Okay this is probably the most mature one I've read yet, ngl. Almost all of the ffs are a bit y'know cringe and almost feels like I've read the storyline a million times. This one just hit different in some way
I don't read ffs but I found this one a few months ago and DAYUM!!! GURL IT'S SOOOO GOOD!!! I'm re-reading this over and over again...masterpiece! 😭😭😭🫶🫶🫶
Omagah...that was amazing!!! I loved it! I was expecting a childish one...but i absolutly love it! It was the right amound of romance, violence,and sexual tension...wich is hard to do,in most of the FF all these 3 things are too much ,making it underwhealming...BUT THIS WAS MASTERPIECE!!!
Wow. Just wow. You're brilliant! All your similes, metaphors and other language skills and etc are brilliant. This ff was just different somehow and was amazing. You just got a knew subscriber, keep it up! 😂😊❤
Can you please do another yeonjun ff where he is the main ofc and haechan being the side guy but y/n having feelings for haechan but Yeonjun and y/n are in a relationship but Yeonjun and y/n ends up together but like in the vid y/n also had feelings for haechan
Who Who made his ? This touched my heart every inches. [1] love 2 melody . 3 the loneliness of yeonjon .the line i have no one with u uff ❤️🔥❤️🩹 4 sex this is not sex they are giving each other pieces of heart . Fulfill their thirsty heart awesome 💖 🥀🫀❤️❤️🔥💯💥 I have no word to describe this awesome Masterpiece love it❤️💣💥💯❤️🔥🫀🥀
Heyyy i a fan of your edits if can do a ff about "your 5 mafia daddies husbands* [ txt ] will be so nice. But if you can't do it its fine. Love your edits love❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Everyone Literally everyone - Enjoying the ff.... Anddddddd there is me - "Time to learn some new vocabularies...." Edit: Ty to author for making me learn some new words.
Goshhhhhh! Soobin why you betrayed yeonjun.Now he will kill you!you betrayed him but still i cant hate you neverrrrrrrr because I love you .And i am warning you next time dont be a betrayer in any video 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Yeonjun (in real life): Nooooooo Soobin dear why did u do this to me u betrayed me and yet i can't get angry on u cause u are too cute 😭😂😂😂😂😂😂
soobin, soobin u kno soobin?
Yeah my cuties
Yeonjun saying soobin soobin you know soobin
Oh god ur right
In which kpop is he in .sorry I don't know about him
@@Hoooooomaaaaannnnn he's from TXT tomorrow by together under hybe labels same company as BTS
"Our tears mixed up with our dancing lips" THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
Soobin in police uniform I'd like to see that 😂😂
sometimes i get so amazed how you describe the scenes in words so beautifully
Looks like someone got an A+++ in English
"I wanted to hate him but i still love him"😢😢God
This is the best one I've ever read, cuz most of them are a little childish
i love feeling grown #maternitylife
I agree
True
Yeonjun asking what gives me the right to leave him
Me: divorce😑
Tbh #girlbossmoment
not wrong though
So true
@@ridhafathima6257 material gurl 💅
Its 2 am with my mum sleeping beside me
And I'm trying not to laugh🤡
Okay this is probably the most mature one I've read yet, ngl. Almost all of the ffs are a bit y'know cringe and almost feels like I've read the storyline a million times. This one just hit different in some way
this is so beautiful , the lines describing the moments were so good and calming!☺️😊😊
SOOBIN JUST GO AND EAT YOUR BREAD, CUTIE
“Our tears mixed with our dancing lips" 😏
5:04 yeonjun : dont leave me
Me : no i will be leave u right now at this moment
I don't read ffs but I found this one a few months ago and DAYUM!!! GURL IT'S SOOOO GOOD!!! I'm re-reading this over and over again...masterpiece! 😭😭😭🫶🫶🫶
Same sis 😢
Omagah...that was amazing!!! I loved it! I was expecting a childish one...but i absolutly love it! It was the right amound of romance, violence,and sexual tension...wich is hard to do,in most of the FF all these 3 things are too much ,making it underwhealming...BUT THIS WAS MASTERPIECE!!!
Ok so I was really feeling that "bedroom romance" thingy
I CHOCKED REDING THE TITLE
THIS FF HITS HARD
Not me being tricked by the mirror at the beginning
0:39 🤣 you made soobin a maid poor soobin
Wow. Just wow. You're brilliant! All your similes, metaphors and other language skills and etc are brilliant. This ff was just different somehow and was amazing. You just got a knew subscriber, keep it up! 😂😊❤
Cant you see me in the back got me crying
Woah nice author a big fan of u
"My cries melted beneath his kisses " ahhhh i found the right chanel to read ffs oh god this is a masterpiece ❤🎀✨❣️🍒🍓
omfg i finally find my fav chanellll. AAAHHHHHHHHHHH
why cant it be me.... WHY ISNT THAT ME
damn this is..... fire!!!
Yes really ❤️🔥 this Bran everyone heart
Hold up yall why is Soobin not eating bread-
i love it more than AO3
Can you please do another yeonjun ff where he is the main ofc and haechan being the side guy but y/n having feelings for haechan but Yeonjun and y/n are in a relationship but Yeonjun and y/n ends up together but like in the vid y/n also had feelings for haechan
UwU thats so adorableeeee ☺️
Ohhhhhhhnooooo Chocoball! i woulf feel so sorry for Haechanie
@@ridhafathima6257 IM SO SORRY BUT I LAUGHED AT THE UWU AND ITS LIKE MIDNIGHT AND I HOPE MY FAMILY DIDNT HEAR ME😭
This ff will always be one of my all time favourite
Dancing lips , dance in everthing 😭😭😭😭😭
Who
Who made his ? This touched my heart every inches. [1] love 2 melody . 3 the loneliness of yeonjon .the line i have no one with u uff ❤️🔥❤️🩹 4 sex this is not sex they are giving each other pieces of heart . Fulfill their thirsty heart awesome 💖 🥀🫀❤️❤️🔥💯💥 I have no word to describe this awesome Masterpiece love it❤️💣💥💯❤️🔥🫀🥀
I'm a new subscriber btw...and unnie I like this ff so much!
haha is unnie is pabo 😂
What do you mean by that 😡
what do you mean by that huh?😤
@@ridhafathima6257 💀
The title alone can drive me insane🥴🥴🥴🥴
Hiiii!! I am not first but gurllll I love your videos 😭😭😭 and I literally watched this ff 3 times, I am in heaven 😩🤌
I'm glad you like it
BITTING MY FLESH!?!?! 5:52
So im not a moa and im still crying😂😂
I remember reading this on the original upload omgg
Uh oh, I thought nobody remembers the original one 💀
@@afanfic4u304 Oh no I definitely remember it. That's why I clicked on it :p
Tbh i was so into it my eyes were teary
Slowly puts on notes and puts he link
Amazing Unnie I’m a new sub!!!
I watched this 3 three times and *chiefs kiss* 🤍
nice ff bro keep it up😃😃😃
i have been subscribed after finding out i am an incest child, your channel is so relatable #inthistogether
6:51
Okay but like that aint true cuz i dont even know my dad but ok lmao
U could be a poem writer
Nah I'm bad at writing poem 💀
@@afanfic4u304 your awesome!!
@@dhiyana.13 Thank you ☺️💜
Can you like my comment 🤥
I think i read this on the original upload 💀
This one is SOOOO beautiful. Can you PLEASEEE do one of Taegyu PLSSSSSSSSSS Beomgyu at the top and Taehyun at the bottom
0:41 lol
It's really beautiful can you please make like this FF more i mean interesting and emotional please
Heyyy i a fan of your edits if can do a ff about "your 5 mafia daddies husbands* [ txt ] will be so nice.
But if you can't do it its fine.
Love your edits love❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Sorry I can't. 🙏
Ohh my gosh I love it
I have watched like 9 times
Even more
Pls make more like this
Maybe soobin or a part 2
Please
9++ times? That's a lot 😮
@@afanfic4u304
Actually total from that day I have watched it 12 times. I just love pls do another
hey can you do taehyun ff ' when they bully you but not knowing your bf is a mafia king' please 🥺❤
Whoa, I only know savage King but not mafia King 🤣 I see what I can do...
😂😂...okay ii thanks unnie😘
Everyone
Literally everyone -
Enjoying the ff....
Anddddddd there is me -
"Time to learn some new vocabularies...."
Edit: Ty to author for making me learn some new words.
i just started the ff and im genuinely confused why soobin called yeonjun as 'sir'
I think he works for him he did say the car was ready so he may be the chauffeur
@@jazzyblessing3267 ah ok, tysm
is this who we are
Goshhhhhh! Soobin why you betrayed yeonjun.Now he will kill you!you betrayed him but still i cant hate you neverrrrrrrr because I love you .And i am warning you next time dont be a betrayer in any video 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Why soobin my baby he's a goner
What’s the song at 7:26 called?
Blue & grey by BTS
@@afanfic4u304 thank you, I was wondering why it sounded so familiar
Why is it reuploaded?
Cuz it got taken down by TH-cam.
@@whiskers7651 oh really? i didn't realized
Ye I thought I saw it before
cuz actually your mother is my friends queen in the country of orange juice lolers hola comostas