Okay, I was multitasking and I couldn't leave a comment as soon as I wanted to. The cover slide, and story headline are complete click bate. Have little if anything to do with the actual story.
the whole idea of the trials is absurd times infinity .. also it's just not a very interesting read 1 dimensional bordering on 2 dimensional surely not worthy of the minutes I just wasted
Why does he have to be worthy enough for her? Why doesn't she have to prove herself worthy of him? I call BS
I was thinking the same. She should at least go on a dinner date and dance a waltz or the chicken polka with him.
Better to use a more rugged male voice for narrative. Select a background photo of a more desirable female counterpart.
Okay, I was multitasking and I couldn't leave a comment as soon as I wanted to. The cover slide, and story headline are complete click bate. Have little if anything to do with the actual story.
the whole idea of the trials is absurd times infinity .. also it's just not a very interesting read 1 dimensional bordering on 2 dimensional surely not worthy of the minutes I just wasted