This was the most relatable jikookie scenario 😭. The coming of age feeling, the way u highlighted Kookie's nervous possessive traits omg, poking of tongue in the inner cheek, crackling knuckles, fidgeting of legs wow. Thus, since this day possessive Kookie was born lol & the Legend continues 😂 💜💜💜
Wow CJ this is so beautifully written. And honestly l could picture this as the exact scenario! Thank you for allowing me to dream. These two souls deserve all the best. I thank Jungkook for finally acknowledging the love that Jimin showed him and finally loved him back! I,m a JIKOOKER and will always root for them 😊 sun & moon🌒 😍🔥❤️🇬🇧
Oh wow, I felt like just watched their behind the scenes at the time. Those push and pull between them and Jimin’s rejected painful face and Jk’s staving for attention face… all coming back to me. Thank you for creating the moment how it might have been before their relationship seemed to blossom. 😊
What a beautiful way to show JK's coming of age moment!💜 The world watched JK go thru puberty. This Jikooker always knew that at some point, JK would have to ask JM to teach him💜 CJ you captured JK's intimate persona with the cracking of knuckles & shoulder teasing💜 JM tenderness in taking care of JK as precious loving cargo marked fragile only to be touched by JM💜 Way 2 go CJ💜and songs like Seven will show how JK has evolved🔥
Beautiful..just beautiful..I'm tearing up reading it..the raw emotions, the love they are feeling..Thank you CJ Moon❤️..thank you for commissioning this story❤️
Thank you once again, CJ! This story was so real about their first time experiencing intimacy with one another could have been. So sweet and loving and true to their personalities and even mannerisms! Love, love, LOVED it! I, too would like to hear about the next morning, and afterwards with the two of them. Jungkookie's turn next! 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Thank you again for this very beautiful and insightful story about the beginning with our Jikook. The feelings, emotions and the intensity were all felt and portrayed perfectly.
Wow, I watch your videos which I love for their authenticity and fact based information. However, this is the first time I have watched/listened to a FF. I loved that you presented and kept their emotions real and consistent with what we know/believed to have happened in real life. Your words brought them to life as if we were watching a movie. I loved that you kept their first time romantic and real without graphic and gratuitous descriptions. I recognize you keep it clean for YT, but it was just enough. I would like to read what happens next. How they feel in the morning, how they act around the members, the staff and Army on stage and through their content. The reactions they receive from the same groups. How they deal with negative reactions. Reactions from their family and friends outside of BTS. How they grow from this stage of their relationship to their military life together and post military. Anyway, I loved the video and look forward to the next chapter 💜💜
Thank you so much! 💜Comments like this mean the world to me because what you talk about here, the authenticity in my characters to who they are as people is at the core of ALL my writing. Even the alt universe stories! It's vital to me that you recognize JiKook and the other members as the people they are. The intro video here on the channel explains more about my values as a writer and what you can expect from my stories! th-cam.com/video/oKyj6Z6GWuQ/w-d-xo.html (Also, for more of the naughty bits, join my Patreon! You can join for free, and I'll be releasing written versions of the full stories there soon. 😉)
@@cjmoonwritesI agree with you that we need to see them as real people and not just characters that are fetishized. I will definitely be looking at your other works and also visiting your Patreon page. Thank you so much for responding to my comment. Here is to more reading! 💜
I agree with what Nikonlady wrote. And I would also so much love to read sequels of this "part one". That would be amazing. Anyhow, I truly admire canon based FF. 🙂
AAhhh!! What a wonderful story, You are so good with using things that are real is amazing. I caught them all. Thank you for the delicate way you have for describing their foreplay and then further, it is so clean sensual. it make me want to go snuggle up with my honey and cuddle. Now my questions come and I'm sure you knew that they would. How would JK know that it wasn't Jimin's first time and how was he able to hold or hide his jealousy? 🤭 Any I loved it and I would surely like the morning after. 💜💜🥰
I loved this you always make the stories so real and this actually could have happened knowing jk and jimins history. What I have always believed about the guys and relationships has been made up by hybe. The older guys yes I can see them having had relationships will I say women only nope. The reason I say that is there is an interview where Rm answered the question do they get lonely. He said, someone will say I wish I had a girlfriend I wish i had a boyfriend. No one ever pays attention to that interview it is never mentioned. But jimin , jk and tae are differnet to the others. There is no way they had girlfriends jk was too shy and scared we have seen his reaction to girls. He had no interaction at his graduation. As for Jimin yes he had female friends but girlfriends nope he has always preferred men. Tae I believe was young he lived on a farm with his grand mother then went to seoul for bts so I don't think he had a girlfriend either. They have said themselves they were so buys they couldn't even see their parents, so when would they have time for girlfriends. They went to school came home practiced recorded even on saturdays so no time for antything especially girls. The younger one's having girlfriends was to keep young girls interested .
What a wonderful story, CJ. It reads like that's really how it happened. One thing I'm curious about, if you ever decide to write a sequel, a prequel or a separate story, how did Jungkook know that it wasn't Jimin's first time and was that first time with a boy or a girl cuz I believe that Jimin did swing both ways, before he met his true love Jungkook, but maybe you don't believe that he may be bi. Anyway, this story is lovely and I look forward to read more jikook stories like this one 💛💜
Just awesome... Can't believe how this is written in a way that brings out so many emotions in real .. great work author... please continue your writing ideas .. This is so satisfying... ❤
WOW CJ!!! This story has every emotion felt when we first realize how we feel about someone and have to summon the courage to let it be known! Won’t spoil the plot further but am spellbound, as usual, with your writing. Thank you for such a lovely hour! Btw, not sure if my phone is acting up, but the comments section is VERY faint. Cannot read them at all. ???
This so amazing and so good and so romantic 🥰🥰🥰 I really want to see what happens next day morning I really really really want to see their reaction cj moon 🥰🥰🥰🥰 you are best cj moon 🥰🥰 and do you have any idea about He's Keeper?? Sorry but I really want to see what happens next. Don't stress yourself cj moon 🥰🥰🥰🥰
Heyyyy CJ, Thank you so much for this new story. I REALLY love your canon inspired narrations. Just some thoughts or questions I wanna speak out: Would there be maybe a way - in future canon inspired stories - to integrate pictures or video sequences of the described events? Was just wondering about this. 🙂 Have a great weekend CJ! PS: The described feelings and interpretations of jikook scenes are SO SO SO GOOD and in my point of view could be quite near at the reality. This means for me that you have deep emphathy for jikook and their feelings towards each other and I love the way you think about them. PPS: Can we get a part 2, 3, 4, 5 .... of this story? 🙂
Hi Dream 💜 Definitely I can try to use pics of the real life events in the story. It's usually just a matter of the amount of time I have. I really should make a video about how I make videos sometime. 😆 In general the videos that have individual pics in them are around 250-300 "scenes" long, each needing their own images. Not including the time it takes to actually write the story, a video like this one using individual pics could take me 15-20 hours or more to put together. Because I'm still working another job until I have more support here and on Patreon, sometimes I just don't have the time. 🥺 Also, I think there are some videos, like Lace Me Up, where images might have just gotten in the way because of not being able to find ones good enough to do the scene justice, if that makes sense? Thank you so much for the kind words about my writing. That you can still see the real people in the characters I write is so important to me! I love them so much and will always write respectfully of them and retain their beautiful personalities. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
@@maripefuentes1154 awww enjoy!! And yes, part two is still on my list to write. Don't forget if you join the Patreon, even for free, you get access to all the written versions of my stories. 💜
All right, CJ. It might have been like this, lustful yet sweet and tender. I've enjoyed it a lot going at a slow pace with the reading, savoring it. Thanks for another delicious story. 👉💛💜👈
I'm just finished this story of jikook 1am😊😊😊😊❤❤❤❤I like 💕💕💕💕 the story it's like true story ahhh....I'm sleepy now 💕💕💕❤❤❤❤mornyt❤❤❤❤❤❤ fellow Army's 😊😊❤❤❤❤❤
What a beautiful love story! I know this is just a fiction, but I just wonder if narrated based on real situation where or how could you have you gotten the notion that Jm is an experienced lover? Jimin may seem so casually cool disciplined & knowlegeable in most things but I don't think he is exactly that same Jimin portrayed in this story. The fact is he was as young & innocent as Jk when they first met. Taking this into account may have changed the flow of your narrative.
Hi there, this has been asked a lot so I'll answer it here for now because it bothers me... Why do people ask how is it possible that Jimin has previous experience being with another man yet no one minds or seems to notice that it says directly in the story Jungkook has dated women? It says nowhere in the story that Jimin is a hugely experienced lover, only that he has been with a man before. That's it. They both dated before this story happened which is normal for young men of their age when this is set. Jimin dated men because he was comfortable with his sexuality and Jungkook was pushing him away. Jungkook tried dating women. So yeah, i honestly don't see why Jimin having experience is a problem for people when no one blinked when it says Jungkook dated previously. I hope that doesn't sound too harsh. I just really don't understand why people are singling Jimin out in this. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate the engagement with my stories. 💜
Be careful sweetheart love the way you are feeling specially with your family does have great memories I have been thinking about all of you today. B t s. Leigh Kenny will be with you forever. Mom. Leigh Kenny
We will be all ways have fun with the one does keep you and beautiful family happy enjoy your vacation enjoy your love with all of your dreams come to you together with me. Love you. Leigh Kenny
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This was the most relatable jikookie scenario 😭. The coming of age feeling, the way u highlighted Kookie's nervous possessive traits omg, poking of tongue in the inner cheek, crackling knuckles, fidgeting of legs wow. Thus, since this day possessive Kookie was born lol & the Legend continues 😂 💜💜💜
Wow CJ this is so beautifully written. And honestly l could picture this as the exact scenario! Thank you for allowing me to dream. These two souls deserve all the best. I thank Jungkook for finally acknowledging the love that Jimin showed him and finally loved him back! I,m a JIKOOKER and will always root for them 😊 sun & moon🌒 😍🔥❤️🇬🇧
Oh wow, I felt like just watched their behind the scenes at the time. Those push and pull between them and Jimin’s rejected painful face and Jk’s staving for attention face… all coming back to me. Thank you for creating the moment how it might have been before their relationship seemed to blossom. 😊
What a beautiful way to show JK's coming of age moment!💜 The world watched JK go thru puberty. This Jikooker always knew that at some point, JK would have to ask JM to teach him💜 CJ you captured JK's intimate persona with the cracking of knuckles & shoulder teasing💜 JM tenderness in taking care of JK as precious loving cargo marked fragile only to be touched by JM💜 Way 2 go CJ💜and songs like Seven will show how JK has evolved🔥
Beautiful..just beautiful..I'm tearing up reading it..the raw emotions, the love they are feeling..Thank you CJ Moon❤️..thank you for commissioning this story❤️
Thank you so much!! 💜
Thank you once again, CJ! This story was so real about their first time experiencing intimacy with one another could have been. So sweet and loving and true to their personalities and even mannerisms! Love, love, LOVED it! I, too would like to hear about the next morning, and afterwards with the two of them. Jungkookie's turn next! 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Oooh. I hadn't thought about writing that before! I'll put it on the list! 😁🥰
Awe that's a great idea....🤗 and maybe their "real" first time.😊💜💛
Yes Yes Yes
Thank you again for this very beautiful and insightful story about the beginning with our Jikook. The feelings, emotions and the intensity were all felt and portrayed perfectly.
Oh my goodness! Ur writing is amazing. It was if I was ready a novel! Perfect story.
Thank you! 😊
Wow, I watch your videos which I love for their authenticity and fact based information. However, this is the first time I have watched/listened to a FF. I loved that you presented and kept their emotions real and consistent with what we know/believed to have happened in real life. Your words brought them to life as if we were watching a movie. I loved that you kept their first time romantic and real without graphic and gratuitous descriptions. I recognize you keep it clean for YT, but it was just enough. I would like to read what happens next. How they feel in the morning, how they act around the members, the staff and Army on stage and through their content. The reactions they receive from the same groups. How they deal with negative reactions. Reactions from their family and friends outside of BTS. How they grow from this stage of their relationship to their military life together and post military. Anyway, I loved the video and look forward to the next chapter 💜💜
Thank you so much! 💜Comments like this mean the world to me because what you talk about here, the authenticity in my characters to who they are as people is at the core of ALL my writing. Even the alt universe stories! It's vital to me that you recognize JiKook and the other members as the people they are. The intro video here on the channel explains more about my values as a writer and what you can expect from my stories! th-cam.com/video/oKyj6Z6GWuQ/w-d-xo.html (Also, for more of the naughty bits, join my Patreon! You can join for free, and I'll be releasing written versions of the full stories there soon. 😉)
Couldn't agree more 😊
@@cjmoonwritesI agree with you that we need to see them as real people and not just characters that are fetishized. I will definitely be looking at your other works and also visiting your Patreon page. Thank you so much for responding to my comment. Here is to more reading! 💜
I agree with what Nikonlady wrote. And I would also so much love to read sequels of this "part one". That would be amazing. Anyhow, I truly admire canon based FF. 🙂
This is just beautiful, you have a rare gift with words and I look forward to reading more☘️💜☘️💜
Such a love story n written so beautifully
It's so beautiful! Thank you.
I love this story because it's so true it's JK and Jimin all the way 💜🐰🐥
I'm here again, CJ. Can't help it. It's so lovely. 🤗👉💛💜👈
And the rest is history ...😊 Thank you CJ...❤
You're very welcome! I hope you enjoyed it, lovely. Thank you so much for the commission!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
@@cjmoonwritesyes, i did 😊
Such a beautiful story of Jungkook coming of age,the emotions and love they are feeling for each other is portrayed to perfection 💜💜well done CJ
I don't even have a words to discrsibe how amazing this story was. I cant get inaf reading over and over agein...thank you for this 💜💛☀️🌙
Super Thanks it was beautiful and it definitely feels like it was just that beautiful way. you know how to keep us close to jikook❤❤❤💜💜💜💜
😭😭😭😭😭! THIS STORY WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! 😭😭😭😭😭! THANK YOU! SARANGHAE!💜💛❤️🥰😘
AAhhh!! What a wonderful story, You are so good with using things that are real is amazing. I caught them all. Thank you for the delicate way you have for describing their foreplay and then further, it is so clean sensual. it make me want to go snuggle up with my honey and cuddle. Now my questions come and I'm sure you knew that they would. How would JK know that it wasn't Jimin's first time and how was he able to hold or hide his jealousy? 🤭 Any I loved it and I would surely like the morning after. 💜💜🥰
I loved this you always make the stories so real and this actually could have happened knowing jk and jimins history.
What I have always believed about the guys and relationships has been made up by hybe.
The older guys yes I can see them having had relationships will I say women only nope.
The reason I say that is there is an interview where Rm answered the question do they get lonely.
He said, someone will say I wish I had a girlfriend I wish i had a boyfriend. No one ever pays attention to that interview it is never mentioned.
But jimin , jk and tae are differnet to the others. There is no way they had girlfriends jk was too shy and scared we have seen his reaction to girls.
He had no interaction at his graduation. As for Jimin yes he had female friends but girlfriends nope he has always preferred men.
Tae I believe was young he lived on a farm with his grand mother then went to seoul for bts so I don't think he had a girlfriend either.
They have said themselves they were so buys they couldn't even see their parents, so when would they have time for girlfriends.
They went to school came home practiced recorded even on saturdays so no time for antything especially girls.
The younger one's having girlfriends was to keep young girls interested .
What a wonderful story, CJ. It reads like that's really how it happened. One thing I'm curious about, if you ever decide to write a sequel, a prequel or a separate story, how did Jungkook know that it wasn't Jimin's first time and was that first time with a boy or a girl cuz I believe that Jimin did swing both ways, before he met his true love Jungkook, but maybe you don't believe that he may be bi. Anyway, this story is lovely and I look forward to read more jikook stories like this one 💛💜
Just awesome... Can't believe how this is written in a way that brings out so many emotions in real .. great work author... please continue your writing ideas .. This is so satisfying... ❤
Loved it,loved it,loved it ❤ You are an amazing author!
U did it again wonderful story shows vulnerability trust and love finally realized
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Just beautiful story 😍 we're always with them in any condition 😊
WOW CJ!!! This story has every emotion felt when we first realize how we feel about someone and have to summon the courage to let it be known! Won’t spoil the plot further but am spellbound, as usual, with your writing. Thank you for such a lovely hour!
Btw, not sure if my phone is acting up, but the comments section is VERY faint. Cannot read them at all. ???
Comments can be clearly read now❣️
Beautiful story and as usual great one and and another reason to call you a great writer keep it up love to read more
Thank you so much!
You write so well, and the music is always so beautiful with your marvelous stories. Thank you (from France) 💖
Thank you for your story ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
This so amazing and so good and so romantic 🥰🥰🥰 I really want to see what happens next day morning I really really really want to see their reaction cj moon 🥰🥰🥰🥰 you are best cj moon 🥰🥰 and do you have any idea about He's Keeper?? Sorry but I really want to see what happens next. Don't stress yourself cj moon 🥰🥰🥰🥰
Both part 2 of this and of He's a Keeper are on my list! 💜
Wow thank you cj moon I am really really excited and I am waiting for second part of both thank you so much cj moon
Heyyyy CJ,
Thank you so much for this new story. I REALLY love your canon inspired narrations.
Just some thoughts or questions I wanna speak out:
Would there be maybe a way - in future canon inspired stories - to integrate pictures or video sequences of the described events?
Was just wondering about this. 🙂
Have a great weekend CJ!
PS: The described feelings and interpretations of jikook scenes are SO SO SO GOOD and in my point of view could be quite near at the reality. This means for me that you have deep emphathy for jikook and their feelings towards each other and I love the way you think about them.
PPS: Can we get a part 2, 3, 4, 5 .... of this story? 🙂
Hi Dream 💜 Definitely I can try to use pics of the real life events in the story. It's usually just a matter of the amount of time I have. I really should make a video about how I make videos sometime. 😆 In general the videos that have individual pics in them are around 250-300 "scenes" long, each needing their own images. Not including the time it takes to actually write the story, a video like this one using individual pics could take me 15-20 hours or more to put together. Because I'm still working another job until I have more support here and on Patreon, sometimes I just don't have the time. 🥺 Also, I think there are some videos, like Lace Me Up, where images might have just gotten in the way because of not being able to find ones good enough to do the scene justice, if that makes sense? Thank you so much for the kind words about my writing. That you can still see the real people in the characters I write is so important to me! I love them so much and will always write respectfully of them and retain their beautiful personalities. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Beautiful ❤️❤️
Loved it...felt so real...🥰
Loved the happy ending❤
I've just found you and I love the stories.💜
Thank you! 💜
Just WoW!💜💜
Such a lovely story. ❤
Ohh,,,thank you author ,,,i love this Jikook so much😘🤗🤗🤗🤗
It's a great story and I hope they get to experience that with their special someones.
Hope there's a part two of this 🥰......you are one beautiful storyteller......
You aren't the first one who has asked for a part 2. It's on the list for sure! Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed my story. 💜
@@cjmoonwritesI'm reading it again 😅
@@maripefuentes1154 awww enjoy!! And yes, part two is still on my list to write. Don't forget if you join the Patreon, even for free, you get access to all the written versions of my stories. 💜
❤❤❤Your story-my wish comming true❤❤❤thanks
48:13 This is just everything 🥰 Thank you for your beautiful words!
You are always very welcome, Mergan. Your support means so much to me. 🙏🏻💜
All right, CJ. It might have been like this, lustful yet sweet and tender. I've enjoyed it a lot going at a slow pace with the reading, savoring it. Thanks for another delicious story. 👉💛💜👈
I'm just finished this story of jikook 1am😊😊😊😊❤❤❤❤I like 💕💕💕💕 the story it's like true story ahhh....I'm sleepy now 💕💕💕❤❤❤❤mornyt❤❤❤❤❤❤ fellow Army's 😊😊❤❤❤❤❤
Mi pareja perfecta jikook x siempre juntos 💛🐰🐣💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
... and I'm back again. 👉💛💜👈☺️
What a beautiful love story! I know this is just a fiction, but I just wonder if narrated based on real situation where or how could you have you gotten the notion that Jm is an experienced lover? Jimin may seem so casually cool disciplined & knowlegeable in most things but I don't think he is exactly that same Jimin portrayed in this story. The fact is he was as young & innocent as Jk when they first met. Taking this into account may have changed the flow of your narrative.
Hi there, this has been asked a lot so I'll answer it here for now because it bothers me... Why do people ask how is it possible that Jimin has previous experience being with another man yet no one minds or seems to notice that it says directly in the story Jungkook has dated women? It says nowhere in the story that Jimin is a hugely experienced lover, only that he has been with a man before. That's it. They both dated before this story happened which is normal for young men of their age when this is set. Jimin dated men because he was comfortable with his sexuality and Jungkook was pushing him away. Jungkook tried dating women. So yeah, i honestly don't see why Jimin having experience is a problem for people when no one blinked when it says Jungkook dated previously. I hope that doesn't sound too harsh. I just really don't understand why people are singling Jimin out in this. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate the engagement with my stories. 💜
And again. 👉💛💜👈☺️
Be careful sweetheart love the way you are feeling specially with your family does have great memories I have been thinking about all of you today. B t s. Leigh Kenny will be with you forever. Mom. Leigh Kenny
We will be all ways have fun with the one does keep you and beautiful family happy enjoy your vacation enjoy your love with all of your dreams come to you together with me. Love you. Leigh Kenny