I've learned more from watching your videos than I have in any creative writing class or workshop. Everyone else just rehashes the same tired old basics and general tips, and they're never willing to give genuine feedback for improvement or delve into the meat of the craft itself. So I appreciate your detailed advice and breakdowns of what works and what doesn't. It's helped my writing tremendously the last few months.
With my friends, we built a homebrew D&D world where humanity didn't exist. It led to a lot of questions, especially one such as "Since the usual thing about humans in fantasy settings is their empire building... Who builds empires in the absence of humans?" It came down to the Dragonborn making a Dictatorial Meritocracy, inspired by the Turian Heirarchy from Mass Effect.
I think the video can ultimately be boiled down to "Consider everything" but it's nice to have it all laid out, because it's hard to keep everything in mind. One thing I would add is, don't be afraid to revise the same thing over and over as you consider new things. Magic, technology, and politics are probably the biggest factors in changing how a society functions.
Great Video. Using and remembering Environments in worldbuilding really so obvious but so often overlooked. I think it's something that a lot of my favorite writers (namely Tolkien) actually did really well without me realizing it, and something I look forward to implementing in my story.
Glad you liked the video - and yes, the environment really is overlooked so often. But it can be so much more. And it doesn't necessarily require the creation of something new. Geography etc. is quite often covered already. It is just a matter of giving all the things that were placed somewhere a meaning and a connection to the world's history as well as the story 🙂
I'm surprised you didn't mention genre anywhere. Understanding how you want your world to feel will have a massive impact on it. Creating a setting where no one wins and it's only suffering will be far different from a setting meant for heroes. I also wanted to mention that genre can influence more than the theme and atmosphere. For example, a fantasy setting is usually a reflection of the protagonists' emotions, while fiction is usually the world influencing the protagonist. Lastly, I wanted to mention the rule of 3. It makes everything a lot easier if you can break it down into multiples of 3. 3 major factions each have 3 noble families who hold land over 3 territories. Of course it doesn't need to be exactly 3, but just saying that one sentence outlined a ton of macroscopic information for a setting.
I always get an idea here and there from your videos. I feel like I do everything right what you are saying, but there is an important part that's always a problem for me. It's a general issue that happens regardless of what I'm doing: I always screw up on the last mile.
First, I'm obviously glad to hear you find something valuable in my videos so often 🙂 In terms of your "screwing up" - would you care to share anything specific? All my videos are of course just guiding posts based on my experience, so even a writer who does most of it completely differently could still tell a story that is amazing. The beauty of something so creative as writing a story is the fact that there are so many ways to approach it and still do it right, because there are so many different people out there who like different things. So just because you might do something in another way, it doesn't necessarily have to mean you are doing it "wrong" 🙂
One of my species in my story stem from a neutron star. The noxar on their own could not escape it. Another species managed to scan and reproduce them so they could be their pets. Noxar however are sentient and communicate without the engineers noticing. Their culture is born from revolution. The noxar destroyed the main archive to break the engineers who died out incredibly quickly when they could no longer recreate and use their own technology. Without a clear purpose the functionally immortal noxar commit self delete by starvation. Nothing but their own claws and teeth could harm them now that the engineers technology was unusable. Their offspring degrade with each generation. Now only one of the Null born (born in a laboratory, so still generation 0) is left alienated by his kind but revered as the last null born. He would refuse any and all rolls of leadership. Null born were all equal and their relays (sensory organ also used for communication) made mass coordination easy, so why have a dedicated leader when all could suggest and disgust together. They were all in it together and so they would all be equal.
You mean the creation of a single character, or something more broader like an entire new race? 🙂 In terms of a single character, I do have a few videos in the works already where I include storytelling a bit more, basically using made-up characters and their story for the sake of making the video's theory more accessible. I could imagine that some of those videos are similar to what you are looking for, especially those about writing female or dwarven characters. These are planned for the end of next month with other types of characters following afterwards 🙂
That really depends on how you approach outlining. In theory, you could start writing your actual story from the get go - it simply requires more worldbuilding (and often more revisions) throughout the writing process 🙂
@@TheTaleTinkerer Thanks a lot. I already planned and outlined my worldbuilding with 5 Kingdom's and 5 major territories/continent, but I was struggling with adding more history in each kingdom 😇
@@theklatosshowtv197 It really depends how much worldbuilding you want to do. Having so much defined already, I personally probably would focus on writing the actual story, and then flesh out history as I come across scenes in the book that could use more depth here 🙂
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Working on an idea for a fantasy novel and stumbled upon your channel. It has been SUCH a blessing oh my word 🎊 Keep up the good work
Thank you for the positive feedback - I always appreciate it when someone takes the time to leave some encouraging words 🙂
I've learned more from watching your videos than I have in any creative writing class or workshop. Everyone else just rehashes the same tired old basics and general tips, and they're never willing to give genuine feedback for improvement or delve into the meat of the craft itself. So I appreciate your detailed advice and breakdowns of what works and what doesn't. It's helped my writing tremendously the last few months.
Thank you for the kind words - this really is very motivating to hear. Glad you get some value out of my videos 🙂
With my friends, we built a homebrew D&D world where humanity didn't exist. It led to a lot of questions, especially one such as "Since the usual thing about humans in fantasy settings is their empire building... Who builds empires in the absence of humans?"
It came down to the Dragonborn making a Dictatorial Meritocracy, inspired by the Turian Heirarchy from Mass Effect.
I think the video can ultimately be boiled down to "Consider everything" but it's nice to have it all laid out, because it's hard to keep everything in mind. One thing I would add is, don't be afraid to revise the same thing over and over as you consider new things. Magic, technology, and politics are probably the biggest factors in changing how a society functions.
And religion as well, it's probably the most influencial thing apart from environment imo
Great Video. Using and remembering Environments in worldbuilding really so obvious but so often overlooked. I think it's something that a lot of my favorite writers (namely Tolkien) actually did really well without me realizing it, and something I look forward to implementing in my story.
Glad you liked the video - and yes, the environment really is overlooked so often. But it can be so much more. And it doesn't necessarily require the creation of something new.
Geography etc. is quite often covered already. It is just a matter of giving all the things that were placed somewhere a meaning and a connection to the world's history as well as the story 🙂
I'm surprised you didn't mention genre anywhere. Understanding how you want your world to feel will have a massive impact on it. Creating a setting where no one wins and it's only suffering will be far different from a setting meant for heroes.
I also wanted to mention that genre can influence more than the theme and atmosphere. For example, a fantasy setting is usually a reflection of the protagonists' emotions, while fiction is usually the world influencing the protagonist.
Lastly, I wanted to mention the rule of 3. It makes everything a lot easier if you can break it down into multiples of 3. 3 major factions each have 3 noble families who hold land over 3 territories. Of course it doesn't need to be exactly 3, but just saying that one sentence outlined a ton of macroscopic information for a setting.
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I always get an idea here and there from your videos. I feel like I do everything right what you are saying, but there is an important part that's always a problem for me. It's a general issue that happens regardless of what I'm doing: I always screw up on the last mile.
First, I'm obviously glad to hear you find something valuable in my videos so often 🙂
In terms of your "screwing up" - would you care to share anything specific? All my videos are of course just guiding posts based on my experience, so even a writer who does most of it completely differently could still tell a story that is amazing.
The beauty of something so creative as writing a story is the fact that there are so many ways to approach it and still do it right, because there are so many different people out there who like different things.
So just because you might do something in another way, it doesn't necessarily have to mean you are doing it "wrong" 🙂
Trade and poletics are also important in Star Wars.
They sure are :-)
really cool !🤩
Glad to hear you liked it :-)
One of my species in my story stem from a neutron star. The noxar on their own could not escape it. Another species managed to scan and reproduce them so they could be their pets. Noxar however are sentient and communicate without the engineers noticing. Their culture is born from revolution. The noxar destroyed the main archive to break the engineers who died out incredibly quickly when they could no longer recreate and use their own technology.
Without a clear purpose the functionally immortal noxar commit self delete by starvation. Nothing but their own claws and teeth could harm them now that the engineers technology was unusable. Their offspring degrade with each generation. Now only one of the Null born (born in a laboratory, so still generation 0) is left alienated by his kind but revered as the last null born. He would refuse any and all rolls of leadership. Null born were all equal and their relays (sensory organ also used for communication) made mass coordination easy, so why have a dedicated leader when all could suggest and disgust together. They were all in it together and so they would all be equal.
Can you do a video where you make characters
You mean the creation of a single character, or something more broader like an entire new race? 🙂
In terms of a single character, I do have a few videos in the works already where I include storytelling a bit more, basically using made-up characters and their story for the sake of making the video's theory more accessible.
I could imagine that some of those videos are similar to what you are looking for, especially those about writing female or dwarven characters. These are planned for the end of next month with other types of characters following afterwards 🙂
How much history do I need to plan before I start writing my novel?
That really depends on how you approach outlining. In theory, you could start writing your actual story from the get go - it simply requires more worldbuilding (and often more revisions) throughout the writing process 🙂
@@TheTaleTinkerer Thanks a lot. I already planned and outlined my worldbuilding with 5 Kingdom's and 5 major territories/continent, but I was struggling with adding more history in each kingdom 😇
@@theklatosshowtv197 It really depends how much worldbuilding you want to do. Having so much defined already, I personally probably would focus on writing the actual story, and then flesh out history as I come across scenes in the book that could use more depth here 🙂
i'm so early 😅
Don't do it again. You'll get a whiplash 😂😂😂
@@phantasy5608 What's the saying: "the early bird catches the worm"? 🙂