i want to share a few critique because i believe in the potential of this series 1. the story pacing is slow in the 1st 10 minutes nothing catches my attention to be invested in the main character she doesnt stand out from every other quirky ,clumsy girl that likes stuff other people dont and nobody understands her trope that disney has done already. I'm waiting for personality ,who is Pearl and her brother they don't feel like brother and sister they dont argue and agree to disagree or tease or compete or play they feel like strangers. 2. it would make more sense if Pearl was an inventor or her passing mom made the tech in the town and the bond with the mechs would make it more personal and have a greater reason why she likes the tech. You Can have soo much fun with pearl being a steampunk techno girl dont limit the creativity that is begging to be used in this style. 3. pearl doesn't have her own goals like even a simple problem like the town is running out of coal to keep the robots working and need to find a different power source now the small robot is even more important ,not only the bad guys need it but the town needs it also. hope this helps i love independent animation cant wait for part 2
Interesting little coalpunk story. Has a nice Disney look to it, but lacks the animation. Still, it would be nice to see more of it if I have the time for it :)
❤❤❤ жизнь робота смысл которого только в том чтобы подать масло теперь не так будет унывать😂 ведь есть робот который должен подать туалетную бумагу😂😂😂😂😂
This is fun! Really well made. Only one thing - the 'adorkable' female character trend from Disney is kind of at play here. I wish Pearl had a bit more backbone. More of a backstory. If she's the 'weird one' because she cares about mechs, why doesn't she stand up for them more? Why does she cower so much? If she believes that they're more, why doesn't she make that stance more often? Where did she learn to know so much about mechs, how did she come to see them as more, especially considering that everyone around her treats them as disposable annoyances at best? And the characters are a little flat. Her father is the usual patriarch who runs everything and favors his son. The brother is the one that seems to 'always have to get Pearl out of danger', the town residents are... we don't even know about any of them other than they're abusive towards mechs and don't like Pearl. Her mother is never mentioned, or hinted to. Who's the bad guy? Pirates, sure, but how long have they been around? Why doesn't the town have security that keeps an eye out if pirates are a threat? The blimp was right above town before anyone even noticed! I'm curious for the second part, and hoping that some of those questions are answered.
MechWest Episode 2 th-cam.com/video/XFs2umLydvo/w-d-xo.html
Cant wait for episode 2 ❤
It is on thier channel
It's out on TH-cam already
th-cam.com/video/usHMcgPNxnI/w-d-xo.htmlsi=0UoYoGqabqSinPZW
I loved this cartoon ❤
I love it, Episode 2? Please!
th-cam.com/video/usHMcgPNxnI/w-d-xo.html
@@davidgallagher4234 thanks bro, you are my hero :D
Loved WTWB, first episode was awesome, looking forward to episode 2, cheers for the reel CG Meetup...
Thanks! Part 2 is here: youtube.com/@mechwestshow?sub_confirmation=1
Oh my gosh Robot so cute 😭♥️
i want to share a few critique because i believe in the potential of this series
1. the story pacing is slow in the 1st 10 minutes nothing catches my attention to be invested in the main character she doesnt stand out from every other quirky ,clumsy girl that likes stuff other people dont and nobody understands her trope that disney has done already. I'm waiting for personality ,who is Pearl and her brother they don't feel like brother and sister they dont argue and agree to disagree or tease or compete or play they feel like strangers.
2. it would make more sense if Pearl was an inventor or her passing mom made the tech in the town and the bond with the mechs would make it more personal and have a greater reason why she likes the tech. You Can have soo much fun with pearl being a steampunk techno girl dont limit the creativity that is begging to be used in this style.
3. pearl doesn't have her own goals like even a simple problem like the town is running out of coal to keep the robots working and need to find a different power source now the small robot is even more important ,not only the bad guys need it but the town needs it also.
hope this helps i love independent animation cant wait for part 2
Thanks good ideas! Part 2 is here: youtube.com/@mechwestshow?sub_confirmation=1
@@mechwestshow Wait.. Surely you fleshed out the story before you started working on the animation, right?
Pirates, the West and Mechs.... I'm game
As an cg artist it's alr8 👍😎
I need more to look at
Thanks! Part 2 is here: youtube.com/@mechwestshow?sub_confirmation=1
Can’t wait for the next episode
Thanks! Part 2 is here: youtube.com/@mechwestshow?sub_confirmation=1
Interesting little coalpunk story. Has a nice Disney look to it, but lacks the animation. Still, it would be nice to see more of it if I have the time for it :)
Thanks! Part 2 is here: youtube.com/@mechwestshow?sub_confirmation=1
@@mechwestshow I watched it yeah. Bit brutal for a family show, but okay. And don't be cheeky with your links ;)
❤❤❤ жизнь робота смысл которого только в том чтобы подать масло теперь не так будет унывать😂 ведь есть робот который должен подать туалетную бумагу😂😂😂😂😂
Amazing please contiue
Episode 2: th-cam.com/video/usHMcgPNxnI/w-d-xo.htmlfeature=shared&t=7s
Oeh part 1 that means (hopefully) part 2
It's already out on their channel
Episode 2: th-cam.com/video/usHMcgPNxnI/w-d-xo.htmlfeature=shared&t=7s
It amazing
this shit is fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
YOOO I KNOW THE GUY WHO MADE IT!!!
HD for life
Great cartoon, I liked it
You can watch episode 2 on their channel if you like it
Hi I'm from philipines
Ok
wow
Thanks! Part 2 is here: youtube.com/@mechwestshow?sub_confirmation=1
Fantástico e Maravilhoso!
Not so bad loved it ❤
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Wow
❤❤
This is amazing, although her mouth is very awkward, but easy to forget about that given how good everything else is
Joyita la vdd
This is fun! Really well made. Only one thing - the 'adorkable' female character trend from Disney is kind of at play here. I wish Pearl had a bit more backbone. More of a backstory. If she's the 'weird one' because she cares about mechs, why doesn't she stand up for them more? Why does she cower so much? If she believes that they're more, why doesn't she make that stance more often? Where did she learn to know so much about mechs, how did she come to see them as more, especially considering that everyone around her treats them as disposable annoyances at best?
And the characters are a little flat. Her father is the usual patriarch who runs everything and favors his son. The brother is the one that seems to 'always have to get Pearl out of danger', the town residents are... we don't even know about any of them other than they're abusive towards mechs and don't like Pearl. Her mother is never mentioned, or hinted to. Who's the bad guy? Pirates, sure, but how long have they been around? Why doesn't the town have security that keeps an eye out if pirates are a threat? The blimp was right above town before anyone even noticed!
I'm curious for the second part, and hoping that some of those questions are answered.
Episode 2: th-cam.com/video/usHMcgPNxnI/w-d-xo.htmlfeature=shared&t=7s
este un universo que los alienliginas le dieron tecnologia muy desarrollada en la epoca del viejo este
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Woah
Bellisssimooo
Please add subtitle option
Fix subtitles please.
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nice
Hi iam from India
HOLA‼️
Indian Sigma Boy🎉
Smelly indian?😂
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