Well I read your short story and now I would like to give you some constructive criticism. I know that English probably isn't your first language, but you really need to either learn better English and learn how to write in English better, or you need to find someone who can proof read and edit your stories before you post them. It wasn't a bad story but there were lots of parts where I couldn't work out what you were trying to say. Keep trying though.
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Well I read your short story and now I would like to give you some constructive criticism. I know that English probably isn't your first language, but you really need to either learn better English and learn how to write in English better, or you need to find someone who can proof read and edit your stories before you post them. It wasn't a bad story but there were lots of parts where I couldn't work out what you were trying to say. Keep trying though.