Listened to this with earbuds in a dark room with no distractions. I let myself be taken in a guided adventure in which I could visualize every object that made up the environment of this story. I just recently discovered you and have become entranced in the stories you've submitted. I'm already a big fan and look forward to the next ones. Your narration skills are outstanding. The tone of your voice and the nuanced inflections captivate the listener and create another realm through which you navigate with exceptionally detailed surroundings that the audience easily visualizes through the mind's eye. Well done Jordan!
Reckon the authors of the stories deserve a bit of recognition to as one without the other wouldn't happen .especially on the narration side. If they got nothing to read well,...... there is nothing to narrate , where as authors have the option of others reading their works themselves . I believe jgh writes, so im sure you get my meaning, bro thats authors are is 50% of what you do .
The digging scenario is awesome. The whole community comes together for one purpose, even if there is absolutely no purpose to it. Makes me wanna start digging in MY front yard so the neighbors will see and come help. One neighbor, my brother, would just come up and tell me how stupid i am. The other neighbor, my dad, would threaten me with a belt. The neighbor to the right, my uncle, would go get me a bucket and make a pulley system to carry the dirt out. Im jelouse of Harold's community.
Someone is ripped to shreds from some creature in a hole. I know lets go down there with no weapons or provisions and absolutely no plan. What can go wrong? lol I did enjoy the story though heh.
Can't wait to hear this!! Nothing better than getting to listen to this while I'm out on my walk in 80 degrees 🥵
Enjoy! Hope you like the story!
@@JordanGrupe Yes thank you!! I loved it ❤️
I told ya'll before those 'unexplored holes' were dangerous.
ETA: Another awesome story! Can't wait til the next one.
We have some of those hanging out in da'hood. But it won't be that way for long....😅😊
@@rosetanner9817 🤣🤣🤣
@@rosetanner9817 you may have chosen the wrong spot for that gem 🤣
Can't wait to listen to this ❤❤❤❤
Thanks for watching!
Well that was one heck of a story
I really enjoyed it. Tnx
I'm only half way through and loving this one!!
Harold sounds like "Ron" from "Parks and Rec" hehehe! Love it !🖤🖤😀🙂😈
XD I love that show I could totally picture him as Ron
Love this story!❤
Listened to this with earbuds in a dark room with no distractions. I let myself be taken in a guided adventure in which I could visualize every object that made up the environment of this story.
I just recently discovered you and have become entranced in the stories you've submitted. I'm already a big fan and look forward to the next ones. Your narration skills are outstanding. The tone of your voice and the nuanced inflections captivate the listener and create another realm through which you navigate with exceptionally detailed surroundings that the audience easily visualizes through the mind's eye.
Well done Jordan!
Thank you so much, that's an incredible compliment!
Reckon the authors of the stories deserve a bit of recognition to as one without the other wouldn't happen .especially on the narration side. If they got nothing to read well,...... there is nothing to narrate , where as authors have the option of others reading their works themselves . I believe jgh writes, so im sure you get my meaning, bro thats authors are is 50% of what you do .
Do you indulge in guided meditation by any chance?
Hey thank you for the story it's quite entertaining and the narration is great as well. Really hat's off to the writer applause all around.
So is this a shared universe with the other story from the author about the wife disappearing in a hole in the closet.
Same writer definitely!
Wich one is this?
@@JordanGrupethe boring toast breakfast is a dead give away :)
I just realized the author is most likely British writing an American. Toast & tea haha
@@JosephDCLXVI good catch hoho
I also really love the sight and sound of breaking glass bottles 👍
Its unique and satisfying
Me too😊❤
@@SarahfaithlynnMccloskey I'm not sure what it says about us in a deeper sense but it's a beautiful sound and a great stress relief
Another enthralling story!
I dug a hole but all it got me was a knock on the door 20 years later 😅
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@@Kingsterbuddy 🤣
This was a Phenomenal work of Art 🎨🎭. Thank you Sir. You're headed for the Million Mark real soon my dear. Real soon...... bravo 👏
Thanks for the story. Im glad to see how fast your Patreon is growing.
I'm amazed to see how fast it's growing as well, it's really cool to see!
I love how deep your voice is, it's so soothing at night.
Thank you!
A good classic
Very trippy. Thanks for sharing this with us.
👍👍outstandingly imaginative. I loved every imaginative minutes. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖
man that was wild
The beginning is clearly a group of adults needing to playin a sandbox
Thank you so very much Jordan. 👍🏻
My pleasure!
The digging scenario is awesome. The whole community comes together for one purpose, even if there is absolutely no purpose to it. Makes me wanna start digging in MY front yard so the neighbors will see and come help. One neighbor, my brother, would just come up and tell me how stupid i am. The other neighbor, my dad, would threaten me with a belt. The neighbor to the right, my uncle, would go get me a bucket and make a pulley system to carry the dirt out.
Im jelouse of Harold's community.
This looks great 😊 cheers Jordan! It's funny saying your name lol my fiance is Jordan too ♡
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Just had a thought. Does anyone else remember as a kid thinking that you could dig a hole to China? OMG, he just now said that as I was writing! 😂
@@joyburton3967 Yes 🤣. My dad always said that to my siblings and I and I thought I could 🤣🤣
@@joyburton3967 yes LOL
I am the third commit also i love the stories
This is one of those good ones but also really sad with what happens to almost everyone.
Someone is ripped to shreds from some creature in a hole. I know lets go down there with no weapons or provisions and absolutely no plan. What can go wrong? lol I did enjoy the story though heh.
So they fell into a dungeon and found the dungeon boss…solo leveling??
I dont know if the author did it on purpose, but this is a red pilled story.
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Is there gonna be a part 2
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