You are doing good so far But I think you should make one video per week and focus on making the visuals and audio better on it Then you might get more subscribers and likes
Opinions 0:00 Yeah, only thing wrong is the tail. 0:19 Nice design! But the sound is weird 0:29 good with the toe jammer part at the beginning of the full song 0:39 WHAT IS THAT DESIGN??? Luckily they're hard to breed, even with 10 WISHING TORCHES! 0:48 that looks weird... probably the shape or the ghazt mouth 1:27 oooh! 1:36 uh why do they not have a web guitar? 1:46 Nebulob doesn't have a body as a baby! And why is it saying "Buddy" instead of "Shama nama nama?" 2:05 The baby Jellbilly sings "Buddy! Buddy buddy! Buddy buddy! Buddy buddy, buddy, buddy! Buddy buddy! Buddy buddy! Buddy buddy, buddy!" 2:15 I don't think it should have cymbals on its hands 2:34 did you draw Kazilleon? 2:44 this is really good 3:03 WHISP DOES NOT HAVE ARMS!!!!! 3:12 what happened to its belly 3:32 why does it have such a small face 3:51 idk what is wrong but something is... 4:03 That does not look ANYTHING like a Dermit. 4:12 that is nice! 4:31 it should have 1 cymbal on each eye 4:36 pretty good 4:55 anyone else hear water 5:05 too loud idk why 5:24 screemu sounds so wrong that it's funny 5:44 very good beat 5:54 the thing wrong is the egg the Zuuker is on 5:58 what happened to bona they look creepy 6:37 WhY iS wHaJjE a SqUaRe????? 6:55 it's funny lol 7:15 Baby Pixolotl sounds like a ringtone. And I like it. 7:24 I just don't like it for some reason. 7:43 I guess it didn't know it's body parts yet. 7:53 Why does the baby Brump say "Yeah! Let's go!" instead of "Wake up the wublins?" P. S. It's off key in the full song. 8:03 sounds similar to the one on Wublin Island. 8:09 Did you seriously just use the Dawn of Fire volcano for Maulch? 8:28 Now THAT should be in Dawn of Fire! 8:47 ACTIVATE! 5-4-3-2-1! Robot OKAY electro. P. S. Dawn of Fire rares would be good. 👇
Gonna give some constructive criticism here: 1. You’d be better off just using the regular monster PNGs instead of trying to make baby versions yourself. I mean for crying out loud, you used a baby Toe Jammer for Bona-Petite and called it a day. 2. You ABSOLUTELY need to watch your chord progression. Half of these sounds don’t even fit for that reason. 3. Use less loops, unless they’re for percussionists. 4. Don’t upload multiple times a week unless you know what you’re doing. Trust me, I speak from experience.
About the full song: It was a mess. Boodoo was off track the most, Reebro wasn't terrible, but the volume on the customs was way to loud and I could barely hear the others. Ghazt doesn't sound anything like its adult counter part. It was basically just a conglomeration of off sounds that drowned out each other indefinitely. And about 10:30 ... having two vocals on top of each other like that just doesn't work. Take not from Wublin Island, the main vocals there are Brump and Wajje, they never over lap. Sure there are supporting vocals but those are the two main ones. 10:40 was a complete mess, with the ringtone noise from, I think, Fleechworm, it just didn't fit with the length or tune of the song. Once again Boodoo was awful, and I can't distinguish most of the sounds from them because you seem to not know how volume adjustments work. Also, can I just mention how stolen Zynth was? I mean, you can hear water running for no reason, and I dont think that was intentional.
MONSTERS: 1(Ghazt) doesn't sound like the adult version 2(Grumpyer) dat voice.......... 3(Reebro) blue brain boi 4(Jeedode) a Sour Patch Kid wearing lipstick made out of diamonds... 5(Humbug) this one is... good *slow clap* 6(Boodoo) O-O 7(Arackulele) no web guitar?!?!?!?! 8( Nebulob) BUDDY 9(Jellbilly) BUDDY BuDdY BUDDY 10(Dragong) i'm a snake i'm a slithery snake! 11(Kazzeilleon) the man said no *DOOOOOOOOOOOOO* 12(Fung Pray) a good rip-off if you ask me...... 13(Whisp) TRIGGERED 14(Sox) WhAt ThE fLoOgUlLs Am I lOoKiNg At 15(Bellowfish) uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 16(Dwumrhol) LOOK AT MY SHELLS also square head 17(Dermit?!?!) a stump who grew some mushrooms and wants rum..... 18(Thwok) ........... 19(Scargo) SCARGO COME HOME 20(Creepscule) this is why I sleep on the couch........ 21(Zynth) I hear clapping and water two sounds that Zynth doesn't make! 22(Powek) umm guys/girls look really closely at the legs 23(Screemu) OH OH OH 24(Tympa) another monster that shouldn't make clapping sound 25(Zukker) WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW WEEEEEEEE 26(Bona-Petite) -0/10 design wise. Bona-Petite doesn't make cymbal noises also doesn't make clapping sounds what the Floogulls is this 27(Whajje) exactly WHY 28(Gheegur) T H I C C 29(Pixolti) hold on my phone is ringing 30(astropod) not bad but square head 31(Blipsqueak) SING sin sin SING 32(Brump) YEAH LETS GO YEA- 33(Fleechwurm) wait what! Fleechwurm is a piano now! 34(Maulch) *face palm* 35(Wubbox) the best one out of them all 36(Rare wubbox) activate 5 4 3 2 1 robot OKAY electro FULL SONG: first part(build up) Boodoo and Arackulele ruined it second part(Phangler's part) Dwumrhol ruined it third part(Pompom's solo) Reebro and Dwumrhol screwed it up fourth part(Flowah's part) Wubbox and Boodoo screwed it up fifth part(pre ending) best part of the whole video sixth part(almost ending) not bad seventh part(ending) AMAZING
Okay so, sounds are good, but some like Boodoo and Zuuker need to be toned way down. Since most of the designs are just cut up assets and random images, I'll have to deduct some points for that, since it's quite sloppy. Overall I give it a thumbs-up, but it could do with some major improvements.
You are pretty good at this the instrument ones are very good and some of the designs I don’t really like but I like a lot of them and I understand you not wanting to use your actual voice I don’t like to do that either. I can’t wait for the next fan made island
How to make monsters: Take individual screenshots of different body parts of msm monsters that already exist or stock images Put the screenshots together and make a mangled and deformed mess that’s supposed to be some kind of creature Done!
You fail to improve where it counts. Whatever the heck your doing is wrong, do a bit of research and figure out how to improve. (and if it hasn't been said a million times already here are ways you can improove.) -Many of your tunes are out of sync and off key, you can go on the wiki, and look up the key so your sounds do't sound bad. Also quantize your notes. -Powerpoint will get you nowhere (and it looks like absolute garbage) , atleast you are actually drawing on something (which is a good thing.) -You upload way too often. This might sound like a good thing, but the faster you upload your vids, typically the lower quality they become. -WATCH TUTORIALS AND GUIDES ON THE SOFTWARE YOU USE, chances are (even though you do everything on a mobile device,) there are features you do not know about that can vastly improve your work flow. -Don't use more than 3 loops at most (in the entire song), and ditch vocals if you don't wanna sing. (unless your going for a choir sound like quarrister or candelavra.) I'm no expert, but these could really help you, if you actually take your time. And don't give a cocky response like I don't want too, seriously tired of that.
3:32 The reason why bellowfish has a small face is because it’s not a face it’s his body He is a fish in a bowl and the fish bowl has arms and legs attached to it
I think the lore behind DOF gets ruined if ethereals and wublins get added since this was a prequel MSM, fire monsters is the ones who get rebirthed, same as the celestials
The problem with this is that the song is more tribal sounding like tribal island. You tried really hard and I can appreciate that but I don’t think you thought much about how the island sounds. Also they should sound younger not completely different and weird. But you did a good job on some of the baby forms and how they might look :)
@@jalasterisk my life got flip turned upside down and ill like to take a minute just sit right there ill tell you how I became the Prince of a town called bel-air
*Ethereal Timestamps:*
0:00 Ghazt
0:19 Grumpyre
0:29 Reebro
0:39 Jeeode
0:48 Humbug (Track 1)
1:07 Humbug (Track 2)
1:27 Boodoo
1:36 Arackulele
1:46 Nebulob
2:05 Jellibilly
2:15 Dragong
2:34 Kazzeilleon
2:44 Fung Pray
3:03 Whisp
3:12 Sox
3:32 Bellowfish
*Wublin Timestamps:*
3:51 Dwumrohl (Track 1)
3:53 Dwumrohl (Track 2)
4:03 Dermit
4:12 Thwok (Track 1)
4:22 Thwok (Track 2)
4:31 Scargo
4:36 Creepsucle (Track 1)
4:46 Creepsucle (Track 2)
4:55 Zynth
5:05 Powek (Track 1)
5:15 Powek (Track 2)
5:24 Screemu
5:44 Tympa
5:54 Zukker
5:58 Bona-Petite (Track 1)
6:17 Bona-Petite (Track 2)
6:37 Whajje
6:55 Gheegur
7:15 Pixolti
7:24 Astropod
7:43 Blipsqueak
7:53 Brump
8:03 Fleechwurm
8:09 Maulch
*Supernatural Timestamps:*
8:28 Wubbox
8:47 Rare Wubbox
9:05 Full Song
You are doing good so far
But I think you should make one video per week and focus on making the visuals and audio better on it
Then you might get more subscribers and likes
You have very good potential
I Think Whajje Is Going To Space And Cloud
Bona Pietie Goes To Party And Space
Dragong Is Going To Cave Same As Jeeode Fleechwurn And Rest That Has Crystals
0:39 -.- this is nightmare fuel
U mean 4:40
No he dosent mean that
Jeeode creepy
IDiOT
@@drawingbfbcharactersinflip2827 wh-
I remember seeing this when i was much younger. Somehow, this just hits as nostalgic.
Yes
Opinions
0:00 Yeah, only thing wrong is the tail.
0:19 Nice design! But the sound is weird
0:29 good with the toe jammer part at the beginning of the full song
0:39 WHAT IS THAT DESIGN??? Luckily they're hard to breed, even with 10 WISHING TORCHES!
0:48 that looks weird... probably the shape or the ghazt mouth
1:27 oooh!
1:36 uh why do they not have a web guitar?
1:46 Nebulob doesn't have a body as a baby! And why is it saying "Buddy" instead of "Shama nama nama?"
2:05 The baby Jellbilly sings "Buddy! Buddy buddy! Buddy buddy! Buddy buddy, buddy, buddy! Buddy buddy! Buddy buddy! Buddy buddy, buddy!"
2:15 I don't think it should have cymbals on its hands
2:34 did you draw Kazilleon?
2:44 this is really good
3:03 WHISP DOES NOT HAVE ARMS!!!!!
3:12 what happened to its belly
3:32 why does it have such a small face
3:51 idk what is wrong but something is...
4:03 That does not look ANYTHING like a Dermit.
4:12 that is nice!
4:31 it should have 1 cymbal on each eye
4:36 pretty good
4:55 anyone else hear water
5:05 too loud idk why
5:24 screemu sounds so wrong that it's funny
5:44 very good beat
5:54 the thing wrong is the egg the Zuuker is on
5:58 what happened to bona they look creepy
6:37 WhY iS wHaJjE a SqUaRe?????
6:55 it's funny lol
7:15 Baby Pixolotl sounds like a ringtone. And I like it.
7:24 I just don't like it for some reason.
7:43 I guess it didn't know it's body parts yet.
7:53 Why does the baby Brump say "Yeah! Let's go!" instead of "Wake up the wublins?" P. S. It's off key in the full song.
8:03 sounds similar to the one on Wublin Island.
8:09 Did you seriously just use the Dawn of Fire volcano for Maulch?
8:28 Now THAT should be in Dawn of Fire!
8:47 ACTIVATE! 5-4-3-2-1! Robot OKAY electro. P. S. Dawn of Fire rares would be good.
👇
0:29 Aww so cute
0:39 *Please burn it*
K
7:57 this is what happens when you feed Baby Fwog a Watermelon
Lol
he just be like Yeah let’s go 🤨🤨 tf
but the question is how do his eyes change into furcorn eggs? LOL
I should've been like: way way way way up wuba dub
Becomes green
8:09 my dad had this as his alarm lmao the noise is literally an alarm sound but pitched
Where can i find this alarm sound
@@rayganparksmitchell th-cam.com/video/ApEIFnQr8is/w-d-xo.html
8:13 isn't this a ring tone
Where can i find it
@@rayganparksmitchell th-cam.com/video/ApEIFnQr8is/w-d-xo.html
Android devices
@@rayganparksmitchellGarageBand
@@Mikethegraymanextrait is😭😭😭
00:44 THATS SCARY Edit:
4:41 IS SCARY TOO
Someone noticed that creepscule us scary, more scary than jeeode
S
Creepsucle is cute
@@gameleo2041 jeeode is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY more creepy than Creepsucle. Creepsucle is cute
@@gameleo2041 Is*
0:39 sour patch kid moment
FRRR
I THOUGHT THAT TOO
sour patch new gf real?1!1?!
5:53 zuker has turned into A BIRD AHHHHHHHHHHHHH
It was always a bird
No im pretty sure he was suppose to be a hadrosaur
He's a crocodile
@@deniselewis1843 or what you said
@@deniselewis1843 I though it was meant to be a droemaesaurid.
8:28 Galvana... What have they done to you?
GrowyAlert GT that’s a Wubbox Incase you didn’t know
@@ashtonhenson6869 r/woosh
@@ashtonhenson6869 Galvana Uses Wubbox Parts, And When Galvana Went Missing The Wubbox Was Created, Then The Wubbox Created The Wublins.
Scoops63 if Wubbox wasn’t created then how could Galvana use Wubbox parts
its wubbox
I love how this was in a mix for 'My Scary Singing Monsters".
6:02 defentitley not a toejammer!
not at all
Yeah it's just a blob with stretched out limbs
Its friend is horror
Lol
Ya it's totaly ya it's just maw uh just a normal wublin beatbox ing with a blue heart not a toe jammer
jeeode is now
*A CREEPYPASTA*
YEYEYEEYEYEYEYEYEEYYEEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEEYEYEYYEEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEEYEYEEYEYEEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEYEAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Your avatar too
Ok first off, Humbug and Reebro look and sound really good, probably the best imo.
Second off...
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Therapist: weird child monsters aren't real. They can't hurt you
Therapist: I was wrong...
6:38 is giving me nightmares
8:47 Rare wubbox sounds like a Portal turret.
help
Probably is lol
@@asc11T0ast3r HE IS
This man working in aperture science
The wubbox face. THE WUBBOX FACE
It’s a bean
The Wubbox Face Is IGLY.
Yes it sucks man😭
*normal wubbox*
"STOP STARING AT ME WITH THEM BIG 'OL EYES!"
*baby wubbox*
5:24 when i eat so much cheetos on about to throw up
This is r/comedyheaven material
Hey Reddit put a angler fish next to me
8:40 wubbox is sounds like groove pad cool
The humbug looks like a bee horse with wings
...
0:38
when ur eyeballs don't fit in ur eye socket
0:39
Pompom: Hey everybody hey let's go
Cybop: Hey everybody come on let's go
Brump: Yeah let's go
but in the end do they go?
Thwok’s sound was good
But Brump tho xD
5:58 this is when you do something wired
I’m also pretty sure bon petite has arms?
Yeah totally no toe jammer is in there
Ok m a y b e I lied
10:11 cant lie this part is nice
Gonna give some constructive criticism here:
1. You’d be better off just using the regular monster PNGs instead of trying to make baby versions yourself. I mean for crying out loud, you used a baby Toe Jammer for Bona-Petite and called it a day.
2. You ABSOLUTELY need to watch your chord progression. Half of these sounds don’t even fit for that reason.
3. Use less loops, unless they’re for percussionists.
4. Don’t upload multiple times a week unless you know what you’re doing. Trust me, I speak from experience.
kingofbrawl128 i think he did that on purpose for laughs
Mr Random no it wasn’t
Superbro can upload as much as he wants
You gotta admit his baby Humbug is cute
game player2015 Baby Fungpray and Baby Creepuscule are good too.
Police: 911, whats your emergency?
Me: Theres a jeeode outside my window!
Police: Yeah, so?
Me: A baby one
Police: Were coming ASAP
police: *GOTTA GO FAST*
*distant crystal noises*
Lemmylover 1001 OH SH*T
Xanderrock98 they get to his house
baby jeeode: who are you guys?
police officer: GET IN THE CAR!
baby jeeode: MOM! *flies away*
She looks like a killer
0:28 reebro is probably the best looking one plus he sounds pretty good too
I think humbug looks most official but reebro has the best sound and look
0:38 You've hatched the jeeode!
What would you like to do
Sell it Place it KILL IT WITH FIRE!
Sell it to someone that trows it into lava.
@@delusioned7056 XD
3rd pls
grumpier sus
Lol
1:36 realist guitar in msm
3:15 sox.exe gained some weight
Therapist: Hyperrealistic Jeeode isn’t real. It cant hurt you.
Hyperrealistic Jeeode: 0:39
At least humbug looks official.
Whisp looks so good are you sure this is fanmade ! 3:07
No bellow fish
Change my mind 4:12
Looks like a sour patch kid
0:39 new sour patch kid product
I do not wanna open a pack of sour patch kids and find THAT
Lol
Plankton: *Looks at thumbnail* oh it can't be that bad
Plankton: OMG SQUIDWARD!!!
?
@@RedPok3 it's for a meme *idiot*
5:58
Bone-pettie is rasing a toejammer....
HES A DAD
Lol
XD yes I know
Even as a child they were a good father
WHAT IS THIS?!?!? THIS IS TOO MUCH CRINGEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I’m pretty sure a mom
About the full song:
It was a mess. Boodoo was off track the most, Reebro wasn't terrible, but the volume on the customs was way to loud and I could barely hear the others. Ghazt doesn't sound anything like its adult counter part. It was basically just a conglomeration of off sounds that drowned out each other indefinitely.
And about 10:30 ... having two vocals on top of each other like that just doesn't work. Take not from Wublin Island, the main vocals there are Brump and Wajje, they never over lap. Sure there are supporting vocals but those are the two main ones.
10:40 was a complete mess, with the ringtone noise from, I think, Fleechworm, it just didn't fit with the length or tune of the song. Once again Boodoo was awful, and I can't distinguish most of the sounds from them because you seem to not know how volume adjustments work.
Also, can I just mention how stolen Zynth was? I mean, you can hear water running for no reason, and I dont think that was intentional.
k
Sox whaaaaaaaaat
It’s not water
The “water” is a part of that zynths soundfont (GarageBand)
Он бы мог звук своих монстров не такими громкими сделать,думаю,было бы получше
0:39I saw a video and sorry but jeeode was one of
The cursed images
No one:
Not even a living thing:
Brump: YEAH LETS GO
I noticed
"get up, get up." Maulch, The Baby. Idk the year and i'm lazy to check.
9р8ш877р7ш
*YEEAEHHHH LETS GO 👹*
Get up get up. Get up get up. Get up get up. AUUUUUGHHHHHHHH
If only we had thanos snap his fingers to erase all of these objects from the continent.
Sadly it has not happened yet...
liking your own comments... I see?
That shows I’m proud of it XD
At least I don’t use the same “roast” about 15 times. At this point it’s stale
@Astro Is dead it should to a few certain youtubers
Not gonna say names, though...
These are called cyberbullying though the sound is good but the designs needs to improve but i like it superbro
What I learned from this is that people can have good ideas but a really bad execution
🖇
@@Realitize why did i laughed at thta
@@Blockbustah because 🖇
@@Blockbustah🖇️ moment
PEPPER MAN
2:14 "you've made a terrible mistake, haven't you"
Baby Dragong sees things we don't
Ikr
I guess he seen terrible things?
Buddy
iron integral dragong looks cool though
Anna: do you wanna build a snowman??
Elsa: 5:53
What
Baby Blipsqueak looks so adorable
Plus Astropod sounds amazing 7:24
MONSTERS:
1(Ghazt) doesn't sound like the adult version
2(Grumpyer) dat voice..........
3(Reebro) blue brain boi
4(Jeedode) a Sour Patch Kid wearing lipstick made out of diamonds...
5(Humbug) this one is... good *slow clap*
6(Boodoo) O-O
7(Arackulele) no web guitar?!?!?!?!
8( Nebulob) BUDDY
9(Jellbilly) BUDDY BuDdY BUDDY
10(Dragong) i'm a snake i'm a slithery snake!
11(Kazzeilleon) the man said no *DOOOOOOOOOOOOO*
12(Fung Pray) a good rip-off if you ask me......
13(Whisp) TRIGGERED
14(Sox) WhAt ThE fLoOgUlLs Am I lOoKiNg At
15(Bellowfish) uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
16(Dwumrhol) LOOK AT MY SHELLS also square head
17(Dermit?!?!) a stump who grew some mushrooms and wants rum.....
18(Thwok) ...........
19(Scargo) SCARGO COME HOME
20(Creepscule) this is why I sleep on the couch........
21(Zynth) I hear clapping and water two sounds that Zynth doesn't make!
22(Powek) umm guys/girls look really closely at the legs
23(Screemu) OH OH OH
24(Tympa) another monster that shouldn't make clapping sound
25(Zukker) WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW WEEEEEEEE
26(Bona-Petite) -0/10 design wise. Bona-Petite doesn't make cymbal noises also doesn't make clapping sounds what the Floogulls is this
27(Whajje) exactly WHY
28(Gheegur) T H I C C
29(Pixolti) hold on my phone is ringing
30(astropod) not bad but square head
31(Blipsqueak) SING sin sin SING
32(Brump) YEAH LETS GO YEA-
33(Fleechwurm) wait what! Fleechwurm is a piano now!
34(Maulch) *face palm*
35(Wubbox) the best one out of them all
36(Rare wubbox) activate 5 4 3 2 1 robot OKAY electro
FULL SONG:
first part(build up) Boodoo and Arackulele ruined it
second part(Phangler's part) Dwumrhol ruined it
third part(Pompom's solo) Reebro and Dwumrhol screwed it up
fourth part(Flowah's part) Wubbox and Boodoo screwed it up
fifth part(pre ending) best part of the whole video
sixth part(almost ending) not bad
seventh part(ending) AMAZING
The wubox had a bean for a mouthhhh
H
Waaaaaaaaa mosnter make different sound as a baby waaa
Having a monster designed better than dermit and sounding better than grumpyre isnt a very high bar…
Pompom: hey everybody hey lets go!
Cybop: hey everybody c'mon lets go
Brump: *YEAA LES GO, YEAAA LES GO GO*
3:32 b-bellowfish... What have they done to you?
They are brainwashing him we need to save him
Garnet
8:55 🎶Robots are gay electro!🎶
Hey it has a nice ring to it :D!
So i guess... Wubbros are gays
So Jeeode is a Sour Patch Kid, Humbug is aggressive Sneyser, and the rest are just weird?
Fung pray is edinami with baby potbelly
Bellowing is F. A. T. B. O. I
Jeeode look more like a steak
Baby brump is just fwog with furcorn eyes
*Furcorn egg eyes
5:55 O-O wat
5:24 it looks like an anvil fell on it
Happy 5 years to this beauty
Maulch lol. Looks like the baby got a bit too emotionally and physically tied to fire haven's entrance lol
4:00 I see binky from Arthur I'm not dumb xdddd
i like how brump is just a default fl studio vocals
Thanks for showing the kinds of sleep paralysis demons
Agreed
Horrible designs.
Some of these are just edited GarageBand loops.
Is Blipsqueak a demon? Why does it keep saying 666?
WubWub The Wubbox it is saying sing
Blipsqueak is saying sin
Astro Revhamped that’s rare wubox
@@xqomm He could probably do better than this :/
It goes to hell
I love how cursed the monsters are and the fact you used text 2 speech for brump
Nice pfp bro
And he literally used a ringtone for zynth and maulch
Why do all the ethereals look deformed and some of their voices got even lower.
No hate
"BEACUSE ITS FUNNY"
idk
They look like
4:55 look how they massacred my boi
It looks nightmare fuel.
Bruh 😎
Nothing looks like what it’s supposed to be
I mainly feel bad for ma boi dermit
And what’s with wubbox’s eyes
7:47 it sounds like she said the sh word....
Baby S##t
Y E A H L E T S. G O
Okay so, sounds are good, but some like Boodoo and Zuuker need to be toned way down. Since most of the designs are just cut up assets and random images, I'll have to deduct some points for that, since it's quite sloppy. Overall I give it a thumbs-up, but it could do with some major improvements.
This is exactly why ethereals and wublins are never gonna get added to dawn of fire
1:07 PS1 OPENING
Eae agente msm
You are pretty good at this the instrument ones are very good and some of the designs I don’t really like but I like a lot of them and I understand you not wanting to use your actual voice I don’t like to do that either. I can’t wait for the next fan made island
How to make monsters:
Take individual screenshots of different body parts of msm monsters that already exist or stock images
Put the screenshots together and make a mangled and deformed mess that’s supposed to be some kind of creature
Done!
Yes true he sucks man🤮
yes
@@reinierjantaliping7561 you can't do even close to as good as he did
Fuck u suppose to say with no talent
His art looks like pure shit
This is what I see when I have lucid dreams
*Jeeode is nightmare fuel*
Yeah
@Creepy troll no creepsucle is the opisite
Yeah
I agree also it looks uncanny
I agree to
Zynth and humbug sounds are actually good
Me: (Sees Ghazt, Grumpyre, Jeeode, Humbug, BooDoo, Arackulele, Neblob, Jellbilly, Dragong, Kazillion, Fung Prey, Whisp, Sox, Bellowfish, Dwumrohl, Dermit, Thowk, Scargo, Creepuscule, Zynth, Poewk, Screemu, Tympa, Zuuker, Bona- Petite, Whajje, Gheegur, Pixolotl, Astropod, Blipsqueak, Brump, Maulch, Wubbox, Rare Wubbox)
*Faith in humanity has left the chat.*
*Poewk has four legs on one side of its body*
You fail to improve where it counts. Whatever the heck your doing is wrong, do a bit of research and figure out how to improve.
(and if it hasn't been said a million times already here are ways you can improove.)
-Many of your tunes are out of sync and off key, you can go on the wiki, and look up the key so your sounds do't sound bad. Also quantize your notes.
-Powerpoint will get you nowhere (and it looks like absolute garbage) , atleast you are actually drawing on something (which is a good thing.)
-You upload way too often. This might sound like a good thing, but the faster you upload your vids, typically the lower quality they become.
-WATCH TUTORIALS AND GUIDES ON THE SOFTWARE YOU USE, chances are (even though you do everything on a mobile device,) there are features you do not know about that can vastly improve your work flow.
-Don't use more than 3 loops at most (in the entire song), and ditch vocals if you don't wanna sing. (unless your going for a choir sound like quarrister or candelavra.)
I'm no expert, but these could really help you, if you actually take your time. And don't give a cocky response like I don't want too, seriously tired of that.
We must encourage it! There are errors but him working remains funny and happyfull. You have raison it should be a little improved ☺
But you are an expert!
deric
Jesus Christ chill out I never knew the maker of upbeat island had this in him
At least make it more constructive
3:32 The reason why bellowfish has a small face is because it’s not a face it’s his body
He is a fish in a bowl and the fish bowl has arms and legs attached to it
7:43 literally is saying sin
they saying Sing
Its Synth
@@camilalopes9696 sin
@@hanahakibf5637 sin
@My singing Maws yes
lmao zuuker’s sitting on a roblox egg
LMAO
LOL
Look at brump tho
oof
9:05: I could work with this!
9:14: Oh..... I change my mind it
10:11: ay yo hold up.
10:30: god dang it..
2:36 ms paint has joined
9:38 One of the Wublins were gone
you mean astropad
Z
Not being mean but it’s astropod and he’s uhh well done playing
Astropod nuuuu
ASTROPOD
Hearing Brump say
Y E A H H H L E T S G O
Scares me for life
Nobody:
Nebulob: Buddy
I don't like this but I like how you tried
Best comment in this comments section.
He did try
Super Mario Nintendo he said that
Agreeing
Super Mario Nintendo he already said that man omg
7:53 So fwog has furcorn eyes and has a human voice
On Second thought, I'll just buy the adult versions (°ー°〃)
XDDD
Theplush Bruh
Same here..
( ´∀｀) Seems alright enough
The are not out
Atleast thats not their official design
Brump says let's go instead of wake up the wublins wake up the wublins
It's a baby.
Cybop is better
This is my nightmare
Sophia Cute Gamer - SCG YT go’
yeahhhhhh let's go
yeahhhhhh let's go
yeahhhhhh let's go
yeahhhhhh let's go
I think the lore behind DOF gets ruined if ethereals and wublins get added since this was a prequel MSM, fire monsters is the ones who get rebirthed, same as the celestials
ethereal was the very first island made lore-wise, so they could have been on continent
@@Maxiroon no
@@Maxiroon no, because the ethereals we're locked away in a Pocket dimension that was unaccessible.
@@IMADINOSAURNOTABIRD yeah
so that leaves only the wubboxes
Using the auto play thing on garage band really can help out
Why did you do this to my boys?
Especially Whisp and Bona Petite!
Also Screemu is Shinnuvox all over again...
But Reebro is cute.
Imagine having Jeeode in the game who looked liked that XD
I’m probably the only one who likes the sound of screemu
5:24
Incorrect
Correct, the only 2 people. Congrats 👏🏼
5:34 sounds like pewdiepie dis track
8:28 I would give it a different design but the sound is perfect for a wubbox
2:44 that’s beautiful
I fear sleeping tonight
The problem with this is that the song is more tribal sounding like tribal island. You tried really hard and I can appreciate that but I don’t think you thought much about how the island sounds. Also they should sound younger not completely different and weird. But you did a good job on some of the baby forms and how they might look :)
5:48
i get some Prince Of Bel-Air vibes
*well this is the story all about how-*
@@jalasterisk my life got flip turned upside down and ill like to take a minute just sit right there ill tell you how I became the Prince of a town called bel-air
Yeah
7:19
Pixolotl **oh sorry i have a call**
Gmer Shroom9 lmao
It sounds like
Marshmallow theme
Y'know, I think I'm a fan of your msm vids and music, I keep finding myself watching these alot.
This sounds like hell
I FEAR NO MAN
BUT THIS...
0:39
THIS SCARES ME
It’s sounds so god though
6:37 LOOK AT WHAJJE THIS IS MY WORST NIGHTMARE
YEEEEEEEP
@@mirdied its saying bruh
@@justyouraveragebambi it does ._.