Her story did not relate to the question , their is not human meeting an animal in her story, so does that mean they don't focus on if the story matches the question ?
I actually regret not watching your videos before I did the exam in school. I am doing the November reset and this will help me alot to getting at least a grade 7. Thx so much 😊
Please Can u mark my reponse to paper 1 question 5? Julia's thumping heart was in her mouth as she swiftly sprinted throughout the forest. Blood dripped down her side of her forehead, accompanied with dirt that mixed together. She repeatedly turned around to examine her surroundings: to ensure that not a single soul wandered in this area. Her dark, long hair trailed behind her, in sync with the harsh wind that brushed against her already-damaged skin. Thoughts filled her mind. Could she do this? It was her only chance. Before muttering some soft prayers under her restless breaths, she sped up. Nothing could be seen in the distance. Except for the slender trees that stood proudly, while the others latched themselves onto anything in their reach. Bruises and cuts covered her exposed knees, yet she did not stop. It seemed like an endless journey, but it was worth it in the end. At least she hoped so. The wind howled, echoing throughout her ears. Despite all the obstacles, Julia kept her spirits high. She had to escape. She had to. The thought of being returned back to Mexico made her blood boil beneath her veins. The solemness was evident through her melancholy eyes. Silence screamed, causing Julia to cautiously run through the forest: which seemed to have no end. However, it was not as bad as the adventure she had to face before: swimming in the cold sea to reach this destination. She took several breaths, gasping for oxygen as her head became a stone, being repeatedly hit by a hammer. It seemed even as if the air present was ominous, as it's icy, bony hands clutched Julia's neck. At once, Julia stopped. Before her, stood the item she only longed for in her dreams. Now, she had to hop over the border successfully...
Hello, I’m a Year 12 student, and during last year’s GCSE season, I launched a Discord server aimed at helping students connect over their studies. The server offers a space for students to discuss education and exchange resources they find useful. I would greatly appreciate it if you would consider sharing this server with the students following your channel. I believe it could be a valuable resource for anyone preparing for their GCSEs. Thank you very much! P.S. The server also covers A Levels, so all are welcome.
I am going to revise priest 1, Amazon package and Netflix&kill I hope one of these will fit my mock q5 exam thank you very much for saving my grades mr king
Since the answer practically had not much to do with the story question, are you always able to write a high quality story with extensive vocabulary, but have iffy creativity?
Does your story always have to link with the story question, of as long as you use amazing vocabulary, clear consistency, are you able to pull the marks?
@@AkshatSanghavi-ci3ie sorry my explanation is very bad I meant does it matter much if the story doesn't link much with the question but it includes grade 9 extensive vocabul, devices ect
Hi sir your video are good and can you make a video on what is the clauses and types of clauses for my gcse English language because I really struggle with clauses
@MR Everything English thanks for the vid But I am wondering how will a student be able to adapt their preplanned description to the question asked on the day.( For question 5 paper 1)And again thank you for this assistive content you produce
@@MrEverythingEnglish Sir what if i practice a description for a hot/cold environment, windy/rainy/stormy day, busy place etc and prepare sentences i could use for them?
Same as me too. But what’s interesting is, how did the girl’s( the student mr everything English is talking about) story match the two questions? I can’t tell if her story is either narrative(write a story about a human meeting an animal) or descriptive(describe a zoo or wildlife suggested by the pic). Seems like the examiners didnt really care much about the questions, but more about “her story” everyone can memories a 40/40 pre-written story, although it shouldn’t be EXACTLY matching, yet at least it should have a bit of connection to the question provided. Icl this actually gives me hope, I can just past my story, and get 40/40. Though, Good luck to everyone doing on the 5th of nov.
The answer is written excellently. However, it does not match the question prompt given; the prompt says to write a description of the picture (which is clearly not what she has done) or write a story about a human meeting an animal. How does the story about a perfume bottle match either of the prompts given by the exam board? And also, is it okay to write a story about something that the question does not ask for?
The question was about a wildlife park- the perfume shop was in a wildlife park in Dubai. Hence the animal toys included in the story. However, your point is very good and further supports the idea that it isn’t so much about the plot rather it’s about the language used.
@@MrEverythingEnglish so if you don't stick with the creative writing question prompt on the day, and use a preplanned story, that's ok? It seems like they would mark you down for not answering the question. Or would you just adapt your story to the prompt?
In my school we are doing Christmas Carol and Romeo and Juliet and the way he summarised these two was soo good I got grade 9 in my mock but I don’t know what quotes to use on Lord of the Flies. Hopefully he sees your comment and makes a 10 quote video.
For me, word for word, punctuation for punctuation, along with a 12 phrases of descriptive settings just in case things don’t work out. Ain’t no way I’m retaking this bih. Also memorising shouldn’t be a problem if you write each paragraph 20 times, and then writing the whole story 20 times.
@@AkshatSanghavi-ci3ie let’s say the question is ‘write a story about a town’ and lets say your pre-written story is about ’a man who is sick, sad, and later dies’. In this case, you can add to your story( oh he lived in a town, the town hosted events blah blah) add like one or maximum 2 paragraphs about the town. Or you can change the whole story, by changing the character, now the town its self is the main character ‘ the town used to be sick- crowded, and it is sad- everyone is leaving it, later dies- its abandoned’ you shouldn’t be taking advice from me cuz I’m not a teacher, but your story should be 60% pre-written, add the rest from your packet.
Not relevant to the video but in paper 1 question 5, could i use chat gpt to help me, for example using it to give me a rule of three using the word exasperated or using the word indignant while in a simile, would that be classified as cheating?
@@chunky4202 thats what i was thinking, so if i something along the lines of ‘the paradoxical noise crept through the silence, both muffled and sharp’ is that bait?
Hi sir. Can we use chatgpt to create a grade 9 story and memorise it? Also please give advice on paper 2 q5, i have mocks in two weeks and I'm not feeling confident
This guy is too funny 😂
Thanks for saving my grades!
yh true
Respect my a fellow comrade. I love how you get straight to the point.
He shushed every teacher
I had to comeback to watch this guy again thx bro I got an 8 in lit I was always stuck on 5s, honestly you’re amazing 😊😊
did u watch him for lang?
What did u do to revise?
Her story did not relate to the question , their is not human meeting an animal in her story, so does that mean they don't focus on if the story matches the question ?
Omg the resit paper was soo good alhamdullilah
Inshallah everyone does good I pray for everyone.
@YSMustiYT same. btw what grade did u get?
@YSMustiYT so it wasnt so good?
I actually regret not watching your videos before I did the exam in school. I am doing the November reset and this will help me alot to getting at least a grade 7.
Thx so much 😊
I got a question, how long have you been revising for
@@aax8152 1 month
how you telling me am eating a biscut and am chocking after he said fiddlesticks. ahaha
Please Can u mark my reponse to paper 1 question 5?
Julia's thumping heart was in her mouth as she swiftly sprinted throughout the forest.
Blood dripped down her side of her forehead, accompanied with dirt that mixed together. She repeatedly turned around to examine her surroundings: to ensure that not a single soul wandered in this area. Her dark, long hair trailed behind her, in sync with the harsh wind that brushed against her already-damaged skin. Thoughts filled her mind. Could she do this? It was her only chance. Before muttering some soft prayers under her restless breaths, she sped up. Nothing could be seen in the distance. Except for the slender trees that stood proudly, while the others latched themselves onto anything in their reach. Bruises and cuts covered her exposed knees, yet she did not stop. It seemed like an endless journey, but it was worth it in the end. At least she hoped so.
The wind howled, echoing throughout her ears. Despite all the obstacles, Julia kept her spirits high.
She had to escape. She had to. The thought of being returned back to Mexico made her blood boil beneath her veins. The solemness was evident through her melancholy eyes.
Silence screamed, causing Julia to cautiously run through the forest: which seemed to have no end. However, it was not as bad as the adventure she had to face before: swimming in the cold sea to reach this destination. She took several breaths, gasping for oxygen as her head became a stone, being repeatedly hit by a hammer. It seemed even as if the air present was ominous, as it's icy, bony hands clutched Julia's neck.
At once, Julia stopped. Before her, stood the item she only longed for in her dreams. Now, she had to hop over the border successfully...
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THSI IS AFTER MY ENGLISH LANGUAGE MOCK IM ACTUALLY GOING TO CRY
Nooooooooooo how do u think u didd?? What year is the paper from❤
Hello,
I’m a Year 12 student, and during last year’s GCSE season, I launched a Discord server aimed at helping students connect over their studies. The server offers a space for students to discuss education and exchange resources they find useful.
I would greatly appreciate it if you would consider sharing this server with the students following your channel. I believe it could be a valuable resource for anyone preparing for their GCSEs.
Thank you very much!
P.S. The server also covers A Levels, so all are welcome.
whats the server
@@pingutyp7524 TH-cam keeps taking down the comment when I give my discord username, no idea why, not really sure what else I can do
TH-cam keeps deleting my comments when I try to give the link, not sure what else I can do, any ideas?
@sportscommentaries4396 put the link on your about/bio of channel
Sir I spend too much time on thinking in English language paper ,what should I do?
i have a year 11 mock could you please make a video for english literature paper 2 its on november 12 please
Our one is on 5th Nov
@@Skaigrayson9670 if possible could u tell me the qwestion?
@@Skaigrayson9670 yes plz tell us the q , i am doing inspector calls idk about daksh
@@yohanx_ same
BRO OURS IS TOMORROW 💀💀
Mr everything, I have my resists in less than two weeks, please pump out as my content as you can, please.
It alr have paper 1 and 2 video on the yt. Just scroll abite down and then u will he able to see it.😊
You learn by quality, not quantity
Facts@@Saka1999-g8y
@@vivdqq lol why do you care ?
@@RehanShah-mh7rlPfff real though
I am going to revise priest 1, Amazon package and Netflix&kill I hope one of these will fit my mock q5 exam thank you very much for saving my grades mr king
sir please do a worlds and lives video 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
by preplan do you mean at home? or spending time during the exam quickly planning?
Since the answer practically had not much to do with the story question, are you always able to write a high quality story with extensive vocabulary, but have iffy creativity?
Does your story always have to link with the story question, of as long as you use amazing vocabulary, clear consistency, are you able to pull the marks?
I think so...
@@AkshatSanghavi-ci3ie sorry my explanation is very bad I meant does it matter much if the story doesn't link much with the question but it includes grade 9 extensive vocabul, devices ect
@@Xx0sozakaooa I'm not 100% sure either
Hi sir your video are good and can you make a video on what is the clauses and types of clauses for my gcse English language because I really struggle with clauses
@MR Everything English thanks for the vid But I am wondering how will a student be able to adapt their preplanned description to the question asked on the day.( For question 5 paper 1)And again thank you for this assistive content you produce
You don’t pre plan the description.
@@MrEverythingEnglish Sir what if i practice a description for a hot/cold environment, windy/rainy/stormy day, busy place etc and prepare sentences i could use for them?
what is i just copy that story and change it abit would i get a u
Brooo give me this video now I have my re sits on November 5th I need it 😖😖
same
Same as me too. But what’s interesting is, how did the girl’s( the student mr everything English is talking about) story match the two questions? I can’t tell if her story is either narrative(write a story about a human meeting an animal) or descriptive(describe a zoo or wildlife suggested by the pic). Seems like the examiners didnt really care much about the questions, but more about “her story” everyone can memories a 40/40 pre-written story, although it shouldn’t be EXACTLY matching, yet at least it should have a bit of connection to the question provided. Icl this actually gives me hope, I can just past my story, and get 40/40. Though, Good luck to everyone doing on the 5th of nov.
The answer is written excellently. However, it does not match the question prompt given; the prompt says to write a description of the picture (which is clearly not what she has done) or write a story about a human meeting an animal. How does the story about a perfume bottle match either of the prompts given by the exam board? And also, is it okay to write a story about something that the question does not ask for?
The question was about a wildlife park- the perfume shop was in a wildlife park in Dubai. Hence the animal toys included in the story.
However, your point is very good and further supports the idea that it isn’t so much about the plot rather it’s about the language used.
@@MrEverythingEnglish so if you don't stick with the creative writing question prompt on the day, and use a preplanned story, that's ok? It seems like they would mark you down for not answering the question. Or would you just adapt your story to the prompt?
@@quilliana_1472 that was what I was thinking!
@@atla_fan.Same
If I take this person's work and re-tweek it would I be accused of cheating or is it fine to do?
@Mr everything english
Please can you make a Lord of the Flies 10 Quote summary
@@HyuseinRemzi Yeah I'd love that too
Hello Mr Everything English, I would like to ask if you could show how to learn vocab or even if you could do so.
anyone else notice how the old year 11's unsubscribe mr everything english just as the new cohort subscribes?
Please make a top 10 quotes video on Lord Of the Flies. It would really help!
In my school we are doing Christmas Carol and Romeo and Juliet and the way he summarised these two was soo good I got grade 9 in my mock but I don’t know what quotes to use on Lord of the Flies. Hopefully he sees your comment and makes a 10 quote video.
yes please do it mr sigma🗿🙏
but the creative writing questiosn say talk about a zoo or a human meeting an animal? how is a perfume linked to that
Hi sir I hope you will be good please sir can you make a video on types of Adjective and types of nouns Allah help you
1:03 thats why hes the best
Do we memorise the story word for word or just the plot?
For me, word for word, punctuation for punctuation, along with a 12 phrases of descriptive settings just in case things don’t work out. Ain’t no way I’m retaking this bih. Also memorising shouldn’t be a problem if you write each paragraph 20 times, and then writing the whole story 20 times.
@Abzpuffy how to make it fit the question though mate?
@@Abzpuffy And where to get the grade 9 story from for memorisation? Do we use chatgpt or write by our own?
@@AkshatSanghavi-ci3ie let’s say the question is ‘write a story about a town’ and lets say your pre-written story is about ’a man who is sick, sad, and later dies’. In this case, you can add to your story( oh he lived in a town, the town hosted events blah blah) add like one or maximum 2 paragraphs about the town. Or you can change the whole story, by changing the character, now the town its self is the main character ‘ the town used to be sick- crowded, and it is sad- everyone is leaving it, later dies- its abandoned’ you shouldn’t be taking advice from me cuz I’m not a teacher, but your story should be 60% pre-written, add the rest from your packet.
@@AkshatSanghavi-ci3ie I used ChatGPT for mine
What was that paper
Not relevant to the video but in paper 1 question 5, could i use chat gpt to help me, for example using it to give me a rule of three using the word exasperated or using the word indignant while in a simile, would that be classified as cheating?
Somebody flipping answer this question i have got my nov resit next week
@ Same bro😂😂
i mean the examiner doesn’t know you so, if it isnt so high level that its clear that it didnt come from you, it should be fine, no?
@@chunky4202 thats what i was thinking, so if i something along the lines of ‘the paradoxical noise crept through the silence, both muffled and sharp’ is that bait?
@@idk-ud6kl no but use chat got as a base for ur writing and make it into ur own words and ideas
will you do a video for us resit students and help for our exams? im struggling please help
Sir love from India, but sir what was the question
talk about a zoo or a human meeting an animal
Hi sir. Can we use chatgpt to create a grade 9 story and memorise it? Also please give advice on paper 2 q5, i have mocks in two weeks and I'm not feeling confident
Hello
@@mohammedpatel879 Hi
you will get plagiarised if you use any kind of AI
@@bybaries6414 Is there no other way coz he said you can use chatgpt in some other video
Change it.
Pls make more videos where you go through real grade 9 english exam.
bet