Great story and yes we will need a part two to this. I can already here Jack's Mom "and here is a picture of jack, He was such a chubby baby"...lol. Then again, maybe my Mother was the only one who did that lmao. Need more on this dynamic duo.
This was great! Your writing, humor, thrilling action created a wonderfully narrated story. I truly do believe this was one of the best, if not the best, of the variety of HFY and other story channels. If there were awards, a gold medal is deserved!
I’ve listened to a lot of these in the last couple months. This is by far in the top 3 if not the best one. Make it a series I want to I own what happens on earth!
Lots of Fun. This makes me want to check out some of your longer stories, if there are any. Keep them up. This was especially good, though I was interrupted 75times with family stuff.
I'm a single father to a teenager so I'm alone quite a bit as any single parent can imagine so while I am at home doing chores and errands I always get enjoyment out of listening to your stories thank you very much and keep up with you great work
This story had so many synchronicities to my wife and my banter that we were laughing and pointing at each other throught this awesome story 😂😊❤. Thank y'all for it
I imagined Alia too look like Claudia black during her farscape days as the character is very similar to Vala who she plays in SG1 Good story very enjoyable
YOU GUYS ARE THE "HALLMARK" OF SCI-FI.. I JUST LOVE OLD STYLE ROMANCE AND WIILINGNESS TO SARIFICE FOR LOVE.. THE WORLD NEEDS MORE OF THAT ..HERE OR LIGHT YEARS AWAY... (Be encouraged)
Playful banter is basic to people who really like each other, whether in the job or at home with each other. So yeah, that's a favorite part woven throughout the story. Love by itself lasts about 18 months. Like last a lifetime.
Thank you so much for the story. Reading between lines leads to so much more, the impossible odds of two beings from different worlds falling in love. Chances are?
First, I have to say this reminded me of David Gemmell. He's my favorite author. Now I want to hear the story of meeting the mother! I vision Jack's family as rancher/farmers with free range cow and the majority of the family accepting her right away, but mom holding out until Aleigha helps saving a hefer/steer during a flash flood and Aleigha understanding why he would not use the control collar on her because he saw the abuse of shock collars on animals. just a quick brainstorm.
hi scifiLoreVault im one of the listeners wanting to reach out as im starting a publishing house that hopefully will start a scifi magasine that will come out every month in various languages, and be sold in supermarkets and other places. i would love to hear if you would like to write for something like that...
Hi! Thank you for reaching out and sharing your exciting project. It sounds like an incredible opportunity, and I’d love to discuss it further. Feel free to email me at hfyportal@gmail.com, and we can explore the possibilities together!
Why did you explain about the mercenaries twice. They ran from them when they escaped the planet and again in the nebula. Also the guy is really really dense and out of touch in this story for being former special forces.
Yes, PLEASE don’t screw up a good story by giving two different explanations for the same thing. Look at the *Bible* with two different creation stories, one where men and women were created at the same time, as equals. In a later chapter, a woman was created from the man’s rib, which made her PART of the man, thus required to be subservient to him. Not saying that you are attempting to create “Great Literature,” but even what the Beatles called a “Paperback Writer” needs to be a decent “Hack” to maintain an audience. One of the best stories among the ones available on YT is called *The Alien and the Princess* about two female protagonists and was presented by a female narrator. If you want to read a SciFi novel that has both a strong male and female protagonist, read *Shards of Honor* by LM Bujold!
my contribution is to suggest that since you are too lazy to bother correcting the errors in the AI generated caption before you post the videos then you should eliminate the captions, if nothing else maybe not having caption errors constantly thrown in our faces will make the thought that all these AI generated videos are just another no talent scam for youtube bucks a little more palatable .........
Enjoy listening!
Just wish you didn't pester for likes and subs
Best story I've heard so far. Excellent ending. Very cool!
Long... and FUN! Thank you. My favorite stories revolve around connection.
Thanks!
Many many thanks!
Loved the back and forth with those two. Great fun!
Great story and yes we will need a part two to this. I can already here Jack's Mom "and here is a picture of jack, He was such a chubby baby"...lol. Then again, maybe my Mother was the only one who did that lmao. Need more on this dynamic duo.
😁😁👍thank you
lol
I absolutely love these stories! I listen to them every night.
This was great! Your writing, humor, thrilling action created a wonderfully narrated story. I truly do believe this was one of the best, if not the best, of the variety of HFY and other story channels. If there were awards, a gold medal is deserved!
Very good. Conversations, action, banter, overall storyline: Excellent!
LOVED IT !!!
A change of pace, and something to look forward to. Now, what kind of family will we be seeing?
Excellent!!😊
Thank you!
A solid story and a decent play by play of the action.
Thank you!
Good story, 👍
Fun story enjoyed the story
Thank you!
Thanks, enjoyed that !
A lovely story, a great mix of adventure and humour. 😊
Glad you enjoyed it!
Very good high tech story! I enjoyed it. From Philippines
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!
I’ve listened to a lot of these in the last couple months. This is by far in the top 3 if not the best one. Make it a series I want to I own what happens on earth!
This was a great read need more of this great story
Thank you!
Lots of Fun. This makes me want to check out some of your longer stories, if there are any. Keep them up. This was especially good, though I was interrupted 75times with family stuff.
Excellent repartee. My compliments to the human author and the human narrator.
Great story, I enjoyed it very much
Glad you enjoyed it
really enjoyed this story i smiled the whole way through the naration
This story i really enjoyed Thank You
Thank you!
Delightful love story. Classic space opera.
thanks!
I'm a single father to a teenager so I'm alone quite a bit as any single parent can imagine so while I am at home doing chores and errands I always get enjoyment out of listening to your stories thank you very much and keep up with you great work
Excellent … as usual ! 👍👍👍👍👍
This story had so many synchronicities to my wife and my banter that we were laughing and pointing at each other throught this awesome story 😂😊❤. Thank y'all for it
Great story. 😎👌
Absolutely a fantastic story
Awesome story
I enjoyed this story very much. Both were characters that you can really relate to. I especially liked Aaliyah.
I imagined Alia too look like Claudia black during her farscape days as the character is very similar to Vala who she plays in SG1
Good story very enjoyable
Thanks!
YOU GUYS ARE THE "HALLMARK" OF SCI-FI.. I JUST LOVE OLD STYLE ROMANCE AND WIILINGNESS TO SARIFICE FOR LOVE.. THE WORLD NEEDS MORE OF THAT ..HERE OR LIGHT YEARS AWAY... (Be encouraged)
Many many thanks!
Nice escape
I’d love a part 2 where the story continues on earth meeting jack’s family and all of that
👍Thanks, It's good idea👍
Playful banter is basic to people who really like each other, whether in the job or at home with each other. So yeah, that's a favorite part woven throughout the story.
Love by itself lasts about 18 months. Like last a lifetime.
I love it
Thank you so much for the story. Reading between lines leads to so much more, the impossible odds of two beings from different worlds falling in love. Chances are?
Glad you enjoyed it!
First, I have to say this reminded me of David Gemmell. He's my favorite author.
Now I want to hear the story of meeting the mother! I vision Jack's family as rancher/farmers with free range cow and the majority of the family accepting her right away, but mom holding out until Aleigha helps saving a hefer/steer during a flash flood and Aleigha understanding why he would not use the control collar on her because he saw the abuse of shock collars on animals.
just a quick brainstorm.
Great....damm Great and funny
That was fun...I wanna know what happens next with his parents
thanks for your interest👍👍👍🚀
That was..."different"...!
All the banter
I want to continue this story until it’s complete
NORTON, TUCSON AZ.
Noice
hi scifiLoreVault im one of the listeners wanting to reach out as im starting a publishing house that hopefully will start a scifi magasine that will come out every month in various languages, and be sold in supermarkets and other places. i would love to hear if you would like to write for something like that...
Hi! Thank you for reaching out and sharing your exciting project. It sounds like an incredible opportunity, and I’d love to discuss it further. Feel free to email me at hfyportal@gmail.com, and we can explore the possibilities together!
Why did you explain about the mercenaries twice. They ran from them when they escaped the planet and again in the nebula. Also the guy is really really dense and out of touch in this story for being former special forces.
Considering this story was written by AI, it turned out pretty well.
Yes, PLEASE don’t screw up a good story by giving two different explanations for the same thing.
Look at the *Bible* with two different creation stories, one where men and women were created at the same time, as equals. In a later chapter, a woman was created from the man’s rib, which made her PART of the man, thus required to be subservient to him.
Not saying that you are attempting to create “Great Literature,” but even what the Beatles called a “Paperback Writer” needs to be a decent “Hack” to maintain an audience.
One of the best stories among the ones available on YT is called *The Alien and the Princess* about two female protagonists and was presented by a female narrator.
If you want to read a SciFi novel that has both a strong male and female protagonist, read *Shards of Honor* by LM Bujold!
-*CHEATRD ONE AGAIN
cone head
my contribution is to suggest that since you are too lazy to bother correcting the errors in the AI generated caption before you post the videos then you should eliminate the captions, if nothing else maybe not having caption errors constantly thrown in our faces will make the thought that all these AI generated videos are just another no talent scam for youtube bucks a little more palatable .........
I'm sure nobody reading this cares, but I unsubscribed.Every video is the same. It got repetitive.