Dojo Duels - Level 3: Eyes Open (Elenna vs Ghost)
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 29 ก.ย. 2020
- A new bounty hunter is after Elenna and the G_Armlet. Elenna, with the help of Axel, must overcome her fears in order to defeat this new threat.
Check out my opponent's entry for this duel: • Dojo Duel #3 Ghost vs ...
Check out this duel's forum: www.hyunsdojo.com/community/vi...
A huge "Thank you" for everyone who has supported me throughout these past few months. If it weren't for you all, this project might not have been possible! - ภาพยนตร์และแอนิเมชัน
That moment when a fucking stick figure animation has a better story and characters than some multimillion-dollar movies from Hollywood...
You're having a good taste of music that perfectly fits to your animation, I also love the cinematic style and the way how the stickfigures act. It's just so beautiful, I learned a lot from that. Good job!
Cäpp thanks, mate!
Bro at the ending of this, i broke into tears. this series of duels is so.. emotional,
and then heartwarming in a way. which makes it really awesome. all of it is great. i love this episode, its almost like rewatching a favorite cartoon. but even better and more epic.
Thank you. I’m glad that my series is having as much of an impact as it is. And even more glad that you’re enjoying!
OH THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!! Animation is amazing!! The storytelling and pacing is on point and I can't stop gushing over it!!!
Im going to launch my plane called ki-61
This is probably the best Dojo Duel I've seen yet. Episodes 1 and 2 were also great, but I can't overstate how impressed I am with your work in this one. I think the powers and abilities shown so far are super creative, and the themes of bravery and finding the courage to fight even when it seems pointless to do so were superbly conveyed. Axel is a great mentor character in that regard and the dialogue between her and Elenna was quite touching. I also really liked how believable the motivation for the bullies was, and I think it's commendable that you didn't just leave them as plot devices to be used and discarded at will.
As some other commenters have already said, this far outstrips any professional animation from a western studio these days in terms of both story and art direction. If this is your passion, you have an amazing future ahead of you!
i love this.
she even got a special move too!
yup
good shit bro. i love seeing so much passion being put into these projects
Thanks, man! As always, I appreciate all the support!
Great story and Duel!
My advice? Try utilizing the Add blend mode for glowing effects. It works wonders especially when you use radial gradients with it.
Also shake your V-cam a little to make powerful attacks feel more powerful.
Other than that, I see improvement! Great job and I hope the votes go in your favor. You've earned a subscription from me. :)
Qwest44 Official thanks, mate! I’ll be sure to keep these in mind for my next project!
This was so GGOOOOOODD !!!
You just made a 21 min long animation that's crazy !!!!
Glad you liked it!
Man i cud see this series air on TV cuz its such a good story
"we do a little trolling" 9:49
Went back to rewatch this to remind myself of the events in the story and one detail stuck out to me. Axel exerted some kind of "aura" at 1:36 which is something we don't see in other episodes. When he said "Leave this place now..." that sentence by itself radiated pure anger. I have a feeling we haven't even seen Axel at his full potential.
God damn it! This is the best 21 minutes of my life!
I absolutely love this duel, you animated a full on episode that got me emotionally invested with an awesome fight.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
To be fair this looks an awesome series Honestly you should had gotten more subscribers
unbelievably underrated.
Man I'm really enjoying this series, the duels and story are just awesome! You should get more subscribers
When the Necrom theme came on as Elenna started wailing on Ghost (Wait a sec....) my hype bars went into overdrive! That made my day DM5.
Not gonna lie if I was in Elenna's shoes as my opponent possessed the bodies of the bullies that gave my life absolute trauma, I'd just be like "Thanks. You just fueled my catharsis factor."
Man I was not expecting a full 20 minute episode! You've outdone yourself... again!
Yeah, man! I really wanted to go all out on this one since it's like the ending to Elenna's 1st 3-episode arc. ^_^
Hi do you know alerider942 I found his lost animation progress it haven't finished yet? here
th-cam.com/video/gFEoiL3EoZ4/w-d-xo.html doland seem kinda? cool
@@grasslionhorns cool 👍
@@noircat9076 i know alerider942 animated this?
Goddamn that's really nice series i subbed and waiting for next episode :D
Thank you! I hope you enjoy what's to come!
@@DM5Anims no problem
Idk if it was me but it looks like ghost wanna destroy the bracelet to save elenna's life from the organization almost because it looks like he never wanted her life. lowkey
I see u took his idea ghost I thought he was like cannon
I liked this dojo duel that show was amazing bravo ❤💕👏
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Hold on...she got her cybernetic eyes from Blackwatch? Isn't that the very organization that caused One and Yoyo to separate, took One and did who knows what to him before he managed to escape? If so, wonder why?
Technically yes. But the Blackwatch in my universe is different to the one in Hyun's. The same can be said for the rest of Cier.
@@DM5Anims Ah, makes sense then; however, I’m still curious why they initially approached her and gave her those eyes. Can’t wait to see what unfolds! Really love your work! Watching you and everyone from the Dojo kind of makes me want to join; alas I have no talent for drawing or animating 🙁. Instead I lean toward writing, as poor as it may be 🙃. Thank you for all your hard work!! 😄❤️
@@whitewolfstargazer6809 Thanks! There's a writing community on the Hyun's Dojo site. Written duelists are a thing if you want to take part in the Dojo Duels.
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Damn it! What is this an animè? And right when I was about to sleeppppp! Grahhhhhh!!!
P.S. I LOVE YOUR ANIMATIONS😊
Apologies, mate! Haha! Hope you enjoyed it!
@@DM5Anims I thought axel was a girl
@@leeroyeeee7497 Believe it or not, you're not the first person to think that. ^_^
@@DM5Anims and did u see the video wer the dude that made ghost showed axel can regenerate is this true or did he make this up
@@leeroyeeee7497 Yes I did. And yes, Axel is capable of regenerating. We were discussing this when we first started dueling.
The first time Eleena uses her brain be like: 1000 IQ fight
Ghost didnt took an opportunity to posess Elenna
Lucas Leonardo according to Ghost’s duelist application. He still feels the pain of the person he possesses. So there isn’t really a reason for him to possess her.
@@DM5Anims i see but i just typed this cuz i think it would be funny
DM5Anims so wait...if he possessed her, basically there’s no point? Like say she hasn’t worn that bracelet yet and gets beaten up by those bullies before he took her over, he immediately felt pain from her...to the point that it’s not worth per say, unless he still takes her as a bounty if he knocked her out on the inside. does that makes sense?
Cure Panda I’m not exactly sure about the scenario you’re trying to convey, but all I can say is that Ghost will be feel everything his host feels, so if he were to get knocked out whilst possessing Elenna, both of them would be knocked out.
DM5Anims ooooooh ok.
Sorry, it’s just the takeover part from your opponent made me a bit confused in terms of how it works. So ok, basically speaking, he can still feel pain in spite of being in other people’s bodies? Huh...guess he’s a bit faulty. Normally with ghost characters, they don’t feel pain at all...only the victims they took over after they got out of them ^^;
And OMG u respond OAO
I just found your channel at random after watching your opponent’s part. Lore wise, I prefer yours...and your duelist is too precious >:3
but wait...are you that same one with the pink stick? ummm...I think it was Samantha was it?
Hmmmm...hey random question: would Elenna and Axel meet your old character at some point in her story? Maybe be like her mentor in learning how to fight or an actual friend and not a faker like those 3 b***hes before? =v=
Just asking cause I rewatched your previous character and man...she has potential. Though in terms of the characters she used in her cards, are all of them yours?
Cure Panda I wouldn’t say a meet up with Samantha is impossible, but at the moment there are no plans for it. To answer your question about the duelist cards: No, all of these characters Samantha has access to belong to other animators. Of course, I had to ask permission from their creators in order to use them.
@@DM5Anims oh ok. Had to keep it separate. Got it.
As for the cards, hmmm...I wonder if she can still fight without those cards? Pretty sure with Elenna, her cowardice is her weakness, with or without those weapons she has...but she’s getting there. Though I would imagine her riding on that motorcycle...oh wait nvm ^^;
Cure Panda she definitely would. I mean even if did get separated from her cards she’d still have some combat skills.
say thx to ghost
she went x games mode in this one
I always wonder why didn’t ghost possessed Elenna and just run away to take her to custody? That’s so simple XD
Like a wild goose chase
elenna and axel -
Gotta say even though I spoiled my self a bit
I like your style
And the story as well
But most of all the guy with the wheel as a shield has some weird powers but other wise creative too
And I swear I really thought GHOST from Dojo Was here but I'm glad he wasn't cause he would destroy them
Other wise great animation
Awesome again I the Animations and duel dojo in my good friend....
P.S what ?
P.S.S again AWESOME !! ?
Seems kind... Elena love Axel ?:3
The storyline is good, because it's just boring without actually getting the point of views of the characters. Including to their specific reactions.
ウッ 用 金 位 い kン がんえで
Im confused...who the hell is Axel.
UnifiedEntity he’s the green character in this video.
@@DM5Anims i know what like....WHO is in abilities, personality etc . The duelist page doesnt have anything on him :/
UnifiedEntity Oh haha! Don’t worry, information about him will be released in the next update. Which should hopefully happen within the next week.
@@DM5Anims welp good to know. I'm also interested in making my Duelist encounter yours. Not a duel persay, but I feel so bad for Elenna that she needs another friend who can help 😭😭😭😭 if you're interested you can find me in the dojo and discord with the same name :)
@@UnifiedEntity Elenna's duelist forum has been updated with Axel's information. You can read about it here: www.hyunsdojo.com/community/viewtopic.php?f=48&t=6840
this is anime i sub
I don't like this.
I appreciate that you want to have a story with your characters, but the execution is really poor with this episode.
I don't really feel Elenna's backstory, being the outcast because she was born with super powers and eyes that signify that... I think it's cliche and it's not well executed. Many people, my self included, are also bullied by their peers, but the reasons are disadvantages and not solely because they are extraordinary chosen ones and all that! Elenna's thing is that... she has beautiful eyes that give her abilities and the bullies beat her and humiliate her because of that (which I think should actually discourage them from bothering her coz... she's one of the people with super powers!) Also she comes off as melodramatic to me, especially near the end of the fight. And she feels pretty cliche overall, like just a chosen one-type hero who finally believes in herself and makes it.
The bullies actually make a kinda decent point about the regular humans in this world being completely neglected coz the end all be all is super powers and the average people are indeed seen as unimportant. This story recognizes that but it goes the opposite way by having the average Jane who makes that point one of the villains! So there is commentary to be done but this sort of demonizes the average Joe/Jane who don't want to be looked down upon in the world this takes place in. What's more, the bullies are supposed to find a easy target they irrationaly hate, not someone they have a reason to be afraid of (since they're average humans and Elenna is your average chosen one in a world full of crazy abilities) Overall this isn't a good depiction of bullying!
The dialogue is pretty bad. I know it's a common thing in stickmen animations and dialogue is hard to write but this story is supposed to be this deep touching tale of an outcast so strong dialogue is sort of recquired here imo. I haven't seen the newer animations in a while so I don't recall if you have improved but compared to MicroMist's take, this is certainly the worse of the 2 in terms of dialogue (and not only). My main pet peeve is the way Alliah explains why she and her crew are bullying Elenna like the description of a movie (a bully should not speak with such formal language as they are beating someone to a pulp lol). It's just not natural. As for the ending, Elenna and Axel's dialogue was not touching, it just felt like a child talking to a superhero (coz that's what Axel is) and I don't like the "stop apologizing" sentence... idk it just feels off to me. The rest is fine, those are my main problems.
Regarding the fight... it drags and I don't like that Ghost pulls his punches. He has a bunch of chances to just slash and stab Elenna but he takes his time... a lot! I like the parts where he fights Axel, and it's good to see Elenna fight too coz I don't like passive protagonists tbh, but this feels like it could have been better.
I am sorry that my work did not appeal to you, but I appreciate you putting in the time and effort to give me your critiques. Hopefully my work in the future will improve on these aspects and meet your expectations!
@@DM5Anims Don't worry, storytelling isn't easy. I'm no expert!
But I appreciate that you took my criticism well and I hope it helped. I have actually enjoyed some of your later stuff and I believe that you're pretty talented so I believe you can improve!