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  • @larrygollad6679
    @larrygollad6679 ปีที่แล้ว +89

    *The young prince's body shakes as he looks at the emperor he used to see as a father. He took a hold of his crown and threw it to the floor, shattering the jewels it had. The noise brought everyone's attention on him and so, he put on his lifeless mas, making sure his eyss didn't betray him.*
    T: "... well, seeing how I'm a traitor in your eyes, your highness, one undeserving of this crown or the title I was given, I'll leave you to find your new crown prince who's already by your side. Don't worry about the crown, you won't need to make up an excuse to make one just for him now. Guards, make sure that I have died however way this palace's head wants me to go. I want my body to free this... there's no point in being "dramatic" now, right, Prince William? You can take me away, I'm sure the father and sons have finished what business they had with a traitor like me."
    W: "... Theseus...what are you doing?"
    T: "What I should have done so fucking long ago, Prince William."
    Te: ".... Theseus-"
    T: "It's Nation Traitor to you, General Technoblade."
    Tu: "...I messed up..."
    R: "N-no, you didn't, Tubbo-"
    T: "You fucking did, you fucking mistake of a bestfriend! God, am I glad crocodile tears are the only things that will be good enough coming from that disgusting face of yours!"
    R: "D-don't talk like that about him!"
    T: "You fucking shut up, you community case! Just you wait until he gets bored of you! Better start thinking about staying a child or keep them into you!"
    P: "Theseus, stop your nonsense."
    T: "Or what? You're going to pull my execution to tomorrow? I'm just waiting for whatever happens to me to happen, if you didn't guess, shit for brains."
    P: "... what happened to you, Theseus."
    *The prince then chuckled as the guards felt uneasy. His tone changed to sound like a mockery towards the emperor.*
    T: "Hmm, I don't know. Maybe ask these actual saints for servants you employ. Ask them to tell you the truth about how I changed to become this "Monster" you all hate so much. Can I ask you two to keep quiet until my last breath? I'd really appreciate it if you could, Jerome and Kyle."
    J: "We will, Thes."
    K: "We'll make sure of it and share the message."
    P: "Oh no, you're not!"
    J: "Oh yes, we are. We'd tell you what we've seen and how you made the sweet child you knew into the cold being you hired."
    *Despite the emperor's protests, the guards took Theseus away and shared the prince's last words with the other servants around the palace who knew all about the Crown prince's transformation and the family's situation.*
    *Sunday came and the court had been assembled to assist to the "Nation's Traitor"'s condemnation. All who had come were aware of the reasons and looked at the royal family with disgust. The only one they could empathize with was the poor Fundy who was crying rivers of tears far from his father's arms. Theseus was brought up to the assembly and his crimes were shared. Of course, the public's reaction was all made of surprises. They had heard of how hard working the prince was and, thanks to some's curiosity, knew why he acted cold. As his time came to an end, he was asked if he'd like to share a few words with the people.*
    T: "I, Theseus, wish for you all who hear me success in the future, health for your family's happiness and luck in your life. May the sky accept you all with all the good deeds and sacrifices you've done while you walked this Earth. To the royal family.... good luck finding the Empress and me."
    *Hearing that title, the royal family felt unwell. Memories from the past were brought up once more. While they thought about those events, the people simply looked taken aback by the prince's last wish. He gave a nod to the knight who was to behead him, signaling he was ready. The knight took his helmet off, revealing to be Wisp. The prince smiled as he gave him a parting hug and wished him a good future. As a last order, he asked him to take his life, wanting him to not feel guilty about not serving him until the end. The blond head went flying until it reached the floor and closed its eyes forever.* When they were back to their minds, knowing that he had not been bad and wanting to stop this all, they had seen the blood rain as his head was cut. Fundy, who had begged all along, was now on the floor in a maid's arms, traumatized by this. Wilbur had not moved an inch while his tears flooded off to the ground. Technoblade's face was empty, realizing he hadn't protected him well enough to argue about his culpability. Tubbo was hugging Ranboo as hard as he could. Seeing one's best friend go was not easy for him, let's give him that. The emperor... the old man knew he had ruined it all.*
    *While the crown prince's body was being taken care of by Beau whose makeup was ruined from her not able to take the depart well, knights, maids and other servants went to talk about the Prince's evolution into the person he used to be. As a final touch, Wisp linked everything up, making it clear for the assembly who had ruined the teen's life. Wilbur knew then it was all wrong,only making Fundy look at him with loveless eyes. The general was overlooked after that. The emperor... was still listened to. No revolution had been started then and the people refused them giving away their functions. As punishment, they had to live on like they were. Ranboo was now emperor after his passing, making their reign end because of his poorly made decision. The whole country let soldiers in to take over. The emperor was dethroned and everyone's life became easier than under the previous leaders. This story... had finally come to an end.*
    (... I have been too into this, haven't I?)

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      I- I don’t know what to say
      THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING OH MY GODS
      YOU ARE SO TALENTED your writing style and everything, the story line, the DRAMA 😧

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      Theseus is fucking BRUTAL in this
      I love it

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      This needs more likes wtf-

    • @larrygollad6679
      @larrygollad6679 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@nemesis6178 Thank you very much for liking the alternate route taken here. I'm glad you found it good. (What writing skills, though?)

    • @megancunning2449
      @megancunning2449 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Damn bruh this is ALMOST better than the actual thing, maybe a close second

  • @Yuki-Jiji
    @Yuki-Jiji ปีที่แล้ว +195

    and i like the act theuseues just start to cry then became numb

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +59

      Exactly ! I think he would try to hide his emotions behind a mask again ^^

    • @jrdmtsa6231
      @jrdmtsa6231 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      that was the final straw

    • @Fishbeeboop88
      @Fishbeeboop88 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yeh

  • @wildheartvoxinlore
    @wildheartvoxinlore ปีที่แล้ว +226

    It actually would be really cool if you turned this around and made it so Theseus kills himself because he wants peace and he doesn't want to die at the hands of the kingdom that betrayed him.

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +56

      Actually I already have another idea for this (I am working on it I swear 😭) but I might keep this it’s a good idea 🙂

    • @thatonetiredfrog.2426
      @thatonetiredfrog.2426 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      @@nemesis6178 wait, How about a split ending video? Like the first vid will be the original then the next will be what happened if __ happened?

  • @micheal1208
    @micheal1208 ปีที่แล้ว +81

    You know what would make it more angsty?
    If after the announcement, Theseus asks, “Will you love me after I die?”

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Omg it’s a really good idea but I already almost finished part 2 😭😭

    • @micheal1208
      @micheal1208 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      @@nemesis6178 OOF that’s fine :D

  • @savannahthompson58
    @savannahthompson58 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Mumza would be disappointed in Phil

  • @justegg9565
    @justegg9565 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    NOO THESEUS, Phil I hate you- This made me cry lol

    • @asile7118
      @asile7118 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Me too phil whyyyy

  • @idontmisiforget
    @idontmisiforget ปีที่แล้ว +9

    highness = princes/princesses
    majesty = kings/queens/emperors/empresses

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thank you so much I was lost with all of this 😭

  • @gabgoma7430
    @gabgoma7430 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    OMGG, I CRIED- YOU'RE SO TALENTED YOU DESR4VE SO MUCHH- AHHHHH THIS IS PRECIOUS

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      😭😭😭😭😭 Thanks all of you really that’s so nice I didn’t expect this much love 💗

  • @whatthefrackisthisshitz6785
    @whatthefrackisthisshitz6785 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This is really good! I think it would be cool if theseus run away to prince dream's kingdom

  • @potato_1738
    @potato_1738 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Please make part 2!! ❤😭

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I am trying but school really wants me dead rn 😭😭

    • @potato_1738
      @potato_1738 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@nemesis6178 take your time! 😭✨

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I am nearly at the middle of it but don’t except too much 😂

    • @potato_1738
      @potato_1738 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@nemesis6178 that's okay!

  • @ThyWeepingCarnation1058
    @ThyWeepingCarnation1058 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Let's hope due to all the work Theseus usually does and now doesnt the empire will slowly fall

  • @emme_the_feral_potato
    @emme_the_feral_potato ปีที่แล้ว +18

    So good! Will there be a part 2?

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Yeah I’m working on it ^^

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      And thanks !!🙏💖

  • @GoldyGoldSilver
    @GoldyGoldSilver ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I feel like this would be a canon reaction

  • @thatonetiredfrog.2426
    @thatonetiredfrog.2426 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    AAAAAGAAGGHHH YESSSSSSSS!!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOO AMAZING EEEEEKKK!!!!!! I LOVE THESE KIND OF VIDEOS!! ANGGSSSTTT YEESSS

  • @smallishjeremy2678
    @smallishjeremy2678 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    THIS IS VERY POG- WOW. I’m exited for part two :)

  • @thearsonmuffin
    @thearsonmuffin ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Part 2 please

  • @crystella__
    @crystella__ ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Oh jeez

  • @-griffinstagg-9112
    @-griffinstagg-9112 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Omfg this is so good and underrated!

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you so much !!! 🙏💖

  • @ghosty_09
    @ghosty_09 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wooooo gaint dose of angst

  • @foxy_the_pirate_fox2827
    @foxy_the_pirate_fox2827 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    My heart-!

  • @user-jv7fe7yz1j
    @user-jv7fe7yz1j ปีที่แล้ว +3

    esto es tan cool hermoso vídeo 🙂🙂🙂

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Muchas gracias estas muy generoso !

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Lo siento si hay errores, no sé mucho español

    • @user-jv7fe7yz1j
      @user-jv7fe7yz1j ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@nemesis6178 no importa me encantó el video🙂🙂 además es eres muy generosa

  • @yeogiumi
    @yeogiumi ปีที่แล้ว +4

    D:

  • @Im_Sleeping_lol
    @Im_Sleeping_lol ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I must say that this is a very strong and good video now you got me interested to the storyline 😮

  • @fan443fanyes6
    @fan443fanyes6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have an idea for more angst what if the rumor that he was plotting against the empire was a misunderstanding and they realized

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Why do everybody have so much amazing ideas you guys are wonderful 😭😭✨

  • @bicat3383
    @bicat3383 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Will there be a part 2?😃

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yeah it’s almost finished actually

  • @Melissa-ub4mh
    @Melissa-ub4mh ปีที่แล้ว +1

    NO! I REFUSE TO CRY BECAUSE A GACHA VIDEO- I REFUSE!

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว

      You don’t have a choice >:)

  • @Cloud_oboro_shirakumo
    @Cloud_oboro_shirakumo ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Dream would want to have a war with them

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sapnap would probably burn the whole kingdom before dream could do anything

    • @Cloud_oboro_shirakumo
      @Cloud_oboro_shirakumo ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@nemesis6178 Probably then they will execute all of them but not fundy

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yeah nobody hurts fundy because then they would have to face sally. Nobody is crazy enough to do that

    • @Cloud_oboro_shirakumo
      @Cloud_oboro_shirakumo ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@nemesis6178 No one would want to make Sally angry because if she got angry at someone it's xan be hell for them

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sally is so badass I should totally do a video about her sometimes

  • @charlieshipley713
    @charlieshipley713 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    how in the frick frack did you portray dissociation in a gacha video

  • @N0_0N3_1MP0T
    @N0_0N3_1MP0T ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Where part two

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It’s on my channel go check ^^

  • @KatiesTeaCup
    @KatiesTeaCup ปีที่แล้ว

    Did he actually do those things-?

  • @mhadekumultiverse4964
    @mhadekumultiverse4964 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wait a minute if I understand the butterfly au right doesn't he do all the paperwork so does it not mean he's technically paying the soldiers so in theory he could do it Uno reverse

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yeah but it’s the emperor you know. I think gards don’t really want to disobey the emperor 😅

    • @mhadekumultiverse4964
      @mhadekumultiverse4964 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@nemesis6178 touche touche just a theory a game theory

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว

      But they would definitely be upset will doing so 🥺

  • @lpskreemimuffin717
    @lpskreemimuffin717 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Ok hear my out theuseues Will say before killinghimself its ok l wold rather be with mother aniway 🙂

    • @nemesis6178
      @nemesis6178 ปีที่แล้ว

      That would DESTROY them