Sharing My Multi-Award-Winning Statement of Purpose (Two Masters Scholarships in UK & Germany)

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  • @avosehtimothy414
    @avosehtimothy414 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Wow! You wrote a very good and convincing essay! This is fantabulous.
    Thanks for the video.

  • @mbunaboemmanuella4654
    @mbunaboemmanuella4654 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    It is beautiful and flawless 👏🏼👏🏼
    You deserve everything good coming your way.
    I absolutely love it.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • @musayazid4806
    @musayazid4806 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Awesome
    Thanks for helping me out on how to share my own statement of purpose

  • @obiamakaebo3818
    @obiamakaebo3818 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is a bomb. I'll definitely start writing mine an I k ow it will come out excellent

  • @babatopetade887
    @babatopetade887 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This really is brilliant!

  • @Sabina_Eshun
    @Sabina_Eshun 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Where is the first, second and third paragraph how will I know how you structured it ?

  • @enloveyduvey001
    @enloveyduvey001 ปีที่แล้ว

    we appeciate you, Victor!

  • @avosehtimothy414
    @avosehtimothy414 4 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Guys, I think it is appropriate for him not to share the soft copy with us, in order to avoid plagiarism. Thanks.

  • @hejarshahabi114
    @hejarshahabi114 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    why do you do that "reading it". just put the link to download it.

  • @jeanpierrejironsosa4801
    @jeanpierrejironsosa4801 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much for this video!! It was very helpful!

  • @mohammedalhassan368
    @mohammedalhassan368 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow, what a brilliant and academically convincing statement of Purpose. Good work done bro.

  • @asogwaobiora3991
    @asogwaobiora3991 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    One of the best

  • @sasindusilva2907
    @sasindusilva2907 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @feranmielizabeth6364
    @feranmielizabeth6364 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wahoo, very powerful Sop you have there.😍

  • @dawughantie9433
    @dawughantie9433 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very useful information Mr. Victor

  • @hejarshahabi114
    @hejarshahabi114 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    put the link to download the pdf

  • @Peterja91
    @Peterja91 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is great

  • @Fatima-ph9ju
    @Fatima-ph9ju 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Excellent statement of purpose 👌

  • @mehreengul5557
    @mehreengul5557 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    you should make your website where these all things can be written ..it will be great for us

  • @stanlluxy
    @stanlluxy 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello Victor, thanks for your kindness. However, for a B.Sc graduate in International Relations & Diplomacy, does M.Sc in Development and Governance align? Or would u prefer M.Sc in Peace and Conflict studies?

  • @championolatunji6062
    @championolatunji6062 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I've definitely been writing my SOP the wrong way!!!!!

  • @arowojobemojisola9754
    @arowojobemojisola9754 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi Victor... How do we start a motivational letter....do start with an address just like a formal letter or we just go straight to the heading then the letter....this has been delaying me n I just don't know how to start....thanks

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Usually, no need for address and salutations except stated otherwise.

    • @arowojobemojisola9754
      @arowojobemojisola9754 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@VictorAgboga so I just go right into the letter???

  • @cielmiel5643
    @cielmiel5643 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you for this! My question is would it be okay to submit the same personal statement to various universities or would this risk self-plagirism?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@cielmiel5643 It's fine 👍🏽

    • @cielmiel5643
      @cielmiel5643 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@VictorAgboga thank you!

  • @okthatsinteresting
    @okthatsinteresting 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hey Victor, do you know of any service that can help review the SOP we write? If not a service, then some forum or FB group perhaps?

  • @ejeefe4816
    @ejeefe4816 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How are you doing. Nice content. I also studied in Germany. Am trying to to get a PhD in politics. I see this is your area...... Can you give me some pointers and advice. Sure I have watched most of your videos but am sure you could give me more direct info........

  • @momentswithesolob
    @momentswithesolob 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This perfect!!!

  • @chinwe_nkwocha
    @chinwe_nkwocha 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wait, one does not have to begin with an introduction of oneself?

  • @__nadiah_
    @__nadiah_ 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Good evening, thank you for making this video. Please I would appreciate if you can help me review my statement of purpose. Thank you

  • @west7932
    @west7932 ปีที่แล้ว

    Seriously, how on earth can I write this relating it to veterinary medicine.?
    You wrote well ,at some point I felt as if I was listening to news...

  • @tobilobaalade1099
    @tobilobaalade1099 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Awesome

  • @sasurichmond6761
    @sasurichmond6761 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please after writing, how can I send it to the university?

  • @stevetheanalyst
    @stevetheanalyst ปีที่แล้ว

    Victor, I noticed you requested scholarship at the end of your SOP.... currently Is it still accepted when applying for a university in USA....thanks

  • @lovelylilly3225
    @lovelylilly3225 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Again nice and helpful video ❤❤can i get its hard copy or download it???

  • @jabss7847
    @jabss7847 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi victor, I am applying for the DAAD Helmut schidmt scholarship. I have prepared and written my motivation of letter as best as I can but I am not sure if I have wrote it well enough. I think it would be a great help to me if you can share your motivation letter to me. Thanks and I am looking forward towards your reply !

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I just shared it in this video. Kindly check my channel for both my master's and PhD statement of purpose.

  • @SehaliMohammed
    @SehaliMohammed 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I am a postgraduate what do you advise me i want to continue my PhD program

  • @mavisayorinde8766
    @mavisayorinde8766 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hello @victor, I must commend your for the great help. You made me realize how I needed to improve on my SOP.
    However, @victor, how should someone who did not graduated with first class of second class upper, that is, he/she graduated with 2.2 or lower credit from university or polytechnic. How can they coin their SOP to still convince the scholarship committee to award them?
    Though, I'm not in same field as you, but I can borrow some ideas and adapt it to my field. I shall expect your feedback. Thanks

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      th-cam.com/video/CaGWQtCKmD8/w-d-xo.html

    • @mavisayorinde8766
      @mavisayorinde8766 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@VictorAgboga Thank you. I hope to contact you

  • @afolabiogunmekan8157
    @afolabiogunmekan8157 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good read

  • @chinnyfolktales
    @chinnyfolktales 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello Victor, please can you help me review my essay?

  • @dawughantie9433
    @dawughantie9433 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please, is recommendation letter a requirement when applying for scholarship

  • @abdirazaqali8921
    @abdirazaqali8921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Victor what did you persue at your undergraduate level

  • @MutualConnect_Podcast
    @MutualConnect_Podcast 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey, I have an urgent and serious question about how to apply for chevening scholarship,
    My Question is do I need to apply to the university of my choice in UK first before I can apply to chevening scholarships. Or do I have to continue my chevening scholarship application before choosing any UK university of my choice.

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      They have different deadlines. Priorise the one with an earlier deadline.

  • @ebereezike3448
    @ebereezike3448 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Amazing! I noticed you applied to just one school. Was this a personal choice or there weren't two schools provision then?

  • @rachaelaikhuomon2669
    @rachaelaikhuomon2669 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello Victor, did you have to prove you really did all these activities you listed?

  • @victoragageche8014
    @victoragageche8014 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I noticed that you only spoke about one university in this motivation letter. Or did you pick this course as your first and second choice ?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      The instructions were different 4 years ago!

  • @nitishshrimal
    @nitishshrimal 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can someone please specify what should be word limit for a Statement of Purpose ?

  • @kazeemmuraina6769
    @kazeemmuraina6769 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hello Mr Victor. Please is there any correlation between statement of purpose and motivation letter? If an institution requested for only motivation letter, is it advisable to add statement of purpose?

  • @promiseusoro3037
    @promiseusoro3037 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Should I address my sop

  • @elvisnnaemeka6722
    @elvisnnaemeka6722 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice essay. Are you an ex-seminarian?

  • @frankeghosa6108
    @frankeghosa6108 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow! Am so impress with ur sop. Please how can I reach you for mentorship? Please I need your contact. Am applying for Sweden institute scholarship. Thanks and God bless you for your help.

  • @onyiokeke627
    @onyiokeke627 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Goodday Victor, any scholarship for 2021 in Germany. dont mind if you could share your email?

  • @ekekakimunfredrick2032
    @ekekakimunfredrick2032 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please help proofread my essays

  • @asogwaobiora3991
    @asogwaobiora3991 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    One of the best

  • @ebereezike3448
    @ebereezike3448 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Amazing! I noticed you applied to just one school. Was this a personal choice or there weren't two schools provision then?