Taught him a lesson? What lesson? He doesn't even know the affair is going on. Come to think of it, neither does the reader. Not one overtly sexual act is even alluded to.
But on the heading of your story, he said they use both ends and you didn’t mention that once in your story you should’ve said what they did. I know you said what they did at the end of your story but you should’ve included that in your story, leave an imagination is all right, but sometimes it’s all right to go through the whole story which really makes the imaginationdisappear
Click bait, and not interesting at all. Simps will say corny lines and like it because they're simps. The entire story lacks any resemblance to an erotica story, it's more dull and dry. The writer seems reluctant to keep the story in line with the click bait title, and it just drags on and no intimate lines, more like a failed attempt to keep listeners awake [because this story will definitely help you sleep]. The narrative is too mechanical, the writer is not able to deliver a story worthy of further interests. The way intimacy is deliberately avoided shows this writer can't write true erotica and isnt capable of tying the sexual intentions into rhe proper words, so they devert to lame scenarios that lose the moment and then the story loses any momentum and falls off time and time again. Sorry story, lame, fails to materialize into anything worthy of attention.
@@jrgenpedersen840 Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate your attention to detail, I'll definitely consider adding more variety to my descriptions in future stories
Taught him a lesson? What lesson? He doesn't even know the affair is going on. Come to think of it, neither does the reader. Not one overtly sexual act is even alluded to.
Detail would be good
Not sure what to think…..two wrongs don’t make it right!
But on the heading of your story, he said they use both ends and you didn’t mention that once in your story you should’ve said what they did. I know you said what they did at the end of your story but you should’ve included that in your story, leave an imagination is all right, but sometimes it’s all right to go through the whole story which really makes the imaginationdisappear
@@charlessmith9421 Noted
Wow wow wow so so sweet ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
You are the best❤
Such a great story as always
Click bait, and not interesting at all.
Simps will say corny lines and like it because they're simps.
The entire story lacks any resemblance to an erotica story, it's more dull and dry.
The writer seems reluctant to keep the story in line with the click bait title, and it just drags on and no intimate lines, more like a failed attempt to keep listeners awake [because this story will definitely help you sleep].
The narrative is too mechanical, the writer is not able to deliver a story worthy of further interests.
The way intimacy is deliberately avoided shows this writer can't write true erotica and isnt capable of tying the sexual intentions into rhe proper words, so they devert to lame scenarios that lose the moment and then the story loses any momentum and falls off time and time again.
Sorry story, lame, fails to materialize into anything worthy of attention.
Can you even write one of these stories without "heels clicking against the hard woord floors"?
@@jrgenpedersen840 Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate your attention to detail, I'll definitely consider adding more variety to my descriptions in future stories
Great I love its truly inspiring ❤
The narration is so engaging
You are a good looking woman and I believe you might as well get revenge
It is enough for you to make you happy and sexy.. I love your voice and the way you telling and we need more detail
Need more explanation of what happened to you and the brothers with title..
🤗 Everything.. Happened...❤
Try poloyamory instead
I’d have loved to have been one of those two lucky guys. I’ll take the women you take the girls.
I blame a husbands cheating on his wife that never satisfied her hard working husband ever in the bedroom 😅
"Such a great story as always, 4:30 is my favorite part! 💯
WhaT did you do?????