Excellent, extremely well written story. Stuck to the point, clear as day what was going on and with whom. No droning on and on about emotions, "word salad," I think it's called. Some might argue things in real life don't necessarily flow as well as this story does, but for me, to see justice done and karma served so satisfactorily, it makes it a more than worthwhile read. I rarely, if ever, subscribe, but if this is the kind of quality material that will continue to be published I have made an exception and subscribed.
Excellent, extremely well written story. Stuck to the point, clear as day what was going on and with whom. No droning on and on about emotions, "word salad," I think it's called.
Some might argue things in real life don't necessarily flow as well as this story does, but for me, to see justice done and karma served so satisfactorily, it makes it a more than worthwhile read.
I rarely, if ever, subscribe, but if this is the kind of quality material that will continue to be published I have made an exception and subscribed.