Our greatest strength is our ability to ignore thousands of years of learned wisdom in order to do something incredibly stupid. Combine that with our endless stubborness and you cant deal with us
The ending felt cut off - it felt as though there was a lot more to tell there - perhaps a second story showing us the conclusion? It was interesting to hear from our protagonist's perspective, but it would have been good to be involved in some of these sections instead of finding out by exposition.
It is like a theme. In order to make the humans HFY, aliens must be utterly stupid, incapable of even basic observation and study. Always rushing in blindly without knowing anything. A little tired of this trope.
Terrible, so he has the power to issue a whole fleet around into a flank attack but can't order fleets to save the other fleet? Strange Chain of Command, no wonder humans grind them into blue slush puppy!
Our greatest strength is our ability to ignore thousands of years of learned wisdom in order to do something incredibly stupid. Combine that with our endless stubborness and you cant deal with us
Mess with the bull you get the horns.
Good story with a non-ending
right ... we want a continuation!!
Ended way too abruptly. And it was going well, too.
Well, that sucks....the story ends without an ending.... :(
The ending felt cut off - it felt as though there was a lot more to tell there - perhaps a second story showing us the conclusion? It was interesting to hear from our protagonist's perspective, but it would have been good to be involved in some of these sections instead of finding out by exposition.
Great story. More to come?
Every day :)
Nice story
Part 2?
Had the makings of a good story but failed miserably at the end
First Lord narrows a lot…
It is like a theme. In order to make the humans HFY, aliens must be utterly stupid, incapable of even basic observation and study. Always rushing in blindly without knowing anything.
A little tired of this trope.
Editing issues
We underestimated the humans unity? Great tell don't show ai
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Do you realize how frustrating it is to listen to AI ?
Read channel description
FAFO.
F*** around, find out.
Terrible, so he has the power to issue a whole fleet around into a flank attack but can't order fleets to save the other fleet? Strange Chain of Command, no wonder humans grind them into blue slush puppy!