IELTS Writing Task-2 Sample Essay | Sentence formation | Education, teacher & Student | Abhay Sharma

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    When helping students prepare for the IELTS test, one of the biggest fears is how to do well in IELTS Writing Task 2.
    IELTS Writing Task 2 Academic requires you to write at least 250 words in response to a essay. You will be presented with this factual information and asked to select and report the main features of the data in under 40 minutes.
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    Academic Writing Task 2 Strategy:
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    Understand how the test is marked.
    Being aware of the marking criteria will allow you to give the examiner exactly what they need.
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    Paraphrase the question.
    It is best to paraphrase the question in the first paragraph. You can do this by using synonyms, and follow The formula's mentioned in this video.
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    Write the conclusion.
    To write your overview, pick 3 or 4 of the main features and write about them generally, without referencing any data.
    Support the main features.
    In a new paragraph, support the key features with the ideas of your opinion.
    Check your work.
    Check your report for spelling and grammar mistakes. Make sure that the data you mentioned is also accurate!
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ความคิดเห็น • 184

  • @jatinderjot6204
    @jatinderjot6204 3 ปีที่แล้ว +44

    Thanku sir I followed ur pattern I get 7 band today 2nd July 2021

  • @gkaur1884
    @gkaur1884 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    *" Sir please make videos on every types of writing task 2 Essay's"*

  • @manjeetrajinder7524
    @manjeetrajinder7524 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Awesome and amazing video presentation -- l'm an ielts and grammar teacher -- appreciate ur version appeared-- May almighty strengthen you to maintain the same spirit always in future-- thanks in anticipation--

    • @manjeetrajinder7524
      @manjeetrajinder7524 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thanks for your reply-- l teach to ielts aspirants at my residence -- l've some queries from students to commence online classes in ielts--- are u taking online classes- if yes- l can provide students- thanks

  • @ramandeepsingh9763
    @ramandeepsingh9763 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hey guys whether u should jott down it's a debatable argument or u can write several people assume that, using both at same time doesn't look right. Secondly, dont use opine as its a informal word.... hope u find it helpful, rest of ur ideas are really helpful

  • @gkdeep1328
    @gkdeep1328 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your writing task is different from others and it is very easy to understand I like the way you teach each and every sentence very useful for me

  • @karamjeetkaur6474
    @karamjeetkaur6474 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Make video on all kinds of introduction such as positive or negative development, advantage and disadvantage, causes and solutions, discuss both views with thesis line

    • @shokisharma9808
      @shokisharma9808 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi I agree with your assumption 👍👍👍

    • @shokisharma9808
      @shokisharma9808 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

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    • @karamjeetkaur6474
      @karamjeetkaur6474 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@shokisharma9808 thank you

    • @karamjeetkaur6474
      @karamjeetkaur6474 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@shokisharma9808 thank you 🙏🙏

  • @L3_V10
    @L3_V10 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I really like your way of teaching 🍀God bless you 🍀

  • @saimakhan3096
    @saimakhan3096 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thankyou so much! I was desperately waiting for this video

  • @patelkuldeep2439
    @patelkuldeep2439 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Amazing teachers I found on TH-cam channel 🙌.

  • @normaluser9379
    @normaluser9379 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    As a student, this content is really very helpful for IELTS's students. Love u bro . Also , Full Support for u🌹

  • @dishantupadhyay1838
    @dishantupadhyay1838 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    your way of teaching is tremendious sir

    • @ProLearningwithU
      @ProLearningwithU  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      My pleasure to help you dear ❤️💫

  • @jerryamericanbullyy3199
    @jerryamericanbullyy3199 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks a lot. Your way of teaching is really impressive.

  • @ManpreetKaur-gv4xf
    @ManpreetKaur-gv4xf 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Brilliant way of teaching hats of u sir 👍👍🙋

  • @navneetkaur7460
    @navneetkaur7460 ปีที่แล้ว

    Best ever ielts task 2 . Your way of teaching is stupendous

  • @shubhamgautam2255
    @shubhamgautam2255 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank u sir i followed your way & got 6 bands.

  • @vinaysharma-bz2tr
    @vinaysharma-bz2tr 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thankyou so much sir you are great teacher

  • @saimakhan3096
    @saimakhan3096 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Sir, please make some more videos on task-1, task-2, And "how to write and expand a cue card".

  • @ganggaming6313
    @ganggaming6313 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    sir you are great

  • @rajatpatel9238
    @rajatpatel9238 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir your videos are very helpful, glad to see your videos and obtaine something remarkable. 🙂

  • @deepkaur2534
    @deepkaur2534 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Tnx sir god tuhanu forever stay happy rakha

    • @deepkaur2534
      @deepkaur2534 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sir asa he hor videos banao plz am wating hor topic par health ka relative🙏

  • @ImranKhan-js5ni
    @ImranKhan-js5ni 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir aap ke vídeo bhut help karti hai AAP ka channal bhut grow karaga buss aap vídeo banana matt chhodiya ga
    Please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @gkaur1884
    @gkaur1884 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    *" excellent presentation Sir Thanks "*

  • @Minelife333
    @Minelife333 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    May God bless you immensely...sir🙏🙏

  • @gaganjeet848
    @gaganjeet848 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir please process chart k sentence formation pr bhi vedio banao

  • @parneetkaursidhu9523
    @parneetkaursidhu9523 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thnku so much sir for this wonderful writing task 2

  • @ramandhaliwal3578
    @ramandhaliwal3578 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your teaching way is so brilliant. 👍👍👍👍

  • @manpreet-fz1lj
    @manpreet-fz1lj 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    advantages and others question te v bnao sir video bhut easy step aa

  • @akashkaler5603
    @akashkaler5603 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir dillo thankyou for this precious gift ❤️

  • @Xbox_StreamDeck
    @Xbox_StreamDeck 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Keep it up bro ...next video will be .how to create idea for every topic and there vocabulary

  • @BalkarSingh-cg7rp
    @BalkarSingh-cg7rp 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank u so much sir g great explanation

  • @pardeeprana5465
    @pardeeprana5465 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir how to join your paid Batch because I bigners and next month I give the ielts exam

  • @monikabhagat6062
    @monikabhagat6062 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thnku soo much sir. this video is very helpful to me because I have too much to write bps thnku so much sir. Please make more video on various topics related to IELTS

  • @_mysterygirl5087
    @_mysterygirl5087 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thnku sir ur vedios help me in my writing task 1 and 2 with very grateful skills ☺️🙏

  • @sahibsahib8786
    @sahibsahib8786 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks sir plz make more videos like this

  • @jasssunner5661
    @jasssunner5661 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Nice video sir ..... Baki da be imp. Topic be jarror paji video bnayo

  • @simreenkaur5569
    @simreenkaur5569 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How we can use s' ,s plz make video on it .

  • @kirankaur7600
    @kirankaur7600 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thnks you ji main bhut confused c bt apki video SBI doubt clear KR dite ❤️❤️

  • @ranigill9110
    @ranigill9110 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your way of teaching is different from others altogether

  • @rndamvloger5150
    @rndamvloger5150 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir you vedio is very beneficial for me. i want that you will make more and more vedios about other types

  • @ManpreetKaur-un6uz
    @ManpreetKaur-un6uz 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good explanation ...smj aaya sir

  • @alialaas3761
    @alialaas3761 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love ❤and respect from Pakistan

  • @jotsingh8846
    @jotsingh8846 ปีที่แล้ว

    You are brilliant sir❤❤

  • @calmingbreak4u
    @calmingbreak4u ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for this video its very fruitful .
    Please tell me one thing sir what is better in thesis
    I will discuss or this essay will discuss? ?

  • @shokisharma9808
    @shokisharma9808 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Bro we are waiting for your next ideas related video🙋🙋🙋🙋

  • @mannanarora153
    @mannanarora153 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Really appreciable work .....please make videos related to task 1 for GT

  • @SimarbhullarBhullar
    @SimarbhullarBhullar 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank u so much sir,tusi bhut vadia samjaea

    • @ProLearningwithU
      @ProLearningwithU  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      My pleasure to help you dear ❤
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  • @mkquest..
    @mkquest.. ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Sir, my mentor tell me that never write down the intro up than 5-6 lines, Bcoz after that it look like body paragraph??
    I hope u reply...

    • @krishjodhani8549
      @krishjodhani8549 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Abb tak to tu Canada poch gaya hogaa

    • @ProLearningwithU
      @ProLearningwithU  6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Ap nhi gaee ?
      I texted him on instagram 🤝, no worries 😉

    • @krishjodhani8549
      @krishjodhani8549 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Nahi yrr abhi exam deni baki haai

    • @ProLearningwithU
      @ProLearningwithU  6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Nice

  • @gamer9614
    @gamer9614 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Very nice 👌👍👏

  • @kaifpasha3893
    @kaifpasha3893 ปีที่แล้ว

    And BP3

  • @ishneetkaur3671
    @ishneetkaur3671 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    sir complex sentences bhi bolte hai use karne chyia useke baare mei bhi btado ek baar .
    thank you sir for all you are doing for us . i really appreciate your hard work .

  • @pleasedontlaugh8215
    @pleasedontlaugh8215 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir reading par bhi video upload krdo , mera paper nazdeek aa raha hai , please

  • @darklife1822
    @darklife1822 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Plzz sir upload all topic ideas vedio

  • @deepushah7795
    @deepushah7795 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanku so much sir!!!

  • @kaursra5820
    @kaursra5820 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir you are amazing 👍👍👍

  • @faisukumar3338
    @faisukumar3338 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Jyada faltu baat mat karo dost baki aap bahut achha samjate ho 🙏🙏🙏

    • @ProLearningwithU
      @ProLearningwithU  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sure 😅 My pleasure to help you dear 🥰

    • @faisukumar3338
      @faisukumar3338 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@ProLearningwithU sorry sir bura laga ho to liken aap jab samjate ho to bich bich me dusre topics pe chale jate ho to pura concentration kharab ho jata hai baki aap 1 num samjate ho . 🙏

  • @ravinderkaur1575
    @ravinderkaur1575 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please make more and more videos your videos are helping me too much

  • @honeybees4683
    @honeybees4683 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Superb

  • @harmankaur2146
    @harmankaur2146 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir please orr bhi essay uploaded kro its very useful mai bhi ek month baad exam dungi so please sir or prepration krva dijiye

  • @jasmeeenkaur7587
    @jasmeeenkaur7587 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir my writing skills are more weak because I don't not complete writing task at proper time as a i also don't genrate idea at proper time so what I do please sir tell me how I improve this problems

  • @shokisharma9808
    @shokisharma9808 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir discuss more essays 👍👍👍👍

  • @jerryamericanbullyy3199
    @jerryamericanbullyy3199 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks a lot sir

  • @ammu3415
    @ammu3415 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    thanku thanku so much sir

  • @poojakorotane3680
    @poojakorotane3680 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please sir ,make it video of reading (tips and treaks)🙏🙏

  • @namtajsinghkang181
    @namtajsinghkang181 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Sir ji please firstly tusi ek video important grammer te bno do please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please sir ji

  • @user-fu7yv7ku8f
    @user-fu7yv7ku8f ปีที่แล้ว

    Hlo sir plzz all wtiting task ka ideas and examples dsdp

  • @navjotsingh4442
    @navjotsingh4442 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Bhout khoob vireeee

  • @MDzala
    @MDzala 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir plss make this types of video on task 2.....

  • @HardeepSingh-ox3mx
    @HardeepSingh-ox3mx ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir jo ap ne write kiya show kam hota

  • @navpreetsidhu8877
    @navpreetsidhu8877 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very wonderful video

  • @rammasidhu2605
    @rammasidhu2605 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    The best vdo

  • @thaneswardevkota3701
    @thaneswardevkota3701 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hare krisan hare

  • @PrincePatel-up5kk
    @PrincePatel-up5kk 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I should be capital in opinion essay.

  • @ranjitkaur6821
    @ranjitkaur6821 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks sir

  • @stayfit6576
    @stayfit6576 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir plz jaldi upload kar deyo wrtting task 2 di new vedio🙏🙏

  • @ritiktomar951
    @ritiktomar951 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love you bro ❤️

  • @sukhjot8310
    @sukhjot8310 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can i got band 7 by this style ????
    Plz reply sir

  • @anmolpreetsingh1273
    @anmolpreetsingh1273 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir apka ye essay kitne band ka hai

  • @shrimalipruthvi7958
    @shrimalipruthvi7958 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am afraid,but in conclusion at 3rd line which one is right?1)nothing cannot be ignored or
    2)nothing can be ignored

    • @ProLearningwithU
      @ProLearningwithU  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You can write "nobody cannot be ignored/ averted".
      I have said that in the next videos.

    • @shrimalipruthvi7958
      @shrimalipruthvi7958 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ok.thanks a lot.

  • @ninderchahal5132
    @ninderchahal5132 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanku soo muchh 🙏🙏👍for this amazing video 👍God bless uhh 🙏🙏your teaching style is great✌✌

  • @kaifpasha3893
    @kaifpasha3893 ปีที่แล้ว

    Aisa essay likhne par 7 a sakte hain kiya

  • @renuka1685
    @renuka1685 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please make Videos for complex sentences in writing task 2

  • @harinderkaur7262
    @harinderkaur7262 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir plz make videos on writing task 2 every topic

  • @rubal...4299
    @rubal...4299 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    sir technology or environment pr bhi bta do

  • @akashdeepsingh4306
    @akashdeepsingh4306 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanku sir

  • @priyagumbergumber2496
    @priyagumbergumber2496 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    👌🏿👌🏿👌🏿👌🏿

  • @sandhubalwinder1210
    @sandhubalwinder1210 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir next video all task di into ta trend use huda oh kravado nl important task kravdo

  • @KaranMohaliMusic
    @KaranMohaliMusic 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Bhai ji April mai exam hai
    Saare writing task 2 ke topics covers krwado🙏

  • @amritpalkaur3926
    @amritpalkaur3926 ปีที่แล้ว

    Black pen use krye sir plz

  • @2minwithtamim
    @2minwithtamim 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir plz make video all topics (16 topic) idea list ..

  • @SunnySingh-oq8xf
    @SunnySingh-oq8xf 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir can u me when and which tenses is we can use

  • @mmproduction8504
    @mmproduction8504 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Writing ideas ke upar video bnao sir ideas mein bahut dikkat aati hai

  • @niravthakkar2274
    @niravthakkar2274 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please make few videos on letter writing for general training IELTS

    • @ProLearningwithU
      @ProLearningwithU  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Soon. My pleasure to help you dear ❤️

  • @deepsandhu1915
    @deepsandhu1915 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir several or serveral

  • @payaldave9860
    @payaldave9860 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir pls crime topic par video share kre

  • @sachinbadial2952
    @sachinbadial2952 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir Pls share the links for GT for both task.

  • @sandhubalwinder1210
    @sandhubalwinder1210 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir saria di these lines krvado general line hor v help kravdo plzz sir

  • @_mysterygirl5087
    @_mysterygirl5087 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir plz don't use red pen bcoz when uh use this pen words r not clear 🤷

  • @shabadgurbanidailyupdates1247
    @shabadgurbanidailyupdates1247 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir please make video on speaking 😔

  • @bharatbudhathoki5623
    @bharatbudhathoki5623 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Provide link for pdf!!

  • @meghasingh8664
    @meghasingh8664 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir black pen use kiya kro red me dikhta nhi h