack-“Bello?Uhh I don’t wanna Be here I want Astro..”
Bello-Is ok! Boxten is Here!
Jack-Good.
(Btw u Need Boxten so Then that Chat can Start and No Astro)
if jack’s twisted form was a parasite that only went in regular boxten’s box that would actually be cool
WAIT TWISTED JACK REMINDS ME OF THE PUPPET FROM FNAF THATS EPIK!
He seems like a good character!
Jax: oh, hello rodger
Jax: that last floor was rough
Rodger: please dont leave me hanging like that again
Jax: sorry…
My suggestions:
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Goob & Jack:
Jack: hey goob, have you ever noticed you’re really silly?
Goob: no, I’m more of a hugger, scraps usually calls me “Hug” since I prefer that!
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Shrimpo and Jack:
Shrimpo: YOU LOOK LIKE A CLOWN GO TO THE PARADE.
Jack: Shrimpo you do realise I could just eat you since your shrimp… right?…
Shrimpo: NO YOU CAN’T! IM RIGHT AND YOUR WRONG THERES NOTHING YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT!
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Jack & Camelia (my main)
Camelia: hi!.. I don’t think I’ve met you before?
Jack: no we haven’t! I’m Jack, nice to meet you!
Camelia: nice to meet you too!
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Scraps: Hey Jack!
Jack: yes scraps?
Scraps: wanna see something cool?
Jack: maybe after this floor!
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More suggestions if this comment gets a heart >:)
JACKS TWISTED ATTACK IS LITERALLY TROWING HIS JOKE BOXES TO TWISTEDS HE IS FASTER THAN BOXTEN BUT SLOWER THAN POPPY
Idea for interactions(:
Shrimpo:jack why do you always hide are you a scaredy cat
Jack:no..I just don’t want to be hurt
Shrimpo:stop lying):
ideas for twisted jack!
The face is fine but what if you make the box covered in ichor and his bells dripping ichor and when he chases you, he can pour out ichor from his box making the player get the slow III!
Reminds me of a… (aw crap what were those box toys called again?)
My oc is Luna so here's an interaction I think our characters would have :
Luna : HI JACK!
Jack : Agh! Oh... hi Luna..
Luna : Sorry i scared you! Your box is super cool!
Jack : Th-Thanks...
Luna : Maybe we could go draw after this!
Jack : Sure Luna...
the twisted concept is really weird. So, if a machine is being worked on/halfway, he will just go to it? (if the key on his box doesnt get handled) or something else? like, for example: you can just be safe if you add some little completion to a machine. Judging that he doesnt attack when he is in his lurking state and theres still machines that has completion (but not completed) like, atleast make him chase a player when he spots one?
Idea for Twisted Jack: Making any sound near him, like using items or running could kill u, kind of similar to Twisted Rodger
I like the concept
I actually made a character but i didnt really make it easy to escape its name was choc they are a cookie toon their abilities are pyromaniac and two faced
The ability pyromaniac makes choc make fire, the fire will stun all the twisteds but they have 5 times more attention span and 9 times more speed for 3 seconds they are stunned for 5 seconds and everyone can tell choc used pyromaniac because it makes a loud fire alarm sound and once the fire alarm sound is done everyone has to hide and after they are done with speed and attention span everything goes back to normal it's an active ability and its cool down for every floor is 100 second
Two faced is a passive ability
For every odd numbered floor they +50 stamina and every even numbered floor they gain -1 star in stealth
Their friends are: Razzle and Dazzle Brighteny and pebble
What Dandy says when you buy Choc he says: WHY WOULD YOU CHOOSE CHOC!?
Chocs stats:
Health: ❤❤
Skill check: ⭐⭐⭐
Movement speed: ⭐⭐⭐
Stamina: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Stealth: ⭐⭐⭐
Extraction speed: ⭐⭐⭐
Cost:
1250 ICHOR
75% RESEARCH IN RAZZLE AND DAZZLE
Twisted choco is a nightmare he has 2 abilities
Ability 1: CHOMP. 1/30 Chance of 2 damage
Ability 2: MIX UP. It is the ability to make up is down left is right right is left and down is up (counts on EVERY DEVICE in the roun) it also give confusion 3 , Slowness 1 and Noise 3 (noise is my fanmade effect it makes them lose 2 stealth) and it lasts 5 seconds.
Once you get 100 research on Choco you get the mask trinket it gives you a 75% chance of all twisted not noticing you.
They are a main character
After extracting machine:
I hope this next floor isnt as miserable as me..
Well i guess that was fun hehe
IM SO HAPPY
I wish i never had to do this again..
Uhh i guess this was.. risky...?
Eh i like being risky.
Also choco has a smile with sad eyes and they have a shirt with a half a happy face and half a sad face and paint splattered pants with fire colored shoes.
Thats all and i hope you like it :)
One problem: Boxten is super easy to get 100% resherch and a lot of people can get to 5500 Ichor fast. So if they don’t have a different main they will be jack. Please add something like 50% resherch on Astro!
I have a idea for him: to activate Twisted Jack, you must run through his box, just like Twisted R&D, so you will wake him up. Since ppl wont turn his key cause they know its not a item.
Vee: it’s t’s a Jack-in-the-Box jack: shut up vee
Boxten: How are you doing Jack?
Jack: Your invited to my birthday party.
Boxten: ..Oh! I’ll be there as soon as we get out of here.
Yeah I think Jack would be a good addition to dandy's world
My main oc is claymore
Claymore looks like a unfinished clay humanoid and he acts like a soldier even though he uses NERF Guns
Ability one: blaster: an ability that lets you shoot a twisted to stun it but he only has 10 shots during the entire run (p.s. he has a 2% chance that when he shoots a weak twisted (not twisted dandy, vee, or shelly) he can permanently disable that twisted for the level
Ability 2: none
Stats:
health: 3
Skill check:1
Movement: 3
Stamina:4
Stealth: 1
Extraction: 1
He can be obtained if you get 100% research on twisted dandy
Twisted claymore: he is stationary but acts like a sniper that can shoot you if you see him but his attack is a slow charging blast that can be indicated by a red line pointimg at you, you can reset his shot charge by going out of his sights
Thats it for my new attacker toon idea!
This is an amazing concept and if it were to be an actual toon in the game it would be my main🤩
teagan: oh jack my poor friend... you've been looking down lately...
jack: its just been so- eh...
teagan: i know...
jack: thanks for understanding..
teagan: im always here for you when you need it!
omg is that a capsule without a tape around it 💖
ik he isn't close friends with teagan but like... I LIKE TEAGAN CONVERSATIONS
boxten: Hey jack!
jack: oh hi boxten
boxten: are you ok?
jack: just scared
boxten- heya pal! how are you doing today?
jack- hi boxten... im fine...
boxten- tell me whats wrong
jack- nope! not happening!
Shrimpo: BOO!
Jack: AAAAAAAA
Shrimpo: HAHAHAHAHAHAH
Jack: Not cool shrimpo.
Amazing character concept! I really liked it and is pretty good the price but what is the chance of him appearing on a floor? and if his restricted to a certain floor and above?
Hey, wanted to let you know that main character toons have to have at least 1 five star stat for it to be classified as a main? (From the wiki)
@@MochaPawZ44 hmm yeah, but sprout is probably going to have 5 stars on stamina. but if that isn't the case, I would change him to have maxed on stamina.
jack: winds up
Toodles: AHHH
Jack: sorry about that toodles
Toodles: please never do that again
I have an idea of an interaction for my oc (lola the lollipop)
Lola:"wow jack,your great at hiding..”
Jack:”and your good at crafting!”
Lola:"thank you..”
Jack:"no problem!”