A certain friend of humanity once said, "Good men don't need rules. Today is not the day to find out why I have so many. Hmm?" All the things that we have rules against, are things we've already done. And we're always thinking up new shit.
From the sounds of it, the officers that gave the orders to glass planets were aboard the ships that were either outright destroyed or didn't survive the boarding actions.
Writing tip: you can read military fiction if you want to learn how to write a battle. The awkward staring at each other was a bit jarring, and the overall story lacked action or passion, but your prose was sufficiently coherent so adding a little more emotional response and action in the story could take the writing to the next level.
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A certain friend of humanity once said, "Good men don't need rules. Today is not the day to find out why I have so many. Hmm?" All the things that we have rules against, are things we've already done. And we're always thinking up new shit.
Thinking up new 'stuff'. We (humans) are good at that.
See: Geneva Suggestions
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Another great story, and excellent reading (storytelling) as usual!
If only those rules were followed now...
Geneva checklist
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Good story but really the officers aren't put on trial immediately for war crimes? They didn't just glass planets they glassed human planets
Great as usual
From the sounds of it, the officers that gave the orders to glass planets were aboard the ships that were either outright destroyed or didn't survive the boarding actions.
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Writing tip: you can read military fiction if you want to learn how to write a battle.
The awkward staring at each other was a bit jarring, and the overall story lacked action or passion, but your prose was sufficiently coherent so adding a little more emotional response and action in the story could take the writing to the next level.
while the constructive advice is nice, you might get more mileage out of it by commenting on the OP's actual story, rather than a narration