these stories are so sadddd it almost made me cry why do girls do this just for boys I've heard girls doing this alot in the news ill never ever do this
i remember i had this boyfriend who cheated on me i was sad but then i said "you know what i don't care because he just lost a sweet,loving,beautiful girl snd if he can't see that he's just another jerk" then at lunch i got some pudding and dumped it on him and then i was happy again and i looked at him and said pay back is a pain
im sorry. in my opinion, i didnt like how the story portrayed a girl who killed herself because she got dummped. people get dummped everyday, and still live. they dont kill there self's over it. im sorry
_Messaging :_ Emily: Morning Babe, you ok? Alex: Yh babe, fine. You? Emily: Great. Today is a special day! Alex: is this another one of your religious festivals XD _(Emily sighs. Today was their five year anniversary)_ Emily: Nevermind :) You wanna meet at the park in a half hour? Alex: Fine with me :) See you then Emily: yep _(Emily arrives at the park with a box of chocolates and football for Alex. She couldn't find Alex. Then, she saw him behind a wall with his arms around a girls back. He was kissing Emilies best friend, Emma )_ Emily : ALEX?!?!?!?! HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!?! I...I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME?!?!?!?!?! Alex: Oh my god... babe I-- Emily: No... don't call me babe... WE'RE OVER!!!!!! Alex: What?!?!?!? No C'mon! This was a one time only thing... Emma: Huh? Emily: Emma, we are never gonna be friends again! _(The two girls cry as Emily runs home, smashing the chocolates and football to peices. Alex messages and calls Emily and so does Emma, but she blocks their numbers.)_ _(The next day at school, a group of Alexes friends crowded around her. They threw her lunch in the bin and yelled...)_ Friend 1: You worthless piece of garbage! Friend 2: You heartless witch! You've destroyed Alex! _(Another friend begins to hit her. They insult her and hit her mote and more. She cries silently. This continues for three weeks. One day Emily is sat with two of her friends, Amy and Elissa when the boys come up to her again)_ Friend 2: You are so ugly! Friend 3: I hope you die slowly and painfully! _(Tears swell in Emily's eyes. Her friend Amy tuggs her shoulder)_ Amy: Don't mind them... Friend 1: I hope you get hit by a car! Emily: Me too... _(tears stream down her face. Emily runs out of the school gates and heads onto the road. Elissa and Amy try to grab Emily, but they're too late... Emily ran straight in front of a mini van.)_ Amy: Emily!!!!! Elissa: Omigosh somebody call an ambulance!!!! _(Ten minutes later the ambulance rushes Emily to the hospital. Alex Amy Elissa and Emma come too. The paramedics burst into the waiting room to tell them that Emily is in a coma. They all cry, except for Alex.)_ _(Alex turns to Emma)_ Alex: Serves her right. Why did you even bring me here? Emma: _(still crying)_ Alex! This is our fault! We have to go speak to her. Alex: Why? She can't even answer us. Emma: She can _hear_ us. Alex, we're going in there right now to apologise. _(Alex rolls his eyes and yawns. Emma glowers at him and drags him by his ears into Emily's ward, where Emily's parents were sat on her hospital bed stroking her hair. They see Emma and Alex, nod, and exit the ward. Emma crys softly and holds Emily's hand.)_ Emma: I'm sorry Emily. I really am. Its my fault. Every bit of it. I hope you can hear me. I've missed you, our friendship. Please forgive me. Please... _(Emma nudges Alexes shoulder. He shakes his head. Emma rams her elbow into his ribs.)_ Alex: Ow! _(Emma indicates towards the unconscious Emily)_ Alex: Ugh! _I'm sorry_ Emma: There. I hope she heard us... _(The doctor enters the room.)_ Doctor: We've done some brain scans, and I'm ever so sorry to say, the patient is brain dead. She can hear, but that's about it. We have determined that she will not wake up from her coma. _(The doctor heads towards the life support machine. He turns it off... )_
I am a writer myself and it seems to me like half way through this you just gave up and made him do the same thing as his ex girlfriend, which to me, in a story should't happen. Plus if the girl truly did kill herself she would not have the time to write all those words onto a mirror. It would have been better if she came home, ate dinner, acted like everything was okay, wrote a letter that said,"He said he would die for me", overdosed and put the note on her chest. Then, when the boy finds out, he is heartbroken, goes to her funeral and after the funeral he comes home, goes to his room and locks the door, writes a s suicide letter that says,"It's too late to die for you, so I will die and be with you" holds it in his hand tightly while the other has a gun, and well, you get the picture. Also, might I just add your grammar is atrocious, I could barely make out anything anyone said in this, my advice is, if you plan on making another story, PLEASE take your time, make sure you're not spelling like a stubborn idiot, and maybe put some effort into it even if it takes 3 months, it'll be worth the likes, subscribes and positive comments, right? And might I suggest, reading the book "The Fault in Our Stars" or watch the movie "Titanic" or "The Notebook" it'd be good for ideas, just as long as you don't steal anything.
You guys should calm down it is obvious she is not as "skilled" as you guys, but don't tear them down for it. You should give your feed back in a nicer tone.
josh Appelseed thank you, nobody seems to get the fact that you can't assume people to be as good as you, which these people probably aren't. Some people actually leave this thing called CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!!
Wy ar peple so stupid... they think that eveone can hav perfect englesch!!! WELL GESS WAT!!! NOT EVERONE IN TH UNIVERSE CAN HAVE PERFECT ENGLESCH!! FOREIGN PEPLE EXIST!!!!
I think it was really sad , don't listen to those people who commented "bad grammar" everyone makes mistakes and I can see that you really worked hard for this. I love it ❤
All errors: nite (0:05), Why was you (0:10), Skool (0:10), 2day (0:10), didn't (0:14), skool (0:14), 2morrow (0:14), didn't (0:20), minture (0:30), 2 (0:45), u (0:45), 4 (0:54), mee (0:54), thort (1:00), 4 (1:00) u (1:00), skool (1:28), 2morrow (1:28), u (1:30), u (1:37), 2 (1:37), 2 (1:40), skool (1:30), 2 (1:40), u (1:45), 2 (1:45), skool (1:45), u (1:51), 5 (1:51) (Because, any number under ten needs to be in words), u (1:58), u (2:03), skool (2:07), though (2:07), 2 (2:11) or girl (idk what that means) (2:18), ur (2:18), she begins the cry (idk what that means either) (2:22), 4 (2:22), mee (2:22), hes (2:28), 2 (2:32), 2 (2:32), 4 (2:32) mee (2:32), went she gets (what???) (2:42), 2 (2:42), would'nt (2:48), 2 (2:48), lieing (2:48), 2day (2:58), 4 (2:58) mee (2:58), i'm (3:05), dieing (3:05), 4 (3:05) mee (3:05), skool (3:12), 2 (3:12), and really need to (what?!?) (3:17), 2 (3:17), 2 (3:17), u (3:22), fing (3:22), out whats happen (what?!?) (3:22), whats (3:22), 2 (3:22), hes (3:33), thoat (3:33), h (3:33), 4 (3:33), 4 the her (what?!?) (3:33), u (3:38), hope u like (it should be "hope you liked" because it is past tence), Also, this took a long time to do, it was about 45 minutes so I would like it if you could like my comment ;-;
tip: don't make the long slides so fast, pick a nice clear background so you can she the words in front, also you should check the spelling before uploading. It can be very helpful! :) great story.
I almost cried because of the spelling mistakes
I almost did to😂😢 I seen so many omg so sad no grammar😢😂
dao shayla I got so annoyed at the spelling mistakes I shouted out in my room "wtf how can you not spell that!!!!!"
CoolAwesome Eevee tru dat
Oh my gosh 😂
Ikr me too! :"(
what really made me cry was the poor use of grammar...
I know right...lots of mistakes in the story
Same
+Jaden Monnier same
+Jaden Monnier Haha
saaame
"Hey babe, why was u not at skool 2day"
I barely started this video and I'm already laughing
wtf is a slient
What's a thort
Same 😂😂😂
Omg me too
+Sarah Wright me too! lol
thiss grammar made me cry soo badd😢😢😢
hhahah lol
Lol
these stories are so sadddd it almost made me cry why do girls do this just for boys I've heard girls doing this alot in the news ill never ever do this
lmao
ME TOO
What Is Skool?It Sounds Kool!
Hahahaha
Ha ha XD
Arielle. Smx lol😂😂😂
Sadly, they were just 2 KOOL 4 SKOOL.
The bad grammar made me mad.
Same
Jessica Turner same
Jessica Turner ikr so annoying
Yu cant expect everone in the world to hav perfect englesch!!!! Im from luxembourg i hav bad englesch!!!
Jessica Turner Sameeeeee. I can't take anything sad seriously if the words are spelled wrong and the grammar just straight up sucks
Tbh this wasn't sad what made me sad is the grammar..
I'm gonna swit ma throt naow ;')
roblox bae Im switte mah twote
Arianas queens totally
i remember i had this boyfriend who cheated on me i was sad but then i said "you know what i don't care because he just lost a sweet,loving,beautiful girl snd if he can't see that he's just another jerk" then at lunch i got some pudding and dumped it on him and then i was happy again and i looked at him and said pay back is a pain
omg LOL!!
😂😂😂😂 good one
You should make this a story I prefer it more
im sorry. in my opinion, i didnt like how the story portrayed a girl who killed herself because she got dummped. people get dummped everyday, and still live. they dont kill there self's over it. im sorry
+TheStammerKid _xX okie :3
Mabey her friend or dad or mum
+TheStammerKid _xX in the description it says it was made up can i be the prick who says look before commenting or somin like that
+ryan goss the reason why ske killed herself is because he said he would die for her but instead it was the opposite which was to make impact
+DiztrictGamerz well done dude ¥ØUƦ λ PƦØ
_Messaging :_
Emily: Morning Babe, you ok?
Alex: Yh babe, fine. You?
Emily: Great. Today is a special day!
Alex: is this another one of your religious festivals XD
_(Emily sighs. Today was their five year anniversary)_
Emily: Nevermind :) You wanna meet at the park in a half hour?
Alex: Fine with me :) See you then
Emily: yep
_(Emily arrives at the park with a box of chocolates and football for Alex. She couldn't find Alex. Then, she saw him behind a wall with his arms around a girls back. He was kissing Emilies best friend, Emma )_
Emily : ALEX?!?!?!?! HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!?! I...I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME?!?!?!?!?!
Alex: Oh my god... babe I--
Emily: No... don't call me babe... WE'RE OVER!!!!!!
Alex: What?!?!?!? No C'mon! This was a one time only thing...
Emma: Huh?
Emily: Emma, we are never gonna be friends again!
_(The two girls cry as Emily runs home, smashing the chocolates and football to peices. Alex messages and calls Emily and so does Emma, but she blocks their numbers.)_
_(The next day at school, a group of Alexes friends crowded around her. They threw her lunch in the bin and yelled...)_
Friend 1: You worthless piece of garbage!
Friend 2: You heartless witch! You've destroyed Alex!
_(Another friend begins to hit her. They insult her and hit her mote and more. She cries silently. This continues for three weeks. One day Emily is sat with two of her friends, Amy and Elissa when the boys come up to her again)_
Friend 2: You are so ugly!
Friend 3: I hope you die slowly and painfully!
_(Tears swell in Emily's eyes. Her friend Amy tuggs her shoulder)_
Amy: Don't mind them...
Friend 1: I hope you get hit by a car!
Emily: Me too...
_(tears stream down her face. Emily runs out of the school gates and heads onto the road. Elissa and Amy try to grab Emily, but they're too late... Emily ran straight in front of a mini van.)_
Amy: Emily!!!!!
Elissa: Omigosh somebody call an ambulance!!!!
_(Ten minutes later the ambulance rushes Emily to the hospital. Alex Amy Elissa and Emma come too. The paramedics burst into the waiting room to tell them that Emily is in a coma. They all cry, except for Alex.)_
_(Alex turns to Emma)_
Alex: Serves her right. Why did you even bring me here?
Emma: _(still crying)_ Alex! This is our fault! We have to go speak to her.
Alex: Why? She can't even answer us.
Emma: She can _hear_ us. Alex, we're going in there right now to apologise.
_(Alex rolls his eyes and yawns. Emma glowers at him and drags him by his ears into Emily's ward, where Emily's parents were sat on her hospital bed stroking her hair. They see Emma and Alex, nod, and exit the ward. Emma crys softly and holds Emily's hand.)_
Emma: I'm sorry Emily. I really am. Its my fault. Every bit of it. I hope you can hear me. I've missed you, our friendship. Please forgive me. Please...
_(Emma nudges Alexes shoulder. He shakes his head. Emma rams her elbow into his ribs.)_
Alex: Ow!
_(Emma indicates towards the unconscious Emily)_
Alex: Ugh! _I'm sorry_
Emma: There. I hope she heard us...
_(The doctor enters the room.)_
Doctor: We've done some brain scans, and I'm ever so sorry to say, the patient is brain dead. She can hear, but that's about it. We have determined that she will not wake up from her coma.
_(The doctor heads towards the life support machine. He turns it off... )_
Omg I loved this more because you can spell and it was sad and sweet and made me cry unlike the one we watched
OMG I CRIED AND Y DID ALEX AND HIS FRIENDS BULLY EMILY ALEX IS THE ONE WHO CHEATED!!!!!!!
"One nite" lolololol I can't even
"Why was u not at skill 2day?" Omg
ya so funny
I know right...
i cant read it nite it's night
hahahahahahahahhaha
Instead of "my really sad story" it should be "my really bad grammer" your welcome for the English people that are not Greek 😊
Zoe Gaming ғȗ*ҡ ȏғғ
If This your your sad story, how the hell did you upload this?
a sad story she made duh😂
really
I know right if this is hers how could she uplode it to TH-cam
+Johanna Madrid ikr
+yLyrical well I never read that especially if these videos are not important to me
Girl: why Wunt u at skool 2day?
Boy: because you don't know what grammar is.
It was the other way around. The boy asked the girl the question.
Eresticole Park oh hell yesh
When I finish skool I'm gonna slit my thort over this sad story
Wow I go to "skool" 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
Yea meeee 2. I cant wate 4 skool 2 b over 4 rale. U ither
yus m8 it is skool is so stipid m8
hahahahahahaha
Jb IdaGaming 2!!! Wut yu laufin at boi?
Jb IdaGaming 2!!! This reminds me of a beautiful song... I PLAY POKEMON GO EVERYDAY! I PLAY POKEMON GOOOO!
The sad part is the spelling.
Ikr I was crying because if that :p
Savage
+Chanelle Kesse nice one
Lol
The actuel sad part is that yu dont know not everone in the universe knows englesch
How is it your sad story if the girl in the story is dead??
OMG, ikr. I guess she is a literal ghost channel and tolled us about her life
ספיר ליאור I know right
It's suppose to be said because people are sad because of their grammar XD
slime._ _.queenn before you go saying stuff, READ THE DESCRIPTION!?!? >:(
slime._ _.queenn ikr
This was in fact , kinda interesting! It didn't make me cry, tho. Pretty good if ur starting from scratch! I did like this story. Good job! 😄😄😄
That was amazing but horribly sad at the same time I LOVED IT
I am a writer myself and it seems to me like half way through this you just gave up and made him do the same thing as his ex girlfriend, which to me, in a story should't happen. Plus if the girl truly did kill herself she would not have the time to write all those words onto a mirror. It would have been better if she came home, ate dinner, acted like everything was okay, wrote a letter that said,"He said he would die for me", overdosed and put the note on her chest. Then, when the boy finds out, he is heartbroken, goes to her funeral and after the funeral he comes home, goes to his room and locks the door, writes a s suicide letter that says,"It's too late to die for you, so I will die and be with you" holds it in his hand tightly while the other has a gun, and well, you get the picture. Also, might I just add your grammar is atrocious, I could barely make out anything anyone said in this, my advice is, if you plan on making another story, PLEASE take your time, make sure you're not spelling like a stubborn idiot, and maybe put some effort into it even if it takes 3 months, it'll be worth the likes, subscribes and positive comments, right? And might I suggest, reading the book "The Fault in Our Stars" or watch the movie "Titanic" or "The Notebook" it'd be good for ideas, just as long as you don't steal anything.
I'm a writer too and I would've done the same thing
nube82 yup me2! but you know not ALL writes think the same :)
You guys should calm down it is obvious she is not as "skilled" as you guys, but don't tear them down for it. You should give your feed back in a nicer tone.
DAMN!!! Im a writer too… kinda lol… but thats a real good idea! could u perhaps check out some of my writing???
josh Appelseed thank you, nobody seems to get the fact that you can't assume people to be as good as you, which these people probably aren't. Some people actually leave this thing called CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!!
thort...
The note is just.. So good..
I just love how strait forward they are about they're questions "Would you die for me?". 🐱
the saddest part in this story is you not knowing how to spell
Wy ar peple so stupid... they think that eveone can hav perfect englesch!!! WELL GESS WAT!!! NOT EVERONE IN TH UNIVERSE CAN HAVE PERFECT ENGLESCH!! FOREIGN PEPLE EXIST!!!!
Like me for exampl, im from luxembourg
TheVloggerCapsule lol ur funny
Nipplebanana07 ONLINE TRANSLATORS EXIST
TheVloggerCapsule Yu acted like i didnt know what translaters are
If a boy did that to me I would just be like "Yolo!"
Yass gurl
Love this heartwarming story
This made me cry. I'm still on tears.
My sad story: I ordered a baconator....... I GOT SOMETHING ELSE😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I asked for 1 sause at McD and, they gave me 3!!!!!!!
I just now notice every one of her stories is about love and killing there self.Something Fishy is going on-_-
Hahahahahah....huh, your right that is fishy.😑
It's SHARKY.
I think she's making these up
That was BEAUTIFUL
this is rlly sad😩 good story
You copied the first part from somewhere and then you just changes the ending. It was stupid
Ik
yeah right?
+Shaylie Robison she did
+Shaylie Robison she did coz I watch a lot of things like this and iv herd it all so don't say what you don't know k
ikr
THE SPELLING KILLED ME!! LEARN TO SPELL!!!
Rea lol you forgot one: Everyone*
I think it was really sad , don't listen to those people who commented "bad grammar" everyone makes mistakes and I can see that you really worked hard for this. I love it ❤
man, its crazy what people do for love
Ok at the end it says hoped u LIKED my sad story why would u LIKE A SAD STORY
"hes thoat like h said he would 4 the her!!"
Me: *Cries because of the grammar.*
Wow, that's strong..😓
Loved it such a great story I loved it it filled my heart with a motions
can someone please explain to me what is "love u loads"????
It means I love you A lot
Henin Wong yeah it's where they mean love u so much like a relationship hugging and kissing
I still didn't cry!!
+scott sink I did
I Laughed
+Link Talmadge really
How's that funny
+Maria Rincon shut up please if you don't like how he spells then don't watch the video and go watch something else
that gammer is soo sad it made me burst out laughing😂😂😂😂
That made me cry so hard and so much
Why'd he dump her though! He said he would slit his THORT for her. Well that's probably meaningless any way. What is a THORT!
+Team Sigma ruined the joke
I like your profile pic im as well a pansexual panda that likes pancakes
its a shuffled word for rthot
How come in all these stories someone dies, there’s bad grammar, and lots of spelling mistakes
I love your sad story!
The boy kept his promise!
If he didn't His Ex-GF Will come and hunt him down like a dog
I watched a lot of sad videos and this one finally made me cry
why would you say hope you liked this sad story
ik
No the question is, is it true?
+Ava Mc read the description dummy
+Blooming Gamer ohh shut up
+Blooming Gamer
I know I did
this must be a joke to u bc ppl go threw this every day
that made me cry😭😭😭😭
"He would die for mee"
😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣
THE BAD SPELLING THO
Oh! SO its ur sad story! Then how r u alive! LOL😂!
Shivani Ravula description
Ryan Money ....hmm
Thats what I thought. Maybe she's the friend
Julia Stakic hmm.. :)
have that feeling too it's sad when you lose a BF or GF
that made cry omg
Awwh the grammar made me cry my eyes out.. 😭
Same! lol
Aww u made me cry my humanity out
eye noo rite ite mayde meey soh angrey XD There is no grammar is this vid. XD lol [Also I know how to use grammar-
G H Ę N śṭȏק ɞєıṅɢ яȗԀє
G H Ę N 😂😂😂
U got this idea from a different story.
Well the begenning
me too that was so sad I wonder if that person went to "skool"
Loved the background song though
I don't get it if he would've died for her why did he brake up with her ?!
Retweet
so true....i hav d same question..
I KNOW IN SO CONFUSSEDDD
oh and hopefully they met in heaven
+dat_gurl_haylie same
Thanks Golden Cat and victoria valencia
thay cant meet in haeven he suicide people who suicide go to hell imedietly ...sorry
+Sparkle Sunshine. ohh ok then to bad for them...😐
lol
aww😢
awwww so sad im crying
I loved it
This made me cry so hard 😭😭
Boy"I would slit my thort for u!
Me: ummm....what's a thort?? *notices they mean throat* IM DEAD OMG AHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA
this is the second love story that i read when the boys heart is pure and his words are real.Very sad
That's a good mad right there!
2:58 that made me laugh out loud 😂
i heard many versions of this story butttt stil good
this made my cry and i never cry
it really made me cry it made cry through the whole video
Cute😀❤️
Awww.... :(
I'm still not crying keep trying you'll never break me
All errors: nite (0:05), Why was you (0:10), Skool (0:10), 2day (0:10), didn't (0:14), skool (0:14), 2morrow (0:14), didn't (0:20), minture (0:30), 2 (0:45), u (0:45), 4 (0:54), mee (0:54), thort (1:00), 4 (1:00) u (1:00), skool (1:28), 2morrow (1:28), u (1:30), u (1:37), 2 (1:37), 2 (1:40), skool (1:30), 2 (1:40), u (1:45), 2 (1:45), skool (1:45), u (1:51), 5 (1:51) (Because, any number under ten needs to be in words), u (1:58), u (2:03), skool (2:07), though (2:07), 2 (2:11) or girl (idk what that means) (2:18), ur (2:18), she begins the cry (idk what that means either) (2:22), 4 (2:22), mee (2:22), hes (2:28), 2 (2:32), 2 (2:32), 4 (2:32) mee (2:32), went she gets (what???) (2:42), 2 (2:42), would'nt (2:48), 2 (2:48), lieing (2:48), 2day (2:58), 4 (2:58) mee (2:58), i'm (3:05), dieing (3:05), 4 (3:05) mee (3:05), skool (3:12), 2 (3:12), and really need to (what?!?) (3:17), 2 (3:17), 2 (3:17), u (3:22), fing (3:22), out whats happen (what?!?) (3:22), whats (3:22), 2 (3:22), hes (3:33), thoat (3:33), h (3:33), 4 (3:33), 4 the her (what?!?) (3:33), u (3:38), hope u like (it should be "hope you liked" because it is past tence), Also, this took a long time to do, it was about 45 minutes so I would like it if you could like my comment ;-;
That was sooooo sad😞
Did u make this!❤ I love it and it has a happy ending if u think about it they live together in heaven now
awwwww
That made me cry
tip: don't make the long slides so fast, pick a nice clear background so you can she the words in front, also you should check the spelling before uploading. It can be very helpful! :) great story.
I'm in tears 😭
It brought me to tears after reading that and remember that my grandma is hospital😔😔😔😔
I'm still dying from thort LMAO
SOOO SAD :'( IM CRYING
this is so sad i was crying when i was reading it
I was the 100th subscriber!!
This made me cry
SERIUSLY OMG SO SAD BUT CMON THATS AGHHHHH
It's sooo sad I feel soo bad I cried for hours
you did so good
Boy Oh Boy☹What would of made it more interesting is if we could know why he broke up with her,and more details Pah lezee 💜
Why do I cry when I read these 😭
man, why do I cry when Im watching these kind of stuffs?
Daaaa feelz
this made me cry R.I.P.
THAT GIRL DON'T NEED NO STUPID MAN! MEN JUST GONNA BREAK HEARTS.
that was sweet but sad
I cried soooooooooo much, why? Because I love your English!