Very abrupt ending at Aaron saying it seemed like the accident didn’t happen by chance. You may need to do some editing. Earlier it had this asterisk remark as well as a part when Aaron’s arm wrapped around Tyler’s waist and suddenly its Monday morning. It almost seemed a page of the story went missing. Love the characterization and the build up. Love ❤❤❤
Hi my friend, the idea was for them to fall asleep on the couch and when they realized it, the day would have already dawned, but there may have been something left behind, I will review it more carefully next time! Kisses 😘 ❤️
@ I really think this could be a very wholesome creation, very different from your past works and I loved it. Just a little fine tuning would be another masterpiece. Falling in love with your writing .
Nice story, I am hoping for a continuation with this one.
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I hope there is more. This is a great story.
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What a wonderful story! And, so beautifully told! There MUST be more! I don't want to miss the rest of it....❤🎉😊
Hi my friend, I'm glad you liked it, I'm happy, part 2 will be out soon! Welcome 🥰❤️
I am confused by the asterisk part aside from that i was really enjoying the story
Very abrupt ending at Aaron saying it seemed like the accident didn’t happen by chance. You may need to do some editing. Earlier it had this asterisk remark as well as a part when Aaron’s arm wrapped around Tyler’s waist and suddenly its Monday morning. It almost seemed a page of the story went missing. Love the characterization and the build up. Love ❤❤❤
Hi my friend, the idea was for them to fall asleep on the couch and when they realized it, the day would have already dawned, but there may have been something left behind, I will review it more carefully next time! Kisses 😘 ❤️
@ I really think this could be a very wholesome creation, very different from your past works and I loved it. Just a little fine tuning would be another masterpiece. Falling in love with your writing .
wow were part 3
hi, coming soon ❤️
more please
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Hope story will continue soon!
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