Usually CreepyPastas follow a simple outline- but this story completely broke that stereotype. Initially I thought this would be some generic ghost story with a crappy twist- but this exceeded all expectations. It had extreme depth and I'm not even sure if I really understand it all. Amazing narration- you really set an atmosphere which allowed me to get immersed into this amazing story. If this was extended into a short story or novel I would buy it. Awesome job!
CREEEEPS, bro first of all fantastic narration. Sooo much time probably went into this. But the story was amazing, every time little brother would start to describe the place of torment he was in, I would get chills (doesn't help my imagination is already stupid powerful) but wonderfully written. Kudos!!
+CreepsMcPasta sick vid man, I just got a new mic! so I will be trying again to do these, are you gona do another video of fan entries for new creepy peeps?
This creepypasta really struck a nerve with me good lord... I couldnt stop fidgeting whenever Dennis would describe the place he is going to. So unnerving...
That moment when your listening to a creepypasta and you hear a bang on your door so you get scared and hope it's your pet. BANG Me: I hope that was the fish
The story in this one is nice, I think I figured it out. That dream at the end seemed identical to that of Cain and Abel. So I think that's exactly what it was, actually Cain and Abel. Abel, after being killed by Cain, formed the core of "the center". (Cain never joined the center, because he is unable to die) Dennis has now become one with the center. Once it (or those other mini centers people were forming) grows large enough, it will invade the realm of the living and turn it into an equally bleak hellscape. Making everyone who is alive join the center, and share Abels woes.
Very freaky, it plays on that and also the concept that everything after life is just pain and misery, there's a lot of stories that do that, though this might the best
That...that was beyond special. The amount if thought put into creating this story was amazing. The world itself the special exceptions, the surreality, the longing to stop listening but the natural burning curiosity that held us. This was by far one of the best creepypastas i have ever heard. Seriously special.
Fuck me, just imagine if the after life was this fucked up. If I were that kid I wouldn't know how to continue living knowing very well that the afterlife is no good either
I was happily enjoying this until I discovered that the protagonists name is my own. I swear it felt I had been kicked in gut. It was only made worse because I was supposed to be born a twin and my brother died in the womb. I'm not ok. I'm very not ok.
Every once in a while, I come back and listen to this pasta specifically because it fills me with a very specific terror I can't get from anything else. Being a suicidal depressive, I've always wondered if death is worse than life, and what comes after it. I never want to find out, but no matter what option I take, or what death I ever experience, I don't get a choice.
I hope you're doing ok all these years later. I come back to listen for the exact same reason; a story of dread and misery bringing comfort to strangers, how weird.
It's quite symbolic on what being bitter to the very end does to someone, the whole reason he goes into this realm is because he takes anger and bitterness to the grave.
I listen to a lot of these scary stories. They're entertaining and enjoyable, but they never scare me. This one, however, did. I have never been so frightened and disturbed by a piece of fiction before. To the writer and the narrator, good job.
The reason this creepypasta is so scary is because the writer used something we just can't check for ourselves, and it's going to happen one way or another. It doesn't matter if you believe in heaven, hell, reincarnation or whatever else. Yes there have been people and stories claiming that they have been to heaven or hell or have been reincarnated but we still aren't a 100% sure what happens when we die. The writer ( probably ) used the unknown of death and our fear of death to write this and since it is supposed to be a creepypasta the 'afterlife' experience Dennis had was terrifying. The story still creeped me out tho 😨😨😨 But good reading 👍👍👍
Having lost my mother to cancer, the first half of this story really hit me. The rest of it cleared my top ten. This is easily one of the best creepypastas I've ever heard
Shit these things are scariest of all. No cheap gore or monsters, well a bit, but the fear comes mostly from praying on the unknown and a universal fear, death. Brilliant.
This is now one of my favourite creepy pastas ever it wasn't just what you would call scary It's terrifying Not because of the story it's self But because for all we know this does happen when we die and what's even scarier We will find out one day We will find out out one horrible Day
Me: He's dead. He can't talk... >·> Story: Whoo-hoo-hoo! Look who knows so much! It just so happens that our character here is only MOSTLY dead. There's a big difference between mostly dead and all dead!
+Sandy Rivera "To me" The narrator clearly stated that the doctors said that the blood stopped circulating and his heart stopped. They then stated that his body temperature was way the below the current level for someone to even be alive. He was dead, his conscious in another place but somehow being able to connect to his lifeless body. One being conscious deems them to being alive.
I was making a Princess Bride reference. In the film, everyone was very sure a character was dead, but it was later found out that he was MOSTLY dead. To prove it, a character asked him what was the reason of living, and the mostly dead person answered,"True love." I was making a connection to how this character in this story spoke even though he's dead. Didn't mean to get you worked up, or anything. :/
+Keltron ZX Its the only song that makes me sad, and then I remember Xion's end in Kingdom Hearts 358/2. God, did I almost cry at that part. I enjoyed that game, I just wished they wouldve put the game in Kingdom Hearts 1.5. Theyre putting a playable Dream Drop Distance in 2.8, so.
This Is definitely one of my favorite creepypasta of yours. It was stuck in my head for days when I first listened to it years ago. And here I am once again listening to it.
I can hear the Kindgom Hearts loading screen song in the background and nostalgia hit me. I can definitely say that this channel has improved so much since this recoding in audio quality and narration. His inflection is more theatrical now.
Not so much the cancer that concerns me as much as the eternal hellscape everyone apparently goes to when they die no matter how good of a person they were or how young to suffer unimaginably forever and ever.
+Thomas Meeks I'm VERY picky when it comes to listening to these things. Although, I need to find a new person. I have listened to every one of Creeps' and MCP's.
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I really hate to admit this; but thise sounds eerily similar to a bad trip I had on some high extract salvia. It was like I knew I had been given a behind the scenes glimpse at the true nature of the universe. I had envisioned an entity which I referred to as a "speckle". It was the center of this spiral. The spiral represented me and you and everyone and everything else in the universe. And this spiral all revolved around this speckle which was in the center. I had this deep sick feeling that I was a pawn. And everything that I and everyone else in the universe had stood for and accomplished was the work and for the satisfaction of this entity in the center. It had no empathy. It was hollow. It wasn't what I would consider evil. But it was evil in a different way. A way that just tarnished everything positive in the world into something grey. I cannot fully describe the magnitude of this feeling with the petty word "meaningless" which i received from this. I'll never forget it. That was the last time I did drugs.
You're a pawn as long as you follow that 'speck'. Yes, it could've been god-like, but it depends more on us then we do on it. If we behave like pawns we're not proving ourselves. Wow, that really stretched my brain
+The Milkman Dude, I feel you! Salvia fucked my whole world in half a few years ago... Everyone thinks it's all fun and games until they break through. I was actually intending to have a breakthrough experience this time because I never had before on Salvia and I'd read a lot about it. Most people said it was absolutely terrible but I still had to try it for myself. I'd done DMT a few times and mushrooms and LSD countless times but this was SO much more sinister than anything I've ever experienced. It was so crazy how fast the real world just dissolved away and by the time I exhaled, I didn't even know what the fuck was happening, I'd completely forgotten I'd done anything. This happens on DMT too but it's not anywhere near as terrifying. I swear, terror is just an actual effect of Salvia. It was so, utterly awful, that I can not address the notion that even death could be as terrible. I've heard a lot of people compare potent psychedelic drugs like Salvia and DMT to a sort of, "death and rebirth" but this was on a whole other level. In that time, neither "death", nor "rebirth" existed at all. There was no time, no space and I was, for the rest of eternity, nothing, in an endless, near empty void, tumbling. I say "near empty" because, like some sort of sadistic, twisted punishment, even though my body was gone, my conscious awareness still remained. I knew I would be left there, with no escape and the awareness to suffer in it, forever... I kept thinking, "everything had to end at some point... This is that point. The point where existence itself just ends." Fuck, it was so real... When I finally came down and realized what was going on, I'd never been so happy in my entire life. I had my roommate watching over me and he said he was almost ready to call an ambulance because I was screaming and completely unresponsive. I "woke up" to him shaking me and telling me to snap out of it and I just gave him the biggest hug I've ever given anyone, before or since. I guess I scared him almost as bad as I scared myself cause he thought I'd completely snapped and wasn't coming back... I definitely don't regret the experience (in the same way that I don't believe anyone should regret ANY psychedelic experience. I feel you learn much more about yourself through bad trips than good) but it was easily one of the most shattering and sobering experiences I've ever had. It was ALL I could think of for weeks. It really gave me a new outlook on life. Not necessarily a good or bad outlook, just a new one. A completely different perspective on life, death, and the perception of both. Beforehand, I always held the bleak and somber theory that, after death and before birth are one-and-the-same. Salvia; however, offered to me, a new interpretation as to what the afterlife may be like and I really, truly hope I had it right the first time... Sorry for the long post. Even this, just barely scratches the surface of the experience. TL;DR Fuck Salvia. There's a reason it's legal...
moonbeameee 333 ....i thought it was a long n shitty story. i hv yet to hear a "creepypasta" that makes me feel anything ...( other than dissapointed). i want a really horrifying one.....just one!
This story is pretty awesome and your narration goes perfect with it. So descriptive and you can just see what they're explaining. Probably one of my favorites thus far.
My grandmother lost her life almost two years ago, but when I last saw her, she said something, something that I have been trying to explain myself for all this time, she said 'I can't stop walking, it's trying to get meeeeee........' Then she passed away and I just couldn't stop softly sobbing.
Why would it be purgatory? The kid died at 10 from cancer. What could he have possibly done to end up in Purgatory? It actually reads like Dante Alighieri's Inferno that Botticelli made a picture of and that's where the modern idea of hell comes from. But instead of hell he's travelling through the 9 concentric circles of heaven. That's why he has been walking for years in just hours.
By far my favorite creepypasta reader and my favorite creepypasta. This was done so well ❤️ I don't even care about how late this comment is. Every time Dennis's voice rasped while talking about the center's dark eyes chills ran down my spine.
I think that his brother was in purgatory. Purgatory is by some accounts supposed to be incredibly trying and painful, because you're working off your sins before you can go to heaven. What sins could a ten year old boy have? Who knows, maybe it wasn't a religious family. Or maybe only saints, martyrs, and very young children get to get immediate access. A better thought than 'what comes after is worse than all we have.'
This is literally the most scariest and morbid creepypasta I've ever seen. I can safely say I'm scared of dying now and I don't get scared easily but you narrated this very well. Keep up the good work hun. 😂😂😭❤
So the first one was Abel, or some similar being, I'm guessing…But it's a sad idea that only the bad and hate in you gets to survive when you die. Where does the good go? It must go somewhere…
Nahhhh... It is MCR ones. Cancer Welcome to the black parade Helena The Ghost Of You And all that The music videos and lyrics remind me of this story. Well, now i am gonna go watch more MCR, FOB, AND TOP NOW JUST TO FORGET THAT. AND SOME PIZZA TOO. I AM NOW GONNA EAT PIZZA FOR BREAKFAST. BYE . OH AND BTW I LOVE YOUR PROFILE PIC
This is my all time favorite story on this channel and I remember when it first came out. I have come back to this channel 3 years later and I'm happy to be back
LoveCraft would be proud. This is pure, exquisite, cosmic horror. This one really is groundbreaking in a lot of ways. The imagery is vivid and terrifying. The tone is a sense of overwhelming dread. It starts out bleak, and continues to get progressively worse until the end. You can practically feel the all-consuming grey of the afterlife. And what's more, most horror stories inspire fear and dread through the unknown. Keeping readers in the dark, allowing their minds to fill in the gaps left by the writer. However, in this story, the horror comes from what's known. The more that's known, the more horrifying the story becomes. It also very effectively plays on the universal fear of mortality, and the inevitability of death. The concept of suddenly having to live with the information that, no matter what you believe, or how you live your life, you're doomed to walk the same grey, unending hell when you die. Damned to suffer a fate worse than anything you could have ever imagined, and there's nothing you can do to avoid it. This story blends a lot of powerful elements of horror without pulling any punches. Without doing anything cheap tedious, or overdone. Even when you think the worst is over, it still has one hideous revelation left to offer. I can't think of a single thing I would change about it. Absolute 10/10.
Oh, wow! I got a shock when i saw how long it was. I loved every single bit of it. It was SO LONG! From where did you find the time to narrate it? Omg, I love you Creeps! It was so damn long, but you still did it. And we love you for that! And we listened to ALL of it! Never stop doing what you do, Creeps! Kisses!
KINGDOM HEARTS MENU SONG IN THE BACKGROUND. sorry.. i am just so touched when i hear the beautiful piano.. such sweet childhood memories.... thank you for including this tiny little gem, creeps. (p.s.) i know this video is old, i just rewatch older videos when creeps doesnt upload.
"If your brother stops talking for 5 seconds, we may lose connection."
*Spends 5 minutes talking about astronauts and Houston.*
Made my day xD
I thought the same thing LMFAO
IKR I was like wtf dude
I was wondering if I was the only one to notice that plot hole. ..
Yea really
Usually CreepyPastas follow a simple outline- but this story completely broke that stereotype. Initially I thought this would be some generic ghost story with a crappy twist- but this exceeded all expectations. It had extreme depth and I'm not even sure if I really understand it all. Amazing narration- you really set an atmosphere which allowed me to get immersed into this amazing story. If this was extended into a short story or novel I would buy it. Awesome job!
That's kind of what creeps does
It was really good honestly
Really, really!! Couldn't listen to it all!! Wish he went in the gray soon as!! 😴😴😴
"Harry... you're a wizard."
No, it's *You're a wizard Harry*
xD
+Minecraft _Luver19 NO ITS. Your a hizard warry wait those aren't the lines damn it
Thegaming Kidd OMG... *Your a wizard Thegaming Kidd*
Happy Matt OMG LMAOOOO
anime is a sin "you're a blizzard and a god damn good one"
CREEEEPS, bro first of all fantastic narration. Sooo much time probably went into this. But the story was amazing, every time little brother would start to describe the place of torment he was in, I would get chills (doesn't help my imagination is already stupid powerful) but wonderfully written. Kudos!!
+CoryxKenshin This video was a mission to do! I'm glad you liked it :DD
+CreepsMcPasta thank you for all the amazing creepy stories
+CreepsMcPasta who wrote this? very good one Best Creepy Pasta narrator hands down!
+CoryxKenshin is your imaginations power over 8000?
+CreepsMcPasta sick vid man, I just got a new mic! so I will be trying again to do these, are you gona do another video of fan entries for new creepy peeps?
Twist ending! Dennis opens his eyes, looks Harry in the face, smiles, and says, "JUST A PRANK BRO!".
SniperSkunk and all the technicians and the parents laugh because everyone was in on it
Ahahahhahahah
Hahahaha that reminds me of the movie Dumb and Dumber
No...you have to say it in filthy Frank's voice...Its jest a praynk bro.
I dont think I did that right...
"Don't die"....How am I suppose to keep that promise?
Will power, five hour energy, and Satan
It's a statement by the writer that perfectly implies that what Dennis witnessed surpassed all forms of agony. You get it, don't you
ever see shelter
You can't . That's the point.
When he said don't die it gave me serious chills
I keep forgetting this is fake and have to remind myself that it's just a story at the end of every narration
Most of them are...most of them 👹
Dude yeah it is
this is so me
Matty Savage it's sad though
Matty Savage WHAT?! THANK YOU JESUS!! OML PHEW
This creepypasta really struck a nerve with me good lord... I couldnt stop fidgeting whenever Dennis would describe the place he is going to. So unnerving...
You too huh?
That moment when your listening to a creepypasta and you hear a bang on your door so you get scared and hope it's your pet.
BANG
Me: I hope that was the fish
XD u funny
Trying too hard to be funny
I have a hamster
Marlowe Wolfe yeah i know i was watching this vid at 3 am and i was alone no electricity and bam someone starts banging on the door
Dawn....wait, I don't have a pet!
I was expecting him to say "please....please....promise me...you'll delete my browser history..." I would have died.
Ha, “died.”
Have fun walking
HE WAS ONLY 10
😂😂
@@lucaslechlider8502 chill bro, it's a joke.
The story in this one is nice, I think I figured it out.
That dream at the end seemed identical to that of Cain and Abel. So I think that's exactly what it was, actually Cain and Abel.
Abel, after being killed by Cain, formed the core of "the center".
(Cain never joined the center, because he is unable to die)
Dennis has now become one with the center.
Once it (or those other mini centers people were forming) grows large enough, it will invade the realm of the living and turn it into an equally bleak hellscape. Making everyone who is alive join the center, and share Abels woes.
sort of like a punishment for humanity.
I can't agree with you more concerning the Cain and Abel connection. It's heartbreaking really.
Gypsy Danger that's exactly what I was thinking...
Yeah it's actually pretty obvious in the original story, since the OP on r/nosleep spells the words as Abel, but not so much here.
+THElELECTRONIClDEVIL I can confirm, Judaism is the source of kein and abel
"It's so big harry, i've never seen anything like it. " Oh baby
+Ririchiyo Shirakiin "They're so naked, harry"
***** I couldn't stop laughing when I heard it either, my mind instantly went into the gutter lmfao
Lamoooo dirty mind
I was sure there would be a comment like this
Ririchiyo Shirakiin BISHHH😂😂
It relys on the fear of death and the unknown two of the most powerful instincts but even known this doesnt prevent it from scaring the pants off me
Very freaky, it plays on that and also the concept that everything after life is just pain and misery, there's a lot of stories that do that, though this might the best
1. Not instincts, just fears. 2. Relies
This should be a movie
Yes
I know what you dix
Someone send it to twisted pictures
The laws of physics don't allow you to make such movies.
Wicked Monk, who said it had to be live action?
That...that was beyond special. The amount if thought put into creating this story was amazing. The world itself the special exceptions, the surreality, the longing to stop listening but the natural burning curiosity that held us. This was by far one of the best creepypastas i have ever heard. Seriously special.
Not gonna lie, this would be an awesome movie short for Netflix or Hulu
This isn't creepy, this is sad! 😢 it's so.. Perfect as a story!
I Agree, So Perfect! 😭
My brother died when i was 2..n he was just born
ill Savage420 Wow, What a Short Death....I'm So Sorry for ya~
Ok thanks bruh, but its all good
ill Savage420 Yeah~ :3 That's True, Dude~
I didn't notice that it was an hour long
Me t
I didint either
I sat here for a full 50 minutes before realizing how long it was
Fuck me, just imagine if the after life was this fucked up. If I were that kid I wouldn't know how to continue living knowing very well that the afterlife is no good either
"Hey, who turned out the lights?"
"Hey, who turned out the lights?"
Check the shadows.
Dem Dr who quotes doe
+Kat Goodall check the scales
+Kat Goodall dr who is amazing :]
+Kat Goodall haha *Giggles*
+Kat Goodall would you lie some "toast" if you have scene that pasta
"Please never die"
That is one of the creepiest lines I've ever heard from a story... Very good Pasta
I was happily enjoying this until I discovered that the protagonists name is my own. I swear it felt I had been kicked in gut. It was only made worse because I was supposed to be born a twin and my brother died in the womb. I'm not ok. I'm very not ok.
oh no. Good luck in listening to him
I’m very sorry but you lived for a reason so live for the both of you
Oh shit, man. o_o
Oh hi there long lost twin, see you in the grey!!! but they got Wi-Fi down here so it's not to bad
Good luck Harry
Every once in a while, I come back and listen to this pasta specifically because it fills me with a very specific terror I can't get from anything else. Being a suicidal depressive, I've always wondered if death is worse than life, and what comes after it.
I never want to find out, but no matter what option I take, or what death I ever experience, I don't get a choice.
I hope you're doing ok all these years later. I come back to listen for the exact same reason; a story of dread and misery bringing comfort to strangers, how weird.
It's quite symbolic on what being bitter to the very end does to someone, the whole reason he goes into this realm is because he takes anger and bitterness to the grave.
"its so big harry...ive never seen anything like it"
Haha, I thought the same thing
Harry....
You're a wizard...
You just had to do it... :D
I listen to a lot of these scary stories. They're entertaining and enjoyable, but they never scare me.
This one, however, did. I have never been so frightened and disturbed by a piece of fiction before. To the writer and the narrator, good job.
Dawn Kearns yes me too this is awful
The reason this creepypasta is so scary is because the writer used something we just can't check for ourselves, and it's going to happen one way or another. It doesn't matter if you believe in heaven, hell, reincarnation or whatever else. Yes there have been people and stories claiming that they have been to heaven or hell or have been reincarnated but we still aren't a 100% sure what happens when we die. The writer ( probably ) used the unknown of death and our fear of death to write this and since it is supposed to be a creepypasta the 'afterlife' experience Dennis had was terrifying.
The story still creeped me out tho 😨😨😨 But good reading 👍👍👍
Having lost my mother to cancer, the first half of this story really hit me.
The rest of it cleared my top ten.
This is easily one of the best creepypastas I've ever heard
Amazing. The imagery of the afterlife was mind blowing. And your narration was great, especially Dennis.
I read your comment to fast, I thought it said blowing Dennis/penis....
LOL!
Some mind blowing zombies
By the end I was expecting the Ghostbusters to bust into the room and start blasting Dennis.
I had to pause the video because I was laughing so hard.
Anibal Morales H A
Anibal Morales forget Ghostbusters I was waiting for sam and dean
Cancer is a bitch.. Lost my Grandad and Granny too it, if anyone else has lost a loved ones to cancer, i pray for you.
I'm So Sorry For your Lost 😭
Im sorry for your lost, my 2nd ant pasted away a few years ago of canser. It eas heart breaking but gotta move on.
im sorry for your loss and i want to burn cancer in a fire
Thanks guys much love to yous
MrBuggzy 😄
This is so freakin' long and awesome. I'm not even two minutes in and I'm addicted.
+Rose Hathaway thats what she said
Morgan Darkstar Very mature. But, well played.
+Morgan Darkstar lol
+Morgan Darkstar DAAAMMNNN
+Rose Hathaway You should go see a doctor.This sounds serious.
Damn, this is one spooky One-Direction fanfic
GameFreg bruh chill. It's a fictional story.
It makes sense 'Cause to be honest, One Direction is cancer.
Ikr
Meme depot I seriously think that he/she said that because of the name "Harry" which is mentioned all throughout the creepypasta
thebullshitchannel The op said that because they were all moving in “One Direction.”
why do i listen to these before bed?!
Same
Same
lol same
Ye i know
Me to >.
who else actually watched this 2 the end with out skipping it?
me 😑
Wow. I accidentally found you.
Ashley Luna me
Ashley Luna me cuz I love this one
Ashley Luna shocket i did too.
Shit these things are scariest of all. No cheap gore or monsters, well a bit, but the fear comes mostly from praying on the unknown and a universal fear, death. Brilliant.
I have a good one you should do. Its called "My house caught on fire so I called my mom and my mom answered but she was in the burning house."
feel bad:(
or...
"I hang out with my best friend every day..
she has been dead for three years."
Leaf the leafeon this could have been called me and my brother stay in touch
his grave has wi-fi 😂
just no.
weather or not you're joking
just no.
@@mkultrasoldier *whether*
This is hands down my favorite.
The thing is we DONT know what will happen when we die so this story makes more fear of it
+cobomiester30 I agree
Dennis wakes up
"You should see the look on your face."
"What the fuck Dennis!"
"It was just a prank bro."
The End.
omg😂😂
hahahaha oh my god you ruined everything
That Should Be the End~😂
XD lmao
XD IF IM LAUGHING DOES THAT MAKE ME AN INSENSITIVE PRICK
Wow. That was like getting hit by a train.
This is now one of my favourite creepy pastas ever it wasn't just what you would call scary
It's terrifying
Not because of the story it's self
But because for all we know this does happen when we die and what's even scarier
We will find out one day
We will find out out one horrible
Day
I can't die I'm a robot
Blasé I will destroy ur computer then m8
This story sounds a little bit like what happens to those who die without Christ
+Fiv Guuv
sucks for us atheist then m8
Embrace death, fear nothing but immortality friend.
Great story! I'm afraid to die now! Also, anyone else think the spinning thing in the machine looks like a smartphone?
Blob the dog with shoes on Brown ikr
Blob the dog with shoes on Brown I’m sorry but I’m team Gray F. all the way
Me: He's dead. He can't talk... >·>
Story: Whoo-hoo-hoo! Look who knows so much! It just so happens that our character here is only MOSTLY dead. There's a big difference between mostly dead and all dead!
He wasn't mostly dead, Denis was completely dead according to the story but kept talking anyways by some force.
To me, he was mostly dead.
+Sandy Rivera "To me" The narrator clearly stated that the doctors said that the blood stopped circulating and his heart stopped. They then stated that his body temperature was way the below the current level for someone to even be alive. He was dead, his conscious in another place but somehow being able to connect to his lifeless body. One being conscious deems them to being alive.
I was making a Princess Bride reference. In the film, everyone was very sure a character was dead, but it was later found out that he was MOSTLY dead. To prove it, a character asked him what was the reason of living, and the mostly dead person answered,"True love." I was making a connection to how this character in this story spoke even though he's dead. Didn't mean to get you worked up, or anything. :/
Coffee Addict he had brain activity
Dearly beloved??? Kingdom Hearts??? I can't be the only one who noticed this!!!
nope. It suits the mood of the story very well, but this song is my favorite from some odd reason, idk why but I love Dearly Beloved.
+MinecraftMario21 I agree, it dose fit it well.
+Keltron ZX Its the only song that makes me sad, and then I remember Xion's end in Kingdom Hearts 358/2. God, did I almost cry at that part. I enjoyed that game, I just wished they wouldve put the game in Kingdom Hearts 1.5. Theyre putting a playable Dream Drop Distance in 2.8, so.
+MinecraftMario21 hell, man I did cry when she died, Xion was probably one of my favorite characters
+Keltron ZX I really hope they find some way to bring her back. Xion made an appearance in Dream Drop Distance, so maybe she'll be in KH3, but idk.
All I could think of when I was watching the video:
"Yer a wizerd, Harry"
What a great story! To the writer, TheEmporersFinest, and our reader, CreepsMcPasta, wonderful jobs both of you.
This Is definitely one of my favorite creepypasta of yours. It was stuck in my head for days when I first listened to it years ago. And here I am once again listening to it.
I can hear the Kindgom Hearts loading screen song in the background and nostalgia hit me.
I can definitely say that this channel has improved so much since this recoding in audio quality and narration. His inflection is more theatrical now.
This was sad, creepy and fantastic. worth the time.
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this has been one of my favourite creepy pastas for years and years, it’s so well written i love it!
The Walking Dead season 100 spoilers. They've evolved so they tendrils.
Tbh, the ending makes it sound more like a prequel to the walking dead.
aye aye
Why is your profile a picture of pyro
Yes I think so but everyone is Dead
When your pet creeks the door open while your watching this..... IT ALWAYS HAPPENS!!!!!
If Mia or Chunky cat did that they wouldn't be getting treats anytime soon
I came here to be spooked, but instead, I was crying the whole time at the thought of losing anymore loved ones to cancer...
:c
Klam Digguh
*Hugs* Sorry :(
The heart of a lot of the best horror is grief.
Not so much the cancer that concerns me as much as the eternal hellscape everyone apparently goes to when they die no matter how good of a person they were or how young to suffer unimaginably forever and ever.
"I put my hand on his bonny..."
INCEST!!!!
"...hands"
Oh
nwatt 04 😂🤣
XD
Necraincestophilia baby!
What the tf is a bonny
You guys still watching? and enjoying it so far?
+jazzie man killer tale
+jazzie man
does any one else agree that creepy pastas are like modern lovecraft fan ficton?
lol
especially '"On the hill" so lovecraftian
+jrdn DROPKICK On the hill is great
+jazzie man Yes.
Only 1:30 in
CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPSSSS!!!!!!!! YOU ARE MY FAVOURITE NARRATOR EVER!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!
+Sula Bintley mine too
+Sula Bintley Me too.
I'll be honest...second favorite. I only listen to two.
+Thomas Meeks who else?
+Thomas Meeks I'm VERY picky when it comes to listening to these things. Although, I need to find a new person. I have listened to every one of Creeps' and MCP's.
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Feneca I need my anti depressants
Feneca this is amazing I wish I could copy it😂😂
Tide Bleach same
Bitch nuggets
I really hate to admit this; but thise sounds eerily similar to a bad trip I had on some high extract salvia. It was like I knew I had been given a behind the scenes glimpse at the true nature of the universe. I had envisioned an entity which I referred to as a "speckle". It was the center of this spiral. The spiral represented me and you and everyone and everything else in the universe. And this spiral all revolved around this speckle which was in the center.
I had this deep sick feeling that I was a pawn. And everything that I and everyone else in the universe had stood for and accomplished was the work and for the satisfaction of this entity in the center. It had no empathy. It was hollow. It wasn't what I would consider evil. But it was evil in a different way. A way that just tarnished everything positive in the world into something grey. I cannot fully describe the magnitude of this feeling with the petty word "meaningless" which i received from this.
I'll never forget it. That was the last time I did drugs.
You're a pawn as long as you follow that 'speck'. Yes, it could've been god-like, but it depends more on us then we do on it. If we behave like pawns we're not proving ourselves.
Wow, that really stretched my brain
wtf are you talking about ?? lolol XD so confused rn...
+The Milkman For a second there I thought you said "some high extract of SALIVA"
🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈
+The Milkman Dude, I feel you!
Salvia fucked my whole world in half a few years ago... Everyone thinks it's all fun and games until they break through. I was actually intending to have a breakthrough experience this time because I never had before on Salvia and I'd read a lot about it. Most people said it was absolutely terrible but I still had to try it for myself. I'd done DMT a few times and mushrooms and LSD countless times but this was SO much more sinister than anything I've ever experienced. It was so crazy how fast the real world just dissolved away and by the time I exhaled, I didn't even know what the fuck was happening, I'd completely forgotten I'd done anything. This happens on DMT too but it's not anywhere near as terrifying. I swear, terror is just an actual effect of Salvia.
It was so, utterly awful, that I can not address the notion that even death could be as terrible. I've heard a lot of people compare potent psychedelic drugs like Salvia and DMT to a sort of, "death and rebirth" but this was on a whole other level. In that time, neither "death", nor "rebirth" existed at all. There was no time, no space and I was, for the rest of eternity, nothing, in an endless, near empty void, tumbling. I say "near empty" because, like some sort of sadistic, twisted punishment, even though my body was gone, my conscious awareness still remained. I knew I would be left there, with no escape and the awareness to suffer in it, forever... I kept thinking, "everything had to end at some point... This is that point. The point where existence itself just ends." Fuck, it was so real... When I finally came down and realized what was going on, I'd never been so happy in my entire life. I had my roommate watching over me and he said he was almost ready to call an ambulance because I was screaming and completely unresponsive. I "woke up" to him shaking me and telling me to snap out of it and I just gave him the biggest hug I've ever given anyone, before or since. I guess I scared him almost as bad as I scared myself cause he thought I'd completely snapped and wasn't coming back...
I definitely don't regret the experience (in the same way that I don't believe anyone should regret ANY psychedelic experience. I feel you learn much more about yourself through bad trips than good) but it was easily one of the most shattering and sobering experiences I've ever had. It was ALL I could think of for weeks. It really gave me a new outlook on life. Not necessarily a good or bad outlook, just a new one. A completely different perspective on life, death, and the perception of both. Beforehand, I always held the bleak and somber theory that, after death and before birth are one-and-the-same. Salvia; however, offered to me, a new interpretation as to what the afterlife may be like and I really, truly hope I had it right the first time...
Sorry for the long post. Even this, just barely scratches the surface of the experience.
TL;DR Fuck Salvia. There's a reason it's legal...
I think this was more sad than it was scary. Not sad like badly written, but like depressing.
+Imperial_Doge Yeah I know Right???? this story made me so depressed~
I agree and also a bit creepy aura
Wow, this story completely captures the grief of losing a brother... while adding get a whole new level of horror to it
This is easily the best Creepypasta I've ever heard. Whoever wrote this is an absolute genius.
Damn son that intro to the story was so depressing
moonbeameee 333 ....i thought it was a long n shitty story. i hv yet to hear a "creepypasta" that makes me feel anything ...( other than dissapointed). i want a really horrifying one.....just one!
This story is pretty awesome and your narration goes perfect with it. So descriptive and you can just see what they're explaining. Probably one of my favorites thus far.
My grandmother lost her life almost two years ago, but when I last saw her, she said something, something that I have been trying to explain myself for all this time, she said 'I can't stop walking, it's trying to get meeeeee........' Then she passed away and I just couldn't stop softly sobbing.
Theory : Its purgatory
Yes
Why would it be purgatory? The kid died at 10 from cancer. What could he have possibly done to end up in Purgatory? It actually reads like Dante Alighieri's Inferno that Botticelli made a picture of and that's where the modern idea of hell comes from. But instead of hell he's travelling through the 9 concentric circles of heaven. That's why he has been walking for years in just hours.
By far my favorite creepypasta reader and my favorite creepypasta. This was done so well ❤️ I don't even care about how late this comment is. Every time Dennis's voice rasped while talking about the center's dark eyes chills ran down my spine.
Talk about a spoiler...
+Canadagamer9 Its not like you get a choice, and even if immortality was possible, the universe isnt going to last forever anyway.
+Canadagamer9 I I could die it would just be to see my grandparents
+Canadagamer9 welp
that thing is coming anyway
so you're fucked eitherway
+Canadagamer9 welp
that thing is coming anyway
so you're fucked eitherway
+Canadagamer9 welp
that thing is coming anyway
so you're fucked eitherway
The kingdom Hearts music really added a sad effect and caused me to subscribe
I was looking for the person who noticed the Kingdom Hearts music. B)
Lol yep
Star & Speculation same
What’s the name of the soundtrack
Ricardo Rendon he used Dearly Beloved
Whispers Harry, you're a wizard Harry
I'm going to hell
you're a wizard harry... (dies)
Kakashi Hatake Lel Lee I’m going to hell let me yell cause I fell in a Well I’ll tell and that’s swell
Kakashi Hatake ily
Official LOLGamer hahah
I think that his brother was in purgatory. Purgatory is by some accounts supposed to be incredibly trying and painful, because you're working off your sins before you can go to heaven. What sins could a ten year old boy have? Who knows, maybe it wasn't a religious family. Or maybe only saints, martyrs, and very young children get to get immediate access.
A better thought than 'what comes after is worse than all we have.'
Yeah... that's everyone's theory, apparently.
+AshBloodfire The greatest fear of all time is the point between death when you wondering where your going
That is what I thoight through out the whole video. XD
AshBloodfire hail Satan
Cain and Abel
DAMNN DANIEL
BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH THE GREY SUIT
Stop
I hate myself for typing this
Pierce The Tori shame
+Pierce The Tori shaaaaame
DAMNNNN KITTY, BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH THE FUCKING SCRATCH
'Harry, you're a Wizard Harry!'
'I'm not a goddamn Wizard!'
This is a masterpiece of Lovecraftian horror. I can see why you saved it for Devil's Night.
this just made me cry didnt scare or creep me out just made me sad
Omg same I was crying so hard😭😭😭
+mintycookie129 "Yo bro awesome story :) " made me laugh so hard lmao
Malakiah Turner It's always a good day when I can make someone laugh ^.^
same except The crying part
Me too.
hey you
have fun in your nightmares
This is literally the most scariest and morbid creepypasta I've ever seen. I can safely say I'm scared of dying now and I don't get scared easily but you narrated this very well. Keep up the good work hun. 😂😂😭❤
your a wizard harry
+Joe Paredes there's always people like you. ...
But im just harry
xD
yer a orphan harry
+karasunocrows but im, im just harry !
So the first one was Abel, or some similar being, I'm guessing…But it's a sad idea that only the bad and hate in you gets to survive when you die. Where does the good go? It must go somewhere…
Probably on earth and walking around forever no pain no love just nothing
Wandergirl108 back to the screaming clouds
Wandergirl108 What good?
Death exactly!
It gets overcome and devoured by all the spite and anger. Hate at it's purest form.
are these fall out boy song titles?
*gasps*
A fan!
yee
GASP
A cancer!!!
true
Nahhhh...
It is MCR ones.
Cancer
Welcome to the black parade
Helena
The Ghost Of You
And all that
The music videos and lyrics remind me of this story.
Well, now i am gonna go watch more MCR, FOB, AND TOP NOW JUST TO FORGET THAT. AND SOME PIZZA TOO. I AM NOW GONNA EAT PIZZA FOR BREAKFAST. BYE .
OH AND BTW I LOVE YOUR PROFILE PIC
Did anyone else get the illusion of the hospital guy breathing after 10 minutes in?
Harry: "hey everybody! this is my zombie twin, dennis"
Everybody: "woah bro your so cool."
This is my all time favorite story on this channel and I remember when it first came out. I have come back to this channel 3 years later and I'm happy to be back
I would love to see a part two too this story, I want to know what exactly is supposed to be coming.
I listen to your channel every night. I used to listen to Unit 522 but I stumbled on this and it's been my favorite ever since.
tell me I'm not the only one who hears kingdom hearts music
NoodleTheOtaco .X. there is kingdom hearts music at the start
the "dearly beloved" track
LoveCraft would be proud. This is pure, exquisite, cosmic horror.
This one really is groundbreaking in a lot of ways. The imagery is vivid and terrifying.
The tone is a sense of overwhelming dread. It starts out bleak, and continues to get progressively worse until the end. You can practically feel the all-consuming grey of the afterlife.
And what's more, most horror stories inspire fear and dread through the unknown. Keeping readers in the dark, allowing their minds to fill in the gaps left by the writer. However, in this story, the horror comes from what's known. The more that's known, the more horrifying the story becomes. It also very effectively plays on the universal fear of mortality, and the inevitability of death.
The concept of suddenly having to live with the information that, no matter what you believe, or how you live your life, you're doomed to walk the same grey, unending hell when you die. Damned to suffer a fate worse than anything you could have ever imagined, and there's nothing you can do to avoid it.
This story blends a lot of powerful elements of horror without pulling any punches. Without doing anything cheap tedious, or overdone. Even when you think the worst is over, it still has one hideous revelation left to offer.
I can't think of a single thing I would change about it. Absolute 10/10.
I come back to this one. Every once and a while.
Thanks a fucking lot Internet! It's going to take 3 OMAM songs, a bowl of popcorn and two viewings of inside out to make me get over this!
i know right
you mean outside in hahahhahahahaha
Chameleon1616 aa
His final words... please... please... erase my browser history.....
The Legend Ikr XD
The Legend ur wrong, he'd say "please.......please.......... delete my browser history and don't look"
Imagine he just sat up and like HAHA PRANKED YOU! IM STILL ALIVE!
listening to these stories have helped me through essays! currently finishing my second one, thanks for these amazing narrations.
bára How’d you get through this still sane?
Oh, wow! I got a shock when i saw how long it was. I loved every single bit of it. It was SO LONG! From where did you find the time to narrate it? Omg, I love you Creeps! It was so damn long, but you still did it. And we love you for that! And we listened to ALL of it!
Never stop doing what you do, Creeps! Kisses!
If you say *SO LONG* again I may just have to like your comment
Moral of the story: Be nice to everyone :)
I don't usually scare that easy but I found this to be incredibly disturbing.
Omg the kingdom harts music made the beginning part made it twice as sad. THE FEELS T_T
By Fall Out Boy
o h mygod
KINGDOM HEARTS MENU SONG IN THE BACKGROUND. sorry.. i am just so touched when i hear the beautiful piano.. such sweet childhood memories.... thank you for including this tiny little gem, creeps. (p.s.) i know this video is old, i just rewatch older videos when creeps doesnt upload.
This is truly one of the creepypasta greats-an excellent interpretation of what may come next. 🖤
i loved it.
I also love how dearly beloved from kingdom of hearts is playing casually in the background xD
COVER ME I'M GOING FULLSCREEN
I GOT YOUR 6. PERMISSION TO GO FULLSCREEN
don't go it's too dangerous
I'VE GOT YOU FAM. CHARGE ON!
Don't go you won't make it
Wow its.. rotating.. scary