Good story but the descriptions of people and places what they look like and are wearing was what killed it for me i like description but way to much i mean your tell a story not describing a murder suspect or something. Story wouldve been better with out all the description.
Next please 😊
Definitely needs part 2
Part 2 please
Please to God make a part 2
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Why the hell do people write so many details that are al f**ing obvious...... I mean really people who reads a fanfic know the canon story
Bruh for real. Describing the council takes to much time and such.
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I'm almost done with this shit but there is no dxd mention
Good story but the descriptions of people and places what they look like and are wearing was what killed it for me i like description but way to much i mean your tell a story not describing a murder suspect or something. Story wouldve been better with out all the description.
Part 2 please
Part 2 plz