you should never be allowed to do another story ever again. as much as she needs to vindicate herself to her stepmother, it’s her deadbeat weakass father she should be confronting and gearing her questions towards. he wronged her more than anyone.
when you began this story, you should change your scene instead of keeping one screen shot. This could have been really good if you would have put more effort into making this scene.
you should never be allowed to do another story ever again. as much as she needs to vindicate herself to her stepmother, it’s her deadbeat weakass father she should be confronting and gearing her questions towards. he wronged her more than anyone.
when you began this story, you should change your scene instead of keeping one screen shot. This could have been really good if you would have put more effort into making this scene.
I was not feeling this story. I can tell you didn’t put much effort or thought into the process. Sorry
@@Labenzez you can say sister