I agree with most of the comments the story ended too quickly and deserves a part two. Where she gets with the rich guy that sends her the velvet roses every time. Her dumping the attorney and Marion the rich man who truly loves her. So you need to quickly start writing part two and give us the rest of the story
I loved this story, up to a point, but it felt unfinished. Should have covered her dumping Pat/Pecho/Pancho, whatever, and getting together with Dimitrio. All good romances need to have the HEA with the hero and heroine getting together when the story ends. I felt cheated by the abrupt ending.
The story was great I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. But then it ends up her husband's not in love with her and the guy that's followed her all over the world listening to her concerts was. You abruptly stop the story with bull I was so disappointed. Cherry
I’m so glad she came to her senses about Patcho! I agree, this story needs a part 2 😊
It would have been nice to have another 3 minutes or so there, but it does leave you with a smile on her face.
Kinda ends abruptly - part two maybe???
Great story,but a very abrupt ending. A part two coming? Inquiring minds would like to know.🙂
It would have been good if Pacho had made a scene about her being there and Dimetrio coming and putting Pacho in his place
WOW that's a beautiful story,but that ending sucks . I was not ready for it.❤
I agree with most of the comments the story ended too quickly and deserves a part two. Where she gets with the rich guy that sends her the velvet roses every time. Her dumping the attorney and Marion the rich man who truly loves her. So you need to quickly start writing part two and give us the rest of the story
Viva Elena, what a wonderful ending!! 🎉🎉❤❤pacho pendejo full of envy and jealousy; his loss.
So many of these just end in the middle of the story! Im thinking there must be a part 2 coming to them? Its odd!
Pacho is making me mad! All he wanted was as her money and luxurious apartment! Obviously 😮
I think the ending needed to be a little longer I don’t want to use my imagination. I want to hear the ending. Other than that I enjoyed the story.
This need a part two
A few stories I have listened to on here need a part 2, or at least an ending!
I loved this story, up to a point, but it felt unfinished. Should have covered her dumping Pat/Pecho/Pancho, whatever, and getting together with Dimitrio. All good romances need to have the HEA with the hero and heroine getting together when the story ends. I felt cheated by the abrupt ending.
He abrupt ending sucks! Yea, you left us wanting!! Just saying?!
The story was great I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. But then it ends up her husband's not in love with her and the guy that's followed her all over the world listening to her concerts was. You abruptly stop the story with bull I was so disappointed.
Cherry