Hey there,it’s a beautiful song that u wrote but I would to work on your voice and then record it and make it even more appealing Overall a beautiful song😊
@@Naviii032thank you for your feedback, I've never had proper voice training so my voice isn't the best, also I would use a microphone but the guitar takes over too much, thank you though
Sure😊 btw you can do vocal exercise daily it’s helps a lot , I mean personally it does and btw I am 14rs old and I too write songs so happy to see you too write, if you need any suggestions u can ask me.
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Your song is so good good! I just subscribed! Im 13 and I song write too. I also recently started a channel ❤
This is my first song ever, if you enjoy it please subscribe
21st! I love the song keep it up
Thank you so much!!
🎉 Nice song, keep make song. 🎉
Amazing! ❤
Hey there,it’s a beautiful song that u wrote but I would to work on your voice and then record it and make it even more appealing
Overall a beautiful song😊
@@Naviii032thank you for your feedback, I've never had proper voice training so my voice isn't the best, also I would use a microphone but the guitar takes over too much, thank you though
Sure😊 btw you can do vocal exercise daily it’s helps a lot , I mean personally it does and btw I am 14rs old and I too write songs so happy to see you too write, if you need any suggestions u can ask me.