SAMPUNG UTOS NG PAGSUSULAT NG KWENTO | 10 Commandments of Writing a Story (Writing Tips #5)
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 19 ต.ค. 2024
- Sampung Utos ng Pagsusulat
Clues:
#1 - "The Gravest Sin of All"/ Pinakamalalang kasalanan huwag na huwag gagawin
#2 - I'm challenging you
#3 - One of the golden writing advice
#4 - Pinakapasakit pero worth it
#5 - Lahat tayo dapat meron nito
#6 - Huwag kasing sumunod sa uso
#7 - Make sure may reason
#8 - Number one enemy
#9 - Maraming matatamaan dito for sure lol
#10 - Take this seriously
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Can I ask Can you write A oneshot story?
Ate paano PO mag latag NG thrill sa isang story doon PO kasi ako talagang nahihirapan
Pwede magpatulong? May gagawin sana akong kwento
Attendance tayo, guys!
*Demistics say present*
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Present
Present
Ate Demi: 8th commandment "Thou shall focus and avoid distractions".
Me: aray
Ate Demi: 9th commandment, "Thou shall write and finish what you started before beginning a new story.
Me: *died*
lol
i feel u HAHAHAHAHA
I feel you (2)HAHAHA
Sapul na sapul ako Hahahahahahaha
Grabe ang sakit ng tama sakin
Hello po ate demi pede favor pede magpaturo kung paano maggawa ng story
10 Commandments of writing
1. Thou shall not plagiarize
2. Thou shall kill the cliches,be brave to be different
3. Thou shall not stop reading
4. Thou shall edit your work
5. Thou shall have a goal
6. Thou shall write what you love
7. Thou shall not kill the characters needlessly
8. Thou shall focus, avoid distractions
9. Thou shall write and finish what you started before beginning a new story
10. Thou shall be professional
Sinulat ko pa yan sa notebook ko HAAHAHAHA
Ay hala naka 74 akong likes hahahah
@@akotosinatoynamahalnamahal6633 yung pinakalive na love nilang character no? Hahaha
Deserve nito ng heart ni Ate Demi. Yass!
@@misspetmalu501 yhieee
Tinamaan talaga ako sa 8 at 9
Relate naman po doon sa after a months, mapapasabi ka na lang ng “ay, sinulat ko ‘to?” HAHAHAHA 😂
Same tayu hahahahh
Ikr. Minsan na s-shock ako kung saan ko nakuha yung idea na yun HAHAHAH
Haha relate much
"Don't Plagiarize!"
True! But also keep in mind that 'nothings original.'
Dont stress yourself out too much. We can't avoid similarities. As long as were confident that we are the AUTHOR of the story, we can publicly post or publish it.
Dontchawori!
Ate Demi:"Andito na naman ang iyong paboritong writer."
Me: Luh pano mo nahulaan yun?
She can see the future. Haha
I can see the future. Choz. XD
@@TalesofDemi hahaha
When ate Demi said "walang mali kung ang goal mo ay maging sikat." It touch my heart. Kase parang nakakuha ako ng support. Thank you po.
Proud for being part of Demistics!
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"Kung ayaw mong maging published author, edi wag mo na lang i-edit." HAHAHAHAAA
"Wag papatay ng character dahil trip mo lang" tinamaan si kuya sekaryo dun pati baboy pinatay🙄🤣
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Totoo yung sa editing AHAHA! Lols, natatawa na lang ako sa sinulat ko almost 3 years ago? I'm actually thankful na may mga nagbasa noon AHAHA
Ako lang ba 'yong pinaka-fave part ang editing? BWAHAHA.
Ang Dami kung tawa sa EDITING na part hahaha nabitawan ko tuloy ang Plato na hinihugasan HAHAH, totoo nga yunh editing relate😭😸🖤🖤🖤
2 years ago I started writing the first 8 chapters of my story, in that time super proud ako sa sarili ko dahil finally hindi na lang pang prologue at chapter 1 ang inabot. Then, dahil sa busy sa school, I decided to stop.
This quarantine, since wala namang ginagawa , finally natapos ko na ang story na matagal ko nang ninanais. Pero ang experience ko sa editing phase ay nakakastress at nakakatuwa, especially sa first 8 chapters na sinulat ko. Ang awkward ng mga pinagsasasabi ko roon!!😄😄In the end iniba ko lahat.
SKL, dahil natatawa talaga ako sa experience kong iyon.
What title?
"Thou shall edit your work."
Madugo talaga sa madugo 😂
Mula sa kalakihan hanggang kaliit-liitan gagalawin 😂
Developmental, line, copy, proofreading 😂😂😂
May apo na eyebags ko di pa ako tapos mag-edit 😂😂😂
Same haha
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HAHAHA same, ang funny nung may apo na yung eyebags 😂
Legit HAHAHAHHAHAH
Ate Demi: "Thou shall write and finish what you started before beginning a new story."
Me: "I considered myself as one of them actually. Two stories ongoing and one draft. HAHA."
2 on going tas 8 drafts shuta
Yes Tama, dahil kapag magsusulat ka ng story na hindi mo naman gusto, merong chance na mawawalan ka ng gana na ipagpatuloy ang pagsulat sa nobela nayun.
"Isulat mo kung ano yung mahal mo, kahit 'di ka mahal isulat mo."~ dito ako tinamaan😃👈
Ate Demi: "Thou shall not kill the characters needlessly"
Me: So, considered po ba ang pagpatay ng character sa isang crime scene? HAHA
Jenna Moreci ng Pinas! ❤️❤️❤️
Don't be a copy. Be a trendsetter instead. Padayon, manunulat! ❤️
BAT PARANG MAS GUSTO KO MALAMAN SKIN CARE NI ATE DEMI, CHARROT! THIS IS A VERY BIG HELP, ESPECIALLY SA MGA BEGINNERS HIHI
Whoahh,I've read your stories in wattpaaad!
..distraction at hanggang sa simula hindi na tinatapos ang story..the best enemy of mine😅
Yung binabasa kong author, madaming on-goings pero lahat natatapos. Kahit matagal pero natatapos! Sana all ❤❤
Iyong sa editing talaga. Same ate, nakakastress nga hahaha
nagka-goosebumps ako sa 7th commandment (thou shall not kill the characters needlessly). naalala ko ang salamisim.
Nung sa pumapatay na may pumasok sa isip ko eh! Sya tlg ehh!
Ate demi: Kung hindi mo mahal, iwanan mo.
Yess tama tama! HAHAHAHA kapag di mo na mahal, iwanan mo na lang kesa yung magchicheat ka pa.
Marami na akong ideas HAHAHAHHAHA Ewan ko pero palaging maabot yung panibagong ideas
Pag si ate demi ang teacher ko!! Hindi ako aantukin, gising akooo buonggg period!!
Atee, pano po ba gumaw ng outline??
Thank you sa mga advice ate demi kahit di ako writer 😂 malay mo maisipan ko rin mag sulat. char hahahaha
Unang beses lang ako nanood ng video ni ate demi pero nawili talaga ko manood, halos di nako makagawa ng story dahil sa video's niya HAHAHAHA
3rd commandment
unang una po sa lahat wala po talaga akong gusto di ko gi nusto na maging writer ako peru nung sumali ako sa isang group page sa fb ng spoken word poetry basa lang ako ng basa hanggang sa umabot sa point na bakit di nalang ako nag sulat in 1st commnandment di naman as in nilabag ko kasi kumuha lang naman ako ng idea para maka start ako and para sakin nagsimula ang lahat sa pagbabasa
thank you
i hope mapansin mo
HAHHAHA Ate Demi! Ang cute niyo dun sa part na "HALA ganto ung uso eto yung isusulat ko" HAHHAHA yung hala talaga tapos may pa hands gesture ang cutee
Tinamaan ako pero thank you po!❤️ Dami nanaman pong natutunan.✨ Inspiration narin po kita sa pagsusulat huhu.
You're welcome!
Because of you ate Demi parang mas na inspire pa talaga akong magsulat😘😍
Tama nga po idol, nakakatamad talaga magsulat.
Ofcourse!! TPT it is. Very mind blowing story hahahaha. Grabe, nung binasa ko to hindi ko tinigilan kasi hindi sya predictable!
I really love your contents
Gusto kopo kasing matuto Ng paggawa Kaya manood muna po ako Ng paano gumawa at Kung anong role po thankful po ako dahail napanood ko din po ito
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Nag babalik SI Me 2024🎉 Tama napo ate Demi😭 tagos na tagos sakin huhuhu
Like agad pagkaview kahit 'di pa napapanuod, hahaha! Basta si Ate Demi.
Thank youu po ate demiii! Dami ko nanaman pong natutunan sayo ♥
Hindi ko alam kung ako lang ba pero na experience nyo na rin bang magsulat ng sad story tapos kapag nakita mo na yung reaction ng readers mapapatanong ka nalang
"Bakit sila naiiyak?". " sinukat ko ba talaga to?". "Luh bat nila nagustuhan" haha
Minsan ko na pinagdudahan iyon kakayanan ko sa pagsusulat pero dahil sa video na ito,nabubuhayan ako ng loob.Salamat po Author...
You're welcome! Good luck sa writing journey. :)
Maraming salamat sa mga words of wisdom mo miss demi! Lovelots! 💕
Nakaka inspired naman kayo ❤ pwede kaya Ako mag simu mag sulat
Ang ganda ng boses mo ate yung malumanay lang talagang makikinig ka.
Hi ate Demi! Nagsusulat ako ng story sa wattpad and luckily, wala naman akong nilabag sa sampung utos. Yey!
I really love your vlogs ate demi,nakakamotivate♥️
Thanks ate Demi for this, sapol na sapol Ako
I actually don't read her story, but now? I'm reading it, she's worth to stan🖐🏻😭
Hi ate! I'm a writer from wattpad. Undiscovered po ako. Dami ko pong natutunan sa inyo. I love you po! Thank you for all your tips. I learned so much🖤
natamaan ako sa rule #9 HAHAHAHHA, nahihirapan tuloy ako icontinue yung first story ko, mas focus ako sa 2nd ko since mas nakaisip ako ng mga depressing events sa 2nd story ko huhj
Ka inggitttt... Dami niyang booksss.
muntik na akong tamaan sa pagpatay ng characters HAHAAHHAHA. buti nalang may reason pagpapatay ko sa isang caharacter ko.
pwede naman pong habang nasa chapter pa lang, ayusin na agad o kaya ay iproofread na. para sa next chapter ay ok na ang previous chapter para less editing.
Can't wait to read her books ❤
Thou shall edit your work...
I agree, Mahirap at para sa akin...Nakakatamad! Jusko!
Thank you for this, Ate Demi! It'll surely help me a lot since I'm an aspiring writer po and currently writing my story ❤️
Best of luck!
Salamat sa ideas very helpful siya
sapul na sapul sa number 9, gosh. ang sarap magpalamon sa lupa.
Hahaha natamaan talaga ako dito pero at the same time very helpful 'tong vlog na'to so thankyou po for making this video it inspired me hehe
As an aspiring writer, this is so relatable af. Thank you ate demii for this vlog take care po
Lt ung kung ano maimagine mo ayun isusulat mo pero pag dating sa pag tataype na ng mga line sa story natatamad kana sa totoo lang ayan ung unang experience kosa pagsusulat tapos ngayon napagtanto kosa sarili kona hanggang reader nlang tlga ako pero pilit gawa ako ng story🤦🏻♀️😌
Hello po! Naka-relate po ako sa 6, dahil hindi ko po natapos ang story ko dahil nakadepende po ako sa plots ng ibang authors. So as of now, I already done my story that i LOVE. Going through the second story!
As a spiring writer natatawa ako sa mga ginawa ko kailangan ko nang ayusin Ang sarili ko hahaha
Dami kong natutunan Sa t'wing pinapanuod ko ang mga videos mo, ate. Labyuu po.
Thank you ate Demiii!! Keep writing and more stories to come!! Love you.
Editing is life! 😍😍
been watching all your vlog's
sinapak ako bigla nung mga huli ah hahaha lalo na yung tamad tapos tambak ng ibat ibang stories HAHAHAHAHA
Eyyy ahmmm...Ate? Ahh nope! Para ka pang mas bata sakin huhuhu but ok let's move on....OK I'll call you AnakNiRiza na lang. Anaknirizal....Thank you po sa video na ito. Ang dami ko talagang natutunan and actually, habang nanunuod ako ng video nato, I am taking down notes. Ayokong makalimutan to because I really find it very useful lalo na at nagsisimula nakong magsulat sa watty para ishare ang first story na naisip ko. So, thanks for all the lessons I got from watching your videos. Keep it up Anaknirizal, I'm your fan:)
8:51 hahaha mapanakit ate demi🤣 btw thanks a lot ate dems sa mga sinabi mo marami ako natutunan❤🖤❤
hahaha you're welcome!
Matagal na ako naghahanap ng ganitonf tutorial kasi narrator ako, tips po sana sa pag nanarration, like love story or insperational story...
10 commandments of reading
10 commandments of writing
Next:
10 commandments of book signing haha
Haha! Pwede!
Hmmmm 🤔🤔🤔
10 commandments of online book publishing HAHAHAHAHA
Salamat po sa lahat ng utos. 😘😘
Pa request nga po kung paano ang tamang pag pili ng accurate words para sa pagsusulat
Hahahahaha "My God sinulat ko to?" Yan yun reaksyon ko ate dem nong nakita ko yung old works ko nong 13 yrs old pa ako HAHAHAHA
naka relate ako sa sinabi ni Ate Demi na magki cringe ka talaga sa sinulat mo after ilang months or years mo na siyang natapos tapos babasahin mo uli 🤣
I had read your story "The Peculiar's Tale" years ago. Sarap lang balikan ng feeling! :) inspired na ko magsulat. Thanks sa advices!
Thank you! Good luck sa pagsusulat! :)
8th
Napakahirap. Huhu there's so many distractions for me.
Ily atee demiii,proud Demystic hereee
Demistic spotted!
‘Thou shall edit your work’ Natamaan talaga ako dito jusmiyo hahahahaha. Nakakatamad kasi iedit🤣
Awit xD
SALAMAT ATE PABORITO TALAGA KITAAAAAA 😄🧡
Hehe sweeet.
Waahhh atee demi ouch! natatamaan ako sa 8 na utos eh... Hehe!
Week palang ako nag try try na mag susulat para naman ako matakot
noted ate demi.❤️
Sakit naman ng number 8 Ate Demi hahahaha. Ang tamad ko po e.
Watching this habang nakapatong sa peculiar's tale book yung phone ko hehehe. Thankyou po. Dami kong natutunan. Reality hurts talaga hahaha.
"Hala trending yung magt-travel sa past" natamaan ako HAHAHAH, i love fantasy kaya fantasy ginagawa ko❤
Hahaha pero karamihan ng fantasy na travel stories na nakikita ko mga inspired stories sa I Love You since 1892. I mean realtalk lang.
@@lahasainaypayaso3386 sml? CHAROT PEACE
8:50 “Kapag hindi mo mahal, iwanan mo.” HAHAHAHA
I miss you, Ate, Hope to see you soon again, Thanks for making this video. I've learned a lot and entertained at the same time. 😘❤️🙏
You're welcome and I hope to see you all soon! :)
Isa talaga yung series ng TPT sa pinaka unique para sakin!!! Mula sa concept, plot, hanggang sa writing style niyo ate demi❤ Ang daming ibang story na nagaya ng iba yung concept pero wala pa akong nakikitang story na kapareho ng feels ng TPT 🥺💕
THANK YOU!!!
@@TalesofDemi omg nireplyan ako ng favorite author ko huhu 😍😍😍❤
Argghhh bakit sobrang cute ng smile mooooooo :
Thank you for making this video ate Demi😘ellabyouu💖
You're welcome! :)
May Ibat iba po bang klasing author Na nagsusulat ng story Na sariling pangalan nila ginagamit o nakadinfende lg po sa author
I love Demiiiiiiiiii❤️