Four Steps Backward | Keigo Takami x Listener | BNHA ASMR Fanfiction Reading Finale
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Listener: "i don't have a quirk!"
Me: then how did you rip a door off it's hinges?!
Ok so I just got done listening and this was amazing! The voice acting, the music, the effects, the writing, THIS IS A MASTERPIECE!!! Not only that but the emotional moments made me actually cry. Give this girl a Oscar. 🏆
Aaaah thank you so much! You were a joy to hang out with! I'm so glad you had a good time!
@@LilSpaceFreckles Aww thank you, it was fun! Not the mention the chat cracked me up
Fr just take this already 👑🏆
Pls make more series
That was sad, terrifying, and also amazing at the same time. I literally thought you were gonna end it with the listener and Hawks going splat on the pavement. Then the epilogue came and I was like "oh my gosh thank you". And just so you know it was very detailed there was a point where I cried, where I was terrified, and a point where I wanted to throw my phone across the room it was so gross. But overall it was really really good. You did a great job, Freckles. Sending lots of love and support!
Thank you so much now I'm about to cry aaah I'm so happy you enjoyed it! 🥺
@lil space freckles Please don't cry! I just wanted to show love and let you know you do an awesome job! Here I give big virtual hug.
I'm a little late but oh my god this has made me cry, laugh, smile, want to pull my hair out and just made me feel so many emotions. My heart BROKE when kuroo was yelling at his dad and I nearly screamed when hawks started to fall. This was so well written and it was just so beautiful 😭
Thank you so much! It really means a lot to know I could touch so many emotions 🥺 I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
*Cough* some of y'all didn't stay past the bloopers and it shows 😏
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Ask and you shall receive! The entire fic is available on Archive Of Our Own! Check it out here:
archiveofourown.org/works/42203709/chapters/105960630
Thank you
AHH! Shes back! I have been on the edge of my seat for this story!
Haha! I'm so excited for you all to see it! It's a ride
HEY! I SAW U UNDER MLB224'S COMMENT A FEW DAYS AGO:)
@@UrFairyGayMum OH I SAW YOU TOO!!!
This series is a masterpiece omg, i dont think any hawks fic could ever top this
That is a HUGE compliment thank yo so much 🥺 this Chicken Nugget holds a very special place in my heart. Character development and analysis for him is like a science for me 😅😂
The 6 month wait was *definitely* worth it. It was so detailed and super hooking, it was honestly great. Thanks for giving me this experience lol, I really enjoyed it!
I've been waiting for this for so long. Thank you!!
I'm excited for you all to see it! Thanks for waiting!
Did I stay up til basically 7 am to listen to this after i couldn't fall asleep in the middle of the night?
Yes
Was it worth it?
Absolutely yes! Every second of it!
Wow Freckles. Just. W o w.
I've been following you since the Two Steps Ahead episode and b o i did you grow! Your quality was great back then but now? Your ability to modulate your voice and the sfx you put in the videos really sell the immersion. I had palpitations more than a couple times there and both your canon characters interpretation and your ocs fit so well together in the story I just- damn.
This was a fun ride and I'm so glad i could listen to the finale with no interruption. I'm of course sad this story is over and probably yelled at the screen when credits rolled (despite being absolutely amused and related too hard at the bloopers) and at the MC for not worrying at least a tiny bit about Hawks in the epilogue until like- the last 5 secs and not having him come back for a last chat before the series ended, but I certainly can't complain. This was an amazing rollercoaster and I loved every second of it.
Like others said there were times where i felt terrified, and others where i wanted it all to stop and change (coffKuro'sflashbackcoff) but wow
This is probably my favorite MHA fanfic involving Hawks periodt. So immersive and well planned in every small detail. If I wasn't finally out of the adrenaline rush this gave me I'd rush to the table to draw some fanart of this cuz damn was it that good-!
Thank you for spending 12+ hours in the recording booth for this, your sacrifice paid off 100%+
Can't wait to hear more from you
Aaaaaah thank you so much I'm so glad the hard word was able to pay off 😭I definitely want to explore MC more after the whole ordeal and all of the fallout (hah. pun. falling off buildings.) that comes afterward. Thank you so much I could gush for hours about these kids.
@@LilSpaceFreckles ba-dum tsssss
We love them puns
I loved this MC tbh, the sass was on point lolol seeing them again would be great (the awkward interactions with Endeavor were the perfect fun release after the tension ngl xD)
And PUH- L E A S E gush about them 👀
Hold on lemme rewatch the entire series again 😭
Oop, from the top!
15:20 I never feelt that confident and nervous at the same time bevor
By the way it’s an amazing video I love it so much :D
"I took 5 months off to cut you bitches some slack. Tell a friend to it tell a friend, SHE'S BAAAAAAACK 🤭"
Pfffffft you win the comments game 🤣
@Silkyxcore That's hilarious! 🤣🤣
@@LilSpaceFreckles on that comedy grind
I need like more hawks x listener with this story line … NOW
Ahhhhhh it’s back!!!!!
Yeeees!
I can't wait! I'm so excited!
I am too! I'm so happy it's finally out!
I almost yelled out in excitement when I saw this but everybody was still asleep. Lazy bums.
@@mylittlelynn0 haha! Quiet squeals lmao
@@mylittlelynn0 ME TOO LMFAO IM SI EXITED TO SEE HER BACK
@Natureazi WE CAN BE EXCITED BUDDIES!
Ok I’ve finally caught up and OH MY WHAT A RIDE. I did not take four steps backwards I was stumbling into a moonwalk off a cliff the music and voice acting gave me chills on multiple occasions. I remember after being absolutely shook from the ending of the first part. So much so that I bumped into my desk and had my closet cosplay hawks shades fall off the shelf of my desk and that really was my breaking point fr! 🥰
But in all seriousness, its super impressive how distinct and powerful your lines were and the story itself had me pausing multiple times just from how overwhelming good it was. Thank you for putting so much effort into this silly little fanfic reading that puts me into my silly little cardiac arrest ❣️
Keep up the good work bestie!
Aaah thank you so much! Your comment made my day lmao I honestly love putting a lot of effort into something as silly as fanfic readings on TH-cam! Sometimes to my detriment 😂 I find it nearly impossible to make a one shot, it almost always has to be a saga lmao. I hope your glasses are okay!
i was literally yelling the whole time i was listening, so many emotions going through my head every second! The epilogue makes me think this story isnt over yet but at the same time i feel like it is 😭
This was a great story, amazing job Freckles!
Thank youuuuu! And....😏 is all I'll say
This is the most emotional rollercoaster I just dang-this Is amazing freckles
I want more of this Fic! In case I'm not making sense, I want another squeal, no I need another squeal! Please SpaceFreckle! give me more of this series! I'm Begging YOU!!! PLEASE TAKE US TO I-ISLAND!!! 😃😃😃😍😍😍
omg I can't wait, I'm so happy
Saaame! I'm excited to see everyone again!
Im so happy your posting again I love all of your stories
Thank you so much 😭 I so happy you enjoy them! It takes a lot of work to get them out 💕🌌
@@LilSpaceFreckles will you be posting more often again
@@mariahware6595 I have a lot of ideas but there’s a lot of writing and recording and editing to be done 😅 I'm a one astronaut machine which is why things take so long haha
@@LilSpaceFreckles either way im super happy your posting again
@@mariahware6595 thanks I really appreciate it ☺
I love you so much everytime I listen to your asmr specially hawks asmr my depression is gone while listining to you even if it's only for a bit I still appreciate you and love you, I need more hawks asmr's from you specially your voice and how you do it it's so good I can't get enough of it I love how you do everything so correctly and and I love how you pur bloopers on the end so people can see how this isn't easy as they think it is I love you so much and keep going ❤❤❤❤❤
OMG IM IN LOVE WITH UR WRITING 😭 PLEASE WRITE MORE 🙏🙏🙏
Mmm cliff hangers
It's so great to see you back! Ahhh - this reading was fantastic from beginning to end. Kudos kudos kudos! ❤
BRUH YOU REALLY GOT ME WITH THE EPILOGUE I WAS SOBBING
Hahaaaa! Good things come to those who stay past the bloopers!
I've listened to this 4 part series 2 times now and I've listened to the per-queal 3 times! so please I would be so Happy to get more of the Mystery Model (listener) X Hawks. I can't help but feel, left on a cliffhanger/craving for more content on this.
God! I was about to be so livid if the story just ended with the fade to black and the bloopers (not that they aren't HILARIOUS! ) Thank the stars you were able to add in the epilouge, because it's already 4 in the morning and I was planning on silently screaming, monologing to myself, and throwing everything across my room until the sun rose!
With the ranting out of the way, I rate all of this ♾️♾️/♾️! The delivery, the emotions, the timing, the anticipation from the last upload, and the adrenaline made this all worth it! Your time in theater really paid off! Here's your awards, girl! 🎖🏅🥇🏆👑
NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY! YES YESSSSSSS AAAAAAAAA CRYING, SCREAMING JUST DOING EVERYTHING 😭Ive been for this one TURN IT UP!🤸♀️
Yeeees! It'll be worth the wait I promise!
AAAAHHHHHH I’M SO HAPPY also YOU’RE BACK 😁
I'm happy to be back! I've been buzzing all week!
This would make a great movie lmao😂😂
just binged all the other parts and omg i am so ready for the finale
Ohohoooo It's gonna be a doozy let me tell you asdfghjkl
it: "ending"
me: WAIT WHAT. NO NO NO THIS CANT END LIKE THIS WHAT ITS NOT EVEN-WHAT GIRL WHY
also me a few seconds later: might as well stay for the chaotic bloopers:)
ALSO ALSO ME A FEW MINS LATER: FUCK YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH ITS NOT OVER YET LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeeeees I would never do y'all dirty like that!
Wait omg thats so cool! I love this, and I hope you do another one as supernovas hero careers takes off! This inspire me as a new OC for me
Finally! It’s back!🎉🎉🎉
Yeeees! I spent months going "don't worry y'all it's coming! It's gonna be big!" Haha, clear out 2 hours of your Saturday 😂
AAAAAAAAAA
WHERE DO I START???
THE WRITING - GORGEOUS! VIVID IMAGERY, WONDERFUL USE OF LANGUAGE AND LITERARY DEVICES SUCH AS SIMILE TO PORTRAY A SPECIFIC AND POWERFUL IMAGE.
(I am going to stop writing in capital). The dialogue was wonderful, it felt natural and yet was so thoughtful. The pacing was immaculate, and your use of noise is something I deeply enjoyed. As for the actual plot - ???!!!! Each character's journey throughout the story is so fleshed out and interesting and so well written. I love Kudo's (is that how you spell his name? Kuro?) characterization, and I love love love how you wrote his backstory and explored his character. His blind desperation, his downward Spiral turning into madness was written SO WELL. The plot itself was interesting and engaging, heartbreaking and beautiful. The end definitely scared me until I listened to the epilouge. I loved it! The voice acting, too, was engaging, emotional, and wonderful. The distinction between the characters, the spacing and delivery of the lines? Fabulous. THIS WAS SO GOOD AND I HAVE SO MUCH MORE TO SAY ABOUT IT, but I'll leave it at:: GREAT JOB, THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS WONDERFUL SERIES, AND GOOD NIGHT
Me after reading your comment: {Stays for bloopers staring at the screen} *Sees epilogue* "GASP" (Okay I started listening to this today and Im obsessed rn... So when I heard the end I wanted to cry so bad ToT)
Cant wait for another hawks fic! Maybe a spin off?
Already in the woooorks!
Adding another comment cuz I didn't say everything i wanted -
The name supernova? Gorgeous. Love the implication that we are joining the superhero world.
I'm so glad Hawks is okay, during the epilouge I was like "is Hawks ok??? Is Hawks okay??"
My boy K!! Shipped to a remote facitily? Ik it's for his own good but I hope they have therapists and positive reinforcement there.
I'm still sad we didn't get to have a pastry with him tho.
The flashback was so awful (not as in awful writing, as in awful for the child) GOSH your voiceacting made me want to sob, him just screaming for his mother??? Ow ow ow ow
ILY but his father makes my skin CRAWL ik he's not all bad but he just makes me want to punch something.
The bodies in the rafters? The imagery and description?? I love all those lines in particular, my heart dropped.
The parallels between "He thinks you're nothing" and "you're everything"
AAAAAAAAA!?!
I'm so proud of the mc btw, the bit onstage had me smiling thru my nervous tension. Oh my gosh Hawks desperately trying to dissuade Kudo from going down his path?? Kudo not listening?? HAWKS WANTING TO DIE RATHER THAN HURT HIS LOVE?? I AM NOT OKAY
Bro no way :0 was this FR the finale or am I tripping balls
WAIT THEY DIE??
There has to be more pls i wanna see more of hawks
bro i forgot how much i love this story i wish there was a session 2 of what happeneds after but i understand if you don’t do that my mind just creates things😂❤❤
How many people almost had a heart attack before the epilogue and was like "THANK SKY DADDY!!" when it started...
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Don't worry, I gotchu I promise I'm not a monster!
@@LilSpaceFreckles I know that but I was still scared! Btw the finale was incredible!! 🤩 I didn't get to be there during the premiere unfortunately but the second I had a free second I immediately rushed to TH-cam! It was phenomenal!!! 🤩 I was so inspired I started getting back to my own novel and writing more! You're work really is amazing!!
Это шикарно! Я даже хочу теперь продолжение! Как они будут признаваться в чувствах друг-другу, поедут на остров и остальное 🖤🙏 это гениально, шикарно, великолепно . У вас талант! Нереальный монтаж и огромные старания
you just keep getting better and better istg
Its finally coming back ive waited for so long.😁😅
Yees! Thanks for waiting 😀
41mins and 57 sec in and ima just gonna *intense inhale* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa
I want more fanfics 😢 pleease
GIRL I CANT RN. YOU HAD ME IN TEARS ABSOLUTELY BALLING. THAT ENDING WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! Im DEFINITELY subscribing to you! But only for Hawks stories, because im loyal to my birb man 😭😭😭😭
Ps do you have any hawks oneshots or whatever on wattpad or anything?
YOU SCARED ME, WHEN THE BLOOPERS CAME I THOUGHT IT WAS DONE FR😭🤦🏿♀️
Hahahaaaa good things come to those who stay past the bloopers!
Ahhhhh I’m so excited that it’s back!!!!
YSSSEEEEE! YOUR BACK
Back and better than ever!
wow that was a wild ride
ps jaffar is my new favorite character I love him and his snakes >:)
Aaaaw I'm so glad Jaffar has some love! He's another fellow Caribbean homie from St.Croix. His snakes are locks!
Plzzzz tell me there will be more soon! I love this so much ❤
I love you so much your voice helps me sleep
Aaah thank you so much! I'm always shook when y'all say that because I'm always yelling in these fics 😅😂
BRO I TOTALLY FORGOT TO WATCH THIS IM SO EXCITED I'LL WRITE BACK IN LIKE AN HOUR (I WATCH ON 2X SPEED) IM SO EXCITED WOOO
I was just watching angle with a shot gun and I saw this and I showed my sister and we both were so exited!!! Can't wait to see what happens!!!
P.S. my notifications aren't working😥
Aaaah! It's always so crazy to me that people talk about my channel irl ☺ I hope you and your sister both enjoy it!
Sorry this is a late update but I watched the video when it was live (I think it was live) I can't remember but I watched it as soon as possible and I loved the audio
I'm crying this is so sad @Lil Space Freckles. I wish we had a part 5
Did ya watch until the veeeeeeery end? uwu
@@LilSpaceFreckles yeah it's a great work of art. We missed you uwu
5:46 MY EARSSSS MY POOR EARSSSSS 😭 i was wearing heaphones and the multiple "thank you 30" scared the SHIT out of me it was coming from both heaphone at a SEPERATE TIME . reminder to not have my volume that up EVER again🥲
Lol yeah that's like 30 different voices in 30 different tones all at once
AHHHHH FINALLY IVE LITERALLY CHECKED YOUR CHANNEL WVERY DAYYY!! I HOPE YOUR DOING WELL!! EEEEEEEEEEE
I'm doing alright! I'm excited the wait is soon over!
@@LilSpaceFreckles EEEE IM SO GLAD YOUR DOING GOOD!
I miss this so much
I'm so happy to bring it back 🥺
the urge to animate this is killing me rn i literally could if i just had the time AJDLFSJFLs
Duuuude if you did I would drop dead right here and now. Just- ✨dead✨
@@LilSpaceFreckles im not kidding the DEMPTATION IS THERE! And if i find the time im totally gonna try! Lets but the pin on the "if" tho😅 cuz rn time aint showing me mercy
This was a true masterpiece. Please keep doing more🤎🤎🤎🤎🤎👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Thank you!!! I have a few ideas up my sleeve 💕🌌
I feel like i just got punched in the face
100/10 good work im so happy to see the finale AAAAAAAAAAA
Thank you so much! You're 10000/10!
Please Tell me this isn’t the end😭😭😭😭 PLEASE
54:42 *clears throat with evil grin* Why Freckles, is that _a discord notification I hear??_
Straight to jail.
Ive been checking every day and when I finally saw it I couldn’t believe my eyes ❤
The day has finally arrived! Thank you so much for your patience 💕🌌 it'll surely be worth the wait! 🥰
Omg i love you soo muchh❤❤
whats the backround music when we were falling with keigo at the end??
Hi Freckles! I just wanted to ask if you have the story written in any platform?
Hi! I'm thinking about putting the fic up on Archive of Our Own!
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
time to rewatch the series-
Was anyone else vibing with the chicken song 😂😂
The Quick'n Chick'n jingle is cluuutch
@@LilSpaceFreckles 😂😂😂
Ok ik I’m late time difference and everything but!
WTF!?!? Are we dead?!?!? I don’t understand Thai is gonna feel like loosing Bakugo all over again so are we dead?!
Edit: heh I think I over reacted that was still like 20 min before the end and I thought that was the end 😅 srry
Other edit: THIS WAS SOOOOO GOOD! LIKE BOU HAVE I NOT FELT THIS EXITED IN A VERY LONG TIME THE STORY LITERALY GAVE ME AN ADRENALINE RUSH!!
Also will there be a bonus?
And alsooo when Endeavor said “see you soon… Supernova” I DIED!❤ I rlly rlly love this!❤️
Hahaaaa I have more stuff up my sleeves for these kids this will not be the last you see of them!
Yessssss! THANK YOU!
WE DIED?!
YOUR BACKKKK 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 YAYYYY
Whoop whoop!
Omgggg I LOVE it like sm ahhh I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it!!!
Bro
I've spent a lot of my time recently preparing for succos (a Jewish holiday, I'm like fully orthodox jewish) and then I'll be spending several days... having succos. But when I'm free, you bet I'll write you a paragraph
Yeaaaah! I'd love to hear your feedback! Take your time!
I'm a day late but, YOUR ALIVEEEE 😭😭📈
Howdy!
You have confuzzled me completely and utterly with the ending 🤲🏽👑
And this was amazing I can't even put it into words because they might as well put this on Netflix 📈
pls tell me there will be a plus episode pls dont leave it like this im heart broken
There will be more uwu
@@LilSpaceFreckles the joy of life is that it never ends to fast wooooooo
Finally finished but now i need more
Staring at my screen for 20 hours 👀
I admire your ambition my dude, wear sun glasses so your eyes don't fry! 😎
I'm so glad I could join! I love the post and the stream but is it really the end 🤔💜love your vids and please take care of yourself
Hehehee I maaaaaaay have something up my sleeve
I’m crying ahhhhh
I CAN'T WAIT 😫
I'm super hype for you all to see it!
I’m so hyped I dead stoped what I was doing when I saw it
Aaaaah! I know that feeling 😂 I'm glad you're looking forward to it!
half way through the video amd i started grabbing my forehead and silently screaming no
oh dear god
me scared
Ooooh nooo! Yeah this gets a liiiil spooky
@@LilSpaceFreckles i have seen shit but having the shit left to my imagination is another thing. My imagination is a nightmare and i am very afraid of it
I got an idea for the next story one word
Spy v.s Spy 😋
Are you open to a spiritually based interview?
Please tell me your making another part
dude PLEASE make a PETER PARKER HALLOWEEN EPISODE🥺🤤
AAAAAAHHHHHHH I CANT WAIT
Dude neither can I I'm so excited to see what you think 😭
@@LilSpaceFreckles IT WAS AMAZING. THIS WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT
@@Funky.Monkey. thank you so muuuch 🥺🥺🥺
I thought it finished but I saw that there was more lol ahhhhh
Yeees the epilogue! No dead homies in the building!
@@LilSpaceFreckles thank god I’m hyped to see if there will be a next part
Loved it started shedding tears towards the ending. But I'm kind of curious do they live happily ever after or do they go kurr splat
Did you watch the video to the very end 😉
@@LilSpaceFreckles I think I did?
@@ivypantoja2019 even aaaaafter the bloopers? 😀
Just finished listening to the end and Oh my goody goody gum drops that ending AMAZING 🤩👍
I feel like you should continue it yeah like what's going to happen to Hawks and listener and at l Island
WILL THERE BE A SEQUEL!! I NEED MORE SUPERNOVAxHAWKS
I've got some drafts 😏
It's final here!!! ^^
After a long wait it has arrived!
@@LilSpaceFreckles yes after good wait it is finally here! ^^
Noooooo I just now saw you posted this but I can’t watch it rn😭😭😭
No worries take your time! I hope you enjoy it when you get to it!
Omg I listened to it and I almost had a heart attack when it “ended” then I saw it had a bunch of time left. I always stay for the bloopers anyway so I was so relieved when it said epilogue😂
It was amazing btw. I did cry at a few points tho
OMG I LOVE IT
Thank yoooou!!! I'm glad you enjoyed ☺
1:30:56
NOO IT CANT END LIKE THIS
Did you watch the video to the veeeery end? 😏
@@LilSpaceFreckles YESS OFC I DID
WAIT NO
@@raythegoat1 oop 😏
@@LilSpaceFreckles JUST WATCHED TILL THE END AND OMGGGGGGG I LOVE IT