THIS IS INCREDIBLE? i cannot believe you animated the entire thing by yourself, I love seeing indie animation with true passion behind it,, deserving of SO much more attention
I feel like not enough people are mentioning how fun it was that the alarm from when she was stealing the ship fit perfectly with the music. The overall artistry of this is absolutely incredible
@@atomicreptiliascreator738 To me it wasn't as bad, pretty messy at the start and just overall inconsistent. Not as "magically everything goes perfect" but a little more human-like to me. Tho I wouldn't want them to make more movies this way lol
I love that we can tell why Atlas probably wants to leave. The way that she talks to the ship when flying it, and she hated having Atmosphere with her we can safely assume she never had many friends, and she would prefer to be alone and isolated. That is called GOOD WRITING
To be fair, rather than wanting to leave because she had no friends it could be that she's made no friends because she's obsessed with leaving, or purposely didn't make friends she'd have to eventually leave behind.
You animated, half an hour of indescribable artwork, ALL BY YOURSELF? The pure TALENT, MOTIVATION, and PERSISTENCE to keep going with this project is absolutely PHENOMENAL. I really do hope you are proud of yourself. Along with everyone else who worked on this. I can't even imagine how long this took.
The fact that not only the animation is done by one person but the beautiful score was also done by that same person is phenomenal. There needs to be more indie animation like this. I hope you go far with this concept.
Im reading these comments and YOU ANIMATED THIS ENTIRE THING BY YOURSELF??? Dude that is INCREDIBLE 😭 My current fav character is Atmosphere, hes such a goofy goober i wanna hug his flooooof
OMG 30 MINUTES OF ANIMATION ALL BY YOURSELF!!?!? You should be so proud of yourself for even finishing it this, not to mention how well done everything is!! I have been following you for years and I am so excited to see where this story goes!!
I think everyone should understand that a 30 minute animation made by one person on a budget of nothing or close to nothing isnt going to match the polish of studio backed projects. I think you've done a very good job
It’s honestly an incredible level of polish. I tried making a short film for my thesis and prioritized quality, and as a tradeoff I straight up wasn’t able to finish the film. Granted I’m sure this person has much more experience under their belt based on what they were able to put out, but it really goes to show how much actually goes into making something like this.
The level of polish is genuinely impressive. But I'm deeply disappointed with the timing and pacing. I watched most of it at 2x speed and it still felt sluggish with regards to the storyline.
@justinwood2 Yeah, I agree the animation is quite polished. But polish can apply to all aspects of storytelling, including writing, which I was referencing as well
My only problem was I thought I had to much explaining well hand holding when her drawings are good enough. Just a few tweeks and it will be far better than the crap films of today which has lazy writing and us not caring for the characters.
I love how Atlas and Atmosphere have names and color palettes that pertain to their universe while Nebula and the villain (who reminds me of Hordak in the best possible way) have designs that reflect their own universe. I love all of these little details, and I truly hope that this show gets a crew and continues, because this has insane potential!! 💕💕
Quasar gives me Wind Waker Ganondorf vibes. In that they are both very powerful and old, and are desperately clinging onto a past that no longer exists, even at the expense of others.
I don't know if people realize how much actually goes into this kind of production. As if animating the characters isn't hard enough, there's the backgrounds, the pacing of the scenes, the writing itself, the sound design, the music, the voice acting, set design, prop design, character design Every single thing I am seeing and hearing that to be made from scratch. And the fact that it was not only done, but done well, is actually ridiculous. The determination of the human spirit never fails to take me by surprise Congratulations on this incredible accomplishment! Edit: I really love this villain (or I assume he is?) I feel like he was set up so well. He's sympathetic and well rounded, and also has good reasons for what he does. I can't help but find him really intriguing
Is that supposed to be criticism? Because first of all she reacted in emotion you're not supposed to take it seriously, second of all she didn't kidnap him it was an accident, and third of all a giant space tear appearing out of nowhere isn't her fault at all.
@@JohnDanielRay1 no, I’m slandering a character, jokingly (and specifically, how her initial reaction was to blame him, rather than herself, although she came around, was not related to the space tear.) Because most good characters have flaws, and it’s fun to poke fun at their flaws. I genuinely am excited for what’s next, I just found her character flaw funny.
after viziepop's success with helluva boss and hazbin hotel it fills me with joy to see other indie artists/animators produce their work. Keep it up! You guys are the ones who truly care about animation!
@@bobertbwild1350That should honestly be expected, this is animated by mostly one person! Theres going to be mistakes, and errors, and maybe awkward moments. Not to mention it’s also the first episode. But that’s ok! :)
@@AmaxaryI deleted my previous comments because I didn’t know how to put my thoughts into words or describe why I felt that way. I agree your comment is completely right, but maybe they should tweak the first episode and make some changes. Also the episode is just so boring to watch, and it takes 30 minutes to watch it all, not all of us have time on our hands like that. Also the “Awkward moments” is what makes the first episode so bad. Here are some things that they could change. Scene: Stealing Spaceship. 1: She makes a the smallest noise, takes him an abnormal amount of time to say hey what was that? 2: They walk away for like 5 seconds and she can now suddenly stomp and run her way there? 3: The sizing of the spaceships is very weird when she enters, first they’re fun size and in the next they’re bigger than her. But as to be expected, not even that bad though. 4: you know what is bad? They’re security measures, this is where things go horribly wrong from the scene. She goes to the spaceship and the alarm goes off because she stepped over the white box or something. There’s just no security in sight, like at all. Where did they go? I mean for a futuristic place with thousands worth of equipment there should be some security. This just removes the suspense from the scene and making it overall a really boring experience. And excuse me? Where did you learn how to fly a spaceship? Isn’t this your first time? At least say you learned from TH-cam. There’s not even a lick of security when she exits, or even a security measure after the alarms go off. Like make the place go in lock down, notify the police? Something at least! It would be way better if she snuck in with guards inside the building like checking camera while she’s sneaking to steal the spaceship trying not to make noise, and then failing, them calling other guards or police to come to area. And she escapes, damaging the ship in the process because this is her first time flying and security should have security measures. Scene: Security Checkpoint 1: When he blind folds the guy, at first he screams like a maniac. And then is suddenly just chill with it? 2: when the other security people see that their friend is being kidnapped, they just stare in awkward silence until one guy comes up and is like what is happening. You signed up for the job, shouldn’t you be a trained professional? Say something! I know it doesn’t happen often but have common sense, is everyone an introvert? Only then she calls for backup. 3: when he runs over, he just runs in silence not yelling or anything for her to stop. 4: When she escapes the police were notified, yay! Finally they did something right! A chase scene we love to see it! Oh wait… uhm… what the fuck? Are… this is the most chill chase scene I’ve ever scene. Shouldn’t you be panicking more? And the police, and shouldn’t you be dodging or something and not be going in a straight line? But oh wait! I forgot! The police don’t have any security measures because I’m sure no one has ever done this before. So instead of shooting at them or something they decide to slowly chase behind and do absolutely nothing.
@@AmaxaryAgain, those scenes are supposed to be intense. But they’re just not, at all. Also they might be doing too much, I feel like they could’ve split the episode in two. With my changes, of course. But then again, it’s fine how it is. And it’s an okay first episode for the first time they have released an episode. I just feel like they could’ve worked on those scenes better. Also in the chase scene it doesn’t even feel like they’re going fast, they’re just chillaxing. Idek. It’s supposed to get my heart pumping, but it really just doesn’t. The scenes just aren’t as they should be.
the fact that you animated and made the music for this is absolutely incredible. as someone who’s animated a short film before huge hats off to you this is so great!!!
Came here from glitchX, and I gotta say that this absolutely exceeded my expectations, especially that you've animated all of it by yourself! I wish you all the best, gl with everything!
This was so f*cking great. I like how Quasar's attitude flips constantly between evil emperor and savior. But in the end he's, both. I really love bad guys that aren't necessarily evil. Or at least not evil in the classic sense. I'm hoping for more of this beautiful show. It's so awesome.
I can’t believe you made and COMPOSED THIS The music is amazing! Everything about this is so much cleaner than most shows with full budgets and teams. You’ve managed to put so much relevant introductions in 30 minutes without making it feel too fluffy and I was invested the entire time. The colors, effects, expressions, characters, voice acting all amazing! Even without the context of just how amazing this is as a product on TH-cam
Everyone is saying how amazing it is you did all the animation and music by yourself. and that is not a lie! I personally LOVED the music. You should be very proud. No matter if it will go viral or not, you did something fantastic and you should hold this accomplisment with pride about the story, I am VERY invested to see where it will go. I think it has all the elements to be something amazing. I am chearing for your success!
honestly, the music was the best part for me! The animation and voice acting are really good, especially for a small production, but that music is so perfect. It matched every story beat and emotion perfectly!
THIS IS CRAZY AMAZING??? I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF THIS AND oh my gOSH I love the character designs SO MUCH!! And it’s so colorful and pretty and so well animated too HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE???? First episode and I’m hooked!!! I seriously can’t wait to see more of this!! AHHHH 💖💖💖
I really like the concepts and art style. The writing needs a bit more of the "Show, don't tell" narrative technique. Too often, the story beats were told to us instead of shown. I think some of the planets eating stuff would have been better conveyed through subtext instead of directly stating his motivation. However, a lot was crammed into this one episode. I love how the characters' personalities were shown and the voice acting is very impressive and I look forward to seeing what's next (Edit) Omg you animated this by youself, THATS AMAZING.
no,stop just shut up you guys hear one writing technique and act like it's law when it's now somtimes it's good to use but other times it's not bc you need things explained to you other wise no one would fuckin understand what's going on
you animated this entire thing by YOURSELF?!?! you’re a madman. this is so gorgeous and awe inspiring, this is something that you can be proud of for the rest of your life. absolutely stunning work. congratulations
I like this story so much. The characters have creative designs, the problems they run into are believable, and their personalities make sense! This story has a lot of reminiscence to She-Ra, and I can tell you likely grew up watching it. I don't know if you want criticism for things so far at all, but there definitely were some story beats that just didn't hit home for me! I already feel bad for our clear antagonist, with the "I am missing my family and planet" arc being introduced as a retribution concept so early, and especially as their countenance changes so rapidly through the story in a rather bipolar fashion from guarded and mean to vulnerable. It's only your first episode, and I think you could definitely introduce them as an outright terrible guy. The beats in some areas feel rushed, especially the "fight, timeskip, okay i guess we're working together" scene. It almost feels like it didn't need to happen- it would have left some time to extend the gag of not understanding a handshake or something. However, don't take these criticisms as a mark of failure. You've only just made your first huge public content, and these are the marks of someone learning how to structure a story. Leaning on some cliches here and there is expected and feels good to see! I loved Atlas especially for her inventive and rebellious attitude, she really reflects a lot of my own nature. I can't wait to see more about this and maybe even a little fan community form around it! Please don't ever stop doing what you love.
This is honestly incredible that you managed to do all of this ON YOUR OWN? THIRTY WHOLE MINUTES TOO?? Dude you’re insane and already have to say Nebula is my favourite! Really impressive animation and voice work, I hope to see you and your VAs get the appreciation and respect you all deserve! ^^ Edit: also when the music kicked in at 3:30 that was a genuine bop
The fact this is built by one person is incredible. Perfect character interaction, story driven animation with comedy when it matters. I can’t wait to see what’s next. Subscribed.
I'd like to start out by saying the animation is wonderful, and the voices are a very good fit the characters. However, the dialogue could use quite a lot of work, and a lot of it is unnecessary, besides being riddled with generic sentences where the dialogue could simply be removed oe expressed differently. Many of these scenes could largely benefit from the good ol' "show don't tell", and I am not one to usually believe that this is an absolute rule, just very useful in cases like this. The storyboarding could use some polish around dialogue as well, the deliveries are sometimes built dry because of it. I'd also like to say that the worldbuilding has a lot of potential, and I'd love to see it more explored! Either way, nice work everyone! I hope to see more!
@@ChronologicalFern agree on a lot of your points. I found myself feeling like there was a lot of wasted time between the dialogue, but I am used to pretty refined scripts with sharp timing like most people.
Beyond thrilled to see a project we’ve had an eye on do so awesomely and absolutely ROCK THIS MUCH! Ahhhh the designs are so fun, the story is a delight, and we can’t wait to see more!
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE HOW THIS TURNED OUT !!! WHAT AN INCREDIBLE FEAT!!!! so many stunning shots and KILLER music,, i enjoyed every single character, their dynamics between each other, i cannot WAIT for more‼️‼️ you should be so so proud of your efforts, this was incredible miranda!!! 💪
omg this is INSANE??? It’s SO GOOD?? HOW DID YOU ANIMATE THIS ALL YOURSELF?!? MASSIVE RESPECT, THIS SERIES LOOKS AMAZING AND I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE WHERE IT GOES!! This is right up my alley and every aspect is impeccable, omg.
The animation quality of this is utterly FANTASTIC for something you made all by yourself! also the story is super intriguing and Atlas's character design is so cute, I wanna cosplay her
This is amazing! I'm so glad that I was able find yet another underrated Sci-fi series, like Monkey Wrench, Hugo's Mind Place, and Godspeed. Also, I can't believe that this was animated by only ONE person.
I can't wait to see it! It's been two years since I first started following your art & original series and it's so beautiful to see how far it has come!
Thiry minutes of indie animation..BEST HECKING WAY TO START OFF 2024! This is really amazing with SO much potential!! i cannot wait to see how the lore and world building play out in the story!!
This just popped up in my recommended and I'm so glad it did! I love the vibes, the atmosphere, and as soon as I saw the morally dubious sad man, I was hooked. Will definitely keep up with this!
The wait to this was so worth it. I was so mesmerized by the smooth animation and calm aesthetic to it all. Not to mention the insane lore that’s actually easy to understand. It’s all so beautiful. I can’t wait for more! 🧡
I’m absolutely blown away, every aspect of this was so, so beautiful!!! From the animation, to the music, to the sound design, to the character interactions….like WOW!! :D this was absolutely worth the wait and I’m looking forward to more episodes in the future!!
This was such a fun watch! The animation is fluid and bouncy, the music is really fun, andI love the sleek futuristic look of the world. Beautiful to look at. I’m happy more and more animators are getting the chance to put their projects on yt and get seen.
My crave for Space shows keeps growing by the second! This is absolutely stellar for it to be written, created, and animated by a single person! Indie animation just keeps getting more and more better with stuff like this. Keep up the good work!
DUDE THIS IS LITERALLY SO CUTE??? ATMOSPHERE IS SO BABYGIRL??? Also I might have to make Quasar a better magical girl transformation, because while he's a liiiittle bit evil, he deserves to be a cutesy magical girl.
Incredible Pilot! I love the character design and the style of the animation! Hope this blows the hell up, it would be so cool to see it getting the attention it deserves!
Wait you did animation, screenwriting and music?! That's so much work, I can't even comprehend. I am so intrigued by this story, so many questions and I adore Atmosphere. Random dude that got himself that is something bigger than he could imagine is my kind of fav character. I really hope you will continue this project.
I wasn't immediately sold but I freaking love Atmosphere and all the characters (and the worldbuilding is super interesting). Count me in! Can't wait to see more of what you do with this series
17:09 seatbelt continuity error i win /j BUT OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING PILOT!!! i love the animation and the characters are written in such a fun interesting way
YEAAAAH YOU DID IT CONGRATS and hopefully it's the beginning of many more! You did an amazing job and I can't wait to see what's in the future for this!
Please keep going with this! This show raises endless possibilites, the colour palate is amazing, the designs are amazing, everything is stellar. I love the idea that the other alien race thinks they are the sole planet in existance. Thats such a cool concept.
Space is one of those things beyond human comprehension and that's what makes it so magical. I've always loved the idea of a massive open space filled with pure light and other elements, rather than it scaring me, i find it comforting. We as a species are still trying to explore those parts probably never seen by organic life before, we don't know if we're really alone. I think that's why i fall in love with outerspace sci-fi media like this, being able to literally escape to a world far different from this one or just drifting through the stars.. it's a dream i'll never reach. But for the time being, i'll just keep listening to glittery outerspace-y, Steven Universe-esque music, shift into those realities when subconcious and follow this absolutely *beautifully animated series.*
I am now obsessed with this. HOLY COW THIS IS INSPIRATIONAL!!! The animation, the voice acting, the theme, the plot, EVERYTHING IS LEAVING ME IN AWE. Thank you THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS🙏🙏
First off, I just want to say this is absolutely fucking PHENOMENAL. You: wrote, animated, AND created the soundtrack for this ep all by yourself, a whole 30 minutes, and it's so pretty and gorgeously animated like-??? You, my good animator, are an absolute fucking MADMAN. I do think the writing could do with some editing and revising, because while I do understand this episode is very dense, it does seem kind of like you're just flinging info with us with little to no buildup, and as a result the story beats suffer. While I don't think show don't tell is a rule everyone should have to adhere to every single second when they're writing, it is undeniable that for many stories, they are *very* vital, and this episode featured a lot of telling and not enough showing. Telling instead of showing can be done well and very effectively, but that isn't done so well here. But regardless, I am actually so invested in this series. The energy is soooo amazing and was grinning like an idiot the whole time. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to see where this series goes!
THIS IS SPECTACULAR!! It reminds me so much of the cartoons I loved as a kid, and I could totally see it having a place on a streaming network. It's an extraordinary feat for own person alone, and highly quality at that. So stoked for more in the future hopefully? Take my money!
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. It's giving Steven Universe aesthetic with She-ra Dynamics and Owl House Potential! You're bold and completely right in stating that THIS IS NOT A PILOT. It's a masterpiece, I'm fully hooked with the characters and oh the antagonist! Yes, we needed this. The animation in itself is expressive and stunning. The story telling is off to a great start and the moments of humanity [THAT MANY STUDIOS FORGET TO ADD] are so REAL. I'm looking forward to what comes next and you're already up there with the top animation series coming this year:Helluva Boss, Lackadaisy, Murder Drones, The Amazing Digital Circus! Keep working at it! This is phenomenal!!❤❤
✨PHENOMENAL✨ It’s been years I’ve been planning on starting a voice acted animated series animated by myself and I thought it would be impossible but take a look at this! It’s amazing! The fact that you also composed those soundtracks yourself is beyond mind blowing. Great job! Can’t wait for more!
I like how Atlas stops at 0:55, then proceeds to look around her house with a facial expression that's...sad. It's like she's quietly saying her goodbyes, even though she feels like she doesn't fit on her homeworld.
This is brilliant! The music, the character designs, the *intrigue*.. I’m eating this up like you would not believe. I’m going to share this with everyone I can, because doing this as a one-person show is.. Terrifying and deserves FAR more credit than you’re getting with these views. This is stellar work and I’m absolutely ravenous for more of your work!
Hey, great animation! Small notes: At 17:09, Atmosphere has a buckle already on, despite putting it on afterward at 17:16. At 22:28, the subtitles for Quasar read "my orders" instead of "your orders". At 28:55, Atlas shakes with her right hand but then proceeds to inspect the left. Edit: I forgot to say I am VERY much looking forward to seeing more of this! I would say you did a 'Stellar' job!
This needs more views… the animation style made me filled with stagger, I couldn’t believe that TH-cam hasn’t made this pilot on the recommended page… This deserves more panorama of outstanding content like this.
Wow. I’m very impressed. All the details in your animation are very breathtaking. The characters are really interesting and the voice actors did very great portraying them! Congratulations on getting this episode done. I’m hooked and can’t wait for what happens next!
aaaand im invested! im so grateful to be living in a new era of indie animation. your designs and animation style are so appealing to the eye, and the colors make such great contrast. i cant wait for you to have a whole team to work with and bring this story to life!
I can’t tell if I like the writing or don’t like it yet. But the animation is golden and I love those voice actors you choose for your character’s. I can’t wait to see where this ends up ❤️
I think the writing could be a bit more graceful in places--there are times characters Tell us stuff that would have made more sense Shown, or could have at least been exposited more subtly, and some of the events feel a little contrived/rushed through (like Atlas easily escaping the station, Tall Guy not trying harder to stop her while they flew), but a lot of those issues may actually be limitations of storyboard/animation. Some compromises have to be made when it's a one-person animator. Like, they could have animated a complicated sequence of them fighting over the controls harder before she either subdues him or the pressure of the speed forces him to strap in, but that's harder to animate! Likewise, the bit where Atlas and Tall Guy go in a circle would be better sold with a whole montage, and wouldn't require her to clarify to the audience, "Aaand we went in a circle", but that also takes way more time and animation to pull off. I think minor contrivances/rushjobs like that are really common in pilots, where people are still figuring out the limits of each episode, where they're still learning what they have time for and what absolutely needs to be conveyed at all costs. The writing may start to feel more deft as we get further in.
@@koboldcatgirl couldn’t agree more with yea, that’s why I subscribed to keep tabs. This series has potential and I can’t wait to see it grow in all kinds of way’ for sure.
@@koboldcatgirl Name some examples, because I don't know what you mean when you reference subtlety. What could the tall guy have done that he didn't already do? He tried to stop the ship and he was angry about being trapped in the ship until Atlas convinced him that she'd bring him back home. Also what's your point on the circle part? Your proposal just wastes time because her reaction already made sense and it adds nothing to the narrative.
I also agree that some of the writing is a bit clumsy at times, and the dialogue especially could have been less on the nose so that subtext can do the heavy lifting in more emotional moments. But there’s an energy to this pilot that’s absolutely infectious to me - the creator’s passion for the story and its character shines through so clearly that it’s honestly inspiring. I’ve come back to rewatch this several times since it came out because it gives me hope that I could make something similar one day. The show is absolutely greater than the sum of its parts so far and I’m really excited to see where it goes
@@JohnDanielRay1how do you not understand what kobo is saying. I agree with the text I thought it had way to much hand holding when we know what is happening I nearly switched of on the hand holding part at start stealing the jet I'm nearly halfway in but because it's one person making are carry on. Thing is with all films now even computer games the one that fail are the ones that hold your hand all the way no thinking or trying to think for yourself no back story or we not care for the characters. This is a majour problem in today's age ppl call it lazy writing. Call me a hater what ever this is my advise I think advise is better than lieing if ppl are serious about wanting to get better. This is very good for one person it is even kinda on lvl with the films of today.
a lone animator animates, creates, and writes this beauty of a series we will not soon forget for generations. (i see a bright future for this series, a *very* bright future, indeed.) (and how thoughtful, i love the stars and the galaxies.)
This was absolutely incredible, I had to pause for a second when I saw the kid at 8:28, had to stop myself from tearing up. I can’t wait to see more of this, the story is amazing and the characters are so interesting!
this was beautiful! and the fact you animated it all by yourself is extremely impressive. You should be extremely proud of yourself! And all the others who worked on it this an amazing job aswel!
As soon as I saw this I thoughtt 'VOLTRON"; I love that show and this one as well! The charachater designs are all uniqe and amazing. Love it!! Good luck with the series ; and you just earned another subsriber !
Really good first outing. A solo effort in the animation I see, which is rather remarkable. The crack in time and Atlas running from here home reminded me of Doctor Who minus the time travel, and the ship reminded me of Aphelion from Ratchet & Clank.
YOOO THIS AMAZING WTH?? i just finished watching and i love it so far 😭 its insane to me how you did 30 minutes of pure animation all by yourself thats crazy!!! Ive been following you for what seems like forever and its so amazing to see this finally come out i cant wait to see whats in store for Atlas and atmosphere 😭💖💞✨️ and incredible work by all the voice actors as well this whole thing is just so insane and inspiring!!!
Been following these characters for a long while. It's SO surreal to finally watch them!! I cannot fathom how much patience this took you to make, but it turned out so gorgeous!! Genuinely looks like something a whole studio would make. Absolutely blown away by your talent!!
This was so amazing!!! The animation was beautiful and the soundtrack fit so well with the story and the looks! I can’t wait to see what happens next!!!
I keep coming back to this I remember being shocked that only one person animated this, especially with how impressive it looks and how well it’s written Can’t wait for ep 2^^
I need a second episode! The environments, characters, and other lore bits are all so well-put together! I genuinely think this is a wonderful animation that’s deserving of way more credit! (I think I only found this a few weeks ago so this is so neat!) ❤
Half an hour of high quality, fully coloured animation made by a single person?! Damn this is impressive and respectable. Proves that with enough talent and determination, one could do anything and make any story they envision into a reality. I can't begin to describe how awesome this is considering basically a single person is behind it, the plot is interesting, mysterious and leaves a lot of room for growth and developement (If the future episodes are made, speaking of which, this stands awesomely as a standalone animated short film too, not just a pilot), the characters are all likeable yet morally questionable (Which is GREAT! This kind of complexity in non-adult animated shows is rare), the voice acting is spot on, the setting is intriguing, the music and ambiance is awesome (Can't believe that you made it *alongside* the animation and the story and everything as well! Makes it all the more respectable), all the designs and sets and backgrounds look gorgeous and alive and so on and so forth, I could go on. Sure thing, there are a couple flaws with perspectives and dimensions and lip syncing, but do they really matter at all, when the overall work is this amazing and passionate? Man I love TH-cam indie animation so much, I can understand how hard and painful it can be to make something that would've taken this much time, effort and raw passion, all on a site that this heavily favours quality over quantity and bullshit formulae/semantics over genuine creativity in work, but the fact that they still exist and get a decent amount of attention, even if they realistically deserve sooooo much more, is at least pleasing to know and makes room for optimism for the future...
This is just brutal! I feel like i'm seeing some Netflix thing! You deserve all the support dear Mir! I hope you keep receiving support! And keep working and doing what you love! I know all your works is going to be loved because you are offering the same. All my good wishes❤❤❤🎉
Fantastic! This feels like a blend of influences from some of my favourite shows, and even a game I love, but with a brand new flavour of its own. The fantasy of stealing a ship just to explore space has a special place in my heart. I felt like some phrasing and delivery could have used a second pass, and the pacing maybe a little bit too consistent if I'm being honest. However none of that can shake the solid foundations of this project or the excitement I have to watch everyone working on this grow and develop something wonderful. Keep up the great work, you should all be proud of your achievement!
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING THE ANIMATION THE VOICE ACTING!?!??! SO AWESOME AND THE LORE I LOVE MULTIVERSES AND ALSO IT'S ONLY THE FIRST EPISODE BUT YOU WROTE YOUR CHARACTERS SO GOOD IM ACTUALLY GONNA DIE I CANT WAIT THE SECOND EPISODE
OMFG! You did the writing, the composition, the animation, all on your own!?!?! That's insanity! It's wonderful what you've made, and props to casting, the voice actors you chose are so amazing and fit their roles so well!!! Can't wait to see more ahhhh!!!
THIS IS INCREDIBLE? i cannot believe you animated the entire thing by yourself, I love seeing indie animation with true passion behind it,, deserving of SO much more attention
not to mention the writing AND music??? like hello?!
This is the definition of if you want something done right you gotta do it yourself 👍
Wave of the future man no more buracats or policy holing us back soon we can all tell any story anyway we want
believe it.
👍 yup
I feel like not enough people are mentioning how fun it was that the alarm from when she was stealing the ship fit perfectly with the music. The overall artistry of this is absolutely incredible
Yes it was my favourite part so far
That alarm was making a fire beat 🔥🔥🔥
I noticed that and loved it. Definitely a nice touch!
That part just came up now as SOON as I saw this comment. And you were RIGHT. *THAT'S SO LIT!* 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😎
Is my favourite part as well!
Welcome to the new golden age of independent animation Studios
This indie animation deserves respect
On a mission to destroy Disney. They seriously failed us all with Wish.
Yeah...There are a lot more independent projects I've been seeing after Wish, even projects to REMAKE Wish. It's fun to see!@@avivastudios2311
@@avivastudios2311.
Really? I’ve been waiting to watch that movie.
@@atomicreptiliascreator738 To me it wasn't as bad, pretty messy at the start and just overall inconsistent. Not as "magically everything goes perfect" but a little more human-like to me. Tho I wouldn't want them to make more movies this way lol
I love that we can tell why Atlas probably wants to leave. The way that she talks to the ship when flying it, and she hated having Atmosphere with her we can safely assume she never had many friends, and she would prefer to be alone and isolated. That is called GOOD WRITING
The girl doesn't even know what a handshake is, there's probably more to it than just "prefer to be alone".
@@DarthBiomech yeahh I just didn’t want to make my comment too long, thx for pointing it out
To be fair, rather than wanting to leave because she had no friends it could be that she's made no friends because she's obsessed with leaving, or purposely didn't make friends she'd have to eventually leave behind.
She's kinda like me, wants to be alone and isolated
You animated, half an hour of indescribable artwork, ALL BY YOURSELF? The pure TALENT, MOTIVATION, and PERSISTENCE to keep going with this project is absolutely PHENOMENAL. I really do hope you are proud of yourself. Along with everyone else who worked on this. I can't even imagine how long this took.
The fact that not only the animation is done by one person but the beautiful score was also done by that same person is phenomenal. There needs to be more indie animation like this. I hope you go far with this concept.
They did the score as well!? I was trying to find the music everywhere. Hopefully they release it somewhere soon
That's an unthinkable amount of work for just one person, wow
@@lowkeyabiyou won’t believe this.
@@ishmations I opened Spotify so fast lmao thank you stranger🫶
Im reading these comments and YOU ANIMATED THIS ENTIRE THING BY YOURSELF??? Dude that is INCREDIBLE 😭
My current fav character is Atmosphere, hes such a goofy goober i wanna hug his flooooof
i can tell youre cool just from this comment
or if you read the description you would have read that they did it on their own sherlock
@@sharkshakes the question was rhetorical.
@@sharkshakes what’s with the attitude
He jus a lil determined floof and he’s so nice
OMG 30 MINUTES OF ANIMATION ALL BY YOURSELF!!?!? You should be so proud of yourself for even finishing it this, not to mention how well done everything is!! I have been following you for years and I am so excited to see where this story goes!!
WAIT 30 MINUTES-
This would take me 20 years, its so good!
Fr, and it doesn’t even have 100k views yet. Genuinely insane, crazy underrated. (Even if it was posted 2 days ago but still)
did you not watch 30 minutes why are you surprised@@rosegoldswirl
@@sharkshakes wdym?
Dang that’s impressive ❤
I think everyone should understand that a 30 minute animation made by one person on a budget of nothing or close to nothing isnt going to match the polish of studio backed projects. I think you've done a very good job
It’s honestly an incredible level of polish. I tried making a short film for my thesis and prioritized quality, and as a tradeoff I straight up wasn’t able to finish the film. Granted I’m sure this person has much more experience under their belt based on what they were able to put out, but it really goes to show how much actually goes into making something like this.
The level of polish is genuinely impressive. But I'm deeply disappointed with the timing and pacing. I watched most of it at 2x speed and it still felt sluggish with regards to the storyline.
@justinwood2 Yeah, I agree the animation is quite polished. But polish can apply to all aspects of storytelling, including writing, which I was referencing as well
@@justinwood2 Okay what was wrong with it?
My only problem was I thought I had to much explaining well hand holding when her drawings are good enough. Just a few tweeks and it will be far better than the crap films of today which has lazy writing and us not caring for the characters.
I love how Atlas and Atmosphere have names and color palettes that pertain to their universe while Nebula and the villain (who reminds me of Hordak in the best possible way) have designs that reflect their own universe. I love all of these little details, and I truly hope that this show gets a crew and continues, because this has insane potential!! 💕💕
@@ashleypisarts hordak comparison real 👌👌👌👌💕💕💕
All that was ❤ ace I thought the writing wasn't as good to much holding are hands well explaining when the drawings was good enough in alot of parts.
Quasar gives me Wind Waker Ganondorf vibes. In that they are both very powerful and old, and are desperately clinging onto a past that no longer exists, even at the expense of others.
First day of the job
Hours later stuck in a nowhere planet
-Atmosphere
Probably even in another universe lmao
@@eduardotejeris3506oh yeah
I don't know if people realize how much actually goes into this kind of production. As if animating the characters isn't hard enough, there's the backgrounds, the pacing of the scenes, the writing itself, the sound design, the music, the voice acting, set design, prop design, character design
Every single thing I am seeing and hearing that to be made from scratch.
And the fact that it was not only done, but done well, is actually ridiculous. The determination of the human spirit never fails to take me by surprise
Congratulations on this incredible accomplishment!
Edit: I really love this villain (or I assume he is?) I feel like he was set up so well. He's sympathetic and well rounded, and also has good reasons for what he does. I can't help but find him really intriguing
Yeah, like every single background is just flawless. The creator has a lot of willpower.
I did NOT get the impression that the reptile was a villain. I think he's just a grey character.
you are very well informed of audio/video - post/pre production. (institute of audio resrearch nyc) me
When the antagonist asks their loved ones why they stay silent/hide, and then pretty much answers their own question.
Atlas after blaming the guy she kidnapped instead of herself:
Anyway, so excited for whatever's next
but hey, it was an unintentional kidnapping!!
that work in a space port
Is that supposed to be criticism? Because first of all she reacted in emotion you're not supposed to take it seriously, second of all she didn't kidnap him it was an accident, and third of all a giant space tear appearing out of nowhere isn't her fault at all.
@@JohnDanielRay1 no, I’m slandering a character, jokingly (and specifically, how her initial reaction was to blame him, rather than herself, although she came around, was not related to the space tear.) Because most good characters have flaws, and it’s fun to poke fun at their flaws. I genuinely am excited for what’s next, I just found her character flaw funny.
@@hihi-kv8kv Ah ok
As a 2D animator myself, I humbly bow to your talent and to your dedication to this project.
Keep up the excellent work!
after viziepop's success with helluva boss and hazbin hotel it fills me with joy to see other indie artists/animators produce their work. Keep it up! You guys are the ones who truly care about animation!
yeah,right.isn't it?
@@bobertbwild1350That should honestly be expected, this is animated by mostly one person! Theres going to be mistakes, and errors, and maybe awkward moments. Not to mention it’s also the first episode. But that’s ok! :)
@@AmaxaryI deleted my previous comments because I didn’t know how to put my thoughts into words or describe why I felt that way. I agree your comment is completely right, but maybe they should tweak the first episode and make some changes. Also the episode is just so boring to watch, and it takes 30 minutes to watch it all, not all of us have time on our hands like that. Also the “Awkward moments” is what makes the first episode so bad. Here are some things that they could change.
Scene: Stealing Spaceship.
1: She makes a the smallest noise, takes him an abnormal amount of time to say hey what was that?
2: They walk away for like 5 seconds and she can now suddenly stomp and run her way there?
3: The sizing of the spaceships is very weird when she enters, first they’re fun size and in the next they’re bigger than her. But as to be expected, not even that bad though.
4: you know what is bad? They’re security measures, this is where things go horribly wrong from the scene. She goes to the spaceship and the alarm goes off because she stepped over the white box or something. There’s just no security in sight, like at all. Where did they go? I mean for a futuristic place with thousands worth of equipment there should be some security. This just removes the suspense from the scene and making it overall a really boring experience. And excuse me? Where did you learn how to fly a spaceship? Isn’t this your first time? At least say you learned from TH-cam. There’s not even a lick of security when she exits, or even a security measure after the alarms go off. Like make the place go in lock down, notify the police? Something at least! It would be way better if she snuck in with guards inside the building like checking camera while she’s sneaking to steal the spaceship trying not to make noise, and then failing, them calling other guards or police to come to area. And she escapes, damaging the ship in the process because this is her first time flying and security should have security measures.
Scene: Security Checkpoint
1: When he blind folds the guy, at first he screams like a maniac. And then is suddenly just chill with it?
2: when the other security people see that their friend is being kidnapped, they just stare in awkward silence until one guy comes up and is like what is happening. You signed up for the job, shouldn’t you be a trained professional? Say something! I know it doesn’t happen often but have common sense, is everyone an introvert? Only then she calls for backup.
3: when he runs over, he just runs in silence not yelling or anything for her to stop.
4: When she escapes the police were notified, yay! Finally they did something right! A chase scene we love to see it! Oh wait… uhm… what the fuck? Are… this is the most chill chase scene I’ve ever scene. Shouldn’t you be panicking more? And the police, and shouldn’t you be dodging or something and not be going in a straight line? But oh wait! I forgot! The police don’t have any security measures because I’m sure no one has ever done this before. So instead of shooting at them or something they decide to slowly chase behind and do absolutely nothing.
@@AmaxaryAgain, those scenes are supposed to be intense. But they’re just not, at all. Also they might be doing too much, I feel like they could’ve split the episode in two. With my changes, of course. But then again, it’s fine how it is. And it’s an okay first episode for the first time they have released an episode. I just feel like they could’ve worked on those scenes better. Also in the chase scene it doesn’t even feel like they’re going fast, they’re just chillaxing. Idek. It’s supposed to get my heart pumping, but it really just doesn’t. The scenes just aren’t as they should be.
@@AmaxaryAnd the Two scenes, I think, just deserved better. Could’ve been a lot better, but it just wasn’t intense. At all. Which was sad.
the fact that you animated and made the music for this is absolutely incredible. as someone who’s animated a short film before huge hats off to you this is so great!!!
Also at 19:25 I love the little detail where they glitch into the older art style you happened to draw them in :0
Gravity Falls weirdness bubbles reference maybe??
@@sillyrobaczek or any other show that has done that
Came here from glitchX, and I gotta say that this absolutely exceeded my expectations, especially that you've animated all of it by yourself! I wish you all the best, gl with everything!
Ah, good to meet a another fellow who can't think of any other names for aliens other than things in space.
This was so f*cking great. I like how Quasar's attitude flips constantly between evil emperor and savior. But in the end he's, both. I really love bad guys that aren't necessarily evil. Or at least not evil in the classic sense.
I'm hoping for more of this beautiful show. It's so awesome.
along with that, he has reason for not wanting to relocate to the other universe.
He’s such a compelling antagonist. Won’t say villain just yet, he has a good motive and lost loved ones, so…
I can’t believe you made and COMPOSED THIS The music is amazing! Everything about this is so much cleaner than most shows with full budgets and teams. You’ve managed to put so much relevant introductions in 30 minutes without making it feel too fluffy and I was invested the entire time. The colors, effects, expressions, characters, voice acting all amazing! Even without the context of just how amazing this is as a product on TH-cam
Everyone is saying how amazing it is you did all the animation and music by yourself. and that is not a lie! I personally LOVED the music. You should be very proud. No matter if it will go viral or not, you did something fantastic and you should hold this accomplisment with pride
about the story, I am VERY invested to see where it will go. I think it has all the elements to be something amazing. I am chearing for your success!
yeah of course its not a lie thats not a revelation.
honestly, the music was the best part for me! The animation and voice acting are really good, especially for a small production, but that music is so perfect. It matched every story beat and emotion perfectly!
Yeah it's gonna go viral
OH. MY. GOSH. ANIMATING THIS ENTIRE THING BY YOURSELF?? AND THE PLOT AND CHARACTERS ACTUALLY MAKING SENSE? YOUR MY NEW IDOL
This is so underrated that I can’t help but believe it will seriously blow up one day
THIS IS CRAZY AMAZING??? I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF THIS AND oh my gOSH I love the character designs SO MUCH!! And it’s so colorful and pretty and so well animated too HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE???? First episode and I’m hooked!!! I seriously can’t wait to see more of this!! AHHHH 💖💖💖
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Hello polarsummit
I really like the concepts and art style. The writing needs a bit more of the "Show, don't tell" narrative technique. Too often, the story beats were told to us instead of shown. I think some of the planets eating stuff would have been better conveyed through subtext instead of directly stating his motivation. However, a lot was crammed into this one episode. I love how the characters' personalities were shown and the voice acting is very impressive and I look forward to seeing what's next
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Omg you animated this by youself, THATS AMAZING.
no,stop just shut up
you guys hear one writing technique and act like it's law when it's now somtimes it's good to use but other times it's not bc you need things explained to you other wise no one would fuckin understand what's going on
@@NezumiMaus it was just some constructive criticism man, chill out
Stop that it's not easy to do this....his series is phenomenal very nice he should keep up the good work
Stop that it's not easy to do this....his series is phenomenal very nice he should keep up the good work
Stop that it's not easy to do this....his series is phenomenal very nice he should keep up the good work
you animated this entire thing by YOURSELF?!?! you’re a madman. this is so gorgeous and awe inspiring, this is something that you can be proud of for the rest of your life. absolutely stunning work. congratulations
i love atmosphere so much thank you for making him his tail wagging is so adorable such a silly humongous man
i started laughing when bro went 'NO! we gonna fuel the planet'
like no bro relocate everyone wyd xD
Well, it's the only remaining planet in its universe. Thus, I feel like the solution would be to bring Quasonia to the main universe.
I like this story so much. The characters have creative designs, the problems they run into are believable, and their personalities make sense! This story has a lot of reminiscence to She-Ra, and I can tell you likely grew up watching it. I don't know if you want criticism for things so far at all, but there definitely were some story beats that just didn't hit home for me! I already feel bad for our clear antagonist, with the "I am missing my family and planet" arc being introduced as a retribution concept so early, and especially as their countenance changes so rapidly through the story in a rather bipolar fashion from guarded and mean to vulnerable. It's only your first episode, and I think you could definitely introduce them as an outright terrible guy. The beats in some areas feel rushed, especially the "fight, timeskip, okay i guess we're working together" scene. It almost feels like it didn't need to happen- it would have left some time to extend the gag of not understanding a handshake or something. However, don't take these criticisms as a mark of failure. You've only just made your first huge public content, and these are the marks of someone learning how to structure a story. Leaning on some cliches here and there is expected and feels good to see! I loved Atlas especially for her inventive and rebellious attitude, she really reflects a lot of my own nature. I can't wait to see more about this and maybe even a little fan community form around it! Please don't ever stop doing what you love.
This is honestly incredible that you managed to do all of this ON YOUR OWN? THIRTY WHOLE MINUTES TOO?? Dude you’re insane and already have to say Nebula is my favourite! Really impressive animation and voice work, I hope to see you and your VAs get the appreciation and respect you all deserve! ^^
Edit: also when the music kicked in at 3:30 that was a genuine bop
The fact this is built by one person is incredible. Perfect character interaction, story driven animation with comedy when it matters. I can’t wait to see what’s next. Subscribed.
Seems like a nice indie animation series definitely deserves more recognition
I'd like to start out by saying the animation is wonderful, and the voices are a very good fit the characters.
However, the dialogue could use quite a lot of work, and a lot of it is unnecessary, besides being riddled with generic sentences where the dialogue could simply be removed oe expressed differently. Many of these scenes could largely benefit from the good ol' "show don't tell", and I am not one to usually believe that this is an absolute rule, just very useful in cases like this.
The storyboarding could use some polish around dialogue as well, the deliveries are sometimes built dry because of it.
I'd also like to say that the worldbuilding has a lot of potential, and I'd love to see it more explored!
Either way, nice work everyone! I hope to see more!
I'd like to add that the story is intriguing, and I like the way you are spinning things.
@@ChronologicalFern agree on a lot of your points. I found myself feeling like there was a lot of wasted time between the dialogue, but I am used to pretty refined scripts with sharp timing like most people.
Beyond thrilled to see a project we’ve had an eye on do so awesomely and absolutely ROCK THIS MUCH! Ahhhh the designs are so fun, the story is a delight, and we can’t wait to see more!
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE HOW THIS TURNED OUT !!! WHAT AN INCREDIBLE FEAT!!!! so many stunning shots and KILLER music,, i enjoyed every single character, their dynamics between each other, i cannot WAIT for more‼️‼️ you should be so so proud of your efforts, this was incredible miranda!!! 💪
omg this is INSANE??? It’s SO GOOD?? HOW DID YOU ANIMATE THIS ALL YOURSELF?!? MASSIVE RESPECT, THIS SERIES LOOKS AMAZING AND I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE WHERE IT GOES!! This is right up my alley and every aspect is impeccable, omg.
The animation quality of this is utterly FANTASTIC for something you made all by yourself! also the story is super intriguing and Atlas's character design is so cute, I wanna cosplay her
This is amazing! I'm so glad that I was able find yet another underrated Sci-fi series, like Monkey Wrench, Hugo's Mind Place, and Godspeed. Also, I can't believe that this was animated by only ONE person.
I can't wait to see it! It's been two years since I first started following your art & original series and it's so beautiful to see how far it has come!
This project deserves more attention from the indie animation fans. THIS IS AMAZING, KEEP IT UP
Thiry minutes of indie animation..BEST HECKING WAY TO START OFF 2024! This is really amazing with SO much potential!! i cannot wait to see how the lore and world building play out in the story!!
I'm finally checking this out. Thank you GlitchX for showing this show support!
This is INCREDIBLE. I will be coming back for the next episode. This is so cool, and the animation so smooth. I love it.
This just popped up in my recommended and I'm so glad it did! I love the vibes, the atmosphere, and as soon as I saw the morally dubious sad man, I was hooked. Will definitely keep up with this!
The wait to this was so worth it. I was so mesmerized by the smooth animation and calm aesthetic to it all. Not to mention the insane lore that’s actually easy to understand. It’s all so beautiful. I can’t wait for more! 🧡
I’m absolutely blown away, every aspect of this was so, so beautiful!!! From the animation, to the music, to the sound design, to the character interactions….like WOW!! :D this was absolutely worth the wait and I’m looking forward to more episodes in the future!!
This was such a fun watch! The animation is fluid and bouncy, the music is really fun, andI love the sleek futuristic look of the world. Beautiful to look at. I’m happy more and more animators are getting the chance to put their projects on yt and get seen.
Erm...WHAT?! This is so good! I love the animation, character designs, story, just EVERYTHING about this is amazing!
My crave for Space shows keeps growing by the second! This is absolutely stellar for it to be written, created, and animated by a single person! Indie animation just keeps getting more and more better with stuff like this. Keep up the good work!
The main character and background aesthetic is giving me She ra 2018 vibes
bro and the handshake thing is giving me owl house vibes😭😭
DUDE THIS IS LITERALLY SO CUTE??? ATMOSPHERE IS SO BABYGIRL??? Also I might have to make Quasar a better magical girl transformation, because while he's a liiiittle bit evil, he deserves to be a cutesy magical girl.
THIS IS SO AMAZING BRO THE CHARACTER DESIGNS TOO I LOVE THM ALL SO MUCH THE ANIMATION IS INCREDIBLE TOO
@@GLOWINGSOUP REAL
How do you have this much TALENT?!!?!
Artwork, backgrounds, music, sound effects... HOW!?!!
Incredible Pilot! I love the character design and the style of the animation! Hope this blows the hell up, it would be so cool to see it getting the attention it deserves!
Wait you did animation, screenwriting and music?! That's so much work, I can't even comprehend. I am so intrigued by this story, so many questions and I adore Atmosphere. Random dude that got himself that is something bigger than he could imagine is my kind of fav character. I really hope you will continue this project.
You needed a Award for animating a whole episode of a show by yourself!!!!!!!!!!
I wasn't immediately sold but I freaking love Atmosphere and all the characters (and the worldbuilding is super interesting). Count me in! Can't wait to see more of what you do with this series
17:09 seatbelt continuity error i win /j
BUT OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING PILOT!!! i love the animation and the characters are written in such a fun interesting way
YEAAAAH YOU DID IT CONGRATS and hopefully it's the beginning of many more! You did an amazing job and I can't wait to see what's in the future for this!
Please keep going with this! This show raises endless possibilites, the colour palate is amazing, the designs are amazing, everything is stellar. I love the idea that the other alien race thinks they are the sole planet in existance. Thats such a cool concept.
Space is one of those things beyond human comprehension and that's what makes it so magical. I've always loved the idea of a massive open space filled with pure light and other elements, rather than it scaring me, i find it comforting. We as a species are still trying to explore those parts probably never seen by organic life before, we don't know if we're really alone.
I think that's why i fall in love with outerspace sci-fi media like this, being able to literally escape to a world far different from this one or just drifting through the stars.. it's a dream i'll never reach.
But for the time being, i'll just keep listening to glittery outerspace-y, Steven Universe-esque music, shift into those realities when subconcious and follow this absolutely *beautifully animated series.*
I am now obsessed with this. HOLY COW THIS IS INSPIRATIONAL!!! The animation, the voice acting, the theme, the plot, EVERYTHING IS LEAVING ME IN AWE. Thank you THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS🙏🙏
First off, I just want to say this is absolutely fucking PHENOMENAL. You: wrote, animated, AND created the soundtrack for this ep all by yourself, a whole 30 minutes, and it's so pretty and gorgeously animated like-??? You, my good animator, are an absolute fucking MADMAN. I do think the writing could do with some editing and revising, because while I do understand this episode is very dense, it does seem kind of like you're just flinging info with us with little to no buildup, and as a result the story beats suffer. While I don't think show don't tell is a rule everyone should have to adhere to every single second when they're writing, it is undeniable that for many stories, they are *very* vital, and this episode featured a lot of telling and not enough showing. Telling instead of showing can be done well and very effectively, but that isn't done so well here. But regardless, I am actually so invested in this series. The energy is soooo amazing and was grinning like an idiot the whole time. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to see where this series goes!
THIS IS SPECTACULAR!! It reminds me so much of the cartoons I loved as a kid, and I could totally see it having a place on a streaming network. It's an extraordinary feat for own person alone, and highly quality at that. So stoked for more in the future hopefully? Take my money!
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. It's giving Steven Universe aesthetic with She-ra Dynamics and Owl House Potential! You're bold and completely right in stating that THIS IS NOT A PILOT. It's a masterpiece, I'm fully hooked with the characters and oh the antagonist! Yes, we needed this. The animation in itself is expressive and stunning. The story telling is off to a great start and the moments of humanity [THAT MANY STUDIOS FORGET TO ADD] are so REAL. I'm looking forward to what comes next and you're already up there with the top animation series coming this year:Helluva Boss, Lackadaisy, Murder Drones, The Amazing Digital Circus! Keep working at it! This is phenomenal!!❤❤
✨PHENOMENAL✨ It’s been years I’ve been planning on starting a voice acted animated series animated by myself and I thought it would be impossible but take a look at this! It’s amazing! The fact that you also composed those soundtracks yourself is beyond mind blowing. Great job! Can’t wait for more!
I like how Atlas stops at 0:55, then proceeds to look around her house with a facial expression that's...sad. It's like she's quietly saying her goodbyes, even though she feels like she doesn't fit on her homeworld.
Ok, the whole secuence of harmonizing the song at the rythinm of the alarm at 3:28 secuence is freaking brilliant!
This is brilliant! The music, the character designs, the *intrigue*.. I’m eating this up like you would not believe.
I’m going to share this with everyone I can, because doing this as a one-person show is.. Terrifying and deserves FAR more credit than you’re getting with these views. This is stellar work and I’m absolutely ravenous for more of your work!
I know this series is still in it's infancy but, it would be really interesting to see a crossover from this series, with Monkey Wrench-
Hey, great animation!
Small notes:
At 17:09, Atmosphere has a buckle already on, despite putting it on afterward at 17:16.
At 22:28, the subtitles for Quasar read "my orders" instead of "your orders".
At 28:55, Atlas shakes with her right hand but then proceeds to inspect the left.
Edit: I forgot to say I am VERY much looking forward to seeing more of this! I would say you did a 'Stellar' job!
This animation was so impressive. So visualy pleasing to look at. I really like the character designs.
This needs more views… the animation style made me filled with stagger, I couldn’t believe that TH-cam hasn’t made this pilot on the recommended page…
This deserves more panorama of outstanding content like this.
Wow. I’m very impressed.
All the details in your animation are very breathtaking.
The characters are really interesting and the voice actors did very great portraying them!
Congratulations on getting this episode done. I’m hooked and can’t wait for what happens next!
I still can't believe this was animated by one person, with so much detail, You definitely deserve attention to this project!
aaaand im invested! im so grateful to be living in a new era of indie animation. your designs and animation style are so appealing to the eye, and the colors make such great contrast.
i cant wait for you to have a whole team to work with and bring this story to life!
these characters are SO GOOD im so excited to see them interact more!!
HHOOOOLLLLYYYY COW HOW IS THIS HALF AN HOUR LONG?!? SO AMAZING
I can’t tell if I like the writing or don’t like it yet. But the animation is golden and I love those voice actors you choose for your character’s. I can’t wait to see where this ends up ❤️
I think the writing could be a bit more graceful in places--there are times characters Tell us stuff that would have made more sense Shown, or could have at least been exposited more subtly, and some of the events feel a little contrived/rushed through (like Atlas easily escaping the station, Tall Guy not trying harder to stop her while they flew), but a lot of those issues may actually be limitations of storyboard/animation. Some compromises have to be made when it's a one-person animator. Like, they could have animated a complicated sequence of them fighting over the controls harder before she either subdues him or the pressure of the speed forces him to strap in, but that's harder to animate! Likewise, the bit where Atlas and Tall Guy go in a circle would be better sold with a whole montage, and wouldn't require her to clarify to the audience, "Aaand we went in a circle", but that also takes way more time and animation to pull off.
I think minor contrivances/rushjobs like that are really common in pilots, where people are still figuring out the limits of each episode, where they're still learning what they have time for and what absolutely needs to be conveyed at all costs. The writing may start to feel more deft as we get further in.
@@koboldcatgirl couldn’t agree more with yea, that’s why I subscribed to keep tabs. This series has potential and I can’t wait to see it grow in all kinds of way’ for sure.
@@koboldcatgirl Name some examples, because I don't know what you mean when you reference subtlety. What could the tall guy have done that he didn't already do? He tried to stop the ship and he was angry about being trapped in the ship until Atlas convinced him that she'd bring him back home. Also what's your point on the circle part? Your proposal just wastes time because her reaction already made sense and it adds nothing to the narrative.
I also agree that some of the writing is a bit clumsy at times, and the dialogue especially could have been less on the nose so that subtext can do the heavy lifting in more emotional moments. But there’s an energy to this pilot that’s absolutely infectious to me - the creator’s passion for the story and its character shines through so clearly that it’s honestly inspiring. I’ve come back to rewatch this several times since it came out because it gives me hope that I could make something similar one day. The show is absolutely greater than the sum of its parts so far and I’m really excited to see where it goes
@@JohnDanielRay1how do you not understand what kobo is saying. I agree with the text I thought it had way to much hand holding when we know what is happening I nearly switched of on the hand holding part at start stealing the jet I'm nearly halfway in but because it's one person making are carry on. Thing is with all films now even computer games the one that fail are the ones that hold your hand all the way no thinking or trying to think for yourself no back story or we not care for the characters. This is a majour problem in today's age ppl call it lazy writing. Call me a hater what ever this is my advise I think advise is better than lieing if ppl are serious about wanting to get better. This is very good for one person it is even kinda on lvl with the films of today.
a lone animator animates, creates, and writes this beauty of a series we will not soon forget for generations.
(i see a bright future for this series, a *very* bright future, indeed.)
(and how thoughtful, i love the stars and the galaxies.)
This was absolutely incredible, I had to pause for a second when I saw the kid at 8:28, had to stop myself from tearing up. I can’t wait to see more of this, the story is amazing and the characters are so interesting!
this was beautiful! and the fact you animated it all by yourself is extremely impressive. You should be extremely proud of yourself! And all the others who worked on it this an amazing job aswel!
As soon as I saw this I thoughtt 'VOLTRON"; I love that show and this one as well! The charachater designs are all uniqe and amazing. Love it!! Good luck with the series ; and you just earned another subsriber !
Really good first outing. A solo effort in the animation I see, which is rather remarkable. The crack in time and Atlas running from here home reminded me of Doctor Who minus the time travel, and the ship reminded me of Aphelion from Ratchet & Clank.
YOOO THIS AMAZING WTH?? i just finished watching and i love it so far 😭 its insane to me how you did 30 minutes of pure animation all by yourself thats crazy!!! Ive been following you for what seems like forever and its so amazing to see this finally come out i cant wait to see whats in store for Atlas and atmosphere 😭💖💞✨️ and incredible work by all the voice actors as well this whole thing is just so insane and inspiring!!!
Been following these characters for a long while. It's SO surreal to finally watch them!! I cannot fathom how much patience this took you to make, but it turned out so gorgeous!! Genuinely looks like something a whole studio would make. Absolutely blown away by your talent!!
This was so amazing!!! The animation was beautiful and the soundtrack fit so well with the story and the looks! I can’t wait to see what happens next!!!
I keep coming back to this I remember being shocked that only one person animated this, especially with how impressive it looks and how well it’s written
Can’t wait for ep 2^^
I need a second episode! The environments, characters, and other lore bits are all so well-put together! I genuinely think this is a wonderful animation that’s deserving of way more credit! (I think I only found this a few weeks ago so this is so neat!) ❤
I’ve been following you since 2016 and it’s amazing to see how far you’ve come! I’m so excited to watch this :))
Half an hour of high quality, fully coloured animation made by a single person?! Damn this is impressive and respectable. Proves that with enough talent and determination, one could do anything and make any story they envision into a reality. I can't begin to describe how awesome this is considering basically a single person is behind it, the plot is interesting, mysterious and leaves a lot of room for growth and developement (If the future episodes are made, speaking of which, this stands awesomely as a standalone animated short film too, not just a pilot), the characters are all likeable yet morally questionable (Which is GREAT! This kind of complexity in non-adult animated shows is rare), the voice acting is spot on, the setting is intriguing, the music and ambiance is awesome (Can't believe that you made it *alongside* the animation and the story and everything as well! Makes it all the more respectable), all the designs and sets and backgrounds look gorgeous and alive and so on and so forth, I could go on. Sure thing, there are a couple flaws with perspectives and dimensions and lip syncing, but do they really matter at all, when the overall work is this amazing and passionate?
Man I love TH-cam indie animation so much, I can understand how hard and painful it can be to make something that would've taken this much time, effort and raw passion, all on a site that this heavily favours quality over quantity and bullshit formulae/semantics over genuine creativity in work, but the fact that they still exist and get a decent amount of attention, even if they realistically deserve sooooo much more, is at least pleasing to know and makes room for optimism for the future...
As a huge space and science fiction fan, this is amazing! I love the art style and I am invested in the story! Great job!
OHHHH WOW... I BLAME MYSELF FOR SEEING THIS ONLY NOW HOLY STARS THIS IS INCREDIBLE!
I can't put my words into it... just.. wow
This is just brutal! I feel like i'm seeing some Netflix thing! You deserve all the support dear Mir! I hope you keep receiving support! And keep working and doing what you love! I know all your works is going to be loved because you are offering the same. All my good wishes❤❤❤🎉
Fantastic! This feels like a blend of influences from some of my favourite shows, and even a game I love, but with a brand new flavour of its own. The fantasy of stealing a ship just to explore space has a special place in my heart.
I felt like some phrasing and delivery could have used a second pass, and the pacing maybe a little bit too consistent if I'm being honest. However none of that can shake the solid foundations of this project or the excitement I have to watch everyone working on this grow and develop something wonderful.
Keep up the great work, you should all be proud of your achievement!
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING THE ANIMATION THE VOICE ACTING!?!??! SO AWESOME AND THE LORE I LOVE MULTIVERSES AND ALSO IT'S ONLY THE FIRST EPISODE BUT YOU WROTE YOUR CHARACTERS SO GOOD IM ACTUALLY GONNA DIE I CANT WAIT THE SECOND EPISODE
OMFG! You did the writing, the composition, the animation, all on your own!?!?! That's insanity! It's wonderful what you've made, and props to casting, the voice actors you chose are so amazing and fit their roles so well!!! Can't wait to see more ahhhh!!!
This show seems to have a lot of potential! :D