Hey Miss!! Thank you so much for your videos- they're super helpful and you've honestly been a lifesaver :) Could you please make videos on the other poems in the anthology as well if possible? Thank you so so much!!!
Hiya, I was wondering if you could mark my work based on if it was Paper 1 Q2, I found a different text so it's not off of past papers nor composed under exam conditions. This is the answer: ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1. The writer uses the verb "huff" to suggest that Mr Wolf is like a cruel father, 2. fed up with his sons' stupidity. 3. He thinks the pigs are idiotic as they "built a house of straw like a haystack", metaphorically conveying that not only were the pigs stupid, 4. they also deserved to be eaten because they were lazy 5. so that he feels justified in destroying their homes. 6. The writer personifies Mr Wolf as "ruthless and bored" to imply that Mr Wolf has met similarly stupid pigs many times before and so 7. not only should we sympathise with him 8. but we should be rooting for him to barbeque the first two pigs. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Is it ok to structure it like that? For P1 is it 1 mark per explanation, so 20 explanations for P1 Q4? For analysing, what do you ask yourself? What do you tell yourself or think etc? I'm struggling to analyse effectively, u make it look soo easy! If it's not 8/8 or just scratching 8/8, how could I improve it? Also, please could you make a video on structuring analysis essays, like the PEEL or PETA or PEA or PEA Sentences (What I used here), so I know what to do. Thank you so much, ur vids are great as well and I love how ur resources are actually free, unlike 99% of other tutors. It shows u actually care about ur students and us doing well, as oppose to the money! TYSM P.S. I tried using the link so you could mark the work, but it didn't work several times, not sure whether it's on my side so sorry if it's an inconvenience sending it here.
one of the best English teachers on youtube. truly grade 9 analysis. can you please do significant sigarettes and the other prose texts? 🙏🙏
yes!! I hope she does
thanks so much, all of your videos have been a great help 🙏
So helpful thank you so much. Could you do more of the poems in power and conflict?
Please make more for the rest of the igcse poems 🙏
Hey Miss!! Thank you so much for your videos- they're super helpful and you've honestly been a lifesaver :) Could you please make videos on the other poems in the anthology as well if possible? Thank you so so much!!!
thank you
could you do one on the Tyger, do not go gentle into that good night, half past two and if
please do the iGCSE prose text 'Night'!!
Thank youu :))
Hiya, I was wondering if you could mark my work based on if it was Paper 1 Q2, I found a different text so it's not off of past papers nor composed under exam conditions. This is the answer:
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1. The writer uses the verb "huff" to suggest that Mr Wolf is like a cruel father,
2. fed up with his sons' stupidity.
3. He thinks the pigs are idiotic as they "built a house of straw like a haystack", metaphorically conveying that not only were the pigs stupid,
4. they also deserved to be eaten because they were lazy
5. so that he feels justified in destroying their homes.
6. The writer personifies Mr Wolf as "ruthless and bored" to imply that Mr Wolf has met similarly stupid pigs many times before and so
7. not only should we sympathise with him
8. but we should be rooting for him to barbeque the first two pigs.
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Is it ok to structure it like that?
For P1 is it 1 mark per explanation, so 20 explanations for P1 Q4?
For analysing, what do you ask yourself? What do you tell yourself or think etc? I'm struggling to analyse effectively, u make it look soo easy!
If it's not 8/8 or just scratching 8/8, how could I improve it?
Also, please could you make a video on structuring analysis essays, like the PEEL or PETA or PEA or PEA Sentences (What I used here), so I know what to do. Thank you so much, ur vids are great as well and I love how ur resources are actually free, unlike 99% of other tutors. It shows u actually care about ur students and us doing well, as oppose to the money! TYSM
P.S. I tried using the link so you could mark the work, but it didn't work several times, not sure whether it's on my side so sorry if it's an inconvenience sending it here.