WE WROTE A FANFIC....... im sorry in advance (ft. martin)
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- how many people were scared? me too, i was really, really scared.
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grandma loves u x3000
omg we def wrote these stories... we ate no gonna lie.. I LOVE YOU SM PLS COME BACK💕😭
PART TWO? 🤭🤭🤭🤭
@@debsmikle YES.
@@debsmikle I havent watched yet but i am so excited ALR KNOW ITS GONNA BE GOODDD
@@debsmikle Omg yes, tell me when it dropsss
@@debsmikle YESSS
Why is no one addressing the "I'm not a big fan of the three little pigs but porky just blew my house down" 💀💀💀💀 Deb pls get a therapist
I CAN'T
LMFAO
I need to use that line myself 💀
OMFG😭☠️🧍🏾♀️
MY FAVORITE PART😭
the way y’all discussing your stories at the end as if you’re analyzing a story for english class has me dyinggggg lmaooo
no cuz debriefing is always the best part😭
Fr
@@debsmikle (deb)riefing
frfr
@@zoe8832 HELP- 💀💀💀💀
deb's ff was just like a traditional wattpad fic. she even said "member" and "folds" and everything. well done 😭
So true 😭😂
Ikkrrr
Fr
Lol
Fr
8:05 the "our tongues fight for dominance" was so spot on like that line makes it into every wattpad.
no apology will repair the trauma dark wing dussy gave me
No therapist either 😔😔
@@bunbun5625 Fr
the trauma…
My childhood is shattered. I can’t watch darkwing ever again
oof idk what that is, but soem cartoon im guessing that was good but now they ruined it OOF
"Our tongues fight for dominance" can't be a Wattpad story without that line
u know it 🤭🤭🤭
☠️☠️☠️
I imagine two pink slimy blobs with swords…
I don’t need therapy YOU need therapy
@@Daffodils_over_roses ☠️✌🏾😭
☠️
only true debussy fans know where the "our tongues fight for dominace.." phrase comes from😭😭
So trueee
NAWWWW NOT THE WATTPADS-💀💀
😭😭
IT WAS FIRST WRITTEN IN A DRARRY FANFIC 💀
@@blockgirlygamer7714OMG IT WASSSS I CANTTT
no but why did deb's actually end wholesomely???
hold up, you've had this account since 2014. explain girlie
WAIT WHAT HOW DO U KNOW THAT💀
@@debsmikle been lurkin 😶
@@debsmikle if they found ur account on the bottom left corner it says how long you’ve been a member for
@@debsmikle in the about section of your channel it says joined 2014 :)
@@stephanidiaz-cabrera7121 is there a way to hide it🧍♀️
I can not believe you guys made such JUICY stories in 15 mins. Also Martin's was a whole new breed of fanfics lmao.
Fr
15:54 WHY WAS THAT SO ACCURATE.
I can totally picture deb putting “Debussy” in a fan fic at a random time-
Ofc
Top
OOP
OMG FRR
Fr tho💀
deb, ily, but how long have you been keeping this porky fantasy in ur head 🧍♀️no bc why was the fanfic basically pre-writtern within the span of 15 mins😭😭
HELPPPPP
stoppp💀💀💀💀💀
let’s just say i have a lot of time on my hands🤭💕
FRRRR like it’s actually kinda scary like deb what are you hiding
@@debsmikle BAHAA
7:16 the way it said "Poky Pig" has me in shambles! Deb you and your friends are so funny I love watching ur vids and you executed this idea so well! there's no one doing it like yew queen
10:01 I CANTTTTTTTT THAT WAS SO SMOOOOTH
STOPPP BC YES
PLEASEEE martin repeating "this is so good!!" throughout the read while deb is dying from embarrassment I'M SCREAMINGGG
i was in PAIN
I physically felt that
THE BRITISH ACCENT INTERVIEW AT THE END I CANT WITH YALL....😭😭🔥💀
my fav part 😭
@@debsmikle yes. YES.🤭
RIGHT OH NY GODOODDDD☠️
11:20 "backstory, **dramatic kids show nerd sigh** I was a nerd in school-"
PLS😭🤚
Deb and Martin's cackle at 12:36 has me HOWLINGGGG, I am dead. Martin, why would u write that sdfghGFDSWERtyhj 😭😭😭😭😭😭💀💀💀💀💀💀
Martin’s story was on a whole other level??????? LMAO I CANT STOP LAUGHING
AGREEEED IT ATE
it actually ate and i mean it if its coming from me
ME TOO OMFG LMFAO
NAH IT WAS SO GOOD LMAO
that felt like one of my cold nightmares ngl
i like it tho-
WE NEED A WHOLE EPISODE WITH DEB, MARTIN COURTREEZY, ARIYAN. AND DORIS. ILL JUST BE SET FOR LIFE
YESSSS
underrated asf comment
YESSS
my dream 🛐
FRRRR THEN IT WOULD BE AMAZING
10:21 “I love the wEt FoLdS”
I cant- 💀
so in my humble opinion, I loved both stories, but deb's was more classic wattpad fic (with the classic lines) and martin's was just... pure unhinged smut💀idk which one understood the assignment better but this entire video had me rolling🤣first the stories then the fact that yall did a whole dissertation at the end (ur college is showing lmao) no one is doing it like yall!
RIGHT.
I never really read fanfic but I was a mad wattpad girly for original stories, and when deb pulled up with the 'I guess I should introduce myself' I SCREAMED
Martins fic is one of those ao3 crackfics youd read at 2 am
@@hanyuluvr No literally that was def my cup of tea 🤣
@@hanyuluvr like when your scrolling through a tag and you see something like oscar the grouch/alexander hamilton 😭
THE QUACKING GOT ME ROLLINGGG GOODBYE martins story was so good omfggg 😩
RIGHTTT I LOVED IT
@@debsmikle Can u make a part 2 pls ?? I loved it too much. 😍
Correction: Martin's
5:41 THIS IS DESTROYING ME, please do more I just found this channel and I adore it
They match each other’s energy so well 😭✋
The way Martin gets devastated when it said "he explored my insides" I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING
When they were both devastated just in general 😭
I LOVE DEBS EDITING LIKE IT MAKES THE VIDEO SO MUCH FUNNIER & ENTERTAINING LMAO
WTF IS YOUR PROFILE PICTURHE😭
@?v HELP ITS RHOSE ADS WHERE THEY DONT GIVE THE GIRL A BREAK & JUST CALL HER UGLY AND THROW DIRT AT JER 😭😭😭
@@sillyguy70 LMFAOAOO
@@emmybrumbaugh9423 THISE MAKE ME YELLLLEISS
@@emmybrumbaugh9423 IM YELLIJG
14:28 I literally fell back on my chair from laughing too hard and I think I’ve got two new bruises now 😭😭😭
2:27
*”He took off his cape and started to-“*
I just wanna let y’all know I took the time to read all the blurred out words and I can say that
Martin did NOT hold back-
no he did not😭😭😭😭
No way you read that big blurred part- BESTIE LET ME TELL YOU- I’ve been sitting here for five minutes-
@@TAbbooo i keep trying to figure it out too 😭😭
@@TAbbooo TOOK ME 5 SECS LMAO 😜
@@xxghostedxx7498 no f-ing way. The big section is blurred beyond belief. I could tell the small stuff but-
you both wrote better wattpad fanfictions than the majority of wattpad fanfiction i have read. that also within 15 mins, honestly i am very impressed deb good job!
“you’ve never been to heaven”😭(just kidding) no but like the oneshots I read are actually very good
@@zaza3404 LOL🤣 yes there are very talented writers who have wrote very nice books and YESS especially the one shots 👌✨.
@@kitkatchan5031 YESSS!
Probably helps that they’re not 13 lol
It’s literally so annoying
9:06 DEB I HAVE NEVER HEARD ANY USE "WET FOLDS" IN MY LIFE SKSKDK
9:11 LMAAOAOAOAAOOOOO MARTIN CRINGING 💀💀😭
The both of them writing like 13 year old girls as a bonding experience is true friendship. I love to see it.
Me a 13 year old who hates smut: 😶
@@lauraparker2569 @Leviitation
13 is young, besties. I know my comment was a joke, but I wanna be real for a sec. Don't feel like you have enjoy or appreciate anything inherently sexual. You still have a lot of time to grow and understand yourself, your body, and your sexuality. Don't let the world sexualize you. You're young. Read all the fanfic you want, but if you feel uncomfortable with something, give yourself the curtesy of putting that thing aside. Enjoy your media, but don't feel the need to interact with sexual content. This is coming from a 19 year old just trying to look out for her younger girlies
@@3bellam 💖
bruh if you're going to be so stereotypical, when i was that age i never could write like that in 15 mins, in 15 mins i would have legit HALF OF A SENTENCE written so far, you need to put that 13 year olds who are GOOD at writing and language arts. I still suck, I used to get A's now i get B's.
the only thing i would change would be saying “hooves” instead of “hands” for debs story. “i felt a warm hoof pull me in the dark closet” LMAO
AHH!! i wish i thought of that!! that’s so smart if i ever do this again im definitely going to add that
LMAOCJDOAKAOA IM SORRY???
@@debsmikle NOT THE ACTUAL SERIOUS ADVICE NAW NAW WEHSIEODN
@Fiorela AYO
No no
8:15 IM CRYINGGG 💀💀
9:00 I can Confirm that is what a lot of wattpad writers say when writing smut..do not ask how I know-
The "Its DADDY Darkwing boy" had me in tears 😭😭😭
LITERALYYYYY LIKE IM STILL WHEEZING🤭😭😭
@@debsmikle " DaDdY dArKwInG"
😎
I am losing my shit 😌😌
The quacking and oinking really put the cherry on top there LMAO
Yall made the plot good and intertaining while it being hella funny
5:29 I CANNNOTTTT WITH THESE NAMES 💀💀💀😭
Traumatised, entertained yet throwing up. You've done it again Debby Dear 😍😍😍
i’m speechless. these are amazing pieces of work, it might even surpass shakespeare himself. words cannot express the emotion i felt throughout the readings of your stories. these literary masterpieces are worthy of awards of the highest standing. i hope to see a live action version soon, may daddy darkwing be with you all.
Wow, such kind words. I really appreciate you leaving such a heart felt comment. ❤️
@@debsmikle of course❤️. if you need someone to like idk act as any of the characters i’ll gladly do that‼️🫡 anything for the progression of this amazing series.
Not only might it surpass Shakespeare…
It WILL. It has truly inspired me and I look forward to a live action movie if there will be one. I am just as speechless as you 🙏
this made me cry
flameo back, hotman!
“My pubes started to grow” I was WHEEZING 😂😂😂😂
I COULDNT EVEN READ IT
His laugh bro😭😭😭😭😭😭
Uhm uuhhh😭😭😭☠
@@blueturtle9029 hhhhhh💀🤚
😭😭😭 IM DYING AHHH
the editing is TOP TIER YALL 😭😭
I love The way Martin asked “-explore my insides uhhh😢”then he covered his head with his arms while crying minewhile debs is busying laughing 😂😂❤ and the “you taste so good”then he started ,” crying-laughing” it’s sooo funny PART TWO?? Pls?? Thx😊
martin's energy is immaculate and your dynamic with him is unmatched
Half of Martin's story is a crazy,well detailed,funny,crazy sex scene..... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣...im hollering 🤣 😂
Debbie's story was somewhat attaching and interesting
Yall stories were so well written, yall def wrote fanfics before even got the "member" and "tongues fighting for dominance" part 😭
15:23 not the ariana YuH🫶🏻😂😍💅
Okay, avid and REALLY popular fanfic writer here. 🙋♀️ And can I just say... Ya'll wrote suchhh great fics!! It's pretty ridiculous how hard writing sexy scenes/smut can be for a lot of people, so you guys really hit it out of the park!! Personally, it's taken me YEARS of writing to feel comfortable enough where I can create a smutty scene fairly quickly. But hot damnn- both of your guys' stories were amazing, I thoroughly enjoyed this!! 😂❤️
What fanfics have you written that are popular?
What fanfics you’ve written?
@@eh9376 For TFOTA
@@saintshrooms9424 For TFOTA
@@mnlxlover00 what the full name? As in not an acronym
ok hear me out !! its like deb had the structure and all the wattpad fanfic staples that we know and love but martin's captured the essence of wattpad lemon fics lmao like that's where wattpad got its reputation from
NOT THE
LEMONNN LMFAO
OMFG “LEMON” GTFOOO i wonder if people still call it that😭
“LEMON” was my 13 yr old miraculous era 💀
LEMON IM DYING
People barely call it "lemon" anymore lol 😭
7:03 LOWKEEEEYYYYY DEB. You got somethin’ to explain? 🤔🤨
13:20 AY INNOCENT WHAT… INNOCENT WHAT
b a l l s
Martin KNEW what he was writing. And y'all, we all know deb had that porky fantasy in her head for a while bcuz WHY did it kinda slap, that too in 15 minutes.......also i think i got abs from laughing way too hard.
HELP 💀💀
@@svmeya7700 daddy darkwing kinda slapped too iykyk😏
FOUL. 💀💀
@@cleetus_ ohmah💀
as a fanfic writer, i say yall ate this up. blew the house down
they ate and left no crumbs.
devoured the plate also 🙏🙏
*P.S. where can I find ur fanfics?*
@@hrts4xime i kinda keep my fanfics private 😵 oopsies can't reveal my secret identity
@@liabefun what r they about
blew the house down porky pig style?!?!?
we need 15 minute fanfic with martin or your girlfriends!!! i have never laughed so hard in my life!!
been reading wattpad/fanfics for 4 years and i can say these are some of the best fanfics ive ever read/heard
I LOVE how y’all match each other’s energy.
yea like we need Courtney here rn 😭
@@kaminqri OMG YESS😍😍
I'm so late 😭 but not deb using the "our tongues fought for dominance" line that she made fun of lol 😭😭😭💀💀💀💀💀💀
U CAUGJT ME ✋🥸🤚
@@debsmikle not the comment have more likes then your reply
martin keep throwing that once peice of braid behind his ear 😭😭 finna get whiplash
ENOUGHHHH😭😭😭😭😭😭
"i'm not a big fan of the three little pigs but porky just blew my house down." ATE and the ending of martin's was so good!!
It cleared. 😭
Oml 😭
I ACTUALLY DIED WATCHING THIS, the chaotic energy is OFF THE CHARTS
"he took off his cape and started-"
- Xavier Martin 2022
2:32
Deb! You are such a creative writer. I loved how you gave so much detail, but not too much to build the story’s fantasy and suspense. Even though you wrote this as a joke, I was really engaged and was really able too feel the pace at which things were escalating. Also, at the end, I loved how you interrupted the piggies’ moment lol. It left me with a frozen image of the characters and their story, wondering what happens next. Allowing readers to wonder about what happens next is fun because it gives the reader space to fantasize about what HAPPENS NEXT. Overall, GREAT JOB! I honestly think you might have a talent for writing :)
why was deb’s story actually kinda good?!😭😭😭
@our hero babe whats here😐
Rightt
LIKE I enjoyed it a bit too much😭
@our hero istg if i seet this bot one more time 😭
no bc i was so invested 🤭
The way I couldn’t contain myself with Martin’s title🤦🏽
And the way Deb’s ending of her fic ATE with the House Down title💀 bravo!😌💓
THE WAY MARTIN READ DEB'S STORY HAD ME IN TEARS ISTG, HIS ACTING AND THE EMPHASIS WERE SO GOOD LMAO
16:01 was my favorite part LMAO
14:50 gives me the "whatever daddy wants. daddy gets." vibes
NO STOP BC THIS IS ACCURATE
Im intrigued and kinda scared 😂😂
im honestly so excited for this video, like i cant explain why. i just live for debs energy!!
and martins too obviously
Their energy matches so well
It sends me 💀💀💀
3:52 i just realised this reminds me of the gabbie hanna meme where she's *aggressively* typing on the keyboard
12:22 not the mr. krabbs laugh 💀
HAHAHAGAUU
This made the already funny laugh funnier
glad to see deb-deb doing well. missed her lil giggles lowkey😔 LOVED the video and i love how you still have your nasty energy intact while in LA😭
aren't they in ontario
Deb deb goes crazy ngl
@@jane-kk8ov in his video he said they're in LA, and in this video she says they're in ontario so who knows lmaoo
“WET FOLDS” HELPPPP THAT LINE IS A MUSSSTT IN SMUT WITH FEMALES 😭
12:21
NOT HIS LAUGH SOUNDING LIKE A DUCK 😭😭😭😭😭
The maniacal laugh that came from Martin after you read “my pubes” 😭
Before: I am going to judge you guys, but purely out of concern.
Halfway through: Only extremely concern, no judging in me left. MARTIN????
“My pubes in my pants start to grow” BYE😭💀💀💀😭
5:18 HAHAHAHAAA
nah “wet folds” is the ultimate wattpad word choice when they’re doin the doin tings!
AJDJDJSKDH IM ALREADY LAUGHING SO HARD DEB AND MARTIN ARE HILARIOUS WHAT. the fan fictions tho 😍🥵💅😌🤨
- from ur favorite grandchild obviously 😌
I didn't read the "laughing" part so i read it as "IM ALREADY SO HARD"
U LIKE THEM 🤭🤭🤭
@@debsmikle I MEAN COMPARED TO SOME OTHER FANFICS THEY WERE PRETTY WELL WRITTEN- although the plot itself 🤨🤨🤨
@@teddi8432 nooooo 😭😭😭
@@teddi8432 NOO WHATT HUH HUH 💀💀💀
This is super hilarious! I love the collaboration it was was unexpected but needed just as much💆♀️
OMAGA I CAN READ MOUTHS TOO AND I UNDERSTOOD EVERYTHING IM TRAUMATIZED THE BLURRY PARTS IM 😭
I liked how in Martins story how dominant dark wing dussy was. Deb's story was really overall nice, they knew each other and it was down all the right way. I'm a soft spot for when they touch the waist so it might just be that but this was such a good video 😩
The “problem” is I can’t write smut and things like that- they’re always sad, nice, and just like a lot of backstory to my characters. But honestly great job, especially for 15 minutes. The detail was great.
this is frl me n my bsfs humor together 💀
I have an online friend, and the first direct interaction I had with her was her sending me this fanfiction, and then she introduced me to three others. I have 4 friendships built off of this and this alone.
i feel like deb, martin, and courtreezy just need to make a collab
Frrr
yesss
CAN WE APPRECIATE Debussy's editing skills 🐝
i regularly end up gasping for air w these deb videos but this one??? THIS was the one that made me actually close my laptop and take a moment bc i was crying over the darkwing dussy
8:48 they are doing all that in THE JANITOR'S CLOSET???!!
WIAT A MIN
STAWP THIS IS WAYYYY TO FUNNY, THE WAY MARTIN IS GETTING INTO THE STORY WHILE DEB IS JUST LAUGHING OF EMBARRASSMENT IS SO FUNNY, YALL DID SO GOOD
9:37 my man's TRAUMATISED 😭
BAHAHAHA- I didn't even see the reactions as I was too busy reading 😭💀
3:09 LMAAAOOOO YEAAAHHHH
Do you know the instrumental at that minute?? Pls
@@user-my1zq8kj4s I think it’s ayo girl x love me back idk tho
Love me back
STOP WHEN HE SAID LET ME EXPLAIN 1:08 THE CC SAID ENSLAVE💀💀
NO BC I SAW THAT TOO
The way this single handedly reinforced my asexuality 💀💀
Same 💀HAOEPELEND SHEJEUEIEISKKEKS
3:46 NOT THE BONE RATTLING SOUNDS BYEEEEE-💀💀💀💀😭